Journey of love -ff-mayur meeting-10

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well i have nearly quite writing FF i used to write some ff in DMG but now i m going to write welll its baised on both sajan and mayuršŸ˜‰
i m ash btwšŸ˜³šŸ˜†šŸ˜ƒ
without futther delay i will start my ff
i changed my name to journey of love šŸ˜† instead of once upon a time

its love station #143
(the famous marina beach's station for lovers the scence is awsome we see lots of benches facing the most beautiful beach blue sees waves of white with lot of trees an warm place its going to be a sunset light was dim and lot of bbenches filled with lover we see lot of romance going on in everywhere)

we see a person sitting alone in a bench looking at the beach the waves-his description a grt physic,charmer,handsome,hhis eyes was mermersing wearing an black shirt and pant his coat lay on the top of bench he remained to his own thoughts
he thought to himself how would have life been if i stay with her, how would we had been sitting here like all other couples that time was undefinable but now look at the present i'm here alone sitting in a bench with nothing with me just lost memories those memories which can never be . he stopped but why i m thinking all over this again n again whenever i come here i remeber her...... why.................. its been 5 yrs i have no connection with her i don't know where she was what she will be doing how se would be looking will she be marriaged? the thought of her being married to other than him made him more disgusited more weakend his whole body seems to be paralaysied but why did i leave her when she needed me what was wrong with me how can i leave her the only lady i loved the most....................................... he thought to forget her but whenever he comes here she thinks of her she was so beautiful and elegant then what was with me why couldn't i............. he remeber rather thought to take a journal through his past his unforgetable journey of life his collage days as this was the day he never want to forget the twist and turn of his life

once upon a time there lived a boy named mayank having an ambition to be something in future
an book-loving slient ,more matured boy than anyone an cool handsome hot dude who is after books rather than girl
his greatest dream is to help his mom to built an new empire ,his life depends upon his own therios and calcuation he thinks before he speaks
an perfect man he lived with his mom and his little sisy gunjan they where indeed rich they had a small business in mumbai which was quite profitable but mayank has always dreamt of building his own carrier he want it to be his own empire helping his mother was only in his mind but other seems he is soo ambitious
they where the sharma's they lived in a small house yet it was luxurious as it was a twin house cottage his mom likes to maintain their bonds even with her busy schudule they had a good balcony and a backyard and near their mansion was little basket ball court but i(mayank) was never intresed in playing through gunjan wanna try someday
mayank's routine
my day was same like as every day nothing new i wake at 6.30 morning have my usual schdule and have my tea with mom and a little chat with my sister and then go for a book ride
mom always complain that i red too many books but what to do its my favorite hobby rather it gives me more knowledge and my sisy she loves to read books just like me but she always take intrest in making me a cool dude which i m completely not
my world revolves only around my mom and my sister
character sketch
shilpa sharma
my mom she is the most beautful lady in the world that too with brains she handles her life her family n business after his fathers deadth which made mayank soo addicate to books to hide his emotions he always wanted to help her in business but she always tells him to finish in his studies enjoy his life to fulliest
be like any normal kids but mayank always hears noting abt it his mom was the best mom the most amazing lady the most charming lady she always there for him when he needed her other than books he always shares his thought in front of her without any hesitation,i m very prtective for my sisy as she is innocent and i don't trust anyone no one could hurt my princess
gunjan sharma
and what to tell abt my little pussy hehhe i mean siisy she is gunjan my pyaari sisy i love to call her that she will be shy to others but those who are close to her knows wat excatly she is an naughty little girl with millon dollar smile she was very friendly talktive,playful,an prankster , she loves to read books and i was proud of it and our mom always says we have inherited our dad's stupid habit to be lost in books
but to the world she was different she was scared to talk to any stranger she was not at all bold to talk freely she was very studious she also have the desire that i have but one difference is that she is intrested in music which is inhertied from our mother she loves to
we cook for ourself only one maid rather like our body gaurd mrs kapoor she was mom's right hand she lost her hasband and her child in a car crash from their own we where her's as we where our mothers she was understanding she likes my nature she says that i m different and i quite liked it
i have finished my first yr of bba at excel collage i have done my high school also at excel and gunjan she was studying in modern public school excel was famous for its bba course so gunjan took same stream as his bhayia as he is her role modal and admission was done as she was brillant in acadamics

