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Posted: 16 years ago
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**Scenes written by anotheranfan**
SCENE 1
Niki cant stop thinking about abhi. Every word from her friends reminds her of nobody other than abhi. When she is about to leave, she bumps into armaan.
Armaan: nikki tum thik to ho na.
Niki : main thik hun, ghar jaa rahi hun.
Armaan: thik hai main tumhe chodata hun.
Niki: Ok

Armaan drives her back home. While they are on their way.. Niki is all silent and remembering all the old scenes.. cake fight, car breakdown, fun in the medical camp.. and then remembers how he drived her to panchgani... Then she remembers todays fight... and the moment when armaan drops him in the water.. and scream.. No........

Armaan: nikki.. kya hua.. thik to ho na.. shaam se dekh raha hun kuch pareshaan ho.. ridhima bhi kuch to bol rahi thi ki tum aur dr. modi...
Niki: Armaan main thik hun.. i dont want to talk about todays incidence right now.. see.. mera ghar aa gaya hai.. chalo good night..
Armaan: kya ho gaya niki ko.. sab dr. modi ki wajah se..

Niki starts to walk back to her house and she remembers the time when she fought with abhi on project episode and he dropped her home forcefully. She remembers how he cared for her and waited till she went to the door.. She sees abhi waiting there in the car now as well.. but then soon realises she is imagining it..

Niki enters the house and still cant forget about abhi.. she again tries to call him but his cell phone is switched off.. she says whatever time it is now she has to talk to abhi. She thinks *fine thats it.. i have to drive to his house*

Niki reaches abhi's place..

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Abhi is still burning things that remind him of nikita.. and hears a door bell.. he wonders who has come at this hour..

he reaches door and opens it to find niki.. Niki is stunned to see chaos in the room.. his broken hand.. For a instance abhi thinks its his imagination.. and says:
Abhi: itana sab kuch hone ke baad bhi yeh ladaki muze abhi bhi sab jagah kyu dikhati hai.. nahi.. main yeh aur nahi hone de sakata...
he closes the door with bang.

Niki realises how much damage has she caused by not speaking.. she thinks isase baat karana aasan nahi hoga.. lekin muze baat to karani padegi. She again reaches for the door bell.. even after few bell rings door doesnt open .. finally she talks out loud from outside only...

Niki: Abhi.. please darwaja kholo.. muze tumase baat karani hai..
Abhi: Kyu aayi ho .. tum agar sabke saamane muzse baat nahi kar sakati to ab kyu aayi ho...
Niki: Please darwaja kholo... aur muze ek chance do... please abhi..
Abhi: Nahi tum chali jaoo... ab is sabka kuch matlab nahi hai ..
Niki: Please abhi.. please darwaaja kholo..

