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Posted: 16 years ago
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guys this is jus a random scene i imagined yesterdy
just wanted to share with u
tell me how is itit just clicked after mayank told (samrat) tht he would help nupur confess her feelings to him
bear with me if it isnt gud

Mayank:dude....i am well planned...i'll help nupur confess her feelings to me
Samrat:dude...i think this time u hav to take the step
M:matlab??
S:matlab yeh ke...intead of makin nupur confess her feelin to u....y dont u confess urs to her...aur waise bhi....jahah tak mai nupur ko jaanta hoon....woh abhi tumhare baare mai bohat confused feel kar rahi hogi....toh mujhe lagta hai ki....u should step first n make her feel better
M: waise i guess u got a point
Mayank then smiles to samrat n starts walkin away when...
S:All The Best.......i knw tum nupur keliye itna zaroor karoge
mayank smiles n leaves
------------------------convo ends----------------------------------------------------
the next evenin.... in the coll......nupur is preparing to leave to her home(it was pretty early than the normal time) when...
M:Nupur
N(turns back):haan..
M:kaha jaa rahi ho??
N:ghar...
M:akele??
N:haan wo sab apne apne kaam mai busy hai aur mere rehersals bhi hogaye toh socha...
M:nupur.....sirf tumhare nahi....ham dono ke rehersals khatam huye...toh chalo ham kahi bahar chalte hai...
N: par..
M:ab tum bhi toh apne ghar mai bore ho jaogi...aur mai bhi....woh maa bhi aaj raat ko late aa rahi hai...toh hum kahi bahar chalte hai....
N: theek hai par hum kaha jaayenge..?
M:woh....yahan bataane se acha hoga ki mai tumhe vaha jaa kar he bataoon....chalo
N: (blushin all the while)haan...chalo
Nupur walks ahead of Mayank.....n Samrat who had been watchin this convo...smiles at mayank...mayank smiles back...n leaves...
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Mayank takes nupur to place where there is greenary all around.....not many ppl around.....n the place was filled with beautiful flowers...it looked so beautiful n so lovely.......n nupur immediately recollected her dreamy nights....when she dreamed of a some wht similar garden....
M:nupur tum yaha baitoh mai abhi aata hoon..
N: par...mayank
Mayank jus smiles at her and dissapears somwhere
N:yeh mayank....pata nahi mujhe akele chod ke kaha chalagayi......
the sun slowly started settin.....n then nupur could recollect an image comin frm quite a distance towards her.....
slowly when the image kept comin closer.....she could make out tht image was tht of a man....sittin on his horse......then after a little while when the image came even more closer....she could recognise him....it was mayank......she then immediately correlated him with her dream boy......she then started blushin...
then...mayank(ridin the horse) came closer to her with a bunch of beautiful red roses....
he then got down the horse......n started walkin closer to her with the red flowers in his hand.....
M:nupur...
N(blushin):turns around n looks at mayank dreamily
M:tum mujhse kuch kehna chahti ho naa....
N:haan..
M:toh kaho...(movin even closer to her.....i.e standin jus few inches away frm her)
N:mayank.....i...i....luv u....
M:i luv u too...

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Nishithini thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aweeeeeeeee! it was soooooooo sweet. very nice. why dont you write an FF. that would be great.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nishithini

aweeeeeeeee! it was soooooooo sweet. very nice. why dont you write an FF. that would be great.


thanks yaar😳
u r too gud at complementing
but i do not have the makings of a writer
lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@shinella...awesome yaar..i hope that happens in the show too...😍
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuppycake990

@shinella...awesome yaar..i hope that happens in the show too...😍


thanks but nahi yaar
i want the play to b the real confession scene with a lot more passion
this is just a sweet mayur scene that i imagined
lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ohh plezzzzz giv me lessons on writttin romantic ffs..

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shinella


thanks yaar😳
u r too gud at complementing
but i do not have the makings of a writer
lol

😆 😆
no, you should try one.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: cool.sindhya

ohh plezzzzz giv me lessons on writttin romantic ffs..

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


sindhya
mera mazak mat udao
lessons to main tumse loongi
and this is not even ur standard😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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dat was so sweet yaar..........luved it...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shama420

dat was so sweet yaar..........luved it...


thaaanks shama😳

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