Asmaan FF: part four page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys i just made a new FF with all my fav couples, FF will come really soon
This story is about 12 different people all from different backgrounds, different lifestyles, rivalry and how it ends, and also different dreams all meet at the same college and how they all have different dreams and achievements that they all want to make in their lives, but at the moment all are the same juts don't know it, the same college life, parties, hangouts and school.
Characters:
Samrat:
The head of the basketball team is a real stud, rivials with Abhi Modhi, but for a while as they become friends later on dream is to become the number one race car driver which is dad doesn't agree to it as he is a real business tycoon and never had the time for her comes from a hindu background, and is always trying to get a chance with Gunjan.

Prem: A real musician loves to play his guitar, is really good friends with samrat and preet, at the moment doesn't talk to mayank and ranvir or abhi as mayank has been his biggest rivary but slowly it changes dream is to become a politician so he always gets him self involved in school activity is a the oldest as to younger brother Harman who is in London and Preet who goes to school with comes from a Punjabi background.

Preet:prems younger brother a very naughty and joker type of guy, Loves to box and also is a athletic racer, dream is to become one of the best athletic racer, him and ranvir always have problems but the later realzies that they have a lot in common also comes from a Punjabi background loves to eat but stays fit .

Mayank: Is a real bookwarm, dream is to become number one architect and build his own dream building is loved by his mom alot tells her all his problems, prem and him always want to be right in which he always gets into fights with him but not for long and he comes from a Marathi backgound.

Ranvir:A very naughty fun guy, loves to cook, dream to become india's number one head chef has a olders brother Alekh who is in London to with his sister in law Sadhna also Ragni's older sister, he has a thing for Ragni but isn't reall able to say anything, maynk knows that and is always trying to help him woo her, at the moment he doesn't like preet, he is a Rajasthani.

Abhi: The head of the soccer and hockey team, wants to snatch samrat position, at the moment are rivals but then they become friends, dream it to become the best a number one business man, he is a hindu but he doesn't believe in god.

Gunjan: A real outging girl is the head cheerleading squad, is daddy only and little girl, thinks she can gets whatever she wants, at the moments hasn't really decided on what to do as she has everything she is the one among her crew who will tell a boy off no matter what it is for.

Heer: wants to become the top lawyer is the argument of the crew always wants to be right and always gets into fights with prem over school decisions, she lives with her older sister and jiju along with her two nephews and one neice kind of comes from a middle class background, is a real Punjabi kuri, who always speak in Punjabi most of the times.

Meher: a very bubbly, and up going girl, can say her and nupur are one as they do everything together, is in every school play dream to become an actress one day but does she know how hard that will be, nupur and the gang know everything about her but just that her aunt and uncle are very mean to her, she always can never wait to get out of the house will there be time where she will have to leave her house forever, but she always stands up to her aunt and uncle will be turning 19 in four months in which she will get all the property, she also comes from a sikh background.

Nupur: Nikki's younger sister, she has the luxury she needs but no parents her and her sister nikki are each other's family and also her gang, nikki is nupur's chacha and chachi's daughter but when her parents died in a car accident nupur's parents took her in but then they died to, she is a real speaker she loves to speak and talk about people's right, always jokes around, along with meher always do everything together, is a real school worker girl wants to become a real business women one comes from a gujrathi background always swears in gujrathi when she gets mad.

Ragni:a very shy girl, with her nice figure and a lovely facial face her friends always tells her she can become a model and her dream is to become a model but is she able to enter the industry with her shyness and will her traditional family agree to it and comes from a middle class backgound, older sister sadhna is in London with her jiju Aalekh Ranvir's older brother, she is also a rajistani .

Nikki: The head of the dance team, her and Gunjan always agree on different things which always leads to fights and then has to be stopped by there gang, her parents died a long time ago she is nupur's adoptive older sister just by one year both have the luxury but no parents only each other's support, he dream is to open India's biggest dance institute, also is a gujrathi unlike her sister she she is more calm.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow ur ff seems to be nice.............
continue soon...............
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Hey your fic seems to be really very nice
And i love all the couples
Continue soon...
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Narrator: who says that opposite can never be friends for some its hard but for some if you try anything can happen, everyone has a dream but can they all accomplish those dreams, the same for these 12 different people who all have different dreams and there lives from college to the real world.

All 12 are introduced

(No ones faces shown yet)

As the college is going on every one is getting ready for a soccer tournament while one guy is taking a shower another is playing his video games, and another who is playing his guitar, on the other side another is doing push ups, and another giving people his favourite cake that he has made, and another who is reading his favourite book.

There one girl who is calling all her servants asking for her tea, another pulling her nephew ears for not doing his homework, another doing yoga at the same time her aunt screaming on the top of her lungs but she is avoiding it as she has her ipod to listen to, there another is getting out of the shower thinking on what to wear, while another getting out of the swimming pool drying and getting ready, while another in her room trying on different clothes.

(Faces finally shown)

The guy gets out of the shower and see's his team members are not ready dryes his hair and turns around and looks at them telling them to get out of there bums and gets ready we have to beat them and starts to put his showes on and throw his towel on someone, he gets mad and takes the towel off his head and tells him that what are you doing samrat i almost won, preet you will never learn "said samrat, bhai are you ready yet, the guy playing his guitar, preet i have been ready for a while just waiting for you to, of course said samrat" prem is always ready on time and they all smile. Someone e falls on the guy doing pushups he gets mad gets up and asks him cant he see; where he is walking the guy says sorry and the guy says its okay and gives his hand, he turns around with his whole face dripping face and goes to wash it, he see's the guy readin his book and drops water on him and he turns around telling him abhi what are you doing i was reading, mayank when aren't you not reading, when one is reading then the other is feeding people food, mayank looks at abhi and says sometimes i wonder if he really is a guy, the first guy who is really serious in cooking and they both laugh and abhi calls the guy to come with the cakes and the guy comes but he ends up falling and face lands on the cake, he looks up and they are all laughing, and the guy is telling them very funny laugh all you want, and abhi tells him that Ranvir will always be the clumsy one and he goes to wash his face.