Abhi opens the door
Niki enters.. But abhi is still at door and asking her:
Abhi: Kyu aayi ho yaha..
Niki: Abhi I am really sorry... maine kuch nahi kaha jab sab log.....
Abhi: Niki muze ab kuch farak nahi padata.. infact dr. nikita ab se mereliye tum sirf ek intern ho...
Niki: Sirf ek intern... to thik hai.. yeh sirf ek intern tumse kuch mangana chahati hai..
Abhi: Dr. Nikita aap abhi hospital me nahi mere ghar pe hai and I imagine yeh jo kuch bhi hai if its work related kal baat ho sakati hai.. aur agar nahi to kabhi nahi ho sakati..
Niki: Abhi..
Abhi: Dr. Modi. .. Its dr. Modi.
Niki: Ok. Dr. Modi, yaad hai aapane muze bola tha ki if I get you that project you will do anything that I want.
Abhi becomes little uncomfortable and is in dilema what to say.
Niki: So Dr. Modi muze usi promise me yeh chahiye ki I want to talk to you now. Meri baat aapako sunani padegi.
Abhi: Ok. Bolo
Niki: Abhi...
Abhi: Its Dr. Modi.. come what may..
Niki: Ok Dr. Modi.. I am sorry maine sabke saamane kuch nahi keh paayi.. I am really sorry.. please muze maaf kardo..
Abhi: Ho gaya?
Niki: Abhi.. I mean Dr. Modi. Please aap samaziye na.. agar maine kuch kahaa hota to aap aur armaan... <she gets a firm look from abhi.. and she realises she should not be talking about armaan> i mean aap dono agar ladate aur kahi kuch ho jaata to kirti mam ki shaadi.. Main sirf tumpe... <she goes near him and holds his hand> bharosa hai.. ki tum samazoge.. i know woh arm..mere sab friends ne tumhaari bahot be-ijjati ki lekin main unse jaada tumpe bharosa karati hun.. isiliye maine kuch nahi kahaa.. muze pata tha ki tum jab meri baat sunoge to... tum hi ho jo samaj sakate ho.. Please abhi... Main yaha sirf tumse baat karane aayi hun.. muze kuch waqt chahiye... main sabko dikha saku ki tum ek achhe insaan ho... and then i will tell everyone that I ..
<abhi sees niki and stares at her>
Niki comes close to abhi.. takes her duppata and starts cleaning his wound..
Niki: Abhi.. Main tumse.. main tumse pyaar karati hun.. jahaa jati hun muze bhi sirf tum dikhate ho.. tum nahi hote to kuch bhi achha nahi lagata.. aaj kirti mam ke shaadi me main sirf tumhe dhund rahi thi.. pata tha ki tum nahi aaoge lekin ankhe baar baar tumhe hi khoj rahi thi.. abhi.. <abhi is starting to forget his anger but still little confused>.. niki realises this and takes his hand and carefully kisses it. and continues:
Niki: jab aaj woh sab log tumhari beijjati kar rahe the to mera dil dukh raha tha.. lag raha tha ki main unhe abhi jaake bataoo ki nahi abhi aaisa nahi hai .. par main majboor thi... and she stops and looks in his eyes..
Abhi: Dr Nikita.. aaj meri jo beijaati hui hai woh main nahi bhul sakata.. tumne ab tak mera kabhi bhi saath nahi diya hai.. tumhe sirf.. ek baar kehana tha... tumhari baat complete karani thi. tumne agar sirf utana bhi kaha hota to main silently udhar se chala aata.. lekin tum sirf dekhati rahi.. tumhare dostone muzpe gande gande iljaam lagaye.. lekin main sirf tumhara sentence complete ka wait kar raha tha.. muze koi farak nahi padata woh kya sochate hai.. muze sirf tumhara jawab cahhiye tha.. lekin ab.. ab yeh sab kehne se kuch nahi hoga.. kyunki yeh hamesha chalata rahega.. tum kabhi bhi sabki soch badal nahi sakati and tum kabhi bhi muze accpet nahi kar sakati.. so ab tumhari baat puri ho gayi hai to tumhe jaana chahiye.. aaise kisike ghar .. especially aaise adami ke ghar jo tumhare saath jabardasti karaneki koshish kare.... akele itane raat ko nahi hona chahiye.. bye..
Niki: Abhi.. tum meri baat nahi samaz rahe ho.. please samazo na.. achha baba.. i am very sorry.. please muze maaf kar do..
Abhi: Dr. Nikita, promise sirf tumhari baate sunane ka tha.. main tumhe kabhi maaf nahi kar sakata.. jo interns meri kadar nahi karate.. muze respect nahi de sakate.. main unse jaada sambandh nahi rakhana chahunga.. please ab aap ghar jaaiye..
Niki: Abhi please.. please muze kuch waqt do.. sirf mereliye itana kardo..
Abhi: Main aur kuch nahi kar sakata Dr. Nikita.. tum jo chahati ho woh kabhi nahi hoga.. tumhare friends.. muze kabhi pasand nahi karenge.. aur tum unke khilaf to jaoogi nahi...
Niki: to tum aaise nahi monoge.. aaj main tumse yeh bet lagati hun ... ki ek mahine ke andar sab longo ke samane maine tumhari achhai nahi laayi to main tum jo kahoge woh karungi..
Abhi: Dr Nikita ab aapako chalana chahiye.. main tumhe ghar chod deta hun.. lekin ise bhul ke bhi yeh mat samazana ki main sab bhul gaya hun.. tumhare jagah aur koi bhi ladaki hoti to main yahi karata.. so chalo..
Niki: thik hai.. isi bahane muzea aur thodi der tumhare saath milega.. chalo..

Abhi drops her home and returns to his place.. He still cant decide whether he wants to forgive nikita for finally usne woh kaha jo woh sunana chahata tha ya phir... nahi.. kyunki usne yeh tab nahi kaha jab woh sabase jaada sunana chahata tha.. He again remembers how those interns insulted him.. how he was hoping niki to say those 3 words.... with his confused thoughts he goes to bed..

~The End~
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SCENE 2
Niki in sanjeevani in the corridor, talking to herself:
Niki: Niki ab sirf ek mahine me Abhi ko villain se hero bananeka hai. kuch soch niki kuch soch..
She colides with abhi and gets lost thinking about last time when she colided like that when she was helping out armaan. She rememembers how abhi had teased her and how she had made fun of him... and a smile comes to her face.
On the hand abhi at first completely forgets that he is upset with niki.. and is completely lost looking at her... Suddenly the last nights flash back <where he falls in poool and interns make fun of her and niki not speaking anything > comes to his mind and he becomes upset.. even with himself for thinking about niki even now...
Abhi: Dr. Nikita..
Niki comes out of her thoughts and sees upset abhi...
Niki: Abh.. Dr Modi.. please calm down.. remember tumko hasate khilkhilate rehana chahiye... sehat achhi rehati hai.. sadoooo face... and she makes her usual funny faces..
Abhi: Dr Nikita... Aap yaha kya kar rahi hai... Aap ko to general ward ke patient ke saath hona chaiye..
Niki: Dr Modi, main uske liye medicines lene hi jaa rahi thi..lekin aap dekhe bina muzase takara gaye... dhyaan kaha hai aapaka.. <she has that naughty look on her face>
Abhi feels little uncomfortable yet covers it up..
Abhi: Dhyaan to aapaka nahi tha.. ek Kaam to aapase thik se nahi hota atleast dekhake to chala karo..
niki: dr modi.. ab mere personal problems khatam ho gaye hai... muze umeeed hai ki mera kaam ab achha hi hoga... jaise.. aapako yaad hai kal raat ki bet.. mera pehla kadam ready hai.. aap ready ho jaaiye bet haaraneko..
Abhi feeling uncomfortable, says: Woh to dekhenge.. Abhimanyu modi kabhbi harata nahi.. <aur maan me.. lekin yeh bet haaranese jo khushi hogi woh saaare bets jitanese bhi nahi milegi..>
they both look at each other with mixture of love + competition and head back on their own ways...
~The End~
Edited by Prietha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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**Scenes written by Asthoux**
SCENE 1

