Once Upon a Miracle- AR Short Story

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Anita Malik

@anitamalik

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: ania_91
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the name sounds really cool ... will get back to it soon...

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wow!!! an awesome one Anita! ...it was so simple yet captivating...loved the description...the story felt as if a bundle of problems resolving one by one with so much ease....truly magical....loved it....

ps: as i said before, kewl title...it was indeed filled with miracles.....

tc.

ania=)

Aww Ania! Thanks a lot for liking it and the way I put everything forward😳😳 Im truly flattered seeing that you thought this short story was magical! I feel like my efforts paid off..This concept was getting to me and not allowing me to focus on my work, so I HAD to pen it down😆😳 FF's have made me craazy! LOL...

Thanks for commenting so sweetly! Thanks for liking the title..I thought it would fit the story well!I'm glad it did!

TC too,

Anita

[Quote=Richa1234]Oh Anita, its a great story; simple and sweet. I loved the way you headed towards the details, the important bits were told so subtly and with such care. That's what is so commendable about your writing, the way you handle situations even if they are predictable makes them unpredictable and interesting to read for the readers. A huge round of applause from my side for doing such a fabulous job. You deserve all the appreciations for writing so well.

Beautifully written piece!

Love
Richa
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Richa!

Man your really my motivator..You encourage me soo well! You like make my day with your sweet and frank comments! I love reading them over and over again! It's such a morale booster!😳 I'm glad that you liked it Richa! My whole purpose was to entertain you all with this short story and it also was an outlet from getting this concept to take over my head...LOL..I could seriously not focus on my work and had to write it down! I'm glad my efforts paid off! Makes me super happy!😊

I'm flattered by your comments on my writing..Those are huge compliments Richa..I never knew I had it in me to write like this! Thanks Richa, for liking everything....the details, the story and everything..Thanks feels like such a small word!🤗 I'll give you a hug along with the thanks to show my appreciation!

Love ya!

Anita

Edited by anitamalik - 16 years ago

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@starasdf

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

awww itz such a cutee story

AMI N RIDZ RULE WELL OFCOUSE WIF RAJ N NAINA LOLZ

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Richa1234

@Richa1234

Inactive

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

Man Anita, one of the reasons I read your stuff and comment is coz I like to read your story like comments in return. That's what keeps me going. LOL

Jokes apart, honey, I like your work loads, have to make sure you get the right dosage of motivation to shower us with such pieces MORE AND MORE. Ok now since you like situational songs, I'll dedicate one to you.....this is when we don't see you posting more stories like this, I'll sing........

Lukka chhupi bahut hui
Saamne aaja na
Kahan kahan dhoonda tujhe
thak gayi hai Richa
aaja saanjh hui mujhe teri fikar
dhundla gayi dekh meri nazar
aaja na

waaawww, I get a hug in return, yipee. lol You deserve all such praises Ani darling. Just post your stuff and see the comments rolling.

Love u loads
Richa

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@Princess..

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#34

oh gr8!
these days v r getting more n more of one-shots!!
cool one anita....

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Jodubai

@Jodubai

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#35

Hi Anita

What a lovely story, the way you explained Ridz's pain on being all alone, then Rahul's proposal to her.....her accepting it, cos she was certain that Arman was never to return.......& bang you get Arman infront of her

Rahul is such a sweetheart, he liked her for 2 years, finally asked her to marry him & then backed off, when he knew Arman & Ridz liked each other

Their convo in the park was heart wreaking, he left her so he wouldn't cause her pain, but that excatly caused her so much pain

finally alls well that ends well....loved reading it...miracles do happen....

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

Anita... loved ur short story alot.. it was simply superb!!! i still cannot get over it. u words so simple and plain and yet showed us the immense emotions... loved the way u've written it. kudos to you dear.

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Anita Malik

@anitamalik

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#37

[Quote=$h!Van!]Oh God!!! I am DUMBSTRUCK...😳

Its a great story, very sweet. I loved the whole plot.

Fabulous job done yar. 👏[/Quote]

Aww thanks Shivani! 😳 I'm flattered at your compliments..

Thanks for liking my short story attempt...I'm glad I entertained you with it!

[Quote=ttimpy]absolute love story..with a happy ending........the endings i always love.................sad endings are not my cup of tea..............cute and short..............i liked the way u ve woven abhi modi also into this story..............as also nikita........cant leave any1 out............lolzzzzzzz [/Quote]

Thanks Ttimpy!😳

I'm glad that you enjoyed my short little story, that started out depressing but had a happy ending! I'm glad I was able to put in a sweet ending that you would like! Sad endings aren't exactly my favorite either...AR always have to have a happy ending for me = D

LOL..I can't leave any DMG character out can I? LOL...

Thanks Ttimpy!

