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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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Posted: 16 years ago

#251

Yep my name is Sonali, thanks dear

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Michelle

@mich09

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Posted: 16 years ago

#252

Hi Everyone,

I want to thank you all for the sweet posts and PMs you all keep sending me with regard to my scenes. I am so so touched I just don't have the right words to express my feelings.... All I can is thank you from the bottom or my heart

Well since a few members have requested to put up a scene for the weekend, I have made one more attempt..... I hope you all like it

**Scenes written by mich09**

SCENE 5

This is another version of Abhi going to Nikki's place after she is discharged from the hospital.

Nikki manages to send SLD to the local market and calls up Abhi. She tells him if he has the guts he should come and meet her personally and not play games with her. Abhi coolly tells her playing games is her speciality and that he has no faltu time to waste. He has lots of work. She is on a break not him. Nikki is seething with anger. As she limps towards the bed, she bangs against the edge, trips and falls down on the floor. Abhi hears her scream in pain and tries asking what happened but the phone had fallen out of Nikki's hand and he hears a disconnected tone. He panics and rushes out of the office. Driving like a maniac he manages to reach Nikki's place in the shortest span of time. Nikki who was so upset with his callous conversation on the phone continues to sit on the floor in anger and is wondering what should she do to get through him. Suddenly she hears the outer door being flung open and the hurried heavy steps makes her realise it is Abhi who has come. She quickly lies on the floor and pretends to be unconscious.

Abhi enters the room and seeing Nikki lying unconcious on the floor, calls out her name and rushes to her side. Worriedly, he carries her in his arms and puts her gently on the bed. He then tries rousing her by calling her name and slapping her gently on the cheek. He checks her eyes and pulse and it all seems to be fine. Abhi tries to splash a few drops of water on her face but it doesn't work. Just as he was wondering what could have gone wrong with Nikki, he manages to notice Nikki's eyelid flutter a bit and then shut quickly. He realises she is faking everything. He gently pushes away a strand of hair falling on her face. Calmly he says "Nikki, kya ho gaya hai tumko? With a slight smile hovering on his lips he says "Ab main kya karun" saying this he pulls her up and hugs her ! Head on his chest Nikki is so happy to have him so close to her. Holding her with one arm he pretends to dial a number on his cell with the other hand and speaks into the phone " Dr. Nikita ki tabiyat teek nahin hai, Main usse Sanjeevani bejta hoon, Dr. Riddhima se keh do usse dekhne ko, Main baad mein aata hoon. Mujhe kuch kaam hai !" saying this he disconnects the phone. Nikki is stunned by what he just said and with a frown blurts out "kyun, kya kaam hai!" The moment she says it she realises her mistake and bites her lip. Abhi gives a smirk.

