(FF)Khudhaya Khair -Character Sketch, Pg 1

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Raaton raat tara koi Chand ya sitara koi
Gire to utha lena
O suniyo re Tara chamkeela hoga
Chand Sharmila hoga Nath mein laga lena
Raaton raat tara koi Chand ya sitara koi
Gire to utha lena
O suniyo re Tara chamkeela hoga
Chand Sharmila hoga Nath mein laga lena
Hi!

I am mostly known for writing Premeer FFs😆 My record at the moment is 14 Premeer FFs, and no, don't be shocked!😳 I am new to this forum, as you can see, and I watch KMH, yes I do😆
This FF is dedicated to a friend of mine, who wanted me to write a FF on the song Khudhaya Khair, and here it is!
Zara si saanwari hai wo
Zara si baawari hai wo
Wo surme ki tarah meri
Aankhon mein hi rehti hai
Subah ke khwaab se udayi hai
Palkon ke neeche chhupayi hai
Maano na maano tum
Sote sote khwaabon mein bhi khwaab dikhati hai
Maano na maano tum
Pari hai wo pari ki kahaniyaan sunati hai
Khuda ya khair Khuda ya khair
Khuda ya khair Khuda ya khair
Arohi Sharma -
She is the world's most IMPERFECT person! If the world walks straight, she walks backwards. If the world eats dinner at 9pm, she eats it at 9am.
Raaton raat tara koi Chand ya sitara koi
Gire to utha lena
O suniyo re Tara chamkeela hoga
Chand Sharmila hoga Nath mein laga lena
Tu hawa main zameen Tu jahan main wahin
Jab ude mujhe le ke kyon udti nahi
Tu ghata main zameen Tu kahin main kahin
Kyon kabhi mujhe le ke kyon barasti nahi
What happens when Arohi lands herself a job in Mr. Punjj's office? Someone who she thinks is the most PERFECT guy?

Zara sa saanwara hai wo
Zara sa baawara hai wo
Wo surme ki tarah meri
Aankhon mein hi rehti hai
Arjun Punjj -
He is every girl's dream. Tall, muscular and handsome. Very puntcual about time. If he wants his office work done by 1pm, he make sures it is done.

Subah ke khwaab se udayi hai
Palkon ke neeche chhupayi hai
Maano na maano tum
Sote sote khwaabon mein bhi khwaab dikhati hai
Maano na maano tum
Pari hai wo pari ki kahaniyaan sunati hai
Khuda ya kaire Khuda ya kaire Khuda ya kaire
Jab daant mein ungli dabaye
Ya ungli pe lat liptaye
Baadal ye nichadta jaaye
Hoo hoo..
Kuchh kar ke wo baat ko taale
Jab maathe pe wo bal daale
Amber ye sukadta jaaye
Ho.. ho..
What happens when an imperfect girl Arohi meets a perfect guy like Arjun?
Wo jab nakhoon kutarti hai
To chanda ghatne lagta hai
Wo paani par kadam rakhe
Sagar bhi hat jata hai
Subah ke khwaab se udayi hai
Palkon ke neeche chhupayi hai
Maano na maano tum
Sote sote khwaabon mein bhi khwaab dikhati hai
Maano na maano tum
Pari hai wo pari ki kahaniyaan sunati hai
Khuda ya kaire Khuda ya kaire Khuda ya kaire
~*~
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Posted: 16 years ago
#2
Hi Shifali!

Its an awesome start!

Loved the whole description along with the song lyrics 😳😳😳

BTW I love that song yaar! Its so beautiful! 😳😳

Do continue soon!

Radhika

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oooo......soundss cool....

I've read all your FFs in the KDMHMD forum (I think all 14)........I really love reading your FFs...... :)
Do continue soonn.....
x.
Edited by Mallu_gal - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy it sounds amazing
please do continue


Irika

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Posted: 16 years ago
#5
hello shiffooo!!! hmm gttingg 2 read ur FF here as well.... wow!! hmm.. da character sketch is awesum.... i kinda get da whole story itself!!!!!!! lolzz arohi seems 2 b dat stupid si kinda grl! lol acha listen PLZ make it very romantic!! *sum1'z dieingg fr romance* updt asap!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Shiphooooooooooooooo!!....Lemme introduce her to you all-she's the first FF Writer of the world,who leaves all her FFs,right in the middle;and I've learnt this jaadu from her!...haha...
Shiphooo!..I'm really happy to see ya after a looooooooong(literally looooong..hehe)...tym!...I'm sure it would be more than great feeling then,starting-of with a new FF of yours.I hope you don't stop this half-way,though!..*ghussa face*...
Well,the intro.seems more than perfect,and simply interesting.I love how you present my Punji,here!...*sada sukhi raho,beta*...Lolzz,Arohi-the imperfect one?..I neva thought of tht!..hehe..It's gonna be interesting,though!!..And the song-*sigh*-it's one of the most adorable song I've ever heard,and perfectly goes well with Arjuhi!...
Can't wait to read it,so you betta start-off with it,before than sooner!..
Love..
Amina..*jhappi*...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#7
Hey shif
wow i found ur ff
intro is awesum

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Posted: 16 years ago
#8
Wow Shaifali ....
Loves the concept very much. ...
Sounds very intersting...
Cant wait foa the first part..
Contiue soon....
Jess
Edited by j44a - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#9
hey shifali,
loved ur ff along wid the song
continue soon!!
love
stuti
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Posted: 16 years ago
#10
Luved ur FF...Plz continue soon...

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