Kayi dino baad fir meri saugat

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Main din o din o baad aati hu
Saath me bakwas kabita lati hu
Fir aap achhelog bhi karte keya
Bachhe ko dukhi nehi kiya gaya
Post agar main karti hu kuch
Kuch bhi jaise bandar bina puch
Aaplogo ka hausla hai kamal
Aapto uspe bhi karte hai dhamaal
Shukriya teh dil se aap sabka
For jhelofying all my kabita

Aab karte hai baat humare pyare forum ki
Sabhi ko hai talash gumshuda doston ki
Sab Aapne aapne kam ke mare
Kabhi kabhi gum ho jate bechare
Kabhi Pari kabhi Dawn to kabhi Bhawna
Kaun jane kaha gayi Joyti madam aapna
Aur bhi hai bahat sare jaise Sana, Ranjana
Kabhi kabhi to dikhti hai yakkudimag Ananya
Aap sab FFs writer, pls do time to time update
Dekhiye dhire dhire kahi ho na jaye late

Hum sab ka khwabo ka ashiyana
Hai is forum ke FFs ka khajana
Request hai sabse gaur kijiyega jaroor
Aap sab ke stories ka chaya hai surror
Jo man chaha nehi mila show se
Wohi sab milta hai sare FFs pe
Pls rahte rahte yeah forum active
Kar dijiyega apne stories complete
Aur is bich yeha kayi naye sitare ubhre (kabitas, scenes, vms etc.)
Aur forum to hai hi purane hero (Diamonds) ke sahare (pics, infos & all other posts)

Ek lambi kabita, and no jikar of Raj Kranti (nehiiiii)
Baat unki jitni karo kabhi hoti nehi purani
Duniya hai gol kahawat hai bari sayani
Ana parega unko saath leke ek nayi kahani
Usdin sayad fir kam ho hum sabki pareshani
Kyunke dono eksaath hi lagti hai bari suhani

Taklif ke liye maafi, main kar rahi thi time pass
Isi liye likhti gayi yeah sari meri bekar bakwas
Achha abhi ke liye itna hi, fir baad me aunge wapas
Agar ho, to parne aap sabke comments jhakkas

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Posted: 16 years ago
#2
KYON KAR RAHI HAIN AISI BAAT
HUM SABKO LAGTI HAI AAPKI KAVITA KHAAS
DETE RAHIYE HAMESHA APNI YE PYAARI SI SAUGAT
TAKE CARE
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice one Bonai. Seeing u after long time.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Bhishon bhalo laglo tomar ei kobita
Aanonde bhore gelo amar monta


its true ki forum k sabhi purane members ek k baad ek pata nahi kaha chale gaye..............i'm missing Sana's spicy n funny comments

'Usdin sayad fir kam ho hum sabki pareshani
Kyunke dono eksaath hi lagti hai bari suhani'..................
very true.......humari pareshani sirf usi din kum ho sakti hai...........we can only hope ki vo din hume jaldi dekhne ko mile
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Posted: 16 years ago
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bonai aap ki kavita hai lajvab
u hve detailed everyone in detail their
creativity
but i miss ur short story
pl do write when u hve time
TC

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: meftal

KYON KAR RAHI HAIN AISI BAAT

HUM SABKO LAGTI HAI AAPKI KAVITA KHAAS
DETE RAHIYE HAMESHA APNI YE PYAARI SI SAUGAT
TAKE CARE



aap hi logo ke sahare
hai poems hamare

Thanks meft for commenting on my saugat...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sri_Nidhi

Nice one Bonai. Seeing u after long time.



thanks dear, nothing doing, was so busy with work didn't get time to write anything on my own but now a days i try to comment on every post to keep the forum active.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: dinky_05

Bhishon bhalo laglo tomar ei kobita
Aanonde bhore gelo amar monta


its true ki forum k sabhi purane members ek k baad ek pata nahi kaha chale gaye..............i'm missing Sana's spicy n funny comments

'Usdin sayad fir kam ho hum sabki pareshani
Kyunke dono eksaath hi lagti hai bari suhani'..................
very true.......humari pareshani sirf usi din kum ho sakti hai...........we can only hope ki vo din hume jaldi dekhne ko mile



amar holo sara tomar holo suru
now its ur turn remember last time, so write & post, ur first one was very nice. its great u liked my kabita, thank u. and yes we all r waiting for that day.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sasha722

bonai aap ki kavita hai lajvab
u hve detailed everyone in detail their
creativity
but i miss ur short story
pl do write when u hve time
TC


thanks fr liking my poem, yaar maine last time bhi kaha tha tumse ke i will write a short story but very sorry time manage hi nehi kar pa rahi hu. abhi tak to kayi episodes aur ffs save kiya hua hai mere pas, par dekh nehi payi. but ek aur short story to main likhungi hi likhungi specially for u and offcourse baki sab doston ke liye bhi. thank u very much for encouraging.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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kita acha poem tha bonai...... maza aa gaya....

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