loving the enemy! AR

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Okay guy's this is another idea of mine that's been haunting. I know I have so many ff's that aren't finished yet, but I can't help it. These ideas just stick to my mind. So here's my newest ff, called loving the enemy, plzz do tell me if I should cont.!

INTRO!

The beach, a place for leisure, to step away from all problems, and enjoy life. As he stepped out of his car, in his shorts and sandals, he settled him self on a chair. Watching around his surroundings, as if he's searching for something, or a certain SOMEONE. Wearing his sunglasses, leaning back, when suddenly a reflection caught his eyes. As the sun hit her tanning plate, the sun's ray reflected straight into his eyes, blinding him. He shut his eyes, and after awhile opening it slowly, he shut it back.

Bothered, he moved to a different spot. Settling himself contentedly, he opened up a book to read. Again, his eyes shut, DAMN! Where the hell is this coming from, he looked around. He followed his gaze to where ever the light was coming from. It came from a girl getting a tan. So she's there relaxing and making herself beautiful, while I'm here receiving the side effects, not fair, He smirked to himself coming up with a plan.

Getting his own tanning kit, he settled himself in front of the girl. Lying on the folded chairs, he leaned back, and turned around to watch her reaction. As soon as the light hit her eyes, she took cover with her hand. The back of her hand on her eyes, and he face with a disturbed expression. Slowly unraveling her fingers, revealing her eyes, he couldn't help himself but just stare. Man, her eyes, almond shaped, green, and so beautiful, getting completely lost in her, he didn't realize that he had moved from there.

After snapping back from fantasyland, he realizes that she's not there anymore. Looking around curiously trying to find her, he spotted her diving into the water. After 10 seconds or so, she comes out all wet. He is left stunned.. stunned by her beauty, essence, and posture. As she gets up, walking the inside the water as if it's a street, perfectly balanced, and smoothly. Her hair soaked wet, water pouring all over her body. Damn this woman is sexy!, still staring.

**Beep' Beep**

Suddenly his phone rings. "Hello", rudely, for disturbing him> 'Armaan, did you find person X yet?".

Tell me if you want me to pm you!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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woah dear🤗 its really sound interesting one⭐️ superb😍 plz continue it soon😛😉 & add me in ur pm list😳

"Badi mudatt se chaha hai tujhe,
Badi duayoan se paya hai tumhe,
Tujhe bhulne ki soche bhi tokaise,
Kismat ki lakiron sechuraya hai tumhe."



Edited by nidha1983 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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1 more Sazi? =O
Haha ur on a roll...But am loving it! :)
A PM would be more than welcome!
-Marisha
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice start
looking forwar to the sexy billi.....do pm me
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow this FF sounds different and excitting a cant wait for the first part Pls PM me when you start countinue soon

amna
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HEya..
the intro is good..
want to read more of it..
plz do update soon..
nd add me to your PM list if not a problem..

Rucha

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Posted: 16 years ago
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another ff saz!!! gr8 going
nice into
wud luv 2 read further
plz add me 2 ur pm list
Edited by soumya_dmglover - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: nidha1983

woah dear🤗 its really sound interesting one⭐️ superb😍 plz continue it soon😛😉 & add me in ur pm list😳

"Badi mudatt se chaha hai tujhe,
Badi duayoan se paya hai tumhe,
Tujhe bhulne ki soche bhi tokaise,
Kismat ki lakiron sechuraya hai tumhe."



will add u hun!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: perfectpiscean

1 more Sazi? =O

Haha ur on a roll...But am loving it! :)
A PM would be more than welcome!
-Marisha

lolzzz yes 1 more.. lmaooo
will pm u!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: teenorchid

nice start

looking forwar to the sexy billi.....do pm me

will pm u hun!

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