dill jahaan dosst wahaan episode 4

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Scene 1..Anjy and Shashank and Riddhima..

Anjali enters the house quietly – it's all dark and she wonders if Riddhima and Rahul are back already – she hadn't realized but it's gotten really late … she was having such a good time with Armaan that she didn't realize the time …



She stumbles a bit in the dark, and giggles … "oops, shorreee … shit, yeh light ka switch kahan gaya …"

The light switches on and Dr. Shashank is standing glaring at her.

"Light ka switch apni jagah par hi hai … lekin tum usko dekhne ki haalat mein nahin ho …"

Anjali gulps, her tipsiness evaporating in the heat of her father's anger.

"Dad … main …"

Dr. Shashank comes up close to her and gets a whiff of her breath.

Dr. Sh: Just as I thought! Anjali, you should be ashamed of yourself! Aisi haalat mein ghar aate tumhe sharam nahin aayi?! Aur voh bhi … itni der raat ko!

Anjali stammers in her nervousness: Dad, voh … Ridzi ki birthday party thi … thodi der ho gayi … aur main uski wait kar rahi thi …

Dr. Shashank looks at her coldly.

Dr. Sh: Anjali, stop making excuses. Riddhima aur Rahul kab se ghar aa gaye hain! Aur kya voh tumhari iss haalat ki zimmedar hai? Tum uspar blame daalne ki koshish mat karo.

She starts to say something, he interrupts her.

Dr. Sh: Ab bahut der ho gayi hai … aur mujhe tumhari iss haalat mein tumse baat nahin karni hai. We will talk tomorrow – when you're sober. Go to your room.

He turns and leaves and Anjali stares after him, feeling anger rise in her – at Riddhima. Again she's in trouble, and Riddhima – Riddhima is the cause. Angrily, she storms up to their room, where Riddhima is in bed, but waiting for her.

Ri (starts up when she sees Anjali): Di! Aap kahan thi...?! Main aur Rahul …

Anjali interrupts her : Ridzi, don't try to act so innocent! Teri vajah se dad ne mujhe phir se daanta … khud to gayab ho gayi, and left me there waiting for you … and then Dad says that I got late! I got late! Because of you! Sab teri galti hai … aur daant mujhe padh gayi! As usual!

She comes close to Riddhima as she speaks, her words not very clear. Riddhima catches the slurring, smells her breath, and realizes with a shock that Anjali is slightly drunk. Stunned, she keeps quiet as Anjali continues to rant and rave.

Anjali (winding up): sab kuch maine tere liye organize kiya – itni achhi party … and do I get any thanks for it? Nothing! I just get into trouble! At least you could have told Dad ki yeh tera idea tha, ki maine yeh tere liye kiya … but no! You're the saint! Sab galtiyan to main hi karti hun na!!Thanks a lot, Ridzi!

She flounces off to get ready for bed, leaving Riddhima almost in tears....

Both the sisters sleep without saying goodnight to one another....



Scene 2... Next morning.... Rahul and Riddhima


Rahul arives at college and straight goes up to his class to meet Riddhima, but to his disappiontment she is not there...he looks for her everywhere from the lab to the cafeteria but just cant seem to find her.. half hr goes by..An important class on anatomy practicals is about commence in a while, and Riddhima is no where to be found..." where are you Riddhima", he mumers...

He is getting restless now...he even tries to call Anjy but her curt reply of " i dont know and i dont even care" makes him beleive that that the cause of Riddhima's sudden disapearance is Anjy...while thinking this he walks into the library as he wants to collect some vital information of the subject to which the lecture is about to take place...on reaching the second shelf where books on neorology are kept, he finally spots Riddhima sitting with books open but staring away absently.. he walks over to her quickly and calls her... she doesnt respond at once which defintely bothers him....he calls on twice..

Ra:" RIDDHIMA !

Ri:" huh! ( turns her head suddenly) Rahul tum? i'm sorry i was just ... tum kab aaye..."

Rahul looks at her with concern:"Riddhima , whats wrong..? mein tumhe pichle aadhe ghante se dhoondh raha hoon... where have you been..?"

Ri:" woh, actually main sidhe library aagayi and kuch notes bana rahi thi.. " she doesnt meet his eyes while saying this...

Ra:" Riddhima ( in a very calm voice) kya hua? aur yeh mat kehna kuch nahi , kyoki , i just spoke with Anjy and she didnt sound too happy herself... now tell me whats wrong.."

Riddhima takes a deep breadth and puts her pen down and shoves her hair back with her hands .. its a sign of disturb state of mind....she then looks at Rahul and speaks..." kya mein buri hoon Rahul,"

Rahul is taken aback and stares at her .." Riddhima, kal raat ko kuch hua,kya .. after we came back... jahan tak mujhe yaad hai tum apne room mein chali gayi thi.." uncle ne kuch kahan kya?

