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Posted: 16 years ago
#41

Alryt....evrybdy lykd mission rm but no1 cld ryt..hehe!!....the same wid me...lolz...nvatheless i m tryn....here goes d nxt part..

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Rahul sits by muskaan's side the whole night.....holding her hand...
The next morning armaan returns to see rahul wide awake in the same position.............
Armaan-Tu saari raat yahi tha??
Rahul just kept quiet..
Armaan-Itna pyaar karta hain kya usse??
Rahul-Tujhe bhi samjh main aata hain....tu phir muskaan kyun nahi samjhti...
ARmaan-Raul...its just about the time dude....ladkiyyon ke baarey main tu zyada nahi janta...main keh raha hoon na.....tu achanak se chala gaya achanak se aa gaya.....muskaan couldnt handle it...bas!!......thoda waqt de...sab theekh ho jayega..
Armaan said animatedly
Rahul-Dekh raha hoon main...sab theekh ho raha hain..
He said sarcastically..
Armaan shook his head..
Armaan-Khair tu ek doctor hain yaad hain na?.....duties wagerah and all
Rahul-F*** the duties...main koi duties nahi kar raha...
Armaan-Ohh my god!!....did i just hear that.....rahul ke mooh se..wow!!
Rahul gave Armaan one look..
Armaan--Rahul..
HE said seriously..
Armaan-Aajj hi pata chal raha hain mujhe ki tu muskaan se kitna pyaar karta hain....i mean...itna koi bhi kisi se bhi pyaar nahi karta rahul...mera wada hain tere se....tujhe teri muskaan main dilwaonga.....main teri puri maddad karonga....ridhima ko bhi side main rakhonga tere liye...
Rahul smiled...A tear rolled out of his face..
Armaan-Oyye...
Rahul left muskaan for a second...he stood up..
Armaan went to him..
Armaan-Rahul....hum sab hain na tere saath..
Rahul-PAta nahi armaan...kal tak akela tha...sab ko apni apni problems hain.....atul pada huyee hain anjali ke pichee tujhe bhi khud ke problems hain...i dunt wanna trouble anyone..i was alone armaan...
Armaan-Sorry yaar....ab main keh raha hoon na.....hum sab apni problems ko chodh ke teri problems par dhyan dengey....ek baar yeh muskaan uthh jayye bas!!......iski toh main aisi clas lunga dekh lena..
Rahul-Oyee....muskaan ko kuch kiya na...tereko nahi chodunga..
Armaan laughed!!
Armaan-Ab tu aaram kar....hum sab dekh lengey!!..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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does anyone want to start the new WWRM or continue this one ??
and great job tina thanxx :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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does anyone want to start another one plzz let me know
thanxx
Edited by Kiki_luvsRM - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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gr8 part tina!! Kiki- I think we should continue this one im sure we all want to write abt mission RM right?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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okaii sure i dont mind im just gonna edit a few things by then we'll decide whether or not to start a new one
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Posted: 16 years ago
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continuing:
Muskaan gained conciousness but she still needed rest. Rahul didnt want to trouble her as yet, he wanted to wait till she gets alright so that they can talk then. Muskaan was free to go home after a few days, but still couldnt join sanjeevani as yet.
In the canteen:
Anji: Acha hai ki muskaan theek ho gayi.
Armaan: Hmmm lekin woh ghar par bore nahin hogi?
Ridhima: Haan lekin woh kar bhi kya sakti hai, usse rest ki zaroorat hai woh ghar se bhar nahin nikal sakti.
Rahul: Toh hum uske ghar chal sakte hain.