it was last day of their vacation from tommorrow onwards we will attending class the sun was bright it was brillant day i can't wait till i get library those yummy books those soft lines of authors those touching novels sitting at my room dreaming abt books was one of my fav pass time
gunjan was sittting near the court hearing the songs melody of birds we have a collection of love birds near our garden at backyard near the court and pouring water to the flower
mayank felt something extermly coool today don't know why because he know tmrw he starts his fav routine claasses libaray books projects workshops uff he decided to go to balcony as he heard some noise from near by cottage it can be easy seen from balcony new family is moving in today he remeber his mom mentioning it on morning chiitter chatter
today mother took a break as she wanted to the vacation to end in happy manner she was cooking food for them
mayank looked to new family but he can only see a lady rather a girl and a boy in distance it was not clear they where fighting and laughing and he couldn't make out what was going then he saw that boy went leaving the girl she was tall he could tell her hair was stright and was nice but mayank hold on what are u thinking its a normal girl common get inside and finish off the book only 250 pages to go
he went inside till he wanted to go out and check who is it but once he inside the book no body can stop him no thoughts

main while in other mansion the girl was none other than.........................................

yes the girl was none other than nupur an elegant yound charming bubbly lady who loves her brother a lot missed him when she was a way she is very talktive dramatic and she loves chitting n chatting she was in delhi before with her parents leaving her brother at mumbai for studies but nnow she has dediced to stay with his brother she has a memrizing eyes those charming attractive smile but yet she was simple
to her the most imp person is her brother samy the tommy she always used to annoy him calling with it where as his brother the great samrat he was leaving in hostel now his sister came and they moved to their mansion he was a play boy a big filrt school's no 1 student he finished his high school at excel now going to enter the excel collage he is carefree but he is very protective when it comes to his sister he is very very very soft at heart doesn't shows it up at the world the person only close to him is his nupur the blooper thats what i calll her samy thought
he loves playing basket ballllllllllllllllll he took out an look at mansion it was huge it was awsome it had a balcony and a backyard he came to balcony and he saw an court he didn't wait he took out his ball from a box and runned towards the court through the backyard
he heard his sisy yelling while walking through the backyard
sisy;meri help karo sammy the tommy uff ball lekey woh gaye aur muhjey iss sab main akela nahiiiiii
he smiled at himself and looked back to see her girl kicking things and standing their with hands folded and looking sammy
sam;meri pyaariiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii nupur blooper jaan pleaseeeeeeeeee muhjey na basket ball khelna hey pleaseeeeeeeeeee(making a puppy face)(he knw his di would do anything for him)
sisy;uff tum bhi na (smiling she went inside)
he went to the court twisting his ball with one figure he went stright then he started his routeine playing shorts from far was his fav he never misses a basket
but then when he was going to throw the ball he heard an melodious sweet voice from one of the corner it was melting he saw a girl wite long hair she was facing other side she was pouring water but he need to find her face
he purposfully throw the ball to her side it hit her at back he went with a wicked smile on his face yelling ;yipeee perfect short (To hmself)
gunjan was shocked an sudden hit she turned around an find someone comming from court no body had ever played their then who is he it was not clearly visiable who it was whoever it was he was tall fair wearing an red t-shirt and a black jeans looking dashing then after a min it was clear his face was clear because he was standing in front of her she gaze at him slightly went away from him to get a look at him properly she was
scared she could feel her breathing very hard ,he was charming his eyes was catching and he had the millon dlllar smile she put her gaze down and was scared all over again who is he?
sam was lookig at the beauty the innocency of her eyes her benhanji look but something was with her an charm she was beautiful samy has seen lot of girls in his life but no ones like her

next part
part-page 8
part(mayur metting)-10

(annocement ;-i m no good at hindi so i will be writing in english the dialog but if i feel some hindi could the work i will put hindi)


did u know who the person is and who is her and what would have been happened? any guess stay tuned
i m not that good at ff's but just a start, would be appericating if u all comment/suggest to improve do comment warna i won't continue for sure


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Posted: 16 years ago
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cntinue and this is mainly abt whih pair?
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it include all 4 don't worry mayur sajan both are there n thanks for visiitng n reading
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only one comment plz comment should i continue?šŸ˜†
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its gud !!!!

plz continue soon
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hey ash *hugs* continue soooooooooooonnnnnnnn yaar
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its beautiful.. please continue yaar..great its on both couples..
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@ruchi thanks yaar will continue

@hema hugs buddy thanks yaar will def continue

@zaaru thanks jaan for visiting n commenting means alot actually little confused to how to interpert i mean will it be mayur basis or sajan what do u guys think i should go with?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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It looks really good so far!
Do continue!...nice that you're putting all four of them
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Originally posted by: naughtyash

@ruchi thanks yaar will continue

@hema hugs buddy thanks yaar will def continue

@zaaru thanks jaan for visiting n commenting means alot actually little confused to how to interpert i mean will it be mayur basis or sajan what do u guys think i should go with?

yaar keep it on the basis of both couples that will be more entertaining..and u will have more readers sajanians and mayurians..šŸ˜‰
Zaara

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