New FF:Hateful Love Chapter 5 p.7 July 14th

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Hi everyone! Since I had promised to post my new FF I decided to post it today! I hope you all like it!

Chapter 1 "Geek!Geek!Geek!" The school screamed out loud as I ran down the sidewalk. "Hey Ashley look it's the GEEK!"The popular girls started to laugh as I fell down and cried. "Hey Heer will you go out with me?" Drake from school asked. "NOT!" The group of jocks started to laugh as I cried.

Tears rolled down my cheeks as I woke up suddenly seeing the dream. The sun shined through the window. "Great another day on school!God!" I got up from bed and walked to my cupboard. I opened the cupboard and saw the clothes. I picked out a pink skirt with a white shirt. "No!" I shuffled through the clothes and saw a blue dress. "No to showy!" My hands shuffled through and then I saw a purple shirt. "Yes!" I took the purple shirt and decided to wear it with skinny jeans. "Okay which hairstyle up or down." I decided to leave it open and wear silver earrings with it. "Perfect oh no today's my biology exam I should go and pray." I quickly walked downstairs and saw ma stading in front of Ram and Sita praying standing next to Meher and Arhoi. I walked and stood there to pray. Ma turned and looked at me and gave me a smile. I bended dlown and took her ashriwad. "Bless you Heer. I hope you pass your biology test." "Thanks ma." "Hey where's my Heer beta." I turned and saw ;papa coming in. "Papa" I hugged him tightly. "That's not fair papa you always give extra love to Heer di."Arhoi said. "Yeah papa not fair.Wll you could also give me a hug." Meher and Arhoi di came giving us a big hug.

After breakfast I quickly grabbed my bookbag and gave everyone a hug and kiss and went to board the bus. I looked at the time on my iPhone and saw that it was seven thirty. God why didn't the bus came? Finally after waiting the bus came and I boarded it. I saw that Ivy was sitting on the front seat smiling. Great it's HER again. I slowly walked, but right then I tripped on her foot. My face fell flat on the ground. "Ouch!" I gave a frown and looked up at her. She gave me an evil smile while I got up and walked to other seat available. Yep this was my life. Life of a nerd....... I hate this evrsince I had started kindergarden life was hard. i had got the best grades always a star and then straight As'. I was smart in everything I had Advance Algebra, A.P. Biology, A.P. History,A.P.Writing. EVerything, but I just wasn't popular. I was made fun of in every class and people called me horriable names. Geek,jerk, and others that are inappropriate. I had only one friend Demi. She was my friend since kindergarden and loved me for who I was and not someone differnet. Life was a tragedy nobody loved me exept Demi and my family. Every guy in the school hated me. And I hated them. I wonered if there was some guy who loved me. Some guy. Some guy.....................................................................................................
Calaifornia Airport-L.A.
The plane landed and a sudden crowd of reporters crowded the jet.CNA newsrepoter stands in front of the jet. "Good morning everyone! Welcome to CNA. We're here in L.A. where after many years the Junejas have come back from New York to settle here. They have come here to meet the Maan's and also they have settled there business here. Of course all there sons have come Mr. Arjun Juneja, Mr. Preet Juneja, and of course the hearthrobe Mr. Prem Juneja. They have told us that they will come today and meet the rich family which are the mann's and then they will settle there sons in Springfeild High School. So all you girls waiting for them I hope your heartbeats stop seeing these boys on the street.
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Heer steps into Springfeild High School...........................................................
Heer and Prem meet during there family dinner while Prem starts to see Heer everywhere...........................................................................................................................
That day Heer visits Prem and sings a song..................................................................
The next day Prem starts school and has Heer as his assistant to show him around the school. And that's when Prem's lovebug hits every girl in the school. Heer gets irriated and walks away because she thinks he is like other guys. While Prem wonders why she's different and not drooling over him like other girls do...............................................................................................................................
P.S. I hope you all like this first chapter and lioke the promo. Please guy read this FF and comment. Will update soon!Bye!
Your Friend,
Buttercup
Table Of Contents
Chapter 1-p.1
Chapter 2-p.2
Chapter 3-p.3
Chapter 4-p.5
Chapter 5-p.7
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I was also a nerd in High school.......... well I am still a nerd by my university has better nerd than me.............anyhoo great start............hope to read more soon
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another awesome ff...want to read more of it...updat e ur ff's soon😃
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sounds interesting
anyways, u are a brilliant writer . hope this ff does well......................................................😊
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Hey buttercup...nice concept and update...your revengeful love is just great..i hope this will be great too.....hope prem does not consider Heer as a nerd too...waiting for the next update... and all the best with your upcoming parts.... 😊

