~~~Kismat Se Jab Miley~~~ My first FF

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Sohni was sitting alone in a tree house that her dad, Mr. Rajveer Rai, (a well respected army veteran in the whole village), built when she was a sweet cute little toddler. When every girl her age wants a doll house, Sohni always wanted a tree house. She wanted tree house so she can be close to lovely white pigeons that nested there. When girls her age play with dolls, toys etc, Sohni always liked to spend time with her pigeons. Sohni was different. She had her own world of dreams. She grew up dreaming her dreams.
Suddenly she heard a gunshot and snapped out of her deep thoughts and to her utter shock, her pigeon fell into her arms. He was trembling, jerking, gasping for air, fighting for last moment, seemed like trying to tell his lovely companion last words but couldn't. Tears rolled out of Sohni's dark deep eyes down her rosy cheeks and fell on the poor little friend in her hands.
Sohni who always was different, couldn't gulp it down and wiped her tears and came down the tree house with her pigeon. She gave one last goodbye to her friend and buried him. That moment she vowed to go search for the murdrer. She went through the stretch of green fields and rows of sunflowers to find out the culprit. She was running with fury on her face and anger in her heart and all of sudden, she bumps into a tall, built, strong man and falls on the ground. He, in an effort to save her, falls on her and she closes her eyes immediately.
She is terrified, her lips are trembling, there's a frown in between her eyebrows but she still dares not to open her eyes. In a moment, it seemed like he skipped his heartbeat several times. He couldn't take his eyes of her sweet innocent face. He couldn't figure out if he was dreaming or was he really few inches away from this eternal beauty he has ever seen. Sohni realizes that she is still on the ground and the guy is still on top of her. She, in a very low voice, lets some words out through her trembling lips.
"Ji uthenge aap?".
He doesn't move as if in an instant, his senses had stopped working all togther. She utters some more words under her breath.
" Ji aap...(she pauses, opens her eyes slowly and carefully)...uthenge?" She takes a quick glance and shyly lowers her eyes.
The guy is checking every feature of her face and mapping in his heart, capturing in his eyes.
This time again, Sohni, nervously moves her hands and slowly move them towards his shoulders, still with her eyes lowered, gives him a small tender push as an indication to move.
Finally he comes back to his realization and gets up embarrassingly and offers his hand to help her get up.
"Hi! Mera naam Pranay Hai"- He introduces.
She nervously, shyly extends her hand but stops an inch away from his fingers when she sees a gun hanging on his other shoulder.



I hope you guys like my first ever FF...please read and comment...It will means a lot to me and would encourage me to continue...😃
Will wait for your comments and suggestions.

next part will come soon!


luv,
pallu😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
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pallu...........its really nice.........pls continue.........😊

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