On the other hand the girl who is wearing a pink mini skirt her hair down, with glasses on her face walks out tells the driver she will be riving as she has to go and pick up friends and she leaves, but the driver says that her dad will gets mad, she turns around and tells him not to worry as dad never gets mad at her baby girl Gunjan and smiles and leaves, another girl is trying to figure out what to wear, her older sister kulraaj comes and see's the room a mess and tells the girl what is this, the girl turns around and tells her sister she doesn't know what to wear and kulraaj looks around and tells her then what is all this then she hears the noise of a honk and realizes that Gunjan is here to pick her up and she leaves without eating anything. On the other hand two girls are picking up her bag one wearing shorts and her hair in a pony tail, on the otehr hand the other wearing black pants and a tank stop with her hair all curled up, Di said the girl lets go we have to pick meher up the girl turns around saying i am ready hum lets go, and the other girl turns around and tells her that she is ready and to hold on, want to get there before her aunt starts it again, nikki is telling nupur that from all people we know how strong meher is she will give it to her aunt if she says something, nupur tells nikki that she knows that but no one knows how much she cries to i have seen it, and they leave, a girl getting out of the shower got ready tied her hair half way up, she is walking and is about to fall because of her hells but ends up stepping on her aunt who starts to yell at her , saying OUCH and saying some bad words, the girls turns around laughing and saying sorry to her did it hurt, and she is about to hit but she grabs her hand and tells her how many times have i told you don't you dare don't forget everything in this house belongs to me you guys are the caretaker, her uncles comes and tells her not to get to excited but meher tells him why shouldn't she be as she will be 19 in four months and that means everything will be mine and her aunt uncle panic she is about to leave but her aunt says something about her mom which makes her mad and she has tears in her eyes, just when she was about o say something nupur called her and she left, nupur saw her in tears again and got depressed but then she started to fix her makeup up.

On the other hand a girls mom is calling her to come down, the lady's nani came in the morning, the lady keeps on calling her down and she comes down in a long skirt, with a speggatti strapped top, her hair all jelled wearing big earing and a small scarf around her neck, she comes down and nani is kind of shocked not to see in her a suit but she leaves as she hears a honk, she is about to leave when her nani see's her going out and heer gunjan come out of the car and hugs her seeing gunjan's outfit she is shocked, she goes to her daughter saying you let ragni hang out with girls like that and kaushi tells her mother that all these girls are from good background and its this generation, our daughter doesn't wear clothes like that is all that matter and she leaves , heer is talking to gunjan and ragni is kind of in her own little world heer gets her out and aks her what happened but she doesn't say anything gunjan tells them she is late as she has a cheer leading tournament today, and heer says she has a school meeting and ragni smiles.

The guys all get ready and all are putting knee pads on and all go to the soccer field, abhi and samrat look at each other, while prem mayank look at each other and preet ranvir look at each other and they all start to play.

Nupur is kind of angry seeing meher sad but meher calms her down and they get to school the girls park by each other gets out and all hug each other, they see meher and see her depress and cheer her up and all leave walking together in the hallway, while everyone especially guys are staring at them.

The guys are playing soccer and it's a two on two at the moment while playing preet makes ranvir fall on purpose ranvir gets up and gets mad and pushes him, mayank is about to attack but prem stops him and they start to fight never thing you know samrat and abhi and everyone are getting at it, until the coach and principle come and breaks them apart telling them to stop this as its there final year and you guys don't want this to get into your records you 6 all belong to good families and i know your dads really well, i am fed up with these fights its your guys last chance i am warning you guys, the girls come and see them and heer says that they have started it again and they leave. Ranvir and Ragni look at each other and smiles and ragni waves at ranvir, mayank thinks there is something wrong with ranvir as there is no one there and he waving to the air and hits his head and they leave, the boys look at each other and they all leave.

Precap: heer prem are arguing about some school decisions, meher gets mad at preet and tells him to mind his own business, some girl is crying and she asks her what happened she told her and she asked who the guy was and she points and its shown to be mayank, nikki is practising but abhi comes in and tells her they need the gym, ragni is about to fall but is caught by someone, samrat is trying to get a chance with gunjan but gunjan blows him off.

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hey nyc start............... but plz make the updts a bit simpler.............. its really confusing at some points
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Awesome start...Keep writing
One suggestion as u really have a huge cast
do one thing do it either couple by couple or two people together not
all 2gether...ok!! Though it was really very very good...Continue soon
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The girls)
gunjan: yeh larke bhi na

nupur: leave it gunjan its not our problem

Ragni is alone walking and trying to handle her books she trips on something and drops her books and is about to fall but is caught by ranvir, ranvir keeps on looking at her, while ragni has her eyes closes scared as she thought she fell, she opened her eyes and asked ranvir if he is going to stand like that all day, he says sorry and she thanks him and holds his hand and leaves, and ranvir stands there holding his hand, mayank comes and see's ranvir he tries to call him a couple of times but he doesn't say anything and then he pinches ranvir and mayank tells ranvir that ragni has left and says noting can happen with you and they leave.

Nupur is walking and she see's a girl crying her name is Rashmi and she asks her what happened, for a while she didnt say anything and then after that she told her what happened, how she fell in love and he promised to marry her and also that she gave her self to him and he said he will talk to his parents but now he is telling me that his parents have arranged his marriage someone else and that he cant say no and she cries. Nupur calms her down and she tells her not to cry she ask who the guy is, she tells her he goes to this school, and then she points at someone saying the guy in the red shirt and blue jeans, and before nupur can look the guy leaves, and someone else stands their in the same colour shirt and pants, nupur looks and says in her head, MAYANK.