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Thank you everyone for your comments!Will update soon!
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The update will be around today!
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hii😊
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Thank you everyone for your comments and thoughts!I'm so happy with the response.
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Hello everyone sorry for the late update everyone I was busy with my other FF revengeful Love. Anyways I hope you all like this update! Chapter 2
Prem's Point Of View*********************************************
I streched my arms and then looked at my blackberry checking messages from my friends back in New York. I was happy for dad that he was meeting his friend, but still somewhere in my heart I missed New York. I missed my friends who I played football with and going to A.P. Algebra, but now I had to get used to the life of L.A.
After the airport checking I walked besides everyone as our bodygaurds crowded over us since my brother's female following was alot, but all around me I saw blonds mexicans,phillipinos, everyone holding posters saying "I love you Prem"on it. I tried to ignore the crowd, but so many girls came that I was totally feeling uncomfortable. "Wow PB!I never knew that you all had this female fan following." Preet teased me as we walked along the bodyguards."Well you never noticed because you were busy paying attention to every girl you saw."I said as Arjun giggled behind. "Yep you're right Prem bhai that Preet was too busy paying attention to every chipkali." Preet gave Arjun the look while we laughed. We walked to the limo that was waiting in front of us. As we seated I started to text message to my friend Drew from New York.
Eventhough we just moved to L.A. we already had our home ready there by the shore."Prem beta."ma. "Ji dad." "Prem when we get home make sure you take a shower and get ready because remember in the afternoon we are going to go tomeet Balraj and Teji." "Ji ma." "Okay and all of you boys please try to give respect to their daughters."Ma said. We all nodded and then she raised her eyebrow and Preet."Especially you Preet." We all supressed a laugh at seeing Preet's look. As I looked outside the window I tried to think how will their elder daughter look like?I mean I don't have interest in her, but it wasn't only me curious, but every person in the nation since she was the daughter of the Maan's the rich and wealthy like us. You see since the Maan's had become a billionare every newsreporter wanted to learn about everything about them especially who their daughter was. It doesn't mean they didn't attend parties I mean they do attend other parties with their other two daughter, but never her...........
I never saw her because I was very little back then and she was only months old and then after her being born we moved, but we still had contact with them and met them in parties, but I never saw her.............................................
But, somewhere in my heart I knew she was not like other rich spoild brats she was different........................................................................................................................
Heer's Point Of View***********************************************
I quickly checked my notebook before I went to biology class. Ok the brain is made of crebellum and gray and white matter. Ok and this and then that.............Okay done.
"Heer!" I turned around and saw Demi. "Oh hi Demi sorry for not listening I was too busy studying." "Oh come on Heer I know that you are going to pass I mean you study hard in every class."Demi said giving me smile. "Well you are right, but still you never know. Anyways so did you study." I asked Demi. "Yes I did well this time I had too since mom was saying that she would disconnect, my phone, internet, and of course confiscate my iPod." I laughed and we made our way to biology.......................................................................................
Springfield High School:3:00 P.M.
I opened my locker too get my bookbag and get ready for the end of day. I packed my books one by one since I didn't want to drop any after all we should never do injustice with education. As I packed I heard my phone ringing. I quickly grabbed my iPhone and saw that it was ma's call. "Hello," I said picking up my phone. "Hi Heer beta." "Hi ma, so why did you call me after all I was coming home now." "Well actually beta I forgot to tell you in the morning that you know our good family friends Lalit and Gayathri." "Oh yes ma your childhood friends."I said responding. "Well actually beta they are coming today for dinner and I totally forgot to tell." "Ma why didn't you tell me I mean how am I going to get home?" "Don't worry beta I sent the driver for you he should be in front of the school parking lot." Great now what? "Ma you know that I don't want papprazi." "Paparazi!Where did that come from?" "Well ma actually if the whole school see's me getting picked up in a limosine the whole school will start drooling over me and try to take advantage of me." "Heer beta you think too far." "Look ma ever since I was bor and we became a billionare I had made you promise that you'll never let anybody know that I'm your daughter because I always wanted to stay away from papprazi." "Listen young lady it's final that the driver is coming and you will get here at home in twenty minutes and if you don't then no books for you." "Ma......." ANd the phone hook up. Great how am I going to go through this................................................................?