Nikki is running , as she sees a choha and BANG. She wraps her arm around abhi really tight as obz he is the person she banged into and she wouldnt let go. She is stuck to him like a chipkali. Everyone is looking. He gets annoyed as she doesn leave him.

AbhI: Dr Nikita, mujhe chore. Please.
Nikita: Nahii , choha, choha. (jumping)
Abhi: DR NIKITA.

Nikita jumps on the bench beside here ,
Nikita: choha , Help!!

Abhi is getting really annoyed now, and trying to get her down.
Dr abhi: Dr nikita , what are you doing. App please neeche ah aye
Nikita sees the choha passing abhi's foot and screams , losing her balance she lands in abhi's arms
she wrapps her arms around his shoulders even tighter and softy says

nikita: thank you , par ab app mujhe chore. choha gaya

Abhi feels embarrassed and accidentally drops her gettng nikita angry.
Nikiki: How dare you? Gosh , manner bhool gaye ho kya. Bandar!

Abhi Shakes his head smiling slightly as Nikita walks away.

~The End~
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SCENE 2
version of what would happen after the fight AN had where Mr. Patil ruined their dinner and inspired by the promo that was shown of Niki visiting Abhi while he got ready for the boxing match.


Nikita ran inside her room, not realizing she left her front door open. She dropped her weight on her bed, tears rolled down her eyes non-stop. She stretches her arm to grab her pillow.


Nikita---- I cant belive he would stand so low. I remembered the incident.
I hugged my pillow tighter as his face flashed in my mind

"Why Modi, why?" I questioned myself.
"I didn't do anything Nikki, trust me" I lifted my head up hearing his voice.

Abhi ---- I could see the same anger in her eyes, which I examined few minutes ago.
"Nikki" I brought my arm forward blocking her way. She glared at me.
"Don't you dare" a lone tear rolled down her cheek. I could feel her pain. It killed me inside.
"Niki, please trust me. I never knew Mr Patel would turn out like this" I touched her shoulder but she jerked away my hands away.

Nikita----- "Lair" I exclaimed. He knew everything I told myself.
"Do you really think I would lie to you" He tired to convince me.
I pushed him away. I didn't want to belive anything. I closed my eyes feeling his hand grabbed mine. I froze. His cold fingers firmly wrapped around my wrist.
"I would never hurt you" he let go of my hand. My eyes were still shut. I could sense him being really close. His forehead creased against mine. He took hold of my hands, brought them up. He lightly squeezed them.

Abhi ---- I stared at her sad face. Her skin was pale yet she still looked beautiful. I blinked finding another tear rolling down her cheek. My lips captured it before it passed down her face.
She gasped. I let go of her. She moved her head down slightly as she opened her eyes. I could see her staring at me through her long lashes.

Nikita ---- I saw him take out a white folded paper from his jeans pocket. I wondered what it was. He didn't say anything expect hand me the paper. I looked up as his fingers reached up and brushed the strand of my hair back.
He smiled a little and soon walked way.
I looked down at the paper. I opened it. It was a letter. I began to read.


Dear Nikki.
I don't know if you will read this letter or chuck it in the bin. I just want you to know that I would never hurt you like this. I seriously didn't have any idea that Patel guy was so cheap. Trust me, if I did I would not allowed him anywhere near you.

I tighten my grip on the letter as I carried on reading.

Im not a cheap guy Nikki. Im really not. I know I can't change what you think about me after this but believe me; I have got nothing to do with this. I do care for you. I really do. Saachi

Abhi.

I crunched up the paper. I stared at it for a while as his words ran down my mind. I dropped my weight on my bed. I closed my eyes only to find his smiling face flash across.

**

Abhi ---- I smiled finding her.
"Nikki" I shouted to get her attention. My smiled faded as she ignored me and carried on walking.

Nikita ---- I didn't what to say. I do belive him. I want to. But what if he was a lair? All my life I have been ignored. I never got any love. Why do I feel that Abhi can give me everything I never had? Why am I feeling attached to him? Why? To many questions

I tried to catch my breath as I opened the front door to enter the hospital.

