FF cupids in love .... Teaser

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Guys, I am quite new in this forum but I have been following this forum since long. I would like to share a FF with you all and am posting a small teaser of the same. Do tell me if you like it..Well as my exams are near therefore I might be late with the other updates, please bear with it.. Here you go...

Teaser

"Jaha Tak Mujhe Pata Hai, Khidki se Jhakke kuch nahi Hone wala", the statement startled Mayank and brought him back from his trance as he turned to see his brother Samrat marking his presence with a smirk.

"Main Nahi Jhaank raha tha", Mayank defended himself and brought a book near him, opening it, acting uninterested.

"Whom are you lying Mayank?", Samrat approached him with his naughty smile. "Since last year you are showing a little more interest on your best friend and I am quite aware of that ", he winked while Mayank rolled his eyes.

"Pata nahin kaha se yeh faltoo khayalat tere deemag mein aate hai", Mayank mumbled and sat on his study.

"Jab se tu Nupur Bhushan ke kamre mein jhankne laga hai tabse", Samrat's smart reply made Mayank gulp.

The clock struck 10 and Samrat got up from Mayank's bed rather instantaneously and quickly let out "Mayank main chalta hoon ok?"

"Arrey what's the hurry bro, come sit with me let's have a small chat", Mayank grinned naughtily and happy that the ball is in his court. He grabbed Samrat's wrist tightly

"Mayank, abhi time nahin hai jane de na", Samrat reacted irritated.

"Why is there any appointment", Mayank winked

"Yes..I mean no'I mean I have to study and '"

"Gunjan will be here anytime right?", Mayank finished.

"Yes'", Samrat blurted out and bit his tongue swearing himself with his colorful vocabulary.

He finally composed and defended himself "Woh kya hai na, Finals are near and I need to ace them right?"

"Right", Mayank agreed raising his eyebrow and loosened his grip.

Samrat freeing his hand from Mayank's made his way towards the exit and turned.

"Ab ja, khidki pe ", he winked.

"Teri to'", Mayank pretended an attack and Samrat fled from his room.

Mayank shook his head and laid down on his bed and murmured "Nupur Bhushan"


Umm... well did I live up to your expectations??? do let me know.. be honest. 😃


Love ya all

Priyadarshini aka Priyo😊


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hehe...Really nice start!! I loved their interaction...!! Mayu khidki se jhankta rehta hai...haha...LOL...
Please do continue! I'd love to read more....and PM me when you update!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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priyo !!!!
nice starting dear
cont soon
and PM me when u update the next part....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Priyo!!!!!!
Wow! another FF???Great yaar,great!!
It was a good read as all ur writings are..
Samrat and Mayank sound great in this...
Hmm..so i guess Gunjan and Samrat will be the cupids.....
will wait up for the story to proceed..
N Priyo,do PM me wen u update,k?Cos i drop in here only now and then...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sammy blurts out yes............nice one......plz cont.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Splendid👏👏👏

Please do continue with the 1st part and all.and do PM me when you update!😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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^^^ Thanks a lot guys will rply soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its very cute....mayu khidki se jhankta hai...aww😆
do pm me when u update...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i relly liked your work
go girl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
u r a ⭐️
add me 2 ur pm list
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy!
awesome start!
loved the mayu-sam convo!
pls continue soon and add me to ur PM list

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