[Quote=armaghan0]simple short splendid and smooth loved it fascinating and interesting story [/Quote]

Thanks😳

I'm glad you throughly enjoyed my short story attempt! My whole purpose for writing this was to entertain you all..and Im glad I could do that!

[Quote=bheegi]This is the first story wriiten by u I have read Anita. First of all, ur a great writer with wonderful flow of words and emotions 👏👏👏

Looks like u just saw Dostana this weekend?? Verve magazine?? he..he..I saw it yesterday too.😉

It was a lovely story with a beautiful ending....miracles do happen...you just have to believe in them ....ur so right👏[/Quote]

Aww thanks Di! 😳 Compliments coming from a great writer like yourself make my day entirely! They really motivate me to improve my writing even better...Creative writing never used to be my cup of tea, but after I discovered IF and the FF section, I got inspired..and now, I love writing as a hobby! Currently have two FF's...

LOL..Yeah I saw Dostana last weekend...Couldn't help myself but add Verve magazine....The movie had an impact on me...lol...I bet you enjoyed the film also = D

Thanks Di! I couldn't agree any more..Miracles do happen for sure..you just need to have faith!

[Quote=j&b84]very well written story, simple and cute... love the happy ending a lots 😉[/Quote]

Thanks!😳

I'm glad that you enjoyed my short story full of emotions..

I liked the ending a lot too! Bad times bring happy endings sometimes..😉

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Natasha

@Ladoo645

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

Haww i missed this to?! 😕 -reserved

Awww this FF was really touching Anita....I guess the wait does get it's treat in the end. Really Armaan as the author of the book that was touch and also him going through cancer...wow! brilliantly dobe darlin! 👏

Beautifully written!

-Natasha

Edited by Ladoo645 - 16 years ago

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Anita Malik

@anitamalik

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#39

Thanks Soumya for your wonderful comments on my short story! I will update the other two soon!!!

[Quote=jia..]Anitaaaaaaa OMG a one shot??? And i didnt know till now??? Okie reading it up, will leave comments later, as i know i'll have loads to say as usual....luv u for this treat yaar!! Will get back!! [/Quote]

I'm still waiting Jia for your comments...lol...You better post your views on my short story soon as they mean a lot to me! I posted this short story on late notice...never really meant to even write it out...but then the concept was bothering me so much that I had too...Will inform you next time!

[Quote=saira_1] 😲omg

this is my fav one shot😳

it was simple but so well written👏👏👏

and evry1 had a happy ending😆😳!

hope you write more😳[/Quote]

Oh wow! What a compliment Saira! Thanks a lot😳 You totally made my day by telling me that this is your fav one shot! Im like on top of the world now...lol..I'm glad you liked the concept! I will write more time permiting after reading such amazing compliments

[Quote=ashluvdmg]awsummmmmmmmmmmmmmm

jst luvd it like hella

miracle huh!!i gues i nva blieved in it...

bt aftr dis..i reli need 2 think...

luvd ur story

luv u lts

ashu[/Quote]

Thanks Ash😳 I'm flattered to know that you loved my short story attempt! LOL--I'm happy to know that I'm changing your views on miracles after reading this part...I believe in them and hence the inspiration for this FF...Miracles really happen..you just have to wait for the right time...

Love ya

Anita

[Quote=swetha10]Hey Anita a very cute n sweet story....Yes Miracles happen for sure........... I liked the ending.. itz nice...[/Quote]

Thanks Swetha😳 I'm glad that you enjoyed the fic...

Miracles sure do happen...you just need to have faith and trust in them!

[Quote=mar-]woow grt ff really goood[/Quote]

Thanks Mar!😳

[Quote=spln]aaawwww anita i only just came around to reading this one..its awsome....the flow in the parts n the way the story linked so well...n dam..the cancer just caught me off the hook, watever i was expecting his reason to be it wasnt cancer n somehow the wod outa him just totally justified him that secon...great part, ur good at one shots its obv from this dotreat us to many more...n yeh MIRACLES CERTAINLY HAPPEN!!![/Quote]

Aww thanks NJ!😳 Such compliments coming from you making me feel like ontop of the world...lol...Your comments mean a lot and are truly encouraging! LOL--I guessed I suprised you with the cancer bit..I wonder what your crazy mind thought the reason for Armi leaving her was...lol...

Aww, I will treat you all with more one-shots time permitting after receving so many compliments!

I couldn't agree any more..Miracles happen for sure!

[Quote=samijhan] awwwwwwwwwwwwww chooooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeee!!!!!!! loved it.[/Quote]

Thanks Samira😳

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Anita Malik

@anitamalik

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#40

Thanks 268143!

