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Posted: 20 years ago
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ndia Forum members thanks for your support .
FKG Final round results are out and Jury already selected 2 contestants for next round and they are

Rooma
Sameer
Now you have chance to select one more contestants so please vote for your fav contestant .You can either post contestant name here or send me PM with contestant name

The Danger Zone contestants are
Sunenahari
Saher

I am posting their entries here .So please dont forget to vote .This poll will be close around 9 pm EST tommorow

These were the themes givin to contestants for writing their entries

1.Online Masti
Yep here is your chance to write about the good/bad real/imaginary
experience with some amazing/jerk guys/gals on internet.Some people like flirting on net ,
some like to make friends ,some may like fight too and some may juz wanna do masti like some guys
act like gal and do some masti with despo ppls ..anyway here is your chance to write about it

2.Bollywood movie
Every round we had movie theme and so does this round.But this time its different ..yep this time theme of the movie is A girl/guy from India
falls in love with girl/guy from Pakistan ..movie should be full of
emotions ,songs ,romance .Thanks to my friend Naz for this theme she wanted me to give this theme for FKG contestant.

3.Pyar..Ikraar ..takraar and phirse pyar
This theme is little different than previous ones ..its like flirting plus love at first fight plus crush plus hreat break plus ditching .You see a guy/gal and u feel kuch kuch hota hai then you propose him/her and you go steady for few days then u meet some other gal/guy and same thing repeats again..and then kisika dil dhukana hai aur kisika pyar paana ...lets see who dares to write on this

Here are the entries from contestants -- in Next post

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: sunenahari

Ek Ajnabi - Love can be dangerous.

I decided to run away from my home. Being born into a wealthy family, all my wishes had always have been fulfilled. I was a pampered child n had always got what I dreamt of. So u must be wondering y I ran away. I'll tell u in brief- I was fascinated by all investigative stories filling up our newspapers n television n wanted to be a part of it. I wanted to be a Su, the investigation journalist. My parents on other hand wanted me to marry me to some rich NRI businessman. They had allowed me to study at India's best institute of Journalism; but were in no mood to take it any further. So an independent minded girl has to do, what she has to do. Isn't it? Don't u agree. Its 21st century after all.

Well, I soon realized that life away from home was not easy. I somehow managed with help from some friends. I had a good CV so I managed to get a job at Today's point newspaper and website service run by a famous Mr Dilip Singh. But my enthusiasm was soon to fade, as I kept waiting for that all-important story to be given it to me. Instead I was given stuff, which didn't even find a mention in the paper or on the net.

Frustrated I decide to confront Mr Singh himself, I didn't want to waste my life like that. So one day, I charged into his office. I was dumbstruck when I reached his office. Well u see, he was nothing like I had imagined 50-year-old balding man. On the contrary, he was very 30 odd handsome young man. I had rehearsed in front of mirror all my complaints. But cat took my tongue n I jus stood there like a statue. How can I help u? he said. Well with great effort I introduced myself n told him that I needed a bit of challenge now as I had been working with his firm for quite some time now.

I couldnt sleep that night. I was so happy. Dilip had offered me to work on a project along side him. He had given me some files to work on but I could hardly concentrate. Yes yes u are correct, it was love at first sight. I couldnt stop thinking about him, the way he talked, the way he smiled, his dark deep eyes, n his infectious laughter.

The coming days I worked hard on the project. I often used to go on for coffee and dinner with Dilip. I think he loved me as well. He always complemented me on something or other. He was always dressed perfectly and never lost his temper, despite my glitches. One day he asked me out to a dinner. The project was near its climax n soon we would be ready to unveil to the world the scandal of the year. Anyway, we had a great meal n later on unexpectedly he proposed to me. I was surprised, it was dream come true n I said yes. He kissed me hand. So cute.

Well the big day when our report was to be published in the paper n on the net came soon. It was scandal of the year n I was proud of my part in it. They were talking about it all over the country. But as I scanned the article, I could not find a single mention of my name. Hurriedly I looked on website, nothing there as well. No credit at all. All the hardwork, toil, effort I put in this project and not a word of thanks to me. Ofcourse, Dilip was too busy giving interviews on all TV channels. He had no time for me. I was fuming with anger. I was heartbroken and cried for days.

