July 17th 2009 Written Update

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Here's the update for July 17th:
I haven't edited it so sorry for the mistakes
Sorry it's so long... I noticed how long it was after I posted it....
Radhika is dancing in the room of the Mansion and she falls to the ground and then she looks up.
It's really late at night so Madhav says to Kalika, "I will drop you off at home." Kalika says, "No it's Ok I will go by myself." Madhav says, "It's really late at night, come with me I insist." As Kalika is about to get in the car her chunni gets stuck on the door of the car and Madhav helps untangle her chunni, and Kalika stares at Madhav as he untangles the chunni. Madhav and Kalika get in the car and they drive off and Gajendra appears as their car drives off.
Madhav is doing something for the Dam Project and Dasgupta comes in and says, "Sir, the workers are still scared." Madhav says, "They aren't working... I'm tired of this... I can't wait until this work is over and I can get out of here... I will go check on the workers, will you do me a favor, give these tenders to Durga... they aren't getting the contract to the dam project." Madhav hands Dasgupta the tenders and Dasgupta starts to say something against rejecting the tenders, but Madhav says, "Why are you so worried? Their tender has been rejected not yours." Dasgupta says, "I mean those people are very vicious and that girl is also...." Madhav interupts him and says, "Which girl are you talking about?" Dasgupta says, "The one that brought you lunch. I found out about her, she's not a good girl you should stay away from her sir." Madhav says, "Thanks for your opinion... Tell me something who use to live in that mansion before Durga?" Dasgupta says, "I don't know sir it's only been two years since I came here." Madhav says, "So you've become an expert in the repuatation of girls in two years? but you don't know about the house" Madhav is about to leave, and Dasgupta trys to stop him, but Madhav leaves anyway. After Madhav leaves Dasgupta picks up his phone and says, "Hello."
Kalika is getting water from a lake and then she hears something so she yells, "Who is it?" A crazy man comes out from behind the bushes and then he leaves. Then Kalika turns around and Gajendra is standing infront of her, Gajendra says, "So you are Kalika, you're the one that saved that engineer. What are you teaching that Engineer?" Kalika says, "Only big people like you have the standard to teach people things." Gajendra says, "How do you know my standard?" Gajendra stands next to Kalika and he touches her earing. Kalika is about to leave, but Gajendra stops her and says, "I've heard a lot about you. Will you work for me?" Kalika asks, "What kind of work?" Gajendra says, "You have to get the engineer to listen to what we say. We can do that work by ourselves, but it'll involve hurting him, you can do the same work by using love." Kalika says, "That's all you came to tell me?" Gajendra says, "Well since you didn't come to me I came to you." Kalika takes the water that she has and she pours it on Gajendra's head and she leaves.
Gajendra is at home and his mom says, "You can't do anything right. Gajendra this contract is worth millions and you're taking help from village girls. Do you have a brain?" Gajendra says, "Then what will I do about that Engineer?" Gajendra shows his mom the tenders and she says, "Call Delhi that's where the engineer's boss is." Gajendra says, "Now we will be able to trap him."
There is a coffin in a dark room and the coffin starts to shake.
Madav is packing his briefcase and Dasgupta is standing behind him, Madhav says, "Dasgupta ji I'm going into town today. That's where it'll be decided who gets the dam contract. You tell the workers..." Madhav pauses when he sees the tenders to Durga's company on a table. Dasgupta pretends that he doesn't notice, but Madhav picks up the tenders and says, "What is this?" Dasgupta puts on his glasses and he starts to read, "Tenders for the Dam from Suriya constructions." Madhav starts to yell, "Why didn't you give these tenders back to them?" Dasgupta says, "I forgot to tell you Sir, the Minister from Delhi..." Dasgupta is interupted because of a phonecall. Madhav picks up the phone and the minister is on the other line. When Madhav puts down the phone Dasgupta asks, "What happend sir?" Madhav says, "The contract went to Durga Devi." Dasgupta says, "I told you before they are very vicious." Madhav just stares at the tenders and then he leaves.