Nikki slowly breaks away from him. She looks up at him and looking at his raised eyebrow tries avoiding his gaze. Abhi looks at her and with calm anger says "tum kabhi nahi sudrogi na Dr. Nikita, har waqt tum khel khelti rahti ho ! Yeh sab tumhe majak lagta hai, hai na ??" Hearing the anger in his tone, Nikki starts fumbling "Main.. main .... koi khel nahin khel rahi thi Abhimanyu!" Abhi angrily holds her shoulders and says "Toh ye sab kya tha Nikita, jaan bhujkar tum phone pe cheeki ?" Hearing the disbelief in his tone, Nikki tries butting in with "nahin, yeh sach nahin hai, main sach much takra gayi" but Abhi is not listening. He says "har waqt mazak, har waqt, ............na kisi ka dil ka kadar hai tum ko na kuch, sirf mazak !" He gives her a disgusted look. Nikki says "aisa nahin hai Abhi !" Abhi tightens his grasp on her shoulders and say "tum jaanti ho ?tumhari cheek sun ke mujh pe kya beeti...... paagalo ki tarah main yahan aaya aur tum.....!" His eyes blazing he is unable to continue. Inspite of knowing she is treading on dangerous ground Nikki could not help mutter a "kyun ?" softly. Abhi takes an angry deep breath and leaves her arms in a jerk. He stands up. With a combined look of annoyance and dejection, pointing a finger to his head he firmly emphasizes "kyunki main paagal hoon !" and walks towards the door. Nikki hurriedly gets off the bed and with the help of her crutch stands up unsteadily. She calls out in a pleading voice "Abhi please, please ruko ! Hearing her pleading tone Abhi stops in his tracks. Without looking back at her he asks "kyun ? kuch aur mazak reh gaye kya ?" Nikki manages to walk up behind him and says "please, mujhe sach mein chot lagi isi liye main cheeki, lekhin jab aap ki aahat suni toh mujhe kuch aur nahin suji aur behoshi ki naatak kiya !" Abhi slowly turns to her and seeing her nervously twisting the end of her top he asks "kyun ? .....yeh naatak kyun Nikki!" Nervously and with a sad face Nikki says "kyunki tum meri koi baat sunte nahin ho! apne hi karte rehte ho ! kitna tang karte rehte ho !" Abhi shakes his head in annoyance... "Games tum khelti rehti ho aur tang karne ka ilzaam mujpar. Yeh bhi Khoob rahi " He gives her a disbelieving look, shakes his head and turns. Nikki leans forward and touching his shoulder says softly "please ruk jao". Abhi stands still. Nikki slowly puts her right arm around him from behind, her palm lying on his chest and resting her head on his back says "Acha Baba, I am sorry ! main sirf yeh chahti thi ke tum......ke tum .... " Abhi's eyeballs move from one corner of his eyes to the other with every 'tum' she was fumbling on...... "ke tum meri taraf dhyan do " Nikki manages to finish. Her child like tone brings a slow smile on Abhi's face. Slowly putting his hand over her hand lying on his chest, looking through the corner of his eye, he asks "kyun?" Nikki lifts up her head and hotly says "phir se kyun...... kyun ka kya matlab haan ? kya tum nahin jaante ke main tumse pyar karti hoon !" Abhi's smile widens at her pert reply. He turns around and looks into her eyes. Lifting her face with his finger and with a twisted smile he says "Jaanta hoon, lekhin tumse sunna chahta hoon! Tumhari toh aadat hai kuch jataane ki aur kuch aur kehne ki, isi liye tumse sunna chahata hoon." Nikki first makes a face at him and then looking at his smiling eyes she blushes. She hugs him and burying her face in his chest she says "Haan main tumse pyar karti hoon, I love you !" Abhi fondly looks down at her as she looks up lovingly at him " I love you too !" he says. He kisses her forehead and takes her back into his arms.

Mich

Edited by mich09 - 15 years ago

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nikita

@silentangel

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Posted: 16 years ago

#253

Awwww..michy dats AWSUMMMM>.........

i luv ur work sweety n it bcums bettr day by day jus like our AN

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Michelle

@mich09

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#254

Aww Thanks Nikita and thanks to you too Radhika (lovebapu18), I am glad you both liked the scene.... I was hoping I don't disappoint you all. Once again thanks]

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Michelle

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Vaishnavi

@-ialwayswill-

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#255

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edited - very very nice...........keep it up.....loved it

Edited by vaish04 - 16 years ago

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Michelle

@mich09

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#256

Thanks Vaishnavi. Glad you liked the scene.

Mich

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anyalolita

@anyalolita

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#257

Michelle...angel!!! 🤗 What a divine scene....just like Niki to play for attention that way, bless her!!! And I loved Abhi's anger when again he feels that all he went through was just a joke on her side...but like you wrote, it's a calm anger right...he's used to it now, he just about expects it from her...but of course he won't just let her get away with it without a lil lecture 😛 ...have a good sunday, not long to go! [:D/]

Mich love your scene 😍 ...it'll keep me going for the next 36 hours or so!!

Edited by anyalolita - 16 years ago

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Michelle

@mich09

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#258

Thanks a lot Bhavna, I am glad you liked my scene and glad it is giving you a happy feeling for the weekend.. Yeah Nikki can't help being Nikki who indirectly wants Abhi's attention but is unable to tell him how much he means to her 😃 and Abhi secretly enjoys her craving for his attention but can't help get annoyed when he has to go through emotional trauma with her pranks..

Michelle

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anotheranfan

@anotheranfan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#259

Originally posted by: mich09

Thanks a lot Bhavna, I am glad you liked my scene and glad it is giving you a happy feeling for the weekend.. Yeah Nikki can't help being Nikki who indirectly wants Abhi's attention but is unable to tell him how much he means to her 😃 and Abhi secretly enjoys her craving for his attention but can't help get annoyed when he has to go through emotional trauma with her pranks..

Michelle

well said :) exactly what they are at..

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leaves45

@leaves45

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#260

Wow mich I am crazy busy these days but stil came on to IF to see if u had a new scene up and viola!, here it is.....................so cute and believable, I just pictured it all in my head, which means u r a brilliant writer..........I am sending u hugs for making my day.

Edited by leaves45 - 16 years ago