Abhi ---- I took all my frustration out on the punching bag.
Her words. Her crying face flashed in my mind.
What effect does she have on me? Why all a sudden?
What was happening to me?
"Argh" I punched the bag. It coming flying back. I grabbed it before it hit me.
I turned my hand into a fist again to punch. I stopped as my eyes met her's.


Nikita ---- It took a lot of encourage coming here. I still wasn't sure what to say. My mind was confused. I had a fear deep inside. Fear of losing him. Could this be the reason for my arrival here? No! I told my self. Abhi was never mine, to lose. Could it be I want him to be mine?
"NO" I screamed!
I blinked finding him in front of me. Really close. My legs and arms felt like jelly, I turned to leave, but I wasn't quick enough, he grabbed my arm before I got way.

Abhi ---- I didn't want to let her go. I wanted to talk and sort things out. Maybe she was here for this reason to, because no one knew I was here.
"I need to talk to you" I felt relief hearing her voice.
"Nikki" Before I completed, she suddenly adds.
"Actually no, I better leave. Dr Kirti will be giving out our duties soon" I didn't let her go. She glared at me
"Abhi, let me go" I didn't listen.
Turning her around, I pinned her against the wall.
"We need to talk" I brought my face closer to her's. Her scent. It 's driving me crazy.

Nikita----- I froze as he rubbed his thumb on cheeks, brushing past my cheekbones. He was touching me. Touching me.
"A-abhi" I stammered.He was in no mood to listen. He carried on. His face was so close that are lips can easily brush past eachother if one of us moves. His nose softly rubbed against mine.

Abhi ----- I was so close to her. It felt like a dream.
I smiled as her fingers trailed down my face. I closed my eyes, trying to find those words I wanted to speak.
I sighed when I did
"Nikki, you wanted to know the truth" I stopped as I found her deeply looking into my eyes
"yes" I continued after she spoke
"the truth is, I .. I think .. I" I stammered.

Nikita ---- I waited for him to speak. I wonder what he wanted to say.
"Oh god, its so dark" I blinked hearing a deep voice.
"Abhi" I shook him, try to grab his attention. Intertwined my fingers with his, and creped on the other side to find a hiding place.
I pulled us down behind a huge box. We waited for the man to go out. It was really uncomfortable hiding.


Abhi ----- I smiled as she gives me sighal that cost is clear, but I didn't move.
"Abhi come on. Abhi" my smiled faded as soon as her expressions changed.
"SPIDER" she jumped on my lap. Her arms wrapped around my shoulder really tightly.
"Don't let go of me," She cried.
I looked around. I lightly laughed seeing a small spider on the big box.
I got up, making her get up to. She still didn't get go of me. Instead her grip got tighter. I couldn't help but wrap my arms around her waist and pull her closer. I nuzzled in her hair and placed a soft kiss on her neck. She felt it. Her hands creased my vest.

~The End~
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SCENE 3
Nikita ---- I kept my eyes down. I could feel his black-eye gaze on me. I clearly heard the chair move next to me. I grabbed my pen and started doodling idly inside my file. I gasped feeling his leg lightly crease my leg. I looked down to check if he was trying to play footsie. He wasn't.

I dropped my head down again allowing my hair to fall to hide my face. I closed my eyes feeling him moving the chair closer to mine.

Abhi---- "Abhi" I blinked as I heard her soft whisper. I was close enough to hear her breathe.
She lifted her head slightly. Her cheeks appeared lifted, as if she were smiling.
I brought my face closer towards her. My eyes flickered to her's, she quickly looked away awkwardly.
Nikita ---- I bite my lip to hide my smile. I flushed in embarrassment. I glanced at him again only to receive a soft kiss on my lips. As his warm lips softly pressed against mine, I felt an electric current pass through us.

Abhi ------ As I moved my face away from her's, I soon found her clutching my shirt. She pulled me closer. Her fingers touched my face, lightly brushing along my cheekbones.
"I love you," she said in a light musical voice. It made me melt.
Her lips brushed passed my chin, closer to my lips.

Nikita ----- I crushed my lips against his. I felt his arms gently wrap around my waist as he pulled me closer kissing me back. I felt my self-melt in his arms as I embraced him wrapping my arms around his neck. I was feeling electrified. His kiss held that passion I guessed. It was same as getting struck by lighting.
~The End~

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SCENE 4
Nikita walked to the parking lot. She stopped midway.
"My purse" She turned around. She started walking back to the hospital full speed. She felt a fear of the late night.

Nikita ---- I stopped my steps as I felt a built body push me by hitting my shoulder. I looked back to find him staring at me.
"Modi" I screamed feeling his fingers
intertwined with mine. He pulled me close towards him.
Our faces were just an inch away. I could feel his warm breath on my cheeks. It was quite chilly outside. He made me feel warm as he rubbed his other hand on my shoulder.
Ignoring this I wondered what on earth was he still doing here?

Abhi ----
I waited outside the parking lot for her to arrive. I wanted to talk to her about the sudden feelings I had came across in the few days. They did connect her.
I softly laughed at the way she was looking at me. Well, tried. I could see the private glances she kept passing. I could sense the confusion in her deep black eyes.