Madhav arrives at Durga's Mansion and yells, "Durga Devi." Madhav hears Mere Saathiya Sun Payal ki Rhun Jhun, and he hears whisper saying, "Mohan Mohan." Mohan starts to go upstairs and he starts to have flashbacks. Mohan goes to the room where Radhika danced, and he is about to open the lock from the outside, but then the door starts to shake and there is a scary voice saying, "You are here Mohan... Open this door so that I can drink your blood." Mohan says, "Who are you?" The voice says, "You forgot my voice Mohan." Mohan yells, "Whose locked up in this room? Is anyone here?" Mohan goes to open the door again, and then he starts to hear bells from another room. Mohan goes into the room where he hears the bells from and inside that room is Dashrat Singh and he is ringing his bell. Madhav says, "Who are you? I just wanted to see Durga Devi." Dashrat Singh points to his photo album because it fell on the floor so Madhav picks it up and gives it back to Dashrat. When Dashrat sees Madhav he has flashbacks of Mohan and he points to Madhav. Dashrat backs up his wheelchair and he says, "You're suppose to be dead?" Madhav says, "What do you know about me? Whose dead? Mohan Singh? How do you know he's dead?" I've seen you're face before somewhere. Why are you calling me Mohan Singh? Why don't you tell me who you are?" Dashrat starts to ring his bell louder and Gajendra comes into the room and Madhav asks, "Who is he?" Gajendra says, "Why does it matter to you? How dare you come here." Durga comes into the room and says, "Madhav what are you doing here?" Dashrat also says, "Madhav."
Durga is sitting on her couch and she's peeling walnuts and she says, "Whatever you say doesn't matter engineer. Now we got the contract." Gajendra says, "Now you have to decide do you wanna work with us? or against us?" Madhav says, "You will have to give me the same threat in court Gajendra Singh." Durga says, "Tell that to the Minister." Madhav says, "Don't threaten me by saying the minister's name." Madhav throws the tenders on the table and says, "I'm leaving now."
Radhika is standing in a closed room and she says, "You can't leave me Mohan."
As Madhav is leaving the Mansion he stops and looks at a picture of Radhika, and Mere Saathiya Sun plays in the background and Madhav starts to have flashbacks. Madhav walks closer to the picture, and when he is looking at the pictures he starts to hold his head. Durga and Gajendra stare at him. Madhav falls down unconsious. Durga and Gajendra walk towards Madav and Gajendra says, "What happend to him?" Durga calls for someone and tells the person, "Before he can take us to court throw him in a lake."
Radhika is shown and she says, "Nooo, no one will kill Mohan. I am the only one who has the right to kill Mohan."
The man takes Madhav to the lake, but before he pushes him into the lake he hears something so he stands up with his gun and goes towards the sound. A girl appears from the shadows and strangles the man and says, "Go your next life is calling you." The girl is about to strangle Madhav, but Dasgupta comes in his car and scares off the girl. Dasgupta sees Madhav unconcious and he says, "What happend to you sir?"
Madhav is finally concious and he screams when he wakes up and Dasgupta is sleeping on a chair right next to Mohan. Dasgupta says, "Sir what happend? Are you Ok?" Mohan looks around and he sees that the time is 3 o' clock.
Kalika is in her house and Madhav knocks on the door Kalika says, "Why weren't you at the temple yesterday? I was waiting for you." Madhav walks in and he goes to the picture of Mohan and asks Kalika, "What happend after Mohan took Ambika to the Mansion?" Kalika says, "You said that Radhika wasn't happy with my being in the house."
