|| Tera Muskurana || Part 2 Pg. 3 (7/3) - Page 2

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

Miiiine
-edited-
okay, obvsly i love it. Mayu is too cute and Radz, the cute little teasing gal. 😆
Lets see...love the bit abt her messing his hair and liking his new look...*nazar utharing*
though im curious abt the sadness prt...heh, shud write a sequel to it wit them talkin abt tht 😆 jk..
Cute and adorable, i can see Radz likes it, see i was right! *poses*
-Rinkz

Originally posted by: SaNyA_21

reserved =)

i shall edit this tomorrow; well, today, but after i get some sleep. too tired right now. 😆 No problem! 😃

edit.

Aw, this is was super adorable :D like how he does something he hates, just for her! *sigh* How cute. 😳 Loved it, and I'm sure the person you wrote it for will too :) Great work, Meera. Thanks a lot Sanya! 😳😃

-sanya.

Originally posted by: sourpuss

Awww Radz is gonna go all gaga and blushy over it! Am so glad you wrote this! Thanks! 😃😳 You think so? 😛

It's so adorable, how doing something he hates ended up with him meeting Radz...And then he dances with her! She's going to be in heaven, seriously. (And then maybe I can send her Obliviate-ed cupcakes...😈) No sending her those cupcakes! *hides Radz from Bhav*

Love,

Bhav (:

Originally posted by: shabo24

I read Mayank and started laughing, at the thought of Radzie di's reaction! :)

So cute, so adorable, loved how Mayank does something he detests just for di! Bask in the love di!

--shabz

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Meera! *grabs you in gigantic hug* THANK YOU! *blushes darkly*

my spot. lemme go check if I'm alive.

*edited*

*hyperventilates* He referred to me as 'his girl'. *dies* (I'm taking a page out of N's booklet. Don't worry, I won't write a novel though. Not enough coherence for that.) *hugs* You're sooo cute Radz! 😛 I never imagined a reaction like this from you!😳

Ah, I love how you wrote it, with him not knowing who I am, and 'love at first sight'. *giggle* Ooh, and you made me slightly flirty and outgoing! *dances* If only I were like that in real life. Always wanted to be. 😆*giggles* Would you believe I had NO concept before? 😳😛 And you can.....(who am I to talk, I could never be like that! 😛)

Oh, but thank you so much Meera! ILY! (And what about the sadness bit? Does that mean sequel??) If I ca think of something? 😛 and ILY too! 😃

Love,
Radz

P.S. Bhav, I'm not going to eat anything you give me. Well, I am, but I shall trick you into telling me what is in it first.

The person who the last one shot was for--wanted another sequel and so this is for her! 😃

She was ready for her first date with Mayank but where was he? She finished smoothing out her skirt for what seemed like the 10^th time when she heard the doorbell ring.

"Don't worry mama! I got it!" Aradhna smiled as she walked slowly to the door.

She could feel his gaze on her as the door was opened. She took the moment to check him out and the breath was knocked out of her when she did. He was wearing black slacks, with a loose turquoise colored shirt.

"Hi," He said softly as he stepped ran his hand through his hair.

"Hi," She smiled as he took her hand slowly.

"Shall we?" He asked as he led her out.

Radz smiled as they both went down the front steps to his cars; like a gentlemen he opened the door for her first and then stepped into the car after closing her door. "Where are we going?" she asked once Mayank started the car.

"It's a surprise," He smiled briefly at her before keeping his eyes on the road.

Radz shook her head before looking out the window. Finally they stopped at the docks. "Why are we here Mayank?" She turned to face him but was stunned to find him gone already. "Mayank?"

"Main yahaan hoon," He smiled as he opened the door for her and helped her out of the car.

"What are we doing here?" She asked him with a confused look on her face.

"You'll see," He winked at her before leading her to a boat.

"Mayank....I..." Aradhna started to say.

Mayank saw the fear on her face and slowly touched her face. "Kya hua?"

"I..." she didn't know what to say anymore. She didn't want him to be burdened with the pain she was feeling over everything but something told her that by telling him—he'd help her realize that it wasn't her fault. "Mayank—the last time I was on the water, I was 4 years old. My uh dad was steering the boat and we toppled over and the motor—" She shook her head and covered her face with her hands.

Mayan didn't need her to finish her sentence before taking her in his arms. No wonder she always had that sadness hidden in her eyes. He had tried to ask him mom but she had refused to tell him, saying it was something Aradhna had to tell him when she felt comfortable; but now he felt bad for making her say it.

"I'm sorry," he whispered into her hair.

She sniffed as she moved away from him. "Don't be sorry," She tries to smile. "You asked why I was sad at that function right? They were playing his favourite bhangra song."

Mayank put his arm around her shoulder as they both leaned against the pillar just watching the sunset over the ocean.

"I don't know why I told you all of it Mayank." Radz started to say before he placed his hand on top of her mouth.

"You told me because you've become to trust me and for that I'm grateful." He smiled as he wiped away the new tears at her eyes.

"I do trust you Mayank. I don't know how but something tells me that the minute I met you—this was meant to happen," Radz smiled as she leans her head down on his shoulder. "What did you bring me here for though?"

He smiled. "I was just going to take you for a boat ride—but we don't have to now,"

He puts both his arms around her and they both stand there silently watching the sunset knowing the even if one day was ending—their life was only just beginning together.

*cringes* I Hate it....I got Rinki to read it...she thought it was good...but I'm still not sure, so lemme know! 😃

Meera😳

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

Ahem Rinki is right you know. And u know i like it.
Its like the soft sequel, instead of rushing into things...
showing their trust growing for one another and then course her telling him abt the accident without even meaning to, almost speaking on instinct is adorable. Mayu is so sweet. Loved it. =]
-Rinkz

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Meera, stop thinking too much. I LOVED IT! I'm sorry....but when it's something special for my friend, I want it to be perfect and for me this wasn't that! 😳

And, I am kinda afraid of the water. Heh. So you got that right. But I love how you showed the trust growing between them, so genuine and realistic. Worked then....and thanks again! 😊

*squee*

I shall edit this. You don't have to hun! 😊

Love,
Radz

Originally posted by: SaNyA_21

So sweet ;) It was really nice how she trusted him to tell him all that :D Great work, Meera!

Originally posted by: shabo24

Ditto everyone else. The trust growing thing was awesome. You amaze me all the time with your shots. :) Fantastic shot - I loved it! :)