Riddhima is silent for a second before speaking" nahi.. papa ne nahi..di ne.. kal raat tumhare jaane ke baad, di kaafi late aayi.. aur pehli baar un hone ..Rahul,di hosh mein nahi thi"

Rahul sits silently and urges her to go on...

Ri:" papa ne di ko kaafi kuch kahan.. mujhe puri baat pata nahi , par jab di room mein aayi toh woh bohot gusse mein thi.. she completely blamed me.. she said , had i not left with you , aur party mein rukti toh yeh sab nahi hota.. she expected me to cover up for her.." mein zaroor karti Rahul , par mujhe thodi na pata tha ke di wahaan pe" ..she trails off..

Ra:" aur Anjy ne tumhe blame kiya aur tum hamesha ki tarah khamosh thi.... right..!

Ri:" toh aur main kya karti Rahul... nashe ki halat mein di kuch nahi samajh ti aur agar mein koshish bhi karti toh baat bohot badh jaati.. tumhe toh di ka gussa pata he hai na?." i was just helpless...

Ra:" and today morning... did you speak to her.."

Ri:" i tried, but she completely ignored me and walked off from there... " meine unhe roka bhi, ke saath chalenge toh shayad hum baat kar paye.. but..

Ra:" but she left without you..."

Riddhima justs looks down in her books with slight tears forming in her eyes.. Rahul looks at her at shuts her books with a thud and stands up... " chalo , utho.. and stop feeling bad for yourself..." you did nothing wrong...

Ri:" par Rahul, di mujhse baat bhi nahi kar rahi..and i hate it when something like this happens.."

Ra:" you trust me"?.. she nods after a pause.." then have faith.. before the day is over , all this will be over.. " i promise".. holding her hand and lifting her chin up ...

Riddhima and Rahul are about to leave when Riddhima says very sarcastically " some birthday , huh"...

Rahul justs hugs her side ways and they walk out from the library...while leaving neither Riddhima nor Rahul notices a girl sitting at the other end of the table who has witnessed the entire conversation.. she pushes her dupatta back and straigthens her blue leheriya kurta.. she gets up and walks over to the place where Rahul and Riddhima were sitting...her payal makes beautiful sound against her ankles as she walks .. she bends and picks up a register which has been left there..her long parandi plaited hair falls forward.. she eyes the register and turns it around to see the name.. ..it reads " Rahul Garewal".. she smiles and leaves the library...


Scene 3: Armaan , Anjy.... Rahul, Riddhima

Anjali is sitting with Armaan in the canteen, recovered from last night, but her temper with Riddhima is in full swing, and Armaan is a sympathetic listener.
Anj: And you know … she didn't even try to cover up for me! Maine uske liye itni achhi party organize kari, sab arrangements kare, cake, decorations, everything … so if I got a little late, voh mere liye kuch excuse nahin bana sakti thi? She could have said I was cleaning up, organizing the payments, anything! But no! Woh to angel hai na! jhooth nahin bol sakti. Aur mujhe Dad se daant padh jaaye, she doesn't care! So what if I got a little tipsy? It's not a crime! Aur tum bhi to pee rahe thy, Armaan …

Armaan says consolingly: don't worry, Anjali. I'm sure tum apne Dad ko yeh sab samjhaogi, then he'll understand. After all, you did all the organizing, all the work – and actually, she's the one who should feel bad – woh to wahan se gayab hi ho gayi thi. She could have helped you wind up … but she went off with Rahul... Tumne sab kaam kiya tha … they could have …

Anj: Woh … aur Rahul!!! Siamese twins hain woh dono! Jahan ek hai, wahan doosra. Aur Rahul to usse encourage hi karta hai … mere against! He's another goody-goody … I don't know why I even try! …

Armaan says sympathetically: Anjali, don't worry. Look, if you think it will help, I'll come and tell Dr. Shashank that maine drinks organize kiye thy, aur tumne unknowingly pee liye.

Anjali looks at him gratefully.

Anj: You'll do that for me? Thanks, Armaan, you're really sweet! But don't worry, main nahin chahti ki Dad tumhare bare mein kuch galat sochein. Main unhe mana lungi. You'd better stay out of it. Waise bhi, tum yahan naye aaye ho – agar shuru se impression kharab ho gaya, to baad mein you'll have problems.

Armaan: You sure? I don't mind … really. waise bhi … you weren't really drunk … just a bit … happy (he grins at her in a friendly way and she grins back.).