Nikita ---- I made a mistake to look at him again, my gaze meet his. I glared at him, finding his smirking face.
"Modi, oi modi" I tired to distract his gaze. No use, he was staring at me incredulously. I felt a sudden awkwardness. I could feel my cheeks warming up as he came closer.

Abhi ---- I brushed my cheek past her moving my mouth near her ear.
"I need to talk to you"
I felt her grip on my shirt. I brought my head against hers. Blowing on her hair I heard a light giggle. Ticklish I thought!

Nikita ---- Oh my god! I exclaimed. What im I doing? I thought.
I stepped back avoiding any eye contact. I tired to release my hand from his grip. He was too strong.
Oh god! I looked up at the black sky feeling a water drop on my head. It's raining.
I tired to drag him away from the rain, nothing worked. He stood still. Eyes closed, smiling.

Abhi ---- I smiled wider feeling her drag me away using both her hands. Achieving nothing, she tired to take her other hand back. I still didn't let go even hearing the word please.
I opened my eyes and brought our hands up.
"Dance" I gave her no chance to speak.
I twirled her around slowly, bring her back. She crushed into my chest. We shared a brief eye lock till she looked down.

Nikita ----- What on earth was happening? We were in the rain. And im allowing him to dance with me?
I looked up again as he wrapped his arm around my waist. As he came closer I moved back. I gasped as he brought me closer, my arms resting on his chest.
I noticed something different in his eyes. It felt like something I could feel and understand. My own statement made me feel weird inside.
I stood still in his arms as his flawless lips kissed my cheeks.

~The End~
Edited by Prietha - 16 years ago
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**Scene written by Multiple Members**
SCENE 1

~*//Sati//*~

There is some pre engagement party in Shanky's place where all the hosptial staff are invited......

Riddima and Abhimanyu come straight from home from a meeting for the mumbai wala project.......

Nikki is helping with the party arrangement......along with naani...........

Ridhima comes in and sings abhi's praise as he saved her from that PA who ever he was........

~*//Love_ya//*~

Nikki says " Tum log dinner pe gaye tha ? "

She feels empty like there's a knot in her throat.

" Tum Armaan ka saath aisa kya kar saktha ho ? "

Wait Wait Nikki Why do you care . , " Nikki asks herself.

~*//Sati//*~

Armaan takes ridhi away worrying she might be hurt............ along with naani

Leaving nikki and abhi alone...............

Abhi: ahem......... Agar ethna gisogi to plate mein cheed aajaayeegaa.......

Nikki: Tumhe issay kay......... tumhara plate to nahi hai naa......... apna kaa karoo...........

Abhi: Thank god mera ghar nahi hai....I wouldnot even tolerate a servant like you...........10 minutes say ek hi plate gisrahi hoo........patha nahi woh koun hogaa jo tumse shaadi karegaa..............

~*//Love_ya//*~

Nikki : Who cares about the plate ? Main to sirf tumarah bare mein care karta hoon.

Abhi : Acha .... To aap mein itna sudden change Kyun ?

Nikki : I don't want you to die of starvatio0n before our marrige na otherwise I won't get ladoos

Abhi : So u only care about the ladoos

Nikki : Maybe . She played around with the ring on his finger and ran her hands over the incarved word " Nikki "

Abhi got closer to her and inhaled and smelled her . Just like strawberries like her fav fruit.

~*//Sati//*~

Nikki widens her eyes in anticipation.........and then closes her eyes and waits................

~*//Prietha//*~

Abhi ' let's go out

Nikki ' arre mujhe yeh saaf to kar lene do

Abhi ' baad mein' abhi to mera mood kuch

Nikki ' oye Mr. Modi, watch wat u sayin ok

Abhi grabs her hand takes her outside' they both c a beautiful sky filled with stars and full moon'

Abhi ' may I hav a pleasure dancing w/ thodi si stupid ladki???

~*//Love_ya//*~

Nikki turns around and searches everywhere.

Abhi : Tum kya search kar rahi ho

Nikki : Won thori si stupid ladki ko

Abhi smiled she was just just undescrible she was perfect.

Abhi grabbed her : Mujhe wo mil gayi

Nikki : I love you

Abhi : Really ?!?! Mujhe nahi pata that maine socha ke tumne mujse shaadhi ki revenge lena ka liye so you can kill me.

Nikki : Don't say that Abhi you know I'll always love you I have nobody else.

She started to cry. Abhi turned her around and placed his hands over her cheeks and said stared at her.

Abhi : I will have nobody na so how can I let my doll go ?

~*//Prietha//*~
Abhi ' Nikki tum mujhe kitna pyar karti ho

Nikki teases him ' Main kyu batao, aur waise bhi pyar karoon ya nahin' tumhe usse kya??

Abhi ' matlab nahin karti? Achcha hai mai kisi aur ko pakad looga..

Nikki ' Nahin' aisa kabhi mat karna' mai toot jaaogi..