But I am not a girl, who can cry for these stupid men for long. I decided to start work on one of the other projects. We had received lots of letters complaining about the drug trafficking going on in the city. many youths were falling prey to drugs. i started my research on this and made some phone calls to police etc to get a little know how. Apparebtly a man called Rahul was behind all this. Things were making progress. it was a dangerous job n i had to be careful.

One day on way to meet some friends at disco my car brokedown on a highway. I panicked. God! What am I gonna do now? It was getting dark. My mobile was not picking up the network. Suddenly I heard a tap at my window. I saw a handsome stranger standing, "Are u ok, maam?" . For some unknown reason, I jus cud not take my eyes off him. "Are u ok?" he said again. I realized that I had been admiring him unashamedly and blushed instantly. I slowly explained to him the whole situation. He offered me a lift which I gladly accepted. The whole journey my cheeks were red with embarrassment n I hardly exchanged any words with this stranger.

On arrival at disco, "I'll make sure your friends are here, before I leave." Oh, u don'T have to," I said. But he didn't listen, n we went in. I couldnt find any of my friends there. "Come on, I'll buy u a drink, while we are waiting," he said. I felt so drawn towards him, I could not refuse him. The music was excellent and dance floor was inviting. After a drink, I was finding it hard not to move with the music. Come on, lets hit the dance floor," he said with such a mischievous smile. He was a very good dancer, n I started to relax in his company. Soon music changed to soft romantic number, n all the couples cheered. "Lets get off." he said. What a perfect gentlemen I thought. He got me another drink, by then my friends turned up. He left soon, but with a promise that he'll get my car fixed and delivered to my place.

I kept thinking about him later on. I had even forgot to ask his name. My friends didnt stop me teasing. Next day at office Dilip hadnt turned up, must be busy giving interviews somewhere. There wasnt much work to do anyway. I returned home early. Soon somebody was at the door. It was neighbour with a bouquet of flowers; she said somebody left for me. I read the note. It said 'keep smiling. Your car will reach u this evening.' The roses were beautiful, I kept looking at them.

There was another knock at the door. I rushed but paused, I checked the mirror for my appearance. I opened the door. Yes, it was him, looking more handsome than yesterday. The smell of his cologne filled my senses.

Him: Your car keys maam.

Me: Thank u very much. Please come in for a cup of coffee.

H: oh I possibly couldnt. It's not appropriate.

M: oh please do. I blurted

Well, he declined again n left. i kept staring at the doorway for a while. on seconds thoughts it was good he didnt came in, my place was filthy.

i didnt hear from him again. but his thoughts kept creeping up in my mind. Dilip was back at work. i told him a bit about Drugdealing scandal. I didnt want him to take all the credit for this again. Meanwhile, i had managed to befriend a zilted exlover of Rahul who gave me details of his dealings. She told me about a dealing which was going to happen soon. Our team came up with a plan to expose him.

So on the day, I dressed up as a waiteress. i had plenty of hidden camera devices in form of purse, sunglasses, they had put one in the tray as well. Genius my team members are. Things were going as planned n my team was ready with a back up. the opposite party arrived n so did rahul with his gang. i was trembling with excitement. But then i saw him, the stranger who i fell in love with was part of rahul's gang. i cudnt believe my eyes. i think he saw me as well, may be not. i was shattered.

the mission was a success but i was not feeling that good. i had managed to get some good videos of the drug dealing. i thanked my team. it was serious mission of national importance, i cud not let my attraction for this stranger ruin everything. Dilip was not such a bad person after all, maybe he was selfish n egotist but atleast he was not a gangster. i decided to show dilip the video.

i was getting dressed up for work the next day. There was a knock on the door. i wondered who it was. i looked through the peephole. it was the stranger. OMG, i panicked. i rushed for my videos n trying to look for keys for the backdoor. but front door broke n stranger came rushing towards me. S: stop. dont move. i stopped n stood there like a statue.