[Quote=hinanaziri]reserved

nij just told me about this,
lemme read and be back wid my comments
i'm sure its awsome

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Awsome!

loved it so much

ok lets start with the way u talked baout miracles

i cud so relate to the story,

loved the way u linked it all,

the highlight of the story was the name he used for his fics

and how he took to writing and the way she cud relate to his stories

was so cool

totally loved the concept and the flow

shame it was short ,but a memorable one for sure

fab work Anita👏👏👏

great writing!

hope u give us more of these very soon

sorry for the late comments,i was stuck on the page almost all day

haha ,oh well ,plz cont jeevan sathi soon if u can,me waiting

love ya

Hina[/Quote]

Aww thanks Hina! 😳 I guess word of my short story spread fast...LOL...

I'm like flattered by your compliments..I'm so glad that you could relate to the short story as a whole--makes me feel like my writing is definitely worth it! I try to make it reliastic...Miracles definitely happen--you just need to have faith in them!

I'm glad you thought it was creative how I made Armi have a fictional author name--Abhi Modi...Ridz had to be attracted to the novels now...It would be wrong if she didn't feel a sense of connection to them..lol...Thanks Hina for liking these bits and telling me about them!

Thanks Hina! Your comment was certaintly a memorable one! I will write more short stories soon! JS update coming tommorow...I hope..lol..Sorry! Will post it by tommorow..

[Quote=krati.mehra]~reserved~

will read this once m bak from skul.

k am back...hmm so i read this and loved this...like really...it was a simple tale with loads of emotions and u potrayed all of them very well...Armi as Abhi modi and Riddz reading the books and somehow feeling a connection was awesome...the best part actually.

Rahul's a sweet guy...and i liked how Armi didn't want to share the news of his cancer with her but he shud hv coz that wud have at least saved her from being lonely nd grief stricken and lost for like 4 long years and with him she would have faced the sorrow better...but oh!! alls well that ends well...loved it...loved it...loved it and errmmm....loved it...haha...

And your writing skill were like always really impressive and nice...loved them as well...great job done Anita...looking forward for more from you...and update the other fic...waiting waiting...

keep it up

Krati[/Quote]

Thanks Krati for those wonderful compliments sending me ontop of the world...lol....

I'm happy that you enjoyed the short story and the roller coaster of emotions attached to it! Your analysis and comments mean a lot to me...Im glad I was able to keep you hooked to the concept of the story with Armi being Abhi, but only as a author...and Ridz feeling connected to the story....I had to pen this concept down before I literally went mad..lol...

I agree...Armi should have told Ridz..isn't that what true love is all about..understanding..But Armi was insecure and didn't want to cause her pain if he ended up dying....

Thanks for liking my writing Krati..Means a lot! Will update the other two soon! and will write more of these time permitting...lol...

[Quote= missypatel]

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in a hurry be bck later to comment...:) *edited*

anita!! tht was sooo gud!! d whole....books...him..ridz still stuck on him...luved all dt!!
and u wrapped it all in 1 part..yaar i dunno hw u did dt...and uff i took an exam at 1 n i was online for 2 mins juss bfr dt...and durin d exam i was thinkin abt yur fic..cuz i was juss able 2 read lil bit of it!! haahah!!
feel lke ritin 1 myself...lol!!

rite more such like tem!! wud luv 2 read tem!! :D

nij~ [/Quote]

Aww thanks Nij!😳 Your comments mean a lot to me! <333

Im glad you loved the storyline of the short fic! Trust me, it was hard work fitting this whole thing into one part...at times, i wondered if I should break it into two parts...but then everything flowed smoothly into one part...

LOL--so my fic was a distraction for you since you read two minutes of it...Awww! I hope you got a good grade on your exam since you were too involved in thinking about my fic...lol...

Will write more of these after all this encouragement! I have two FF's currently atm...You can check them out if you want...

I'm loving your A Lone Star!

[Quote= musicdiva]amazing story anita! truely touched my heart!!

yes even i believe that miracles do happen if you believe in them! and u have very nicely penned them down!!

well done!![/Quote]

Aww thanks Simi!😳 I feel honored to know that this story had a impact on you!I agree...Miracles do happen...You just need to have faith in them! They make take time...but they happen for sure---this is exactly what i was trying to show in this fic...I'm glad to know you agree with me!

[Quote=akaur]That wz a really sweet..simple...full of emotion ff[/Quote]

Aww thanks Atma! 😳 I'm glad you enjoyed it and got attached to it!

[Quote=Robin_M]ohhh wow what a beautiful story anita!!!!!!!! so touching! cant believe armaan left her cause he had cancer, just to protect her from getting hust! awwww soooo sweet! but thankfully he is alright now! and im sooo happy with the ending, they finally got together! hehe something very hot about armaan as an author, and that too with a undercover name! no wonder ridz felt conncected to the book! awsome stuff girl, wonderfully written! thanks for sharing with us!
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Aww thanks Robin!😳😳 I'm honored that you enjoyed the short story sooo much! It feels soo good to read such wonderful things about my writing and the story from you! I'm glad you enjoyed this roller coaster of emotions short fic...lol..Armaan couldn't bear to see Ridz in pain if he ended up dying, and he being the sweetheart he is, just left her like that! But miracles happen, and he was cured from the cancer...AR had to get together..I love happy endings..LOL...

