|| Miss You When I'm Dreaming || Prem One Shot - Page 2

Originally posted by: amu142

Poor Poor Prem....gosh...what a way to imagine his inner most thoughts...awww...kitna miss kiya Heeriye ko!!!

Originally posted by: ash08

Hey Meera,

Totally loved it. It was beautifully written.👏 The song is one of my favs and it suits this situation to the T. I just wish Prem stops brooding and Heer stops crying and they get back again together soon.

Love,
Ash

Originally posted by: mani18

wow ....!!!
wat a one shot amazing
u xpressed his feeling so beautifully......
cngratz 4 ur another g8 work

Originally posted by: d@niy@

its beautiful..........

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

my spot!

*edited*

I love how you've expressed Prem's feelings here, the way he's always dreaming about Heer, always thinking about her. She is in every things he sees and does. I loved it. Really? 😳 Thank you sooo much Radz! 😳

I don't quite remember the song, I shall have to go hear it again, but still with the lyrics, the effect is just too good. It's really good! 😛 😳 I thank Rinkz for it! 😃

Love,
Radz

Originally posted by: Dark Love

See, this is what I like about you, your writing. Even if its Prem-centric, you've got my attention. Even though it was sad, and didn't have a happy ending...I was left with this weird feeling in my heart.

It was extremely touching. Poor Prem :(