Heer walk into the meetin and starts to talk about the school dance coming up and telling them about the plans and what they should do and how much the budget is going to be, but prem comes in with different ideas saying what heer planned will cost more and they should do something more simple, but heer gets mad and says no, but prem says yes, and they all get into an argument, both fighting in typical Punjabi language and everyone is trying to clams them down but they are not listening to them, after getting calm down they both decide on a vote buy tom and they all leave, and heer tells herself she will prem, but prem. tells himself you wish and they go separate ways.

Gunjan is walking in the hallways and guys are just following her around, she drops a book and a guy comes too pick it up and he gives it to her, she thanks him, but the guy says thanks will not be enough the guy looks up, and Gunjan says SAMRAT tum, and samrat tells gunjan yes its me, and gunjan says okay then what do you want and samrat tells gunjan she knows what he wants a date, but gunjan doesn't agree, samrat asks her why not and gunja says juts because, Ragni comes to Gunjan and tells her that for the past two years Samrat has been after, she says he is the coolest guy that every girls wants to go out with him but he only wants to go out with her, after Ragni convincing her she Agree, and ragni smiles and Gunjan goes to Samrat and says yes, and he says he will pick her up tonight and she says okay.

Nikki is practising and she starts to yell at some of the girls who are not doing the right steps and then asks ehr softly and nicely to practice and home and they practice more, and then nikki tells them to all sit as she will show them the whole dance and they all sit down, nikki is performing while half way dancing, a person off the music, nikki turns around asking who turned the msuic off, and the guy says he did, has looks and it is Abhi, and abhi tells ehr that they need the gym for practice and tells them to perform somewhere else but Nikki gets mad and tells them to go as they got the gym first, but abhi doesn't agree, and nikki tells him to get lost but abhi says no and they satrt to play, and nikki tells her team they wont go anywhere and they start to practice to, and a ball hits ehr she gets mad, abhi asks nikki for the ball but she throw it out the window and abhi gets mad, abhi says something to nikki but nikki's friends stop her and tells her that they should leave and they leave.

Meher is sitting alone and is crying and looking at her parents picture she is telling her self that no matter how strong she is infront of her friends and her chacha and chachi, preet comes in and hears someone crying he goes to meher and asks her if she is okay and meher gets irrated and tells him to back off and mind his own business, preet just walks off kind of mad. After preet left meher felt kind off bad and she told her self she should say sorry to preet as it was his fault and someone calls her to come and rehearse and she leaves.

(AT LUNCH, BOYS BUMPING INTO EACH OTHER)
everyone goes to the canteen abhi and samrat walk in and they look at each other and go to different tables, preet and ranvir walk in different ways, on purpose ranvir drops preets drink and laughs at him, preet was about to do something but samrat calls him, mayank and prem go to get food and end up bumping into each other, nupur see's mayank and talks to her self telling her herself that she cannot believe mayank would do this he doesn't seem like that type of guy, but she says that mayank will have to pay and agree to marry Rashmi no matter what happens, she talks to herself more, heer comes and ask her if she is out of her mind and they leave.

(LUNCHI BOTH GIRLS AND GUYS )

The girls get into the canteen, and they see how happy samrat is and ragni tells the girls its because gunjan agreed to go on a date with samrat, and all the girls say OHHHHHHH+.

Meher see's preet and tells her self that she shouldn't of been that harsh on preet and decides to go and talk to him as she is walking towards preet, mayank see's and grabs meher hand asking her if she can help him with his chemistry homework and she says yes, for sure, mayank looks at preet and then asks meher what about tonight and she agrees, and nupur see's this, then she goes back to preet asking him if she can talk to him and he agrees, she apologizes on her behavior and he says its okay and he smiles, and they leave, meher comes back and nupur asks meher why she was talking to mayank and meher tells her that he needs help in chemistry so i said i will help him tonight, and nupur is shocked, she is telling herself what is this guy planning.

( AFTER SCHOOL)

Heer is walking home and goes to Kiran's office as he told her to come to the office and they will go shopping for a gift for Kulraaj, she is waiting at the office, and some co workers see her and start to give her dirty looks, seeing her wearing a short dress start to look at her from the toe to up, heer see's and gets uncomfortable, kiran comes and see's heer feeling uncomfortable, he turns around and see's his co workers looking at heer, kiran tells them off and takes heer with him.

(NUPUR NIKKI HOME)

Nupur is talking to herself she calls up Rashmi and tells her something.

Nikki is talking to herself telling herself how much she hates abhi and how dare he not listen to her and that he will pay, nupur comes to her to ask her who she is talking to but nikki tells her she is talking to no one.

(RAGNI'S HOME)

Ragni is at home in her room talking to gunjan who is getting ready for her date. Ragni's nani comes and asks ragni's mom where ragni is, ragni's mom tell her that she is in the room talking to a friend, ragni's nani is telling her mom that she is giving her to much freedom what if she does something wrong and ragni's mom says she trusts her daughter,she tells Gunjan Nikki had called her up to meet her at the park but she doesn't have a ride, so Gunjan tells her to take her car and that she will come and pick her up and ragni goes to get ready, ragni comes down to tell her mom she is going out with nikki for some work and she leaves, and her nani gives a look.

(SAMRAT AT PREM AND PREETS HOUSE)

Samrat is getting ready by prem and preet, samrat is really excited, and prem makes fun of him, preet is telling samrat not to make a mistake, prem is laughing and samrat is getting more nervous.

Samrat gets a call, he tells prem and preet that its Gunjan he pick it up and starts to panick and gunjan tells samrat that she will come to his house as ragni will needs the car but samrat tells gunjan that he is at prems house and to come there and she agrees.

(RANVIR AT HOME)

Ranvir is in the kitchen cooking with his mom and aunt, they start to praise his cooking, ranvir gets happy and tells them he cant wait to hae his own hotel and be the head chef of it to, ranvir starts to ask about alekh and sadhna and his mom tells him that they are fine, ranvir's mom asks about ragni as they haven't seen for a while and ranvir starts to smile, ranvir's mom knew that ranvir had a thing for her but never said anything, he gets a call from mayank and he leaves.