I know..I agree, there is definetly something hot with Armaan being an author..Hmmmm *goes into dreamland*LOL...

Awww, I will keep on sharing more stories in the future, time permitting!

[Quote=Veiledbeauty]Whooo!!! Nice story, Anita!

Another happy ending 😍[/Quote]

Aww thanks Zuzu! I'm glad you enjoyed this small attempt of mine! I love happy endings too! = D

[Quote=simran1285]wow that was beautiful Anita! Thank you for the one shot it's always nice to read short stories once in a while because of the quick happy ending that awaits at the end

especially if it's one on AR😉...Thanks for that![/Quote]

Thanks Simran! 😳 Im flattered by your compliments...I'm really happy to know you enjoyed this short story as much as I loved writing it! Aww, no prob for the one-shot...I agree, its always nice to read one-shot's cause of the happy ending...and AR just makes it special...sigh...lol...No prob Simran! Thanks for liking it!

[Quote=monadarling2628]anita, that was really well written! i'm happy that it ended with a happy ending. you should write more short stories like this because you and your writing are both just that awesome.

lesson learned- miracles do happen but only if you believe in them.

haha, looks like dostana really inspired you?

love,

mona :][/Quote]

Aww thanks Mona!😳😳 I'm glad you liked it *big smile* LOL...I love happy endings too..I can't bear to write a sad ending on AR...lol...So happy endings will keep on coming from me for as long as I write... Aww, thanks Mona for liking my writing! It means a lot!<333 I will write more short stories soon..Got a lot of concepts in my mind right now...lol..Only when time permits me, I will write more...

LOL..Im glad you learned the lesson I was portraying in this story...Now, I pray a miracle happens and we get to meet KSG...LOL..

Dostana did inspire me man..I like the name "Verve"--I had to use it in here after watching the movie..LOL..

Thanks Mona!

[Quote=Mahi4u]hey

awwwwwww....................

dat was rellllllllyyyyyyyy BEAUTIFULLY ritten

luvedddddd it

luv ya n tak care
mahru[/Quote]

Aww thanks Mahru! Thanks for liking the whole story and my writing...Your encouragement makes me write better and better!

Love ya too!

[Quote=madhsar]dat was a really fab story anita.....a very simple n cute concept......literally just luved it to d core n d last line was exceptionally well....d phrase was very sweet n i'll always remember dat miracles do happen wen u believe in dem.......plzzzz continue writing more such short stories...u write exceptionally well.....

tons of luv

madhurima[/Quote]

Okay, first of all I would like to start off by saying that I LOVE your name...Its so beautiful and appealing to the ears...

Aww thanks a lot for the comments and compliments Madhurima! Im honored to know that you enjoyed the fic and loved it to the core! I'm glad you understood the whole purpose of this story--that Miracles happen if you believe in them...This was all I was trying to convey in the fic and Im happy to know that you'll keep my advice in mind!

Will write more short stories soon! If you want, you can read my two Fics...You can PM me for the links..That is if you want...lol..Thanks for the compliments on my writing...I feel flattered! *blush*

Love ya

Anita

[Quote=dmg_sonia]

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i m speechless...i never knew u write soo well...it was a magical ff...or rather a great piece....the concept n the way u penned was surely wonderful....2 be frank Dont know how to reply on dis..coz the pain AR went through was really sad....poor AR, the 4 yrs would have been sheer torture n painful but i loved how armaan wrote a book n the way she connected n all...it was wonderful reading their emotional saga....n yes rahul was a surprise package, the way he quietly understood everything....it was a treat readng ur one shot, u really crafted the story magically

love, sonu
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Aww thanks Sonu!!!😳😳 I'm flattered by receiving such compliments on my writing by such a fab writer herself! It means a lot! As your comments will help me improve! I didn't know I could write well after coming across all the wonderful FF's I did in the FF section myself...Your FF "Shades Of Love" was one of the first's FF I read when I came on IF...and all the FF's I read inspired me to write! So all thanks to all you wonderful writers out there! *big hug*

Aww, I'm glad I could create magic for you through this short piece of mine! It makes me feel soo good reading your comments!

Writing a book was an outlet for Armaan to get rid of his guilt for leaving her...and it did miracles all right, since Ridz was attracted to it!

Rahul was such a understanding guy here...

Thanks Sonu!

Edited by anitamalik - 16 years ago