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Posted: 16 years ago
thankzzz for opeining the topic Sonia
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Posted: 16 years ago
also..you're DOING GREAT JOB SONIA... KEEP It UP
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this place is rocking....great work...please someone continue.
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Posted: 16 years ago

The Next Day

rahul and muskaan in muskaans ward
Muskaan: Rahul...mian preshan ho gayi hu yaar.... yaha par ek hi kamre mein pure din bistar par reh reh kar bahut pak gayi hu
Rahul: toh ab kya kar sakte hai muskaan ....tu jaldi se theek ho ja phir tujhey discharge mil jaye ga..phir tu yaha waha ghum sakti hai
Muskaan : woh toh mujhe bhi pata hai ki phele mujhey theek hona parega ...par main chahti hu ki tu abhi kuch aisa kar jise main yaha baithey baithey entertain ho
Rahul : tu bata ..main aisa kya karu jisse tu entertain ho !!
Muskaan: tu na ....aaa (thinking) mujhey monkey show dikha
Rahul : What rubbish (imitates her) ...kuch sensible bol karne k liye
Muskaan:Rahul tu meri baat kabhi nahi manta hai..hmp
Rahul: arey teri sari baatey manuga baby ...tu bol k toh dekh
Muskaan:acha teek hai .....tu merey liye kuch romantic sa ,pyaar bahra..kuch bhi bol
Rahul ( comes and sits besides her and holds her hand in his in looking straight into muski s eyes ...muskaan also let loose herself in his eyes and in each word tat he says ): aaj ,kal .harpal,har samay ,har waqt,maheno...saalo saal se ek DIL tumhare liye dhadakta tha aur dhadakta raheyga ...aur woh dil hai.............................tumhara khud ka (and gives a evil wink and starts laughing)
Muskaan (after few mins realizes what he had said and screams: hahaha verry funny ..i cant stop laughing.... Rahul ...main itne bimaar hu ...phir bhi tu mujhey aisey tang kar raha hai na ....go get lost i hate you......ek romantic sa kuch bol nahi paya ...kaisa inssan hai tu..itna nahi kar paya mere liye
Rahul:arey baba ..emotional blackmail mat kar ..bol ta hu na kuch romantic...uuuuuuummmmmm
Muskaan : koi zarurat nahi hai ...tujhsey toh koi umeed rakhna hi bekaar hai ...tu toh...
Rahul (puts his hand on her mouth to stop her from speaking further and looks into her eyes directly and says) :Apke aane se zindagi kitni khubsoorat hai,
Dil me basayi hai jo woh apki hi surat hai,
Dur jaana nahi humse kabhi bhulker bhi,
Hume har kadam per aapki zarurat hai.
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hey guys was just getting bored so thought of wriiting something...how was it???
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi!
What a sweet part! 👏... Especially loved Rahul's romantic lines towards the end...
Apke aane se zindagi kitni khubsoorat hai,
Dil me basayi hai jo woh apki hi surat hai,
Dur jaana nahi humse kabhi bhulker bhi,
Hume har kadam per aapki zarurat hai...
So beautiful!
AMAZING part! 👍🏼...
Someone please continue soon! 😊
Take Care
Edited by N786 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey thanx Radhika ,Nayab and Ari for the sweet comments ....i thought the part wasnt good....i was almost not gonna post it.....thanx again...plz some one cont
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Posted: 16 years ago
Saba the part was excellent..sp. the ending!! Too good!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi!
I'm continuing 😊...
Muskaan was silent for a while...

Rahul: Kaisi lagi meri poetry?

Muskaan: Haan Haan yeh bhi tune kisi book se liya hoga... She said jokingly...

Rahul's expressions turned serious... He got hold of both of Muskaan's hands in his own...

Rahul: Nahin Muskaan... Yeh har aik lafz mere dil se nikla hai... Sirf tere liye... Pata nahin... Jab bhi meh tumhe dekhta hu toh... The words just flow out...

Muskaan could see the sincerity of Rahul's words in his eyes... It was as if she was looking directly into his heart...

Just as Muskaan was about to reply Armaan walked in... Rahul quickly let go of Muskaan's hands... Coughing to hide his embarrasement on being caught during such an intimate moment...

Armaan: Oh ho... Yeh kya chal raha hai? Should I come back later? He teased...

Muskaan: Ummm... No... No... It's fine... Come in... Hum toh bas... Woh...

Armaan: I know... I know it's ok... He grinned... Waise mujhe tumhara check up karna hai... Gabbar's orders... He said making a face...

Rahul: Ok... Tum check up karo... I'll wait outside...

Armaan was just leaving after Muskaan's check-up when Rahul (who was just outside in the corridor) stopped him...

Rahul: Hey man... Wait a minute... Mujhe tumse koi zaroori baat karni hai...

Armaan: Haan... Of course... Bol na... What's up?

Rahul: Mujhe tumhari madaat chahiye...

Rahul explained to Armaan how he was planning to propose to Muskaan...

Armaan: Toh Finally... 'The Rahul Grewal' has decided to propose... He said teasingly...

Rahul: Haha... Very Funny... Rahul said sarcastically... Fine... Agar tu aise karega toh forget it... Mujhe tere help nahin chahiye... He started to walk away...

