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Anita Malik

@anitamalik

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#41

[Quote=Starasdf]awww itz such a cutee story

AMI N RIDZ RULE WELL OFCOUSE WIF RAJ N NAINA LOLZ

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Aww thanks Star! Glad to know you enjoyed my short story! Of course, AR rock! Raj-Naina, hmm, I have heard of them..but haven't seen themm..But im sure they rock also!!!

[Quote=Richa1234]Man Anita, one of the reasons I read your stuff and comment is coz I like to read your story like comments in return. That's what keeps me going. LOL LMAO! I guess, I can't help but talking and blabbering..It's an uncontrollable habit...I have too much to say...LOL, Im glad to know that it keeps you fueled up to read my pieces😃😆

Jokes apart, honey, I like your work loads, have to make sure you get the right dosage of motivation to shower us with such pieces MORE AND MORE. Ok now since you like situational songs, I'll dedicate one to you.....this is when we don't see you posting more stories like this, I'll sing........ Aww, trust me..Your comments motivate me A LOT! I will shower you with more pieces like this soon😳 Hope you all don't get tired of them..LOL...So I love the song you dedicated to me...I actually laughed out loud imagining you singing it to me..LOL...I guess, I will be seeing this song a lot when I don't update and all...lol..

Lukka chhupi bahut hui
Saamne aaja na
Kahan kahan dhoonda tujhe
thak gayi hai Richa
aaja saanjh hui mujhe teri fikar
dhundla gayi dekh meri nazar
aaja na

waaawww, I get a hug in return, yipee. lol You deserve all such praises Ani darling. Just post your stuff and see the comments rolling. Awww! Thanks Richa! Will keep on doing as you say!

Love u loads Mee too!
Richa [/Quote]

[Quote=dmglovernimisha]oh gr8!
these days v r getting more n more of one-shots!!
cool one anita....[/Quote]

Aww thanks Nimi! 😳Glad you liked it...One-shots are neccesary at times...lol..

[Quote=Jodubai]Hi Anita

What a lovely story, the way you explained Ridz's pain on being all alone, then Rahul's proposal to her.....her accepting it, cos she was certain that Arman was never to return.......& bang you get Arman infront of her

Rahul is such a sweetheart, he liked her for 2 years, finally asked her to marry him & then backed off, when he knew Arman & Ridz liked each other

Their convo in the park was heart wreaking, he left her so he wouldn't cause her pain, but that excatly caused her so much pain

finally alls well that ends well....loved reading it...miracles do happen....[/Quote]

Aww thanks Jo!😳😳 I always look forward to your detailed comments..Makes me all happy and hyper..LOL..Armaan had to come with a bang--what's the fun if he didn't right? LOL...Right when Ridz was trying to move on, he shows up...lol...Isn't that a Miracle? LOL...

I know..I loved Rahul in thie fic as equally as I loved Armaan...He was so understanding for his friends...

I loved writing the convo in the park...It was much needed for them to understand each other..And I agree, he thought leaving her wouldn't cause he much pain, but that is exactly what did cause her pain..But then again, Armi didn't want her to suffer if he died...

All's weell that ends well--I agree...Miracles definitely happen, you just gotta believe in them!

[Quote=santhideepu]Anita... loved ur short story alot.. it was simply superb!!! i still cannot get over it. u words so simple and plain and yet showed us the immense emotions... loved the way u've written it. kudos to you dear.[/Quote]

Awww thanks Santhi!😳 I'm honored to know you loved the fic and aren't able to get over it as of yet...It makes me feel like my writing is worthwhile when I read such compliments on my writing! Thanks a lot! 😳Comments are extremely precious to me and thanks for taking time out do give me one!

[Quote=Ladoo645]Haww i missed this to?! 😕 -reserved LOL...I know exactly how you feel..When I miss out on IF for a day, I see all these updates for Fics...LOL..and then I spend my time trying to catch up.

Awww this FF was really touching Anita....I guess the wait does get it's treat in the end. Really Armaan as the author of the book that was touch and also him going through cancer...wow! brilliantly dobe darlin! 👏

Thanks Nat! 😳 Distances definetly bring one closer to another in the end...That's exactly what I showed...Miracles can happen...It just takes time...In the end, everything gets set right! Thanks for liking the storyline Nats!

Beautifully written! Thanks!😳

-Natasha[/Quote]

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animegurl

@animegurl

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#42

wow!!!👏

great story!!!

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Jia

@jia..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#43

Am here!!! So sorry for my lateeeeeeeeeeeee entry here, *holds ears*

Okie now for this, Anita firstly a huge round of applause for this, u know writing a one shot is no joke, ask me 😆 And u penning it sooooooooooooooooo beautifully, man am completely in ur awe!!

