help with poem

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Rima

@Rimsie.

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Posted: 16 years ago

hiii guys

i have to write a blue poem for my english class

i need really help with that

it needs 9 lines in total

each stanza should have 3 lines only and the first two lines should repeat in all stanza(meaning they should be all same, they can be lil diff to make the poem rhyhm)

it also needs to start with a problem and it should solve a prob by end(it can be positive or negative)

can some1 plz help me??

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Summer3

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: rima791
hiii guys
i have to write a blue poem for my english class

i need really help with that

it needs 9 lines in total

each stanza should have 3 lines only and the first two lines should repeat in all stanza(meaning they should be all same, they can be lil diff to make the poem rhyhm)

it also needs to start with a problem and it should solve a prob by end(it can be positive or negative)

can some1 plz help me??

Ah Rima so you have 6 lines which are the same and only 3 lines are different.

Pl check if I am right.

Why is the world full of sadness

And hearts filled with emptiness?

I am so filled with lonliness

Why is the world full of sadness

And hearts filled with emptiness?

Everyone is filled with selfishness

Why is the world full of sadness

And hearts filled with emptiness?

Let us spread some love and goodness

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Rima

@Rimsie.

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Posted: 16 years ago

yes, you are correct about the lines

the poem is beautfiul!! i love it!

thank you so so much for the wonderful poem!!🤗

really appreciate your help!

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Summer3

@Summer3

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: rima791

yes, you are correct about the lines

the poem is beautfiul!! i love it!

thank you so so much for the wonderful poem!!🤗

really appreciate your help!

Good for u Rima.

I happened to come here by accident.

Normally I am in the SRGMP thread.

Take care and may God Bless u🤗🤗

Edited by Summer3 - 16 years ago