Abhi ' To phir batao na, tumhe mujhse kitna pyar hai'

Nikki ' Main tumse bahut pyar karti hoon'

Abhi ' bas' is tarah kya pyar'.

Nikki ' matlab..

Abhi ' arre achchi tarah se apne pyar ka izhar karo na'mai dekhna chahta hoon ki tum kis hadh tak mujh se pyar karti ho taki agar kal mujhe kuch ho jaayen to....

Nikki stopped him from saying further by covering his mouth with her hands and tears in her eyes.

Nikki ' aisa kabhi mat kehna' aisa nahin hai ki tumhare bina mai mar jaaogi' mujhe yeh zindagi kisi bhi haal mein jee ni hogi lekin sahi mayne mein meri zindagi tumse hi suru hoti hai.. mera matlab hai ki mai tumhare bina ek pal bhi khush nahin reh sakti..

Abhi - Achcha toh yeh batao ki itna pyar mujhse kyu? Why do you love me so much? And yeh I want the answer in only English.. no hindi'alright

Nikki smiled at him and answered innocently after thinking a bit "I love you because you hear me when I share my innermost secrets and my nonjudgmental and accepting of the mistakes I've made and my regrets"

Abhi ' aur

Nikki ' "I love you because you see me as the person I am inside as well as out. My heart feels warm when I am with you, teaching me what love is all about"

Abhi listens to her carefully as she kept going on "I love you because you talk to me sincerely and reveal what you want our life to be, by sharing me with your friends and family including me in your life's plan daily"

Abhi gets little emotional as he knew she wanted to tell him more. Nikki continues, "I love you because you touch me so gently, sometimes a look across the room is enough to let me know I am on your mind, even when the times mat get tough".

And "I love you because we can be apart sometimes, and our independence isn't threatening because we are secure in our relationship, enjoying out love as it is strengthening".

A tear fall from Abhi's eyes listening to Nikki as she goes on with" I love you because you accept me, and don't try to change who I am".

Abhi asked her to carry on which she replies, "I love you because I feel safe with you, knowing that on you I can depend. I love you because I can be myself. I love you because you can be yourself too"

"At last but not the least, the most wonderful thing in our time together is you love me and I love you" Nikki finish it off.

They both were on the cloud nine. They were happy to be part of each others life. They mean so much to each other as they were soul mates.

~The End!
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SCENE 2

~*//Love_ya//*~

Abhi : Tum kya kar rahi ho

Nikki : Kuch khaas nahi but aapni shaadhi ka joda pehen rahio hoon aur thori der mein main shaadhi kar loongi so nothinng special.. Tum Kya ?

Abhi : Same

~*//Prietha//*~

Nikki - arre waah mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum mujhse shaadi karne ke liye itni betaab ho

Abhi - sach kaha tumne... mujhe samaj mein nahi aata ki mai apne pair par kuladi kaise maar sakta hoon

Nikki - kyunki tumhare paas dimaag hi nahi hai... right sweetheart??

Abhi - haan agar dimaag hota to tumse shadi karne ke liya haan kyu kehta... waise bhi pata hai na ke badimag walon se baatein kaun karta hai, jo khud badimag hota hai..

Nikki - you rascal.. mai tumhe choodugi nahi

Abhi - waise bhi tum mujhe chhod nahi sakti... shaadi jo kar rahi ho

Nikki - woh to hai.. i love u so much

Abhi - kash mein bhi yeh keh pata

~*//Love_ya//*~

Nikki : Ehhh I hate you soo much

Abhi : Now you're talking like me

Nikki : You know what I never want to talk to you again forget about marriying you.

Abhi : Finally picha chor diya

Nikki : Haan give me my dowry back it had a million dollars in it

abhi : wo to maine spend car diya

Nikki : Fine just get outta my life

And with that she shut the phone

Abhi : Oopsie maybe I got her too mad

The boys came in

Boys : Tum abhi tak ready nahi hua

abhi : Oh I was doing something

In Nikki's room

Nikki : Ridz go to tell Abhi I don't want to marry him

Ridz : kya !?!?!?

Nikki n: Not really just to play around a bit

Ridz : Nikki R u sure ?

Nikki : Haan baba

~*//Prietha//*~

Ridz knocks on the door of Abhi'z room...

Ridz - Mr Modi... I am realli sorry to give u bad news?

Abhi - bad news??

Ridz - haan, woh nikki hai na usne saadi karne se inkaar kardiya

Abhi - kya?? tu sach keh rahi ho

Ridz - Haan, sach mein

Abhi - this is actually gewd news... tell her thanx

Ridz - Mr. modi usne aapse shaadi se mana kar diya phir bhi aap itne khush hai??

Abhi - arre khush kyu na hoon... kali billi se picha jo chhutta

Nikki overhears their convo n gets mad...

~*//Love_ya//*~

Nikki storms in

Nikki : You know what ??!?! Go to hell with you

She took off her ring and threw it at his face.

Abhi : Nikki , this was only supposed to be a joke aren't u taking it too far ?