(MEHER)

Meher is about to leave, where mayank calls her and he tells him that not at there but his house and he agrees, she is about to leave where her aunt asks her where she is going and who this mayank is and meher tells her that he is a classmate and she is going to his house to help with his homework and she leaves.

Ragni drops gunjan infront of prems house, she thanks gunjan but gunjan tells her not to say thanks ever again and they smile and ragni leave, samrat comes with flowers gives it to her and they both leave, prem and preet give him a high five and they leave.

(PREM, PREET )

Prem and preet realize its there moms birthday tom and they haven't done anything yet, preet tells prem that he will go and arrange the cake and he should get the flowers and we will surprise her at 12 and they agree.

(PREM HEER ABHI)

Heer is getting the card and flowers as kiran went to get a gift and cake, heer see's really nice flowers she goes to pick it up while another person also pick it up, she see's it is prem, they start to argue over it, but the store person tells heer that prem chose them first, heer gets mad and then another person with the same designed flowers puts the flowers in front of her, she gets happy, she looks up to see it is abhi, who tells her she can take his flowers, after hesitating and saying no she agrees and thanks him a lot as it his sisters bday and her sis means the world, before leaving she gives prem a look and leaves. Abhi is about to leave, where prem tells him that he has great way to make a move on a girl, but abhi tells prem that he doesn't have to do anything as he can have any girl he wants, and that he was only being nice to heer and he leaves.

Heer goes to celebrate her sister's bday.

(RAGNI RANVIR LITTLE BIT OF MAYANK)

Ragni is driving and is in the parking lot, trying to figure out where to park, mayank and ranvir are talking and he see's ragni, and mayank tells ranvir that this is the time to make a move, and how ranvir asks how and mayank tells him thins way (mayank pushes ranvir and he falls infront of ragni's car and mayank smiles and ranvir is telling himself that mayank you will pay) ragni asks him if he is okay and he tells her that his leg hurts, she gives him a hand and puts him in the car, ragni calls nikki and tells her she cant meet up with her and nikki tells her it is okay, and takes him to the doctor who said it's a minal injury it will be fine.

(MEHER MAYANK AT MAYANKS HOUSE, AND NUPUR SHOWS UP AND SO DOES PREET )

Meher comes to mayanks house, and mayanks mom opens the door, she see's meher and looks at her from down to up and meher asks her if mayank is home and she says he is her and she comes in, mayank comes out and takes her into the room, mayanks mom asks her who this girl and says something in Marathi and mayank tells his mom something back in Marathi and she leaves, while toturing mayank meher gets a call and she goes to answer it, its nupur who is asking ehr where she is and meher tells nupur that she is coming to, but meher tells nupur that she is only tutoring him and there is no point of coming and she hangs up before nupur can say something else, she goes infront of mayanks house and starts to spy on them, preet who is just a house away from mayanks house and see's nupur spying and goes to her, nupur screams and hits preet, preet asks nupur what she is doing and nupur tells preet that she is spying on meher and mayanl, preet asks her why and nupur tells preet that mayank is not a good guy and meher is with him in his room, and then nupur tells preet the whole story about mayank and rashmi, and then preet understands everything, then they both decide to get closer to there house, while spying for a while, mayanks mother goes to the neighbours house and preet nupur enter the house, as meher and mayank are studying, mayank goes to the bathroom, meher goes to get a glass of water and she see's something and screams, both preet and nupur get scared, mayank comes out asking her what happened, meher is telling him not to come near her, mayank is asking her what happened, mayank see's a frog and tells meher to calm down but meher is still screaming, mayank takes the frog and throws it outside and tries to calms meher down but she doesn't listen and he screams, preet imagines meher getting raped by mayank, where meher is yelling for help saying filmy dialogues and mayank acting like a villain saying itne khhobsurat jeez and leave it for god nahi and laughs, and then preet gets out of the dream and tells nupur whaat if meher is getting rapes, and tells nupur he is going in and he breaks the door, but instead of slowing down preet loses his balance and ends up following out the window nupur mayank and meher scream but preet starts to yell for hep and they all go to help him up and they do so, then meher asks what they both are doing, and nupur asks meher is she is okay and meher tells her she is fine, she see's mayanks shirt is a little undone and a piece of meher's shirt is ripped and thinks mayank did something she starts to hit mayank and meher calms her down and, she tells both nupur and preet to stop as noting happened between them, but nupur tells them that if nothing happened then something will happened i don't want meher to be the next rashmi and mayank asks her who rashmi is and nupur tells him not to act naive, and tells them all what rashmi told herabout mayank, mayabk tells nupur to call rashmi here and she doesn't rahsmi tells nupur mayank is not the guy and nupur feels ashamed and preet feels like an idiot, nupur says sorry to mayank but he says noting, meher gives a look to both preet nupur and chases them both out she says sorry to mayank and that tom noting like this will happen.

She is chasing both nupur preet, meher is telling nupur that both of them have gone mad, meher tells preet to get lost and that it was her mistake to say sorry to him, before saying something preet runs off, nupur controls her and meher tells nupur what she was thinking, nupur tells her that she thought it was mayank and she also thought meher was his next victim, meher goes to her and tells nupur i know you love me but you know noting like that would happen to me and they leave.

(ABHI NIKKI)

Nikki is walking home as her car's tires falttened and she meets abhi on the way, abhi makes fun of her and nikki tells him to back off and min his own business, while fighting abhi gets out of the car, and everyone one the street come up to them telling them to stop fighting as they have created traffic, nikki and abhi start to fight more and then abhi kind of pushes nikki, nikki gets mad and pushes abhi hard and falls flat on his face o mud and nikki starts to laugh and leaves from there.