"before u do anything listen to me. i need your help. i saw u yesterday at Rahul's place with a hidden camera. i know you have recorded that particular dealing. if it gets to police it will help in getting rahul in prison. My name Amit and I am an undercover agent working for police." He went on to explain how he had been following rahul's gang n how my evidence cud help. i went all to police station n gave them the videotapes, but only after i had made a copy.

Rahul was arrested and my name was all over the newspaper. Dilip was so jealous, he would not even talk to me. My team had a big celebration party n I invited Amit as well. After all had left, Amit took my hand and

got down on his knee and said "Su, since our first meeting, I cant stop thinking about u. I have never felt this way about anyone, n I haven't met anyone as beautiful n as brave as u. will u marry me?" And he produced a beautiful ring out of his pocket. Well, i said yes n the rest is history.

We are happily married now. Well dilip is still running his company. He took the news better than I had thought, as if his love for me was not as important a thing after all. I never got any thanks from him for all the hard work i put in his firm. so i started my own web based newsgroup. The name plate on our door reads:

Su The investigative journalist

and Amit Superintendent of police.



Originally posted by: Indian Pyaar

RATED G FOR EVERYONE

This story is 16:9 enhanced. If the images appear stretched and you have a 4:3 computer, make sure you set your computer to 4:3 letterbox mode.


Vivek
Ash

Guest appearance
Sweetu
Ramdeyal (franki)
Sonali
Sanjay

A train stopped in a remote station. Very few passengers were on. From one compartment a pretty young girl came out. Her name was Ash. She was carrying a heavy suitcase.

From another compartment a guy got of. His name was Vivek. He was wearing a red jacket.

When Vivek was passing Ash she called him
"Hey coolie can u carry my suitcase for me"
"Do I look like a coolie to u!!!?"😡
"Oh sorry" said ash
Vivek looked at her angrily and walked away.
Outside Vivek finally had managed to stop a taxi. He was about to sit down in the taxi when Ash came out panting from carrying her heavy bags.
" Wait wait wait!!" she said stopping Vivek from sitting down in the car. " Can u please do me a favor. Mere ma bahut beemar hai. Mujhe unke paas jald se jald pahunchna hai. Kya main is taxi me jaa sakti hoon please"

Vivek stared at her from head to tow and thought for a second before saying ok.


" Thank u so much😛" said Ash she got in the taxi and then looked at her bags.
Vivek sighed and put her suitcases in the trunk. "Thank u" she said. As soon as she got in the car she took out her ipod and started listening to the music.
- - - - - - - - - - -

Ash was dancing at her best friend's marriage, Sweetu who was getting married to Ramdeyal.😆

chhalkaa chhalkaa re kalasee ka paanee
chhalkaa chhalkaa re O aankh na maanee
chhalkaa chhalkaa re kalasee ka paanee
chhalkaa chhalkaa re O aankh na maanee
maiyaa bole jaanaa naheen
bhaiyaa ko bhee maanaa naheen
baabul bole bas ek din kal ka chhalkaa
guddaa bole jaanaa naheen
guddee bole jaanaa naheen
sakhee bole bas ek din kal ka chhalkaa
chhalkaa chhalkaa re kalasee ka paanee
chhalkaa chhalkaa re O aankh na maanee
chhalkaa chhalkaa re kalasee ka paanee
chhalkaa chhalkaa re O aankh na maanee


Her song finished and one of her friend called her. She started running to her friend when she bumped into someone who was carring food and it all came onto her dress.


" ARRAY dekh ke nahi chalte kya??!"

" Tum!!"

"…oopps😳…" said ash seeing it was Vivek

" tume to kaha kei tumhari ma beemar hai!!😡" said rahul

"Excuse me…r u talking to me…did we meet before?😉" said ash

" nahi main deewaron se batain kar raha hoon…maine itne badi jhooti kabhi nahi dekha" said rahul angrily😡

" mind ur language" said ash even more angrily😡

and they walked away from each other

- - - - - - - - - - -
the marrage was over. Ash was leaving for Bombay. When she came outside carrying her suitcase she saw Vivek was waiting for her with a taxi. He called ash.

" lets be friends now😛. Humlog saath hi Bombay jarahe hain aur saath achcha rahega"

" hmmmmm" she said. " ok"😊 and they shook hands.