Nikki : No I'm not you're the one who took it outside the limits

Abhi : Ok forget it .

Nikki : No I refuse to spend my life with a person like you , Armaan was always right you're stupid , idiot and a person who just ehh I'm not even going to say the word

Abhi stared in disbelief

~*//Prietha//*~

Nikki turned herself to leave wen abhi saw her n walked to her.

Abhi - what r u doin here??..

Upset Nikki replied, " tumse se matlab?"

Abhi (with a smile) – actually mujhe koi matlab nahi woh tumne shaadi se mana kardiya isliye bas

Nikki – woh meri problem hai aapki nahi, isliye aaj yaha se jaaiye aur mera waqt jaahir mat kijiye

Abhi ( making a naughty face) – Achcha, agar tum chahti ho ki mai tumhara waqt barbad na karoo toh phir tumhe mere saath chalna hoga.

Hearing what Abhi just said Nikki was shocked… She replied him " tumhara dimaag to thik hai na??? tumne mujhe samaj kya rakha hai?? Tum jaise gadhdhe ke saath mai aaogi?? Tumhari koi izzat hai ki nahi??

Abhi was trying to explain that he didn't mean anything like what she is thinking but she didn't let him so he covered her mouth with his hands… "Listen, think whatever you want to. I just wanted to give u a surprise and thats y i asked u 2 come w/ me... if u wanna come the come or else you may go to HELL… U heard me GO TO HELL…."

After hearing what Abhi said Nikki got so angry and told him, "Mujhe tumhare jaise cchuhe (mice) ki surprise ki koi jaroorat nahi hai, mai khud apne aap ko surprise kar sakti hoon., aur aaj ke baad mein tumhara chehra bhi nahi dekhna chahti… mere saamne kabhi mat aana warna mai tumhe mar daaloongi. "

A naughty iAbh couldn't take his steps back as he already did that before so he screamed at her "tumhare jaisi billi (cat) ka chahra dekhna bhi kaun chahta hai… tumhare jaisi ladki maine aaj tak nahi dekhi. Jo ek Billi ka roop le kar logo ko daraati hai aur unhe nochh dalti hai… samji??"

Nikki started running behind ABhi to hit him for saying all that nonsense to her. They were about 2 feet apart from each other when in a rush Nikki twisted her ankle since she was wearing heavy Lehnga. She held abhi's hand for a support from falling but unfortunately she fell and was in pain…

~*//lovebapu18//*~

nikki: ouch!!

abhi: tum theek toh ho na!

nikki: haan par per main moch a gayi hai. bohut dukh raha hai.

abhi: nikki tum thodi der araam karo. and i am sorry!!

nikki:koi baat nahi. just forget everything.

abhi: toh phir shaadi cancel nahi na?

nikki: bilkul bhi nahi!

~*//Prietha//*~

Abhi picks up Nikita in his arms

Abhi - tum kis chakki ka aata khati ho?

Niki - kyun??

Abhi - bas aise hi.. tum bahut bhari jo ho

Nikki starts bittin up abhi n messed up his hair

Abhi - aree yeh kya kiya???

Nikki - bandar ke baal aise hi achche lagte hai

Abhi - achcha??? to phir thik hai mai aise hi apni suhaag raat manaoga...

Nikki - tumhe koi sharam bhi hai kya??

Abhi - kyu??

Nikki - abhi to shaadi bhi nahi hui aur tum suhaag raat ki baat kar rahe ho

Abhi placed nikki down in her room n left sayin "I luv u Dr. Niki.....Ta

~The End~
Edited by Prietha - 16 years ago
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Awsum Preitha and Eru! :D This is Gr8...Now u Can Edit Changes unlyk the Other Thread which u Guyz Didnt Open! :D And Neha and Saita ur Guyz Mixed Scenes was realli beautiful and Cute...Especially the Ending..It was soo Beautiful! <3 Niki's Reasons 4 her Love! <3 😳

And ... Asthoux ...My Gawd..Ur Scenes sent Shiver Down My Spine and Making me Blush..They were Soo Sensous and Yet Gentle W/out Being Graphic or rude..It was Pure Beautiful in the Most Swtest Way! <3

XOXO SADI<3
Edited by ArmaansGirl - 16 years ago
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Hey Thanx Sadi!! Let us know if u think we should add anything to make the thread better!!!!
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**Scenes written by Nkapoor**
SCENE 1