Anji: Yeaa what a cool idea, aaj duties ke baad chalte hain, ridzy kyun na hum uske liye ek gift lekhar jayein?
Ridz: Haan, di mere duties jaldi khatam ho jayenge, main gift lekar aa sakti hoon.
Atul: okay guys chalo duties ke liye time ho gaya hai.
So they all go for their duties. Ridhima left early and bought muskaan a huge bouqet of flowers. Now everyone was leaving to muskaans house.
Rahul:Chale?
Armaan: Yea guys lets go.
They all leave for muskaans house.
DIng Dong, the doorbell rang.
Muskaan got up and wondered who it was, she opened the door and saw the huge bouqet of flowers and everyone standing in front of her.
Muskaan: Woww!!! Tum log yahan??
Armaan: Haan tum ghar par bore ho rahi thi na?
Muskaan: Hmm bahut.
Anjali: Thats why we are here!
Muskaan: Thanks guys.
Everyone came in and sat down.
Muskaan: Main bas abhi aati hoon.
Rahul: Muskaan, tu beht, main sab ke liye kuch peene ke liye laata hoon.
Muskaan: No rahul, its okay.. main waise bhi kitchen mein ja rahi hoon.
Rahul: Maine kahan na, beht, joh bhi tujhe chahiye mujhe bol main tumhare liye la sakta hoon.
Muskaan: Fine.. juice fridge mein hai please sab ke liye lekar aa na.
Rahul smiled and was happy that muskaan wasnt soo mad at him right now, he got juice and some cookies for everyone.
Ridhima: Muskaan tu sanjeevani kabhi a sakti hain?
Muskaan: Wohh Dr. Keerti ne kahan ek ya doh din ke baad, lekin mujhe lag raha hai ki main kal hi a jayun. Ghar pe pura time akeli rehti hoon, its quiet boring.
Rahul: Muskaan, lekin tumhe rest ki zaroorat hai, aise kaise sanjeevani a jayegi?
Muskaan: Rahul main theek hoon..
Rahul: No muskaan, tu ghar pe rahegi, aur main tumhare saath rahunga taki tum bore na ho.
Muskaan: Arrey yeh kya baat hui? Mere marzi agar mujhe sanjeevani aana hai ya nahin, tumhe mere fikaar karni ki koi zaroorat nahin hai.
Rahul: Fikar karni ki koi zaroorat nahin hai ka kya matlab? Tujhe pata bhi hai ki mujhe tumhari kitni tension ho rahi thi?
Muskaan: Maine tumse kahan mere liye tension uthane ki, tumhe kyun farak parta hai agar main jiyun ya maru? Agar main mar bhi jaati toh tumhe koi farak nahin parta.
Armaan: Muskaan enough okay.. tumhe pata bhi hai ki rahul puri raat ICU mein raha hai, kyun? Sirf tere liye, ek bar bhi wahan se nahin utha tha, puri raath nahin soya, aur tum ho ki usko hi daant rahi ho?
Muskaan: Armaan, stay out of this.. i really dont care.
Anjali: Guys?? What is going on? Calm down. Muskaan try to understand, rahul tumse pyaar karta hain.
Muskaan: Anji tum bhi? Yeh pyaar nahin hai anji, agar atul tumhe aise chor kar chala jaata phir achanak ek din wapas a jaata, kya tum usko pyaar kehti? Tum log kabhi nahin samjho ge.
Rahul: Toh kya tum samaj rahi ho muskaan?
Muskaan: Kya?
Rahul: tum keh rahi ho ki woh log nahin samaj sakte, par kya tum yeh samaj sakti ho? Tumhe pata bhi hai ki main tumse kitna pyaar karta hoon?
Muskaan: Rahul dont start again, i just dont want to see your face ever again.
Rahul: Fine, you wont see my face ever again. Im sorry muskaan for hurting you.
Rahul got up and went straight out the door, and muskaan started to feel bad. Armaan and atul went out to look for him also.
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Im sorry guys, i didnt want it to be so serious, but it somehow just happened. If youdont like the part then you can change it. If its fine then we can continue writing about how to convince muskaan.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice parts Tina and Namrata!! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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YET ANOTHER ONE LEFT INCOMPELTE

SORRY GUYS IM NOT ONE OF THE WRITERS

BUT SURELY ONE OF THE MOST PUNCTUAL READERS

DONT DO THIS!!!!!!!PLZZZZ

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