Thank god when I came outside everyone was gone and the parking lot was empty. I saw that the limo was parked and quickly got in. I know I'm weird I'm missing the papprazi out there, but I have too. Ever since I was born I decided to never koin the papparazi because if I did I'll never be able to stand on my own feet and do my own work because I always thought of being a singer and I didn't want support from ma or papa. So, I decided to always ditch the upper class parties, and instead decided to have burgers from Joe and Jerry's Burger Hut instead of chavear. And made my parents not to tell anyone that I was their daughter.And nobody found out because I alwyas had them in disgusies such as wearing very weird clothings. Anyways uncle and aunty are coming after so many years well they are ging to meet me after so many years.
I wondered hwo their family would've changed. I mean I haven't seen none of their sons. They all must've changed I mean they wouldn't be baies anymore, but who cares they must be like other guys who will make fun of me. We reached home which was a grand home. Our home was humongous it had about a thirteen thousand square feet garden fenced by the seashore. I just loved my room it was besides the seashore where I could quietly sit by the window and read and then look at the sparkling blue sea. I just loved the fact that our neighborhood sided by the sea it was a beautiful sight and sometimes I loved to walk by the shore.
I walked quietly to the front poarch and got my key out to enter the house. Thanky god the Juneja's didn't come yet for dinner. I saw that ma was bussy telling the everyone else what to do. "Hi ma!" I said looking at her. "Oh his Heer beta. How was school?Good right as usual anyways Heer could you please go upstairs and get ready since they're going to come soon." "But, ma I have homework." I lied eventhough I had finished it in school. "Oh come on Heer tomorrow's saturday and you could do your homework tomorrow." "Fine."I said and quickly went upstairs to take a shower.
Prem's Point Of View***********************************************
I looked outside of the window and on to the ocean. The ocean was beautiful and to me the earth was incomplete without it. Our house was designed really nice and beleive me the stairs were really long to climb. Since we were going for dinner I decided to wear dark blue jeans with a white collar shirt and a vest over it. My style did look good and then I added my favorite perfume which was John Vavaros's. Gell was not my choice, so I didn't decided to put it on. "Prem beta!" "Ma I'm coming!" I quickly walked downstairs and saw that everyone was ready. "Sorry ma for being late." "That's okay Prem anyways I was thinking that we should go now,"Ma said and we decided to leave for the Juneja House.
Their house was just a block away and I decided to drive this time in my new car. We finally stopped in front of their house and saw that it was huge and just like our's. Wow!They must be really rich by seeing the decoration and about ten cars in the driveway. I carried a bouquet of roses as ma and papa rang the doorbell. The door opened and I saw aunty and uncle smiling at us. "Oh Lalit and Teji welcome!"Aunty said and hugged ma. "Well,well,well finally Lalit came to my house,"said uncle. "Of course I had to since I had to meet your elder daughter since I didn't see her since she was little." They hugged eachother and we were led inside.
"Hi Arjun!" Arhoi exclaimed and hugged him while he did the same thing. "Well hi chipkali!" Preet said to Meher. "Who are you calling a chipkali monkey!" Meher said and they started their own little revoulution. I quietly sat in my place and decided to wait for her..........................For some reason I was curious for seeing her.
"Well Teji where's your elder daughter? We haven't seen her and Balarj and you are our best friends."Ma said. "Oh she'll come."Aunty said in respose.
That's when I heard her voice. "Ma!Thai ko na meri chudi..........." That's when I turned around and saw her. She was beautiful.................She had the most beautiful brown marbles and her long beautiful wet hair hugged her back as the the water never wanted to let go of her. Her red and blue suit wrapped a hug around her making her look more beautiful. She was like an angel....................................................
Heer's Point Of View***********************************************
I stood there shocked as I saw everyone standing there looking at me. And then I saw him the guy who was the current hearthrob of the nation. He was handsome. He had soft silky black hair and brown eyes and then he looked handsome with the white shirt through which you could still see his muscles. He was truely..........................no this is too fast........................I can't...............................
Prem's Point Of View***********************************************
Heer nervously walked downstairs lowering her eyes and taking everyone's ashriwad. She was respectful and different she first took papa's, then ma's, and then aunty and uncle. "God bless you."Ma said and hugged her. "Waisa Teji why did you hid such a beautiful angel in your house?" "Well that's what it means expect the unexpected." "Anyways Teji what's you beautiful angel's name since you always kept her in hiding." "Actually her name is Heer." "Wow such a nice name."Papa and ma said. But, all the time my eyes were fixed only on her. She was just too beautiful. Her wet hair and the small wet droplets on her face she was perfect.....................................................................
Edited by buttercup123 - 16 years ago

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