*Flashback: Mohan is standing behind Radhika and he says, "What is wrong with me bringing her here? If I didn't bring her hear then she would be homeless. You could have sent her anywhere else, but what was the point of bringing her to this house?" Mohan says, "You're getting angry like a wife gets angry when her husband brings another woman." Radhika hugs Mohan and says, "I don't know why but since you came back I'm afraid that someone will snatch you from me. If anyone comes between us then...." Mohan interupts Radhika and says, "You will kill her?" Radhika says, "Yes I'll kill her." Mohan says, "Now you're scaring me." Ambika comes in the room with a suit and says, "Ma sent me to this room with a suit." Ambika is about to hand the suit to Mohan, but Radhika takes the suit from her and when she's leaving Radhika says, "Listen first you should knock on the door." Kalika says, "Ok." and then she leaves. Mohan's dad calls for him. Mohan says, "Radhika, dad's calling me... there is something on your forehead." Radhika goes to wipe something off her forehead and Mohan kisses her.
Mohan and his father are sitting with some people and they are fighting about who the land near the lake belongs to. Mohan's father gets angry and he starts to say something and he gets out of breath. The other people give Mohan's father some papers to sign, but he rips up the papers. Then the man(Dashrat Singh) says, "Just like you ripped this paper into shreads your family will be ripped into shreads."
When Mohan is home he goes to talk to Radhika he says, "I don't know why dad doesn't understand. Dashrat Singh wants Dad to make a mistake and then lose his land over it, and my dad has heart problems that everyone knows about." Radhika says, "I'm scared those people are vicious." Mohan says, "Don't be scared we have the law on our side." Radhika says, "The law? When will the law keep protecting you." Radhika takes a string and ties it on Mohan's arm. Mohan says, "What is this Radhika?" Radhika says, "Whatever it is just wear it... it will keep you from getting anyone's evil eye and it will protect you from evil people." Mohan says, "But Radhika What is it?" Radhika says, "I got it from a priest for your protection." Mohan says, "Since when do you believe in stuff like this?" Radhika says, "Ever since you have started to bring girls into this house." Mohan says, "You've started again about Ambika. Radhika you thnk too much. Now that she's here you can't tell her to leave." Radhika says, "I can tell her to leave." Radhika is about to leave the room, but Mohan stops her and says, "What's happend to you Radhika? You weren't like this 3 years ago" Radhika says, "Look at yourself Mohan you weren't like this either 3 years ago."
Ambika is making the bed in Mohan's room, and then she starts to clean a picture of him and she smiles. Radhika comes into the room and says, "Why are you in here?" Ambika says, "I was just cleaning." Radhika says, "You can clean the rest of the house. I've always looked after Mohan, no one else." Ambika says, "Ok Radhika ji." Radhika says, "Call me Bhabhi." Ambika is about to leave the room and then there is a voodoo doll in the corner of the room and Radhika sees it and she stops Ambika from leaving. Radhika says, "What is this? It's a voodoo doll isn't it. Who have you been using it against?" Ambika says, "I swear I don't know anything about it." Radhika says, "I know about girls like you try to trap rich people. You're trying to make Mohan..." Ambika says, "Bhabhi ji you can't say that I tried to do something like that." Radhika says, "Now that I said Mohan's name fire started burning on the inside?" Someone comes into the room and she says, "What happend Radhika Beti?" Radhika says, "You bring new maids into this house, but you don't realize what they bring with them." Radhika shows her the voodoo doll and she looks at Ambika.
A girl goes to someone and he gives her a sword and says, "This will help you complete your task." The girl takes the sword.
Mohan's dad is sitting with a minister and he gives him papers to the land, and the minister says, "Your land will stay yours I promise." Mohan's dad says, "Don't forget your other promise... don't forget to bring your wife and Sukanya with you the next time you come." The Minister leaves. Mohan's Mom says, "Whose Sukanya?" Mohan's dad says, "It's the minister's daughter look at this." Mohan's dad gives a picture of Sukanya to Mohan's mom. Radhika is shown running in the hallway. Mohan's dad says, "That's the girl I want to get married to Mohan." Mohan's mom says, "Mohan's marriage?" Mohan's dad says, "I've thought a lot about this decision, we have to make a relationship with a man as powerful as him." Mohan's mom says, "Ask Mohan atleast once." Mohan's dad says, "You are the one that has to get Mohan to agree with this wedding.: Radhika was listening to the conversation between Mohan's mom and dad.