Armaan: Ok... Ok... Sorry dude... Tu fikar mart kar... Meh Riddhima ko sab kuch samjha dunga...

Armaan's pager beeped...

Armaan: Mujhe chalna chahiye... General Ward... Duty calls... He said waving his pager... Aur waise bhi tumhe bhi andaar janaa chahiye warna Muskaan toh tumhe kachaa chabaa jayegi... He laughed...

Rahul: Oye... Muskaan itni bhi buri nahin hai... Rahul replied defensively...

Armaan: Oh ho... Abhi say taraf dari shuru hogayi? Shaadi ke baad kya hal hoga? He teased...

Saying this Armaan left for the General Ward...

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More coming up in a while... Just thought to post this first... Do comment/Criticize 😃...

Take Care

Edited by N786 - 16 years ago
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The next day...

Muskaan is sitting up in bed flicking through a magazine... Just then Riddhima entered struggling to get through the door with a wheelchair... Finally she managed to get through...

Riddhima: Hey Muskaan kaisi hai tu? She said placing the wheelchair to one side and going to hug Muskaan...

Muskaan: Tikh hu... Much better... Tu bata... Yeh chair kis liye? She asked pointing towards the chair, confused...

Riddhima: Tumhare liye... Rahul nay bataya tha ki tu is room may behti behti bored ho rahi thi... Toh hum sab ne Dr. Keerti say permission li tumhe Sanjeevani ke gardens may ghumane ki... Yeh duty meri hai... She smiled...

Muskaan: Lekin is chair ki kya zaroorat... I'm fine... Meh chal sakti hu ab... She said attempting to get up...

Riddhima stopped her...

Riddhima: Nahin Muskaan... Dr. Keerti nay bola hai ki jab takh tum puri tarah se tikh nahin hojati tumhe yeh wheelchair use karni padegi...

Muskaan groaned...

Muskaan: Par...

Riddhima cut her off...

Riddhima: Par war kuch nahin Muskaan... Tu bas araam say iss chair may beht and leave the rest to me... She grinned...

In Sanjeevani Gardens:

Riddhima and Muskaan are chatting away... Whilst Riddhima pushes Muskaan... Suddenly Muskaan notices something ahead...

Muskaan: Riddhima wahan dekh... She said pointing... Kuch likha hua hai grass may... Chal wahan chal kay dekhte hai...Riddhima obliged...

As they got closer to the spot... Muskaan realised whatever it was, it was written in flowers... How romantic... She thought...

Muskaan: Chal Riddhima thoda aur agey chalte hai...

As they got closer... Muskaan was shocked to see what was written...

'I Love You Muskaan... Will You marry me?'

It was written with Sunflowers and Daisies Muskaan's favorite flowers of all time...

It took Muskaan a moment to register that the message was for her... She looked at Riddhimma... Who smiled knowingly...

Muskaan: Wha... Yeh... How... Who...

As Muskaan looked on shocked she didn't notice Rahul (who had been hiding behind a tree watching Muskaan's reaction) come out and kneel down in front of Muskaan... Taking hold of Muskaan's hands he said...

Rahul: Muskaan... You know I love you... Meh America say wapis aya toh sirf tumhare liye... Humare pyaar ke liye...

Muskaan gaped... Not knowing what to say... Rahul continued...

Rahul: Tum meri zindagi ho... I can't live without you... I don't want to live without you... Your accident just made me realise how much you mean to me... Meh chahta hu ki meri har subah tumhe dekh kar ho... Meri har raat tumhe apne baahon may liye hi guzrey... You mean the world to me... Will you marry me Muskaan?

Onlookers (including all interns and doctors) had tears in their eyes... It was truly a beautiful moment...

Muskaan was speechless... Riddhima came towards her and whispered...

Riddhima: Bol na Muskaan... Bichara kabse aisey behta hua hai...

Muskaan: Rahul... Umm...

Muskaan came back to her senses... With tears in her eyes...

Muskaan: Haan... Yes Rahul... Meh tumhse shaadi karungi...

Rahul slid the ring... (A gold one with a ruby in the middle and several little diamonds surrounding it) onto Muskaan's finger... Got up and evenloped Muskaan in a hug...

Rahul: I love you jaan...

Muskaan: I love you too...

All the interns congratulated the newly engaged couple and resumed their duties promising to meet up later for a proper celebration...

Riddhima was about to leave too but Muskaan stopped her...

Muskaan: Tum is sab ke baray may jaanti thi?

Riddhima looked down guiltily...

Riddhima: Haan... Actually hum sab jaante the... Rahul nay maana kiya tha bataane ke liye... I'm sorry...

Muskaan: It's ok Riddhima... Don't worry...

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There it is guys 😊...

I hope you liked the 'twist' and I hope I fulfilled your expectations with this part 😕...

Take Care

Edited by N786 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh man..Nayab...excellent..... mind blowing ..just fab....awesome lovely ......beautiful part .....i feel so happy after reading this part ...Great !!!!!..now plz someone cont really fast ....i dont think i can wait for a long time after reading such Amazing part
@Mansi- thanks for your comment...thanks to everyone who encouraged me to write or else i would have never written

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