(SAMRAT GUNJAN ON DATE)
Samrat takes Gunjan out to a fancy restaurant; samrat asks gunjan for a dance gunjan agrees, and they both dance to bas ek pal, they get reallye close and every starts to clap and they smile at each other, after that they go for a long walk where they realize they have alot in common.

(RAGNI RANVIR)
Ragni brings Ranvir home , ravnir can't walk properly so ragni helps him, ragni puts him into the room, she is about to fall but is caught by ranvir, she smiles at him and she leaves, on the ways he meets his parents she hugs them both and leaves, she comes home its kind of later her mom asks her where she was she tells her that she was at Sadhna's in laws house dropping ranvir home and she leave from there.

(GUNJAN SAMRAT)

Gunjan gets dropped home by samrat she gives him a kiss on his cheeks and leaves.

(PREM PREET'S HOUSE)

A Lady walks into her house in the middle of the night prem preet come in with a cake and surprises her and hugs the lady and gives them a tight hug and kiss thanking them.

(NEXT DAY IN COLLEGE)

Heer prem walk into the room, where it's been told that they will go with heer's idea, which makes prem angry.

Gunjan and ragni are walking in with a smile both thinking about samrat and ranvir, the other girls cal them but neither one responses.

(MEHER MAYANK, PRET COMES)

Meher goes to mayank and starts to apologise more and mayank tells her its okay, preet comes to her asking her for something but meher pushes him away and leaves from there.

(ABHI, RANVIR, NIKKI IN HALL WAY)

Abhi is walking in with Ranvir telling him about practise after school, he bumps into nikki, who tells abhi to watch where he is walking, abhi tells nikki she is the blind one and leaves from there.

( NUPUR WALKING IN THE HALLS PREET COMES TO HER)

Nupur is walking and trying to figure out how to face mayank, she see's preet who is walking and talking to himself, nupur asks him what happened, preet tells her that meher still is not talking to him and that because o her she had to feel like an idiot in front of mayank for the first time.

(RAGNI RANVIR MAYANK)

Ranvir gives ragni a flower and ragni smiles, mayank comes to ranvir and tells him that finally he did something smart.

(GUNJAN SAMRAT)

Gunjan walks in, her books fall and samrat picks them up for her, and she thanks him.

(WHOLE GANG IN CLASS)

The whole gang comes and they all sit in there seats.

preet tries to talk to meher again but she avoids him.

Nupur tries to apologise to mayank but he avoids her.

Prem takes heer's seat so abhi gives his to hers.

Abhi takes nikki's seat and she gets mad but then sits behind him.

Gunjan and samrat just smile at each other, he goes near her and tells her that she is looking really pretty today

Ranvir and ragni just look at each other and smile.

The teacher comes in telling all of them about there next assignment, that all of them will have to do a real documentary, and that there will be a group of 12.

She makes the group up saying: nikki, gunjan, ragni, nupur, meher and heer and all the girls smile, and then the teacher tells them along with them will be samrat ( gunjan smiles), ranvir (ragni smiles), abhi ( nikki is shocked and so is abhi), preet ( meher is shocked but preet is happy) prem ( heer shocked along with prem), mayank ( mayank is shocked) but then the guys all realize they are together and get mad and next thing you know it everyone's starts to argue, ranvir ragni gunjan samrat are flirting with each other and preet meher are arguing, heer is hitting prem, abhi is about to throw something at abhi, nupur and mayank are saying something to each other, the teacher is trying to calm them all down but they are not listening to her, until she whistles and tells them all to SHUT UP and that she did this on purpose as she wants them to all work together and tells them that this mark will effect scholarships and they all panics if they all don't work together.

Precap: all agree to work together and they all splt work up, preet is about to walk up to meher, but mayank says she will be with meher, nupur and preet get mad and say they will go together, samrat was gonna stay with gunjan but nikki says she will be with samrat and abhi says he will be with gunjan, prem says he will be with ragni, before ragni could say something heer says she will be with ranvir.

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its really awesome n fantastic ...... well done .... i m a silent reader bt ur ff made me spk........... pls continue soon
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wowowow i love your part 1 and 2
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Everyone starts to panic after hearing what there teacher told them, then they all decided to calm down and figure the work out, heer reads everything out loud.

Heer: okay this is what the instruction say we have to make a documentary about the outer and wild life how many people live without electricity and have to ask people video tape and write it on the computer, heer tells them that there are seven things we need to do so they should split into two's
ragni and ranvir wanted to be together and so for samrat and gunjan but befor ethey could say anything, nikki grabs samrat, and heer grabs ranvir, prem grabs ragni, abhi takes gunjan's hand ( and all together say he/is my partner) preet walks towards meher but mayank tells preet meher is with him, preet gets mad and tells the team he and nupur will go together.

