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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hello

Bhaio or behno.....😃

here is the first update of the FF.which is done by Sakina😳..........

❤️Naumi-tammy love story❤️

NAUMAN;

the arrogant cool dude punk of the college.He is the flirty one in the college on whom many girls have crush😕he is the boy friend of Varisha

Tamanna;

Cute ,chulbuli,sporty person..who thinks lyf is lyk a dream where Luck s everything she is the cousin of varisha

SUFI;

a sweet soft kind boy who is very a decent one.He is the best buddy of NAuman in the college

Varisha;

a girly ,soft,cute si ladki who is very cute and possetive.She is nauman's Girlfriend and tammy's cousin

Part 1

chek the ff on page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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you announced it!!thanx!!!
hope u like it guys..we'll start writing soon!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww brilliant idea guys terrific i luv the cast and the way u've described their character can't wait to read the FF wow finally we have and FF for our forum gr8 job guys will be anxiously waiting for it😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thnx...Rida...it is a gr88 pleasure..!!we r starting very soonn👏

Saku....lets start!😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
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bring it on bring it on bring it on
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Posted: 16 years ago
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start start wat are we wat are we waiting for.......subh mohrat ka kya chalo bhai start karo....i m dying to read it.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: osprisshowMOU

yah.the story is so...........chweeeeeeeet

bt whr is it....i wanna read too
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ok i will tell sakina abt it!she will brief the story.................
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ok guys sorry for the delay!!!here's the much awaited part 1!!!!!

PART~~1

"match ke bas kuch hi minute baaki hai....yeh aakhri ball hai....captain Nauman Sait batting kar rahe hain...aur jeetne ke liye unhe 6 runs toh banaane hi padenge....kaafi saara pressure hai unke upar....aaj tak ek bhi match nahi harein hain woh......"......the commentator went on as Naumam geared up for his final go.....

"oye chup kar!!!kyun tension de raha hai???"....nauman's best friend sufi shouted at the commentator...

he looked at the field...

"CHAL NAUMAN!!!!!DIKHA DE!!!"he shouted...

the bowler of the opposite team bowled.Nauman took a deep breath...and hit.'

"AND THATS A SIX!!!!!AUR SCOTTISH CHURCH COLLEGE YEH MATCH JEET JAATA HAI COURTESY THEIR CAPTAIN NAUMAN SAIT!!!!!"

sufi rushed to the filed and hugged his best friend.

sufi-you did it man!!

nauman-isme kaunsi nayi baat hai?sufi yaar kuch naya bol...

sufi-chup kar.lets go party!!!

nauman-oh haan....accha guys aaj ki treat meri taraf se...

everyone cheered..

as everyone was to get into the car to go to the club for partying...

sufi-oye naumi...vari ko nahi leke jayega party mein?

naumi-oh haan yaar!!!par vari boys ki party mein kya karegi?aur vaise bhi...where in the world is she?match dekhne nahi aayi?

sufi-tu jaake dekh.she's ur gf after all...

naumi-right...you guys go....i'l join you later...

naumi(to himself)-varisha...where are u now...

he headed straight to the library.sure enough...he found her there....asleep on a pile of books.the library was empty apart from them...

he went forward and put his hand on her shoulder.varisha woke up with a start.

vari-oh naumi....tum yahaan?match kab shuru hone waala hai?mujhe dekhna hai.....isiliye toh main saara kaam khatam karke rakh rahi thi taki shaanti se match dekh saku.....tumhe ready nahi hone hai?

naumi smiled and sat in front of her.

naumi-miss varisha....match khatam ho chuka hai.

vari-kya???

naumi-aur hum jeet bhi gaye hain...courtesy me...of course...

vari-par match shuru kab hua???main so kaise gayi???main toh camera bhi layi thi???oh god maine itna important match miss kar diya???

she started crying softly..

naumi-oye...ab ro kyun rahi ho?:))

vari-i try to be a good girlfriend naumi...

naumi-and u are vari...tum bohot acchi ho....meri bohot acchi dost ho tum...

vari smiled.

vari-even u are a great friend of mine naumi.i think as boyfriend and girlfriend hum thoda aur koshish karein...toh things will work out...dnt u think?

naumi-yeah....anyways we are the coolest jodi of college...

vari smiled.

naumi-accha anyways...main toh jaa raha hoon to party with my boys...

vari-yeah...you shud go have fun....

naumi-bye then....tc!

vari-u too...

naumi smiled and left..

vari(softly)-you're very nice naumi...par kyun aisa lagta hai...ki hum bas acche dost hai...humaare beech mein koi pyaar nahi hai.....waise chodo!he's very nice to you vari...and thats what matters...he cares for u..

same time....even naumi thinks-you're the sweetest vari...but i still cant bring myself to love u......i still think i'll find that special girl someday....

hey so that was the first part!!hope u enjoyed it!!please leave ur comments!!!
PRECAP~~the boys have a rocking party at the club....a friendly,dosti waala naumi-vari scene.....aur tammy ki entry!!!!!
keep reading!!!
Edited by Sakina_chatterb - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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first episode was dis much gr8👍🏼..
can't wait 4 d next one

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