They were on the train laughing and enjoying each others company. Then they reached Bombay.😃

they departing from the station


" You know something I found out in this trip" said Vivek

" kya"

" Im in love with u" said vevik ash lo0ked down on the ground her face red and said "me too"😳

So they exchanged phone numbers and went apart. They kept in touch after that.

- - - - - - - - - - - - -

ash went shopping. She was very happy these days because pyaar main sab khush rahata hai.😃 Even though she hadn't talked to rahul recently she was very happy. Ash got on the escalator and started going down one flo0r. suddenly she spotted a guy who lo0ked like rahul. Then lo0king closl y she saw it was rahul…w/ another girl…he was holding her hand and leading her somewhere. Ash got of the escalator and started following Vivek and the girl. Vivek led her to a jewelry shop and ash falowed. Vivek went into the shop and showed the girl a ring. He put it on her finger and they hugged. Ash watched then ran out of the shopping mall broken hearted. Behind her she saw Vevik fallowing her.

"what's going on Stop following me" she yelled at him.
"Why are you so angry". He asked😕
"Because ur a cheater, u have another girlfriend And you both are engaged. I saw you with the girl in jewelry shop" she said

Ohhh… said Vivek

And he left the scene without saying another word

Ash heart was broken. She was thinking about vivek how had ditch her.

- - - - - - - - - - -

There was a concert and ash went with one of her friends. She was sure Vivek come to see this concert. However she didn't find him anywhere. When finally the show was over and crowd was coming outside.


Ash was leaving when someone pushed her. She turned around and saw the girl that was with vivek at the mall. She was holding a guys hand

"Hi I saw you with vivek in the jwelry store" said Ash
" Hi uhhh"
" Im ash"
" Oh! Hey Ash im Sonali. Vivek talks about u a lot."
" I hope there nice things" Ash said
" Of course" said Sonali " Oh I forgot….this is Sanjay….my fianc"
" Fiance…did u leave Vivek?"
" Leave Vivek?...no…Kyu…he's my brother…"
" BROTHER" said Ash… "where is he right now"
" Hospital" said Sonali.

Ash ran from the theater to the hospital. When she arrived their she saw Vievek playing fo0tball w/ a bunch of little kids. Vivek saw her and went to talk to her.

" hi" he said😛
" hi" said Ash😛
" sooo" said Vivek😕
" yeah…maine tumhari sister ko dehka…theater me…very nice girl"😛
" oh…tum log milgai" said Vevik
" Yeh…and im sorry…"
" Its ok" said Vivek
" to ab dosti pakki wali" asked Vevik.😛
" yes"😃
and they went home.


Saathiya ... Saathiya
maddham maddham teri ye geeli hansi
saathiya ... saathiya
sun ke ham ne saari pee li hansi

hansti rahe tu hansti rahe hayaa kee laalee khilatee rahe
zulf ke neeche gardan pe subah-o-shaam milatee rahe
hansti rahe tu hansti rahe hayaa kee laalee khilatee rahe
zulf ke neeche gardan pe subah-o-shaam milatee rahe
sondhee see hansi teree khilatee rahe milatee rahe




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Posted: 20 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 best of luck saher n su
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Posted: 20 years ago
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saher & sunena u both Rocks.now 1 has to go .so don't think that u lost u also win buddy 😃 .we jury are with both of u 😛
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Posted: 20 years ago
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mans bro puttinh it on first page. 😉
this HI is for u 😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
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hi mans bro 😆
kitne votes aaye hain abhi tak 😳
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucky_rose

hi mans bro 😆
kitne votes aaye hain abhi tak 😳


around 20 ...still 1 more day is there so no problem😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
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exactly bro i know abhi to ek din baaqi hai pura 😃 wese bro ek Q kitne vote highest aye hain abhi tak tumhare paas?
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucky_rose

exactly bro i know abhi to ek din baaqi hai pura 😃 wese bro ek Q kitne vote highest aye hain abhi tak tumhare paas?


well last couple of times I have received more than 100 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow mans bro.itn evotes aye the 😉 .gr8 😛 .humara show itn apopular hai 😃

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