Heer reads out the tasks that need to be done and all decide on what they will do, heer also tells them the last task is that they need to also know what it is to live in the wild life without any electricity.
Heer: that means with all you guys to, oh no
( everyone looks at eahc other)
Heer tells them we should go tom as tom is Friday and they don't have school, but then heer realizes that the school dance is on Sunday, and they need to be back on that day.
(Girls walking in the halls)
After hearing all this ragni gets sad and depressed, gunjan asks ragni what happened and ragni tells them all she cant come camping and all the girls get shocked, nupur asks her why and ragni tells them that there parents might let them go but her parents wont ever let her spend a night of the house, heer tells the girls that they need to some how convince ragni's parents, heer tells them all after there tasks are done they will all meet at ragni's house.
(Ragni house)
All of the girls at her house trying to convince ragni's mom but she doesn't agree, but then after so much force agrees and all the girls get happy and all get ready, gunjan also asks ragni's mother if she can stay at her house over night as they will leave early in the morning and her mom agrees.
(Ragni's room)
The girls are all happy as ragni's mom agreed for her to go, down in the living room, ragni's nani is mad at her mom as she is letting ragni stay out for a night,.
(Back in the room)
Nikki is trying on an outfit that ragni had in her room, nikki see's a lot of short clothes in ragni's closest and asks her where she got them from, ragni telsl ehr that her older sis Sadhna send them from London but because of her parents she never wears them, all of the girls look at each other and smile and look at ragni and forces her into the bathroom to try them on, she is modelling them and all of the girls are cheering for her, ragni tells them to quiet down ad she doesn't want her parents to come upstairs, nikki takes some pictures of ragni modelling around, meher looks at the pictures and tell ragni she is photo jenic and gunjan tells all the ragni will rock the modelling industry, all of the girls look at ragni who is giving gunjan a look and then gunjan realizes she said it out loud. All of the girls look are ragni who is looking down, heer tell ragni fi she wants to become a model then what is wrong with it but ragni tells them that her parents will never agree to it and they all look at her depressed.
(Next morning)
everyone meets up at the highway except
heer nikki are dropped by a driver preet prem show up together, abhi is dropped by his brother, all look at each other, both preet nupur wonder where mayank and meher are,
both show up together, which kind of makes nupur and preet jelous, heer starts to asks where gunjan ranvir ragni samrat are, when she gets a call from ragni who tells heer that they will be late and they should go and that they will meet up with them there.
Ragni smiles at gunjan who is driving she parks her car in a corner, ragni goes with ranvir and gunjan goes with samrat, both ranvir samrat stare at each other, samrat's car doesn't start, ragni request ranvir for samrat to come along with gunjan and he agrees and they all leave.

(heer, meher, nupur,nikki, abhi, prem, mayank, preet)

heer starts to panic as they didn't bring a car, preet and nupur take an advantage of this and decide to go with meher and mayank, meher agree's as she doesn't want nupur to go alone with anyone else, abhi offers a ride for heer, but nikki doesn't want to come, heer convinces her but nikki tells heer she will come only of prem comes to, and heer agrees and so does abhi.

(All leave)

(Meher, mayank, preet and nupur)

Mayank is driving and is talking to meher about something, preet start to sing to sing NEEND CHURAYEE from ISHQ out loud and meher tells him to shut up but then nupur also starts to sing out loud with him, meher then just looks the other way, both preet and nupur high five each other.

(abhi nikki heer prem)

Heer is trying to call someone, but her signal is not reaching and she gets mad and tells her self how is she able to call kushi up and tell her about where all of the profits and products are for the dance, prem tells heer she doesn't have to worry as he has already told her everything, heer tells prem that he should of mind his own business, but prem tells heer that he is also a part and her partner so he doesn't have to listen to anyone, nikki is telling abhi to drive more slower, but abhi decides to drive more faster to annoy nikki, nikki starts to yell at him but abhi doesn't listen and drives more faster, heer falls on prem and they have a eye lock, nikki bumps into abhi and he hair gets stuck into his buto and she takes it out.

(Samrat, gunjan, ragni, ranvir)

Ranvir is flirting around ragni and not looking ahead, samrat tells ravnir to look a head, but ranveer tells samrat that he knows what he is ding and does not need samrat to tell him what to do. Samrat is telling ranveer that if he doesn't look ahead then he will get into an accident, he tells ranveer that he isn't worried about you but gunjan and ragni but ranveer tells samrat that he doesn't need to worry about ragni, both get into a big argument, gunjan and ragni are trying to calm them down and then the car stops, they all get out to see that ranveer has a flat tire, gunjan is telling them what will they do now, ranveer tells them that they needto get a spare tire or take this to a garage, samrat is telling ranveer to go and get the tire but ranveer is telling samrat to go, both gunjana nd ragni get mad and tell them both that they will go and get it, but then samrat and ranveer tell them that they will go. Gunjan and ragni are telling each other that somehow they ahve to stop this fight between ranveer and samrat, both go to the car and realizes that the key is inside the car and that the doors are locked and they get scared.

(Meher, mayank, nupur, preet)

Meher is talking to mayank about the play and how she needs a new partner as her's has left, nupur tells preet that this is chance to convince meher to take him as a partner. The car stops and they all get out to find out that the car's engine is broken, meher is telling them how they will get to the log house. Nupur is telling them that the log house is really far from here if we walk we will die, nupurmayan tells them that they have to walk as they don have any other choice. While walking nupur starts to complain thats he is tired and she doesn't want to tlak any more she goes to mayank and asks him to pick he up but mayank told her to walk and don't bother him nupur makes some faces at him.

(Abhi Nikki Prem and Heer)

Nikki is telling heer she is hungry and heer telling nikki she is to, abhi tells them that they should stop and eat something, they go to a dhaba to eat. Abho orders food, while eating nikki reminds heer about there last incident where they didn't have money and they ended eating in a nice restaurant and how they ran without paying, heer tells nikki that it was her fault she left her purse at home and heer didn't have that much money to pay, nikki tells heer that she wasn't the one who eated so much (both look at each other and laugh, while abhi and prem hear it and laugh to then they look at each other and then look different ways).

(Samrat and Ranvir gunjan ragni)

Samrat and Ranvir are walking and are looking for the nearest lake so they can get water and also either a garage for a free tire, while walking samrat looks at ranvir and asks him if he really likes ragni, first ranvir tells samrat to mind his own business but then he tells him that he does love he has loved her since the first day he met her but was never able to express it, ranvir asks samrat the sme question eand samrat gives ranveer the same answer. They both smile at each other ranveer see's a old abandoned car and samrat takes one of the tires out.