How did u do this??? The start was super fantabulous, I mean her recollecting the past, contemplating wat to do, and then we go into the flashback, okie here i simply loved how u started the way Rahul proposed her, ofcourse before i forget i was completely at the flawless finesse u took us straight into a FB, strating straight with a scene at the cafe, making it so unbelivelingly natural and brilliant!! Anita this was fabulous, specially the para below, her connecting with the novel, its author.....am short of praises girl!!

I spent my two hours at the Cafe, sipping on my cappuccino and finishing up the novel titled "Unattainable Love" It was about a love story in which two lovers weren't able to reunite at the end. Sounds very cliched right? But trust me, Abhi Modi's novels have some invisible force which draws me to them…I am able to put myself in the character's shoes…It's like the novel has been written keeping my own tragic love story in mind which I was trying to still forget and move on in life. How long could you keep on waiting for someone right? Someone that left you forever, without giving you a reason why, and shut you completely from his world. It was definitely time to move on in life…The sad truth to my life was that Armaan Mallik wasn't going to come back…It was time for me to erase him from my heart and mind.

And ofcourse the sweet proposal, the consequent meeting with Armaan, HIM being Abhi Modi, Rahul's sweet gesture to mal\ke her meet him, Anita u were just amazingly fantabulous girl!! I am seriously speechless.

The confession was again outstandingly handled, Anita i am srsly totally stunned and feel like giving u a standing ovation for the brilliant tale so superbly written, do keep giving us these treats!!

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Anita Malik

@anitamalik

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: animegurl
wow!!!👏
great story!!!

Thanks!😳 Im glad you liked it!

[Quote=jia..] Am here!!! So sorry for my lateeeeeeeeeeeee entry here, *holds ears* Aww its absolutely okay Jia!

Okie now for this, Anita firstly a huge round of applause for this, u know writing a one shot is no joke, ask me 😆 And u penning it sooooooooooooooooo beautifully, man am completely in ur awe!! Aww, Thank you! I'm flattered by the compliments already!😳 Your doing a brilliant job with your short story too...I want to read more of "A Rogue of My Own" so you better update that fast...😆

How did u do this??? The start was super fantabulous, I mean her recollecting the past, contemplating wat to do, and then we go into the flashback, okie here i simply loved how u started the way Rahul proposed her, ofcourse before i forget i was completely at the flawless finesse u took us straight into a FB, strating straight with a scene at the cafe, making it so unbelivelingly natural and brilliant!! Anita this was fabulous, specially the para below, her connecting with the novel, its author.....am short of praises girl!! How do I do this? hmm...the easiest and truthful answer to that is because of all the encouraging comments I get...It makes me feel like my writing is worthwhile ! So I thank everyone for that from the bottom of my heart!😳 Thank you Jia! I'm honored that you loved it!

I spent my two hours at the Cafe, sipping on my cappuccino and finishing up the novel titled "Unattainable Love" It was about a love story in which two lovers weren't able to reunite at the end. Sounds very cliched right? But trust me, Abhi Modi's novels have some invisible force which draws me to them'I am able to put myself in the character's shoes'It's like the novel has been written keeping my own tragic love story in mind which I was trying to still forget and move on in life. How long could you keep on waiting for someone right? Someone that left you forever, without giving you a reason why, and shut you completely from his world. It was definitely time to move on in life'The sad truth to my life was that Armaan Mallik wasn't going to come back'It was time for me to erase him from my heart and mind.

And ofcourse the sweet proposal, the consequent meeting with Armaan, HIM being Abhi Modi, Rahul's sweet gesture to mal\ke her meet him, Anita u were just amazingly fantabulous girl!! I am seriously speechless. *blush* ..lol...Thanks Jiaaaaaa!

The confession was again outstandingly handled, Anita i am srsly totally stunned and feel like giving u a standing ovation for the brilliant tale so superbly written, do keep giving us these treats!! OMG, too many compliments..Im gonna get diabetes..😆😆Aww thanku Jia! Im honoredddd!Thanks for reading and commenting so beautifully!

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Sunaina

@SunainaTM007

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#45

hey anita....

just came across this fic of urs...

and m soooo sorry for being late.......

its just awesome....fabulous...

the story all from riddhima's side was fab....armaan being an author and writing a novel....whao...awesome.....

and the way armaan explained his reason of leaving and them making up was fantastic...

rahul is such a sweet guy and gave in for their happiness...

loved it totally.....

superb story......

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shriya

@shriya12

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#46

anita jus wanted to tell u ths u r a grt writer..the way u portrayed the story though it was pretty simple,had its impact well..abhi modi n armaan being the same ppl,i cudnt hv guessed..it was a grt attempt..u shd write more..if u hv do infrm me..all in all the story was sweet simple n descriptive..hp u wrie more!

shriya

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