Meet || Wafa Kar Na Sakey (a oneshot) - Page 2

Originally posted by: sourpuss

Reserving this till I feel like commenting. 😛

Love,

Bhav (:

Guess what! CrazyBoss is letting me go with my parents to JB on Sunday! Whoo!

Anyway, I finally feel like commenting. Aren't you glad? Yup. 😉

I liked the concept of this, how it's Preet getting married to Ash instead of Meher getting married to Harman. (*silently curses self for not thinking of this sooner*) It was sad how there's always this helplessness though that the other person can't quite see. 😆 *dances* I love being original. 😆 Hey, after awhile I began to blame Preet for not speaking up. I don't quite remember why he didn't. 😆

I do like how Meher decided to immerse herself entirely into the wedding preparations and not give herself any time to think, because she knew that if she gave herself time to think she'd give in to her emotions. Oooh it'd be interesting to see how Meher would react after she left the room. Would she break down and cry? Oooh or would she feel more liberated and at peace? There's an idea you can consider if you're thinking of doing a second part to it. Ahh, I might actually do that now. 😆 We'll see. 😉

Okay Whose Line is seriously waaaay too distracting now...

Love, love you too!

Bhav :D

Originally posted by: urworstnitemare

reserved..2nd the best!! *yay!!!

unreserved**

woah!! a tear jerker!!! great job!! and i'm erhmm sorry for taking so long..i had trouble finding this ..don't ask why i just didn't use that search engine there..(totally forgot about it yicks!) Thanks Avi, I'm just glad you read it!

Anyways, back to your one-shot..i loved how you showed Maya, Harman and Meher's relationship, u managed to describe both their points of view as well as Meher's! briliiantly written!!! Thanks!

And Meher *sniff! so proud of her!!! She was so strong! Especially at the ending when she blutenly told mr. preet that his words were worthless Go Meher!!! yay!😃 YAY MEHER! And now I may write a sequel. Ooh, Preet redemption maybe. 😆

Anyways, I shall zip it!! and sorry it took so long again!!! 😭 Byes!!!

Originally posted by: missindia26

Wow loved it

Poor Meher

Great to see a nice Harman and Maya for once

Loved the way you wrote, specially the line : He'd built her castles in the air, with his enigmatic smiles and easy demeanour, and his words of love."

And btw I love that song "Hum bewafa" its so touching, whenever they played it in KS it made my eyes teary

But no...it was too sad...please continue and make it a happy ending...

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

mine!

*unreserved*

We have one brain Radzie!! 😃 I was thinking of doing a Meet one kinda like this, I still will...but not as amazing as yours! (no, I'm not trying to put myself down, I'm just explaining what I thought about yours!😉😳😳) Did you write it? If no, GO WRITE IT. NOW! 😆 And thanks Meeru.

The simplicity with Meher feeling so hurt was just so clear. How Harman and Maya were there for her though? I loved that! 😛 Wish they were all nice on the show too!😆😆😆Ahh, thanks. Me too! Though I do have hope of a HarmanMeher friendship, and HarmanAsh pairing. Sometime. 😆

The ending had me though, it was beautiful the way Preet stopped her and told her what happened, so sad! 😔 Aw, thanks.

Those were my totally honest opinions!😉Right, you are not biased at all. 😆

Love you loads, love you too!

Meera😳

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

bhangda!!! =)

Uh oh!!! Another tragedy, you guys are hell bent on making me cry!!!!!!! 😭😉😆 Wow, Maya in a POSITIVE role!!!!! That's a first!!!!! 😆 Yup, it's a first, and sorry! Thanks. 😆

Oh god, i could feel Meher's pain!!! 😭 She is so heartbroken!!!!!!! They say ignorance is bliss, obviously that isn't working for Meher here!!!!! Yeah, she was so broken. Thanks though. Says my job was done. 😉

Oh god!!! G-mom had to send Meher of ALL the people!!!!! That is evil!!!!! 😭 Oh no, Meet are both stuck and their is nothing they can do about it!!!!! Well, not at the moment. Sequel idea, many months late. 😆

You captured the emotions really well!! Meher's pain, frustration, anger, those feelings of betrayal!!!! 👏 And Preet's helplessness really came across very well!!!! Fantastic job Radz!!!! Thank you so much Madz!

That was awesome, keep it up and please write more!!!!!

Originally posted by: fj08

Hi Aradhana
i love this song so i had to read it, my only problem with this is that why did harman get the role of such a nice guy when he is the one who did this to meher in the show, just dont like harman ..... 😡 why should he be in a good light when preet is the bad guy
but i enjoyed the overall concept even though it was sad, it was nice

fatima

Originally posted by: shabo24

wow. I read that and was like "There is NO way, humanly possible that I can write something that good." Don't argue with that, you are so good at this tragic thing, I am so glad I got you hooked to it! Literally, I have no words to describe it, I didn't tear up or anything, but my stomach was so uneasy and the pain was just so RAW! *shudders* Ahh. Shabzie. 😳 Thank you. 😳 I shall not even attempt to argue, though I say you're the reason I write tragic, so it's all thanks to you! 😳😆

Still hating on Harman, would hate Preet too but that's not possiable. So I shall settle for hating Ash. 😆 But I would have thought Preet would have had the guts to stand up for his love....it would be Prem who would have not.... Yeah, but I wanted to try something different, then today, got a sequel idea. 😆

The depticion of Meher's character was 100 percent perfect! THANK YOU! 😳

--shabz

Originally posted by: noneeM

Hi there, this is so beautifully written. If it were anyone else but Preet, I would be cursing him.....but Preet can get away with murder....where I'm concerned 😆 I love the way you have potrayed Meher in this one. And you have a nice Maya in this one! Amazing! Thanks for another nice Meet tale, even though it's tragic....Love:-)Nonee