all the family members except Al are at the dining table. jyo n rasila signal each other.
jyo: mummyji why don u join the contest along with gargi ben
rasila : me?
kev: yeah mummey. one entry is still left.
bhallu : one entry is left
rasila looks at all of them.
jyo: yeah u have to participate
rasila: why don't u ask sushila
sushila is surprised.
rasila : sushila u n H will participate in the contest n thts it
sushila : did how will we
H: we donno to do bollywood dance
mannu: its not difficult to do bollywood dance. just run around trees
kev : if its between hero n heroine.
mannu is taken aback n keeps quiet.
rasila sees AL coming there
rasila : why is it tht everytime i get the opportunity. ask my younger sister too. sushila u will participate n thts final. if people will say rasila is lost the opportunity although she is a gud dancer its fine.
AL is very happy listening to it.
Al: rasila bahu u think so much abt the others. sushila, rasila wants to see happiness on ur face n i wnat to see happiness on rasila bahu's face.
H trie to reason out but Al does not listen.
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kev, jyo, yashvi, rasila, sushila, H n jai are in a room. krishna is teaching the 4 of them dance steps. sushila n H are not able to follow. so krishna focussing more on them rather than yashvi n jyo.
kev : maa, lakhsmi is very slippery. if u want to keep her with urself do sumthing.
rasila sees parkya come inside with juice.
rasila : chalo break, break, break. u both are tored come n sit down.
she makes them both sit down n gives them juice.
rasila : krishna jyo n yashvi are still fresh u teach them.
krishna teaches them a step n again comes to teach H n S
rasila : are they both are tired.
krishna : auntyji they will get tired resting let me teach them now
she takes H n S n shows them a step but they are not able to do it.
S: beta i can't dance. if it was making rotis i can make 10 in a jiffy but i cant dance
krishna tries to tell something but then it strikes to her
krishna : aree, dance is similar to making rotis. now shoe me how u make rotis?
S shows n krishna shows a step similar to that n they learn it.
krishna : ok now there is water here. how will u clean it/
Sushila ; wait i shall get a cloth
krishna stops her n jai n rasila laugh at sushila innocence.
krishna: aunty think that there is water here how will clean it.
sushila is about to bend but krishna stops her
krishna ; no auntyji how will clean with ur leg
sushila shows n krishna shows a similar step.
rasila, kev n jyo resign to fate.
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H is cleaning a room with a long handle room. she suddenly remembers her dance n closes the door n starts dancing while cleaning the room.
jyo is lying on the bed while yashvi asks her to do the dance practice. jyo is over confident n says she does not need dance. she asks yashavi to massage her back n in turn is hurt as yashvi starts dancing on her back.
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in the hall krishna is teaching H n S to dance on dance pe chance marle song. they are now able to do well. as they are doing jai comes there. jai sees krishna n is initially staring but then he gets uncomfortable. as krishna is dancing she sees jai n stops while H n S are still dancing. jai gets more uncomfortable n goes off. krishna then sees baabli who is standing nearby against a pillar. krishna feels like its jai n smiles at him. baabli smiles back. rasila sees that n is happy.
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jai is exercising in the akhaada. there two people are teasing another guy. jai scolds them as they joined the akhaada only to save expensive fees of a modern gym. he also scolds them for lying to guruji regarding staying a brahmachari. they both are angry with jai.
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all of them are at the dining table. rasila comes to AL n serves him food
rasila : bapuji try this dhokla and sandwich.
krishna comes ther from the kitchen
rasila ; krishna has made them
mannu : whats the need of making two dishes?
krishna feels awkward listening to it
AL gets angry at mannu
AL : if u dont want u dont eat i will eat ur share.
Al takes the dhokla
AL: this is my share n this is mannu's
he like sit a lot
AL: wah re wah its very tasty. krishna beti ur hands are magical. its very tasty.
he notices krishna's eyes are watery n asks wht happened.
krishna : i remembered my dad. whenever he liked something i made even he used to say this is mine n this is urs n eat. for a moment i felt like i was in my house.
rasila : this is also ur house. what do u say bapuji ?
Al agrees n asks why she is crying again.
krishna : dadaji ur family is so close-knit n i never felt like a stranger here.
rasila : ok now stop crying n show them the other surprise
jyo n yashvi dance on dance pe chance marle (jyo was ok but the kid was struggling a bit)
all of them clap after the performance
next suhila n H dance for the same song. kev, rasila n jyo are worried seeing them dance. (H was gud while sushila was a little slower)
yashivi goes to krishna n asks secretly
yashvi: didi wht do u think are my chances of winning
krishna : to tell the truth H didi's chances are a little brighter
krishna gets a call on her mobile
krishna ; hello........... oh..... wht happened............ now how are u?.......... ok u take some rest......... ok fine bye
H: wht happened
krishna: didi it was my driver. his hand is hurt so he cannot come to pick me up
rasila sees the opportunity
rasila: so wht baabli will drop u off. baabli go n drop her
baabli: no mummy i am tired
krishna: its ok aunty i shall go on my own
S: arre how can u go alone.
rasila agrees n happily sees at jai
S : jai drop krishna off.
jai: me?
S: yes. how will she go alone.
jai goes out. krishna follows him happily.
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jai n krishna come out. all the people n passersby stare at them as they are surprised to see jai with a girl
jai sits on the bike n prays to god in his mind
jai: bajrangbali. u shud only help me.
immediately he hears a voice n turns tht way n sees a kid dressed as hanuman
hanuman: jai shriram
jai is surprsied tht he thought of god n god appeared in front of him. the kid comes to him.
hanuman: lord sriram if ur bike is not starting i will take u n mata sita on my shoulders
jai ; i am not sriram
krishna laughs n says
krishna: i am not sita
the kids mother comes n scolds him n apologizes to them n takes him away.
jai tries to start his bike by kicking the kicker repeatedly. krishna taps on his shoulder
krishna: keys
jai nortices n takes out his keys n starts it. krishna sits behind him n they set-off. in the way the two guys whom jai had scolded in the akhaada see jai n follow him on their bikes.
they call out to him n then finally stop him with their bikes. krishna gets down a little afraid. jai takes his helmet off
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ps: tried the update in a new way with dailaogues. although it took an hour it was fun hope u liked it
*king*