Anj: Main normally drink nahin karti na … not so much. But thanks anyway, Armaan. You're a good friend.

Armaan (grins at her again): I can be a very good friend! Wanna try me? Let's go out for dinner tomorrow night – just the two of us! I'll take you to a place I know … great food … great music …

They look up – Rahul and Riddhima are entering the canteen. Anjali looks at Armaan with a long-suffering look.

Anj (half under her breath); maine kya kaha tha? Siamese twins!

Armaan look at them thoughtfully and turns to Anjali.

Armaan: So … is Rahul your cousin … or what? Tum dono usse bahut achchi tarah jaante ho?

Anjali: No … no, he's not related … uske dad aur hamare Dad bahut achche dost thy aur uske parents ek car crash mein … they died, ages back. So Dad kind of adopted him … he's been with us since he was five or six – mujhe to yaad bhi nahin, ki kab woh hamare saath nahin rehta tha.

Armaan (understanding): Ahh … I was wondering … aur Rahul aur Riddhima …?

Anjali says – woh shuru se bahut close hain … I was a terror in childhood … (Armaan laughs, says – "I can believe that!" and she laughs with him) … aur Ridzi shuru se thodi chupchap si hai … Rahul usko mere gusse se bachata tha, I think ab usko aadat ho gayi hai!

Rahul and Riddhima come to their table – Rahul is pushing Riddhima forward and she is obviously unwilling, nervous of Anjali's reaction.

Riddhima says hesitantly … "Di?"
Anjali ignores her and turns to Armaan.

Anj: So what were you saying, Armaan?

Armaan (lazily): Haan, I was saying … kal dinner ke liye chalte hain … you did so much work yesterday for the party, koi thanks to milni chahiye …

Rahul interrupts at this very pointed remark.

Rahul: Actually, Anjy, hum bhi yehi soch rahe thy … tumne itna kaam kiya kal …

Ridd: Haan, di, it was a great party – really … I really enjoyed …

Anjali: Really? Iss liye tum beech mein gayab ho gaye the?

Both are quiet. Armaan breaks in.

Armaan: It's okay, Anjali. Jaane do. Some people don't appreciate what others do. Maine to bahut enjoy kiya.. lets just leave it to that ...ok.. !…

Riddhima gets annoyed – something about this guy really rubs her the wrong way! Normally she is never this quick to get angry, but every time she meets Armaan, she seems to be on the verge of losing her temper!

Riddhima: Listen, Mr. Armaan … main apni behen se baat karne ki koshish kar rahi hun … can you please stay out of it...?

Armaan puts up his hands in mock-surrender.

Armaan: Okay, okay … tum baat karo. But tell me … tum hameha itni gusse mein rehti ho kya? Blood pressure badh jayega … be careful!

He gives a cheeky grin, Anjali grins also but Riddhima doesn't find it funny at all. She glares at him.

Rahul tries to make peace again.

Rahul: Anjy … yaar … listen, we really did enjoy last night. Hum to sirf thodi der walk ke liye gaye the … but the party was great. Really.

Armaan (sounding interested): tum hamesha royal "we' mein kyun baat karte ho? Kya tum hamesha Riddhima ke liye bolte ho? Woh khud goongi to nahi hai.

Rahul flushes with embarrassment and looks away. Riddhima also flushes – with anger. Armaan gets up from the table.

Armaan (now sounding completely bored): waise, I'm sure you two sisters have something very interesting to say to each other – but yeh family matters se door rehna hi achcha hai. I'm off. Anjali – think about tomorrow night! Mujhe bata dena. See ya!

With a wave of his hand, looking every inch a 'cool dude', he saunters off, leaving Anjali smiling and Riddhima fuming.....

Preacap: will the sisters make up !!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dear😊

nice part....... continue soooon........😍
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: k_anjali12

<FONT color=#cc0066>hey dear😊


nice part.......
continue soooon........😍</FONT>


thanxz anjali that is really sweeeet of u
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hey it ws as i expectd hehehe lvd it truly gosh how armaan handeled her poor guy nd ridz huhhhhh poor her angie ws angry on ridz but whts her fault in this thse sis god kya hoga nd rahuliska kuch karo lts see wht gonna happen .........
cont sooon
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Originally posted by: cutie_yachu

hey it ws as i expectd hehehe lvd it truly gosh how armaan handeled her poor guy nd ridz huhhhhh poor her angie ws angry on ridz but whts her fault in this thse sis god kya hoga nd rahuliska kuch karo lts see wht gonna happen .........<br>cont sooon<br>thnks fr d pm<br>


thanxz yaar i m soon gonna post the next part
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Nice FF please PM me next time!!!!!

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