Radhika is in her room and she is dancing with tears in her eyes. While she is dancing her hand hits a glass vase and blood starts to come from her hand and she stares at the blood.
The minister is talking on the phone in his house and he puts down the phone because he hears someone coming in. There is a girl with a veil over her face and she has a tray with teacups in her hand. The girl puts the tray on the table and the minister says, "One spoon of sugar." The girl puts one spoon of sugar in the cup and gives it to the minister. The minister looks inside the cup and says, "What's this?" The girl throws the cup at the minister's face, and there is blood on his face, and then the girl takes out a sword and kills him.
Ambika is shown cleaning a sword and when Mohan comes she drops the sword on the ground. Mohan says, "If you keep dropping things like this then it'll be hard for you." Mohan picks up the sword and he hands it to Ambika, but Ambika looks scared. Mohan says, "Don't be scared. You're the same Ambika that never used to be scared of anyone." Ambika says, "That Ambika is gone now ever since I've come to this house the old Ambika has burned. A person is changed by her surroundings and the people that she meets." Mohan says, "if you're talking about Radhika then don't worry about what she says." Ambika says, "No Mohan Babu she's only doing this because she loves you. May god bless your jodi." Ambika's finger starts to bleed and Mohan says, "You're bleeding how did that happen?" Ambika says, "It probably happend when I was cleaning the sword." Mohan goes to get her a bandage, and while mohan leaves Radhika is staring at Ambika with tears in her eyes. Mohan comes back with a bandage and his mom says, "Your dad is calling you. What happend to you?" Ambika says, "Nothing it's just a little cut... Mohan you leave your dad has to talk to you." Mohan says, "Mom you can bandage her finger." Mohan leaves and his mom bandages Ambika's finger. Radhika continues to watch with tears in her eyes.
Mohan's dad tells him about Sukanya. Mohan says, "I don't even know her how can I get married to her?" Mohan's dad shows him a picture and says, "This is Sukanya you marry her first and then you can get to know eachother. She comes from a family that is as rich as we are." Mohan says, "I know, but I don't want to marry Sukanya I want to marry someone else." Mohan's dad says, "Now you think you can decide your own marriage. Who do you want to marry?" Mohan says, "I want to marry Radhika." Mohan's dad says, "Are you serious?" Mohan says, "I love Radhika dad." Mohan's dad says, "She doesn't have the standard to be your wife." Mohan's Mom comes into the house and she's really tensed she says, "Did you know that yesterday someone killed the minister?" Radhika and Ambika come into the room. Mohan's dad says, "How did this happen?" There is a man that comes into the house and he says, "I will tell. There is a "dhire" in this house." Mohan's dad says, "Who are you?" The man says, "Before you know who I am you have to know who the "dhire" is that will make this mansion a ghostyard." Radhika looks scared and Ambika starts to breath hard. Mohan's mom says, "What kind of "Dhire"?" The man says, "She's teh reason that this house won't be succesful." he points at Radhika and then he turns his finger and points at Ambika. * Flashback ends
Madhav says, "You are the dhire?" There is a knock at Ambika's door and there are police officers at the door. The police officers say, "Mr. Engineer there was a murder yesterday and near the sight of the murder we found your wallet." Ambika looks at Madhav and he is shocked.
Precap:
Madhav sees a ghost in his room...
Then he goes to the house of the man that came and called Ambika a "dhire" and asks, "Who sent you to our house?" The man says, "Radhika"
Kalika says, "Radhika isn't in this world anymore."
Madhav says to Kalika, "That means that someone framed you?"
Ambika is shown sleeping and she wakes up screaming...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank you so much <3
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Ooooo Bhhomi..u r such a helpful lad🤗 thanks..its soo long..that reminds me of History class😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks for the update so radhikha is the evil one.
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thax for the update... will u be our regular updater?... =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~*LoVeLy*~

thax for the update... will u be our regular updater?... =)

I will try to, but sometimes it might be a late...
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Originally posted by: *xoxo*

I will try to, but sometimes it might be a late...



its ok if its late... 😊

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