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Achi Lagti Ti Ho ~ Meet Songfic

This is my very first song fic & ff on I-Fso please bear with me. It's based on none other then MEET * squeals* Here's how the idea came to me. I was gone outside when it started raining and KABAM the idea for a Meet song fic came up. OMG I wrote too much didn't I. Oh well'Happy Reading! :)

Preet's POV

" Meher jaldi chalo," I shouted out to my crazy wife. Well it's her craziness that makes her cute. " Itni deir baad itni khoobsurat baarish aayi hai. Enjoy toh karne do Preet" she replied. Anyways we were gone outside in the garden when it started raining. Hard! I told her to come inside but did she listen? No. She finally listened after getting soaked in rain.

We both went in our rooms to dry off. She came out of the washroom with her hair still soaking wet. She took the towel to dry her hair. She looked even prettier with her hair wet. *Sighs* Her eyes moved toward mines and our eyes locked there. Her brown sugar eyes'+

stared into my chocolate brown eyes. She took her gaze away from mines. Couldn't she keep them there? Huh? Why did she have to move? She shook her hair shaking off the wet droplets everywhere. Some even tickled my face

Mujhe tum chupke chupke jab aise dhek ti ho.

Achi lagti ho

Kabhi zulfon se kahbi aanchal se kabhi khel ti ho

Achi lagti ho

Meher's POV

The rain had been beautiful. I got to feel those tingling wet droplets again. *Breathes* God! Why are his eyes so mesmerizing. Why do they make me want to just stare at them? When I look into them, why do they make want to melt? When ever he looks at me with that look, it makes me feel like there is a connection between us.

Mujhe dekh ke jab tum yun thandi aanhen bharte ho

Ache lagte ho

Mujhko jab lagta hai tum mujhpar hi marte ho

Ache lagte ho

Preet's POV

I moved up to her whispering in her ears. " Tumhe pata hai ke jabi mein tum ko dhekta hoon, mujh kya nazar aata hai." "Kya" she said her voice tickling my ears. " Simplicity combined with beauty that makes me want to stare at you. You're always so happy and your smile makes me happy" I now said putting my hands wrapped around her shoulders from behind.

Tum Mein hain' meherbaan

Saari khobiyan

Bholapan, Saadagi, Dilkhashi, Taazgi

Meher's POV

He now had his arms around me making me feel secure. Our bond had become stronger just as he said those words to me. I don't know when, I don't know how but I had fallen in love with this devious angel. I could feel my heart racing. How did he manage to make me feel this way? Those little tricks. He was a perfectionist. " Maybe because your with me now" I said whispering my eyes staring on to the floor. My cheeks slightly turning red.

Dilkhashi tumse hai

Taazgi tumse hai

Ho gayi mein Hasin

Rang tumse milein hain saare

I watched her blushing. "Beautiful" I muttered.'

It was amusing watching her blush. Her cheeks getting little stains of pink then darkening into red. " You do know I totally adore you when you blush."

I said staring at her. By now my cheeks brushed against her cheeks sending me an electrical jolt trough my body.

Taareef jo sunke aise sharmaa jati ho

Achi lagti ho

Kabhi Hans dethi ho

Kabhi Itraa jathi ho

Achi lagti ho

Meher's POV

I turned around to face the man who made me blush so intensively. Our faces were now close, a little too close. " Tumhara problem kya hai. Tumhe kya lagta hai, ke tu sabse behtar ho. Huh. Tumhe kya lagta hai ke agar tum mujhe thora sa blush kava do ge. Tum jeet jao ge." I now glared at him

"You're wrong" I smacked his chest.

Mujhe dhek jab tum yun thandi aahen bhar te ho

Ache lagte ho

Preet's POV

I looked at her admonished. My mouth hung open searching for something to say. This time the cat had really gotten my tongue. All that was left to do was to stare at her. I was lost for words.

Meher's POV

I looked at my husband who was still left astonished. I decided to shoot him one of my fav. King Khan line " Moon toh band karo uncle" I said with a giddy smile playing on my face. " Kya hua kuch bhol nahi rahe ho. Kya soch rahe ho"

Khoye, khoye se tum ho kyon

Soch mein ghum ho kyon

Baat jo dil mein ho

Keh bi do

Keh bi do

Preet's POV

"I was just wondering why I love you so much. Just wondering what you have done to me. Should I call you Meher or should call you " The girl who stole my heart in one second" You tell me Shona"

Sochta hoon ki main

Kya pukaroon tumhen

Dilnashin, Naaznin, Mahroo, Mahjabin

Yeh sab hein naam tumhare

Meher's POV

I stared at my husband blankly. It was as if we were playing a game. " I'd prefer Meher, thank you" I tilted my head to the side and said " Yeh hume kya hua? Pehle mujhe tum mere best friend lagte teh lekin ab jab bhi tum kuch kehto to kuch hota. Kyun?