Gunjan and Ragni are standing beside the car, Gunjan asks ragni what she has thought about for he rmodelling career, ragni is telling gunjan that she wants to model but she doesn't know how to tell her parents, they will never agree to it, Gunjan is telling ragni to relax and she will figure something out, ragni hugs gunjna thanking her, gunjan tells ragni not to thank her as she is her best friend and would give her life for her. (Gunjans phone rings) gunjan tells ragni that she is going to take this call and that she will be back,ragni feels thirsty she see's a water fountain and goes to get a drink, while getting a drink, two guy who are drinking beer are telling each other how hot she looks, ragni feels uncomfortable and starts to walk the other way, but the guys come towards her, ragni gets scared and calls gunjan, gunjan gets off her phone and comes to ragni telling the guys to get lost, the guys tells each other that they thought they would have fun with only one girl but there are to pretty girls, gunjan tells them to get lost but they strat to come towards them, then samrat and ranveer come and tells them didint they hear what the girls said and they get into a fight, but the police come and the guys leave, both ask gunjan and ragni if they are okay and they tell them they are fine.

(Abhi Nikki Heer Prem)

Prem is helping abhi wash his face and heer is helping nikki wash her face, while nikki is helping heer wash her face nikki starts to throw water on heer and heer started to throw water on nikki, some guys start to stare at them, abhi and prem see and stands infront of the heer and nikki so the guys wont be able to se nikki and heer. The guys ask what abhi and prems problem is and abhi tells them to back off, the guys ask abhi who these girls are, prem tells them that they are with them so just back off. Heer and Nikki get scared on thing led to another both abhi and prme start to fight with them, two cops come and think that abhi and prem started to fight so they take abhi prem nikki and heer with them and put them in jail.

Nikki starts to panic as they don't know what they will do now, one of the cops start to flirt around with heer, prem tells him to look the other way.

The gang is trying to convince the cops that they are inconncent and starts to make some sad faces, they request if they can make a phone call, but the cop tells them they cant and the heer asked and he agreed, nikki went along with heer to call someone.

(RagVir Saajan)

Ranveer is changing the tire and samrat is helping him, after they are done samrat starts to laugh, ranveer asks him what happened, samrat tells him that his face is dirty, and ragni starts to laugh to along with gunjan, but then ranveer starts to laugh as samrat also has dirt on his face, gunjan and ragni helps them wahs there faces. Samrat is telling gunjan that he is hungry, ragni remembers that her mom packed her some paratha's and sweets and she brings her bag out and takes the food out and they all sit in the car and eat. While eating gunjan gets a phone call where she yells WHAT!!!!!, ragni asks gunjan what happened, gunjan tells ragni samrat and ranveer that nikki heer abhi and prem are in jail, all get shocked and gunjan tells them that they need help to get bailed out, ranveer asks gunjan to ask nikki where they are, gunjan asks nikki and they all leave.

(MaYur MEET)

Meher and Nupur get really tired of walking and they both stop to sit, nupur tells meher that she is tired of walking and meher also says the same, mayank is telling them then how will they get to the log house, preet tells them theer eis only one way they can get to the log house and that is if we can get a lift, mayank is telling preet that it wont work, meher tells mayank that if you guys ask for a lift it wont work but if me and meher do it might, both go and stand infront of the road waving for a lift, when a white car stops and two weird funny looking guys come out and see meher and nupur and get happy, mayank and preet hide behind a tree and watched the whole thing, meher asks them if they can get a lift, one of the guys tell them why not of course they can give them a lift, meher and nupur smile at each other they tell the guys that they have some luggage's to, the guys volunteer to grab the bags, they go to the three to grab them when mayank and preet grab them and ties them up, both meher and nupur laugh they tell the guys that they are sorry but they need a car and they leave. While the two guys are asking for help and are blaming each other for the situation that they are in.

They reach to the log house but the other haven't arrived yet, meher calls ragni asking them where they are, ragni tells meher what happened to heer nikki abhi and prem are in jail and they are going to go and bail them out until then they should go and relax and find a spot where they can camp as they cant stay in the log house only put there stuff in it, meher tells them okay and she hangs up.

Meher tells the gang what happened and preet is worried as he hopes they are all find, mayank goes to him and tells him to relax and that everything will be fine (after realizing he has his hand on preets shoulder mayank takes it off and acts like he wasn't being nice to preet) meher smiles and nupur just looks at them.

(Saajan RagVir PremEer NikBhi)

Abhi and Prem are near the cell bars begging the police to let them go.

Abhi: sir please let us

Prem: it wasn't our fault please SIR let us go

Inspector: shut up i told you no one can get you out

Gunjan comes in with money telling them to bail them out, but the inspector doest listen, gunjan tells the inspector she is warning him, the inspector tells gunjan what will she do, gunjan takes her phone and calls the head police calling him uncle and ask the inspector if she wants to talk to him but the inspector tells his constable to let them out, abhi goes to the inspector acting like he is about to hit him but he went to grab his wallet and they all leave. All of them make faces and laugh at the inspector while walking out. Abhi and prem thanks gunjan and ragni, but they tells abhi and prem that samrat and ranvir had given the money.

(NikBhi Saajan RagVir PremEer)

Reaches to the log house and do not see Mayanks car so they think that they haven't come yet, but the Ragni is telling the rest that she talked to Meher and she told her that they had already reached here, they all go into the log house to drop there bags and realize that MaYur and Meet's bags are already here, all are wondering where they are when someone from the back comes and scares them they all turn around to see MaYur and Meet standing laughing at them, meher tells them they are sorry for scaring them and all decide to freshen up and then they will all go out to finish the rest of the documentary, all the girls go into one room and the guys go into the other.

All them come out and all get ready for their walk, while walking ranveer is taping everyone, but when he gets the chance he ends up taping ragni who tells him to stop taping her, while nupur is talking while talking she turns around to see that the guys are not behind them, she tells the girls that the guys are gone and they all get scared, as it started to turn dark, they started to hear creepy noises and crows crowing, all of the girls held each other's hand and started walking calling each guys name, then out of nowhere a guy comes wearing a skull mask grabbed meher who is screaming for her life along with the girls to, the guy starts to laugh and all of the other guys come out from the bushes laughing at the girls.

The girls all are really sacred that they go and hug the guys and they all have a eye lock session.

