MAYANK AND NUPUR-u and me

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys
this is a poem i directly wrote aftyer watching the confession but got the time to post now
well
its not exactly a poem ,more a sot of compilation of feelings
looking at the flashbacks i realizes that these two individuals have traveeled such a long journey
pardon the prose or watever it is
but its directly frm my heart
frm nupur's point of view
its divided in parts
IMP.-its a really simple poem and u will get the feel only if u read it slowly with imagination
U & ME
beggining -to-pre-talent parade
the first time i looked at u,
i liked u
the first time we talked,
i liked u
the first time u helped me,
i liked u
the first time u held me,
i liked u
the first time u laughed with me,
i liked u
the first time u touched me,
i liked u
the first time u danced with me,
i liked u
the first time u cheered me up,
i liked u
the first time u celebrated your happiness with me,
i liked u.
pre-talent parade-to-talent parade
the time i lied to u,
i was afraid of u
the time when u looked straight into my eyes and questioned me,
i was afraid of u
the time when i realized the worth of your frndship,
i was afraid of losing u
talent parade -to- exams
the time when u broke our frndship,
i hated u
the time when u yelled at me without a reason,
i hated u
the time when u underestimated me,
i hated u
the time when u didnt bother to listen to me ,
i hated u
the time when u laughed at me not with me,
i hated u
the time when u stood against me,
i hated u even more
i wanted u to stand with me.
academic meet -to-present
the time when u helped me again,
i liked u again
the time when u saved me,
i liked u
the time when i felt safe with u,
i liked u
the time when we became frnds again,
i liked u
the time when u showed me respect,
i liked u
the time when i saw your genuine heart,
i liked u
the time when i saw the Raj in u,
i liked u
I LOVE THAT U CARE,
I LOVE THAT U R ALWAYS THERE
& now that u r here with me
i know that we r meant to be
so i just wanna tell u that
now that i KNOW u.
I LOVE U.
P.S-its a long one but seedhe dil se
i hope u like it

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oye Shinzy,....Kamal Ki Hai Yaar👏👏👏....sach mein it's quite different from a normal poem,i mean the way a poem is written😛....and yet it's soo flowy!!😳...Mayur ki pure journey yaad aagayi.😍....Bohot Acchi hai!!⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 16 years ago
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woooow shinell....
awesomm blossom cutie piee....
loveedddd it cmpleltyy!!!
it wuzzzz rilly diffrnt frm odr poems but i lovved it ..
lov ya loaadsss....
muuuuaahhzhzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@krish
thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx a ton yaar
your comments mean a lot to me
love ya
and thats wat i remembered and wrote it with-the mayur journey
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Posted: 16 years ago
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👏

That was brilliant..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome👏👏awesome👏👏awesome👏👏awesome👏👏..
too good meri behna..it was soo chweet
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Posted: 16 years ago
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meri DSC dost............it ws superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb............awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee............mindblowinnnnnnnn..................
its 4u....⭐️(20 stars)....😃.....
thnxxxxxxxxxxx a lottttttt 4sharin dis wid us......🤗...

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Posted: 16 years ago
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@all esp ruchi and cindyyyyyyyy
thanx guya
may be its gud but this is wat i felt after crying for half an hour over mayur confession
i dont know even if it is a poem or not but....let it be
your comments r really too imp
glad that u liked it esp cindy and ruchi being such gud frnds and such fab writers
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow its really cute how u've put together their whole journey!!!👏 amazinnn⭐️...meri mind reader ne toh meri heart ki saari feelings poem mein keh di wow!!!
Edited by Shilpa.Agarwal - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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babes i loveee u n ur poemmmm aloott!!

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