~~The most perfect eyes~~one shot ff

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"A rusty love or rather its declaration is all needed to trap a heart within its smoldering passion,that only seems to decease with every step towards the sole unhappiness…."

His gaze never left her wandering figure,he could very well see her chocolate brown eyes twinkling with mirth,now sitting beside the spring-fall she laughed like a virgin teenage.His eyes again focused on hers and his deft hands started moving smoothly on a canvas like a wine soundlessly flowing on a velvet carpet,he mixed three colors at once on the palette and without disturbing easel he again carried on with his task and captured her on his canvas.

She heard a movement beside her and instantly took her neo-nat in her arms and started rocking him.Her eyes danced with deepest joy when the little one blew air over her cheek…she turned to her better-half knowing he would be looking at her and gestured him to come to her with the crook of her tiny finger.She felt his hands on shoulder and asked looking at sky "how is it?"he said in a low tone, "exactly like our baby,a dusty blue" she was excited at the similarity and said "like yours?" he hummed "hmmm"she again parted her lips and spelled "you completed picturing me?" he took the bundle of joy from his arms and said "yes…its over now!"…she forwarded her hands to touch his cheeks and he immediately moved forward to help her in locating it when she said, "I wish I could see your paintings,who knows you might have been thinking about blondes in Hawaii in just two-piece and painted the,!" she laughed while he looked into her eyes,only a woman like her could move on forgetting about her inability and never thinking blindness as a curse.He took her hands and made her rise up..

Standing infront of the canvas,he hugged her with baby in his other arm and said "well I have colored a mirror on white sheet who always see through me,knows every shade of my emotions" intrigued at his mysterious description she asked "whats it?" he replied softly "my beloved eyes…"her head sprang up,tears clotted in her eyes her voice left her when he said "you lie that you cant see,you have the most beautiful and perfect eyes when others think I am partying hard,enjoying life,you know I am just trying to conceal my pain…you see perfectly…you see through me!".Touched by his love she looked at the portrayed envisaging his art and miraculously she imagined the exact sketch…

They watched the sunset together,they were happy with their world and with this little one it became more worth…they stood together with each other,for each other and a little away was a portrait encapsulating a pair of eyes which was deemed small than usual as if someone is laughing for real…eyes which held the power and love!

the soul purpose of life is to find a purpose....and what would be better than to love someone beyond comprehension,people says eyes are the passage to heart but then they also love who dont have eyes and even are loved!!organs are not the way to heart,its the innate understanding and warmth thats paves a way to heart...! it doesn't matter if you dont see love for you in your beloved eyes because love resides deep in his heart and soul which are beyond intellectuals visibility....

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Monu-SunNaa thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nihita, that was beautiful how the girl could understand her love even despite her blindless. 😊 I just love the end mesage, and couldn't agree more.
Thank you
GoGreen thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nihit,
when r u updating the othe rFF of yours.
please update karona.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I think this was fabulous... just beautiful yes they also love who have a disability, rather they love more and better. Thankyou Nihita for the wonderful one shot ff.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice to see u back Nihita...this one shot was really sweet, thank u!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww this is beautiful!..lovd wen he said... "you lie that you cant see,you have the most beautiful and perfect eyes when others think I am partying hard,enjoying life,you know I am just trying to conceal my pain'you see perfectly'you see through me!" ....wow!!!very touching..
Thank You!
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divvya thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh Nihita, that was very very beautiful. One could feel the depth of their love. beautiful. Thank you
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nihita! that was so touching!!! 😭😭 *happy tears*
the description was excellentlly written and the message at the end was very beautiful!
Edited by azam12neelab - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: $weet Ema

Nihita, that was beautiful how the girl could understand her love even despite her blindless. 😊 I just love the end mesage, and couldn't agree more.

Thank you


thankyou dear.......

love
nihita
nihita thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: MichiDespo

Nihit,

when r u updating the othe rFF of yours.
please update karona.


hehehe pata nahi yaar kab update hogi!!!

love
nihita

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