Nikki has convinced Patil to let her present the presentation, she does so, he gets impressed and they get the project, abhi is happy and thanks nikki, the next morning (sat) nikki gets a call from Patil, he tells her needs to clarify things in the project file, nikki is hesitant but Patil tells abhi is cuming also (but actually he gave him a time of 30 mins later), nikki agrees, and leaves immediately, nikki reaches the restaurant and finds no abhi dere, she asks where is abhi, he says he wud be cuming soon, he offers her a drink, she tells him to get to the point, he starts looking at her in a lechy way, nikki makes a horrified face, she starts bringing the project up, but he keeps looking her in a lechy way, then suddenly he holds her, nikki in a harsh and strong voice tells him to leave her but he doesn't listen, she doesn't want to misbehave, therefore keeps telling him the same, and he keeps on misbehaving wid her, just then abhi cums and punches him real hard on the face, patil falls on the ground, patil exclaims 'yeh aap theek nahi kare hai' he picks him up and beats him left right and centre, nikki cries and tells him to stop it, but he keeps on beating the hell out of patil, he hits him so hard that blood starts cuming out of his fist, nikki is disturbed looking at this, she cums near him and tells him to stop, he finally does, and holds nikki's hands real tight and takes her away from dere, he drops her inside her home, nikki says 'yeh tumne kya kiya abhi?' 'hum project haar gaye' abhi gets angry and says 'tum mujhse bina puche kyun gayi?' nikki doesn't answer, abhi in a pissed of tone asks her again, nikki again doesn't answer, abhi can't take it anymore and pulls her towards himself and in anger says 'jwab do' 'maine kaha tha na ke patil jaise insaano se dur rehna!' nikki says I couldn't have been to rude, he was suppose to give the project, abhi gets angrier and shouts on top of his voice getting the hell scared out of nikki, and says 'kya project tumse zyada zaroori hai' 'jwab do?' 'tume mein itna kamina insaan nazar aato hoon' 'bolo nikki' while saying that he grasps her tighter and brings her even closer to him (their faces are just a cm away), nikki can't take it anymore and says 'tumhara problem kya hai abhi?' 'mein tau sirf' abhi in anger says 'meh tau sirf kya?' and grasps her tighter, and says 'tum ho meri problem' tears flow out of nikki's eyes, 'tum ho, sirf tum' nikki has tears flowing out of her eyes, abhi realises, and feels bad, he says 'I am sorry' and nikki in return says 'I am sorry' 'I am sorry that I could never give you any happiness, I am sorry that I tried to help you, I am sorry that I met you, I am sorry for everything and tells him to leave.


Nikki enters abhi's office Monday morning, and tells abhi that she is giving her resignation letter, abhi gets up, nikki has a straight face, abhi looks at her painfully and takes the letter out of her hands, and asks 'kya mein wajah jaan sakta hoon' she tells him in return she owes him no explanation, and says I am giving him a week's notice, abhi looks at nikki in pain, he says 'kyu bhaag rahi ho?' nikki says I am not running away, and dun forget u r my boss, u have no right on asking anything personal to me, abhi says 'haan, haan, me hota kaun hoon' mujhe tumse koi personal sawal karne ka koi hakh nahin hai, par ek cheese karne ka hai, and he tears the resignation papers, while nikki looks shocked, he cums close to her and says 'tum kahin nahin jari ho' he grips her and brings her closer and says 'you are not going anywhere, get it doctor nikita malhotra' nikki frustrated asks 'tum mujhe kyun torture karhe ho abhi' and says 'I hate you!' 'tum jitna ghatya, sarphira insaan maine nahin dheka' and tells him in a strong voice to leave her, but he doesn't so she shouts and says 'leave me!' abhi in return says 'ha mein kamina hoon, sarphira hoon, par mein tumhe kahin nahin jaane du ga' nikki in return says 'abhi stop it' and starts to cry, abhi holds nikki's face up, and stares at nikki's eyes, nikki removes her eye contact, but abhi brings her chin up again, and starts kissing her tears, and then hugs her, nikki loses her self-control and hugs him back, abhi kisses her all over, on her face, her hair, her neck, and holds her body real close to her, nikki realises what was happening, and is about to leave, abhi holds her hand, and says 'I love you nikki!'
~The End~
Edited by Erutan99 - 16 years ago
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Thanx Sadi!! Like Ivy said, Please let us kno if u think we should add anythin to make it better.... We are still tryin 2 finish it up so lets c how long it takez us....
Edited by Prietha - 16 years ago
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yuo guys did an awsome job on this
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thanks for making this thread! very cute!
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**Scenes written by Shockalot**

Scene 1

Nikita heaved a sigh of relief as she anxiously watched Patil lead the minister and board members out the door. As the door shut with a click, she became aware of his eyes on her. Niki slowly turned towards Abhi, noting the small smile that played on his lips. His probing eyes never left her as she began to look down at her shoes, overwhelmed by the intensity of his gaze.
There was something different about the way he looked at her...something she couldn't quite place her finger on. She let herself look up into his eyes again, experiencing a strange feeling at the pit of her stomache at the way Abhi's eyes were shining with surpressed joy and admiration.
"You were great Niki." he whispered.
Niki broke into a smile, the feeling of satisfaction washing over her.
"Thank you. If it wasn't for you, this very important project would have slipped from our grasp. I had full faith in you," he continued.
Niki's eyes widened slightly and her heart began to race as Abhi took a small step towards her, narrowing the gap between them.
"You're wonderful." Abhi whispered, his voice husky.
He gently raised his arm and pushed aside a strand of hair covering Niki's eyes, never breaking eye contact with her.

~The End~

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