Mere itne saare naam hai jab tum ye kehte ho

Ache lagte Ho

Mere pyaar mein jab tum khoye koye se rehte ho

Ache lagte ho

Preet's POV

"I think I know what, Yeh tumhari sugar brown ankhon ne mujhe kinch liya hai tumhari taraaf" " Meher I know that I've fallen in love with you. Do you love me" My eyes searched for her eyes and once again they were locked but this time it felt like they would be locked for eternity.

Mujhe tumchupke chupke jab aise dhek ti ho

Achi lagti ho

Kabhi zulfon sekabhi aanchal se jab khelti ho

Achi lagti ho

Meher's POV

"What had just happened?" I wondered.

Did he just confess? What? This seems like a dream? It's so perfect.

I don't know why but all I could do was nod meekly. How I wished this dream would never end. Maybe it wouldn't end.

Mujhe dekh ke jab tum yun thandi aanhen bharte ho

Ache lagte ho

Mujhko jab lagta hai tum mujhpar hi marte ho

Ache lagte ho

Preet took little steps towards her with a mischievous smile glued on his lips. " Preet tum' yeh' kya'." Meher now spoke to him. He moved towards causing her to back up which resulted in her falling on the bed. He now was practically on top of her as if he were doing push ups. He moved to her ears whispering like the wind " Achi lagti ho"

She still tried to protest but all that came was unheard muffled voice. He bent doen about to kiss her, her temperature rising heavily. She was scared. Oh how he enjoyed her expressions changing constantly. He pecked her right cheek. She was too tired protest because she knew if she tried nothing would come out of her. She had melted.

~ The End ~

Was it fluffly? Comments and criticism welcome.( Oh my god why does it sound like immigrants welcome ) What about flow. And thnx to all Meet writers out there from helping me from suffering too much MWS(meet withdrawal scenarios)

Love Lily

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awww ....dah was ever soo adorable ... !!!! *hehe*
loved d transformations .. plz do continue soon .. !
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Posted: 16 years ago
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*giggles* That was really cute!!! I love the song, it's one of my favorites!!! The senario really fit well together as well!!! Good job!!!
By the way, welcome to the forum, I'm Maddy! Nice to meet you Lily!!! =D
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Originally posted by: blackdaughter

*giggles* That was really cute!!! I love the song, it's one of my favorites!!! The senario really fit well together as well!!! Good job!!!

It is one of my fav song too & thnx 😳
By the way, welcome to the forum, I'm Maddy! Nice to meet you Lily!!! =D Well wats up Maddy thnx 4 the welcome

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Hey guys I hae a question does anybody know how to make a meet banner cuz i wanna make one for my ffs
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HAI MERE RABBA!!!! 😆lmao dat was more than fluffy Lilyy loll😳

but it was so0o0o so0o0 so0o0 ADORABLEE
woww for a first time u seemed like a pro at this
it was really go0d
so this is like a FF ...rite??? ....den i hopee u continue soon with more and more of these cutee updatess
lolzz go0d job by the way👏 keep it up👍🏼 ...oh yea i like how u showed their point of views and esp when Preet said: "my crazy wife" i absolutely luved dat part😃😉
---------luv Rumsha
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Originally posted by: pRinc3ssRZxJT

HAI MERE RABBA!!!! 😆lmao dat was more than fluffy Lilyy loll😳

but it was so0o0o so0o0 so0o0 ADORABLEE thnx 😳
woww for a first time u seemed like a pro at this i have posted other ffs on other forums though
it was really go0d
so this is like a FF ...rite??? ....den i hopee u continue soon with more and more of these cutee updatess
This was a song fic but i hope to make more & post a whole ff here
lolzz go0d job by the way👏 keep it up👍🏼 ...oh yea i like how u showed their point of views and esp when Preet said: "my crazy wife" i absolutely luved dat part😃😉 i enjoyed writing that part too isnt he "devious angel" ☺️
---------luv Rumsha

Edited by LilyGurl - 16 years ago

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