Saajan: while staring at each other pehli nazar tune plays in the background

MaYur: they are staring at each other while Wadha Raha tune is playing

PremEer: they are staring at each other while Do Pal tune plays

NikBhi: they are staring at each other while Labon Ko tune plays

RagVir: are looking at each other while tere ore tune plays

Preet is still laughing while the rest are in there own little world, meher who has tears in her eyes gets really mad at preet and tells him that she is going to kill him, preet tells her to catch him first, while chasing preet meher is about to fall but is caught by preet, khabar nahi tune is being played, preet is juts gazing into meher's eyes, meher see's a spider and screams, the rest get out of there eye lock seesin and hear meher screaming and run towards them, meher gets reallye scared that she jumps on preet who is telling her calm down,everyone comes and see's preet holding meher, nupur smiles, meher is just holding onto preet when she realizes what she is doing she yells at preet to let her go, preet lets go of meher and drops her on the ground, the girls help meher get up, meher is about to hurt preet but the girls take meher.

(The Girls)

Meher is telling the girls she will kill preet, heer tells meher to calm down and not to worry to much and that they should get to bed as they have to leave tom in the morning. They all go into their tents and go to bed.

In the morning all of them wake up and get ready to leave, saajan, ragvir, premeer, nikbhi along with meher and nupur leave and come towards the car, meher and nupur realize that they left some bags so they go back to get it meher, nupur is asking where mayank and preet are while coming out of the log house they both see mayank and preet coming out of the bushes, both nupur and meher are wondering what they both were doing mayank tells them that he and preet had to go to the bathroom so they went into the bushes. Meher tells them that they should leave as everyone else is leaving but is wondering how they will get back as they cant take the car with him, preet is telling mayak that meher is right and that they should tell the others so none of them get into trouble.

While they are coming back, nupur screams, meher asks her what happened, nupur points and they all look, they see that their friends are all tied up and big guys with guns are around them, MaYur and Meet get scared, then two short guys come out of a car, which shocks preet and mayank and they both jump, the two guys are laughing and telling meher nupur that they made a fool out of them right and took their car and they got help from the boyfriends to tie them up, meher butts in telling the two guys that preet is not my boyfriend, nupur is telling the guy that its okay if you call mayank my boyfriend and mayank gives her a look.

Abhi butts in telling them to shut up and what is all this, prem is asking preet is he did something stupid again, gunjan is asking meher who's car this is, nupur tells the gang that they stole this car when there car broke down.

PREMEER: Heer is telling them if they have gone mad first they didn't something so dangerous and stupid and also they did something illegal, prem is telling heer to keep her law talk to herself, heer is telling prem to shut up and they get at it.

SAAJAN: Gunjan is whining as they don't know what they will do now she starts to cry hard, samrat is trying to calm her down, but she doesn't listen samrat gets frustrated and yells at her and gunjan starts to cry much harder.

RagVir: Ragni is trying to calm gunjan down, ranvir says something about how girls always cries, ragni tells ranvir that this isn't gunjan's fault and what he means by girls always cry, guys cry to, ranvir is telling ragni that guys are much stronger than girls, ragni is telling ranvir to shut up if he doesn't want her to tell everyone how much he cries, ( the guys all start to cry), ranvir get irrated and tells ragni to shut up but ragni tells ranvir she will not shut up and for hit to shut up and they get at it.

NikBhi: Abhi is telling ranvir to relax as it isn't his fault, it must of been these girls who did something, nikki tells abhi that not everything that happens is always a girls fault, and I am sure that neither meher or nupur were involved in it it must of been preet and mayank, abhi is telling nikki that every time something wrong happen it's because of a girl, nikki is trying to release herself so she can beat abhi up but fails, abhi is telling nikki to relax as she won't be able to release herself from the rope and laughs along with the other guys.

MaYur: mayank is telling them to all quiet down, along with nupur, mayank tells them that it is no one fault but nupur's, nupur is shocked and looks at mayank, she tells mayank that how can this be her fault, mayank tells nupur that she was the one who didn't want to walk, nupur tells mayank that she just offered for a lift, but it was mayank who tied them up, mayank is telling nupur that it wasn't his plan to tie him up but preets.

MEET: meher is telling nupur that mayank is right all this is preets fault, preet is telling meher that it's his fault, he didn't tell meher to put a seductive pose up to get a lift, meher tells preet that if she didn't do it then they wouldn't of gotten a lif, preet tells meehr that he didn't like it, meher tells preet if he is jekous if so then deal with.

Next thing you know all are fighting ang yelling at each other, somehow they all got out of the rop, prem and heer are pushing each other, meher is hitting preet, nupur is chasing mayank, nikki and abhi are pulling each other's hair, samrat is trying to calm gunjan down but gunjan keep son yelling at him to not touch her or talk to her, ragni is telling ranvir that he is really dumb.

The two guys are telling each other that this is WWF fight going how will they all stop.

Mayur, Saajan, PremEer, Meet, RagVir, NikBhi: Are all fighting until the hear the sound of a bullet and they all get scared and stop, they ee a realy big guy walking in and the guys hide behind the girls.

The big guy walks towards the two guys, and the two guys tell him that these four were the ones who stole their car, these girls and the two guys behind them were the ones who stripped us and tied us up.

Meher looks at preet telling him to be a man and why is he scared, and is nupur, both mayank and preet are telling meher and nupur that the two lizards were fine but if the wrestler hits us then they both will be flying to the other side.

The two lizard guys tell their older brother to leave the girls and do whatever he wants to the boys, in which it scares the guys who are all hiding behind the girls.

They separate the guys and the girls, the guys are begging for there lives, gunjan who see's a gun lying around picks it up and by accident presses the revolver which goes right into the wrestlers bum and they all scream.

Precap: the girls are yelling at the guys to stop there fight, and to become friends, but they don't listen and the girls all leave and take a cab leaving them all back.

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