FF: 'Unforgettable Love'---Chapter: 4

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Author's note: This is my first trying of writing a fan-fiction so please bear with me and read this piece of fan-fic into that light. Pardon me for my spelling, grammar or concept mistakes. If this fan-fic matches with any person, character, story unintentionally then I am really sorry for that as it's strongly a fictional writing and is meant to entertain readers not to harm anyone's feelings.

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Chapter: 4 (Shocked)



As Kul sir was telling about his past experiences he suddenly noticed that the girl with whom he got bumped into and who was till now sitting quietly, has finally rose her face up and he noticed she is staring at him with wide open eyes, without closing her eyelids…her eyes are all locked on his face only. He for a second thought (what the hell??😲) then he went to finish his story.


Geet who is all along lost in her own little world thinking about the cuteness, hotness about the man who is standing in front of her. She actually forgot that she is in a class of the subject which she hates the most and the person on whom she is staring at like shameless is her own bio sir. Without giving attention to what he is saying or where she is sitting now she is just thinking about him.



"Oh my Lord, I have never seen such a beautiful man in my entire life, Geet thought, look at his cute eyes, I can get lost on them. His skin color is so bright that it can light my life forever. His smile is so sweet that I can get lost with mine. His…his…his….," 😍 Geet is all lost in her deep thoughts that she is not even paying attention that the man is approaching towards her way.

Sir noticed that this young girl is again lost in her thoughts so he coughed and tried to catch her attention but nothing happened as Geet is staring at her all along. 😍Tania realizing it tried to wake her up by pushing her left elbow towards her way then suddenly Geet jumped up on her seat. Everyone laughed 😆😆and Geet felt embarrassed. 😳 Finding her sir standing infornt of her, she felt shyer 😳😳and her whole face became red. 😳




Kul seeing how her face color has suddenly changing couldn't stop himself and smirked quietly. 😊Then he said.

So young lady you are yet to introduce yourself to me? May I have the pleasure to know the name of this beautiful student?😊

Geet after hearing it started to shiver and her heart beat became faster and she realized her whole body is getting cold and though she wanted to respond but she realized that she lost her words now. 😕😕(Poor Geet)



Sir repeats his words but no nothing from the girl. Then understanding that he thought it won't be a good idea to force her but she might need some time after what happened today. So he went back to his chair and asked all to open their books.

Geet is still standing like a statue then Tania pulled her down.





Sir said; Since today is our first day so we won't read anything seriously but I want to start off so that you can do some home tasks and we can proceed tomorrow. So first chapter is about "Human Cell" anyone know what it is? Yes tonmoy tell me what you know about cell?

Tonmoy replied

Good boy now Tania you tell me. Tania replied.

Then he went to ask Geet. Ok young lady beside Tania you tell me what you know about Cell.

Geet again lost in her own self replied without hearing the question properly; "Heart beats"

Whole class burst into laughter😆 and realizing how she again did some mistake she was about to cry but sir stopped everyone by saying; "At least I have heard your voice" 😊


Geet again became 😳😳

Then the bell rang…

Ok class, you write about what you know about Human cell and I will check it tomorrow. said sir. Have a nice day.

Good bye sir 👏

Good bye students



And sir leaves so as the students except Tania and Geet.

So how on earth did you land her? Tania teases😉😉

Ermm😕

Oh you were refusing to join me and you even didn't listen to me but now my best buddy is already lost thinking about my hot sir, huh? Huh? Tania laughs😆😆

Shut up Tania, its nothing like that, stop talking rubbish ok😡

Then she ran outside the class. But as soon as she went outside she found that she has a call from the principal's office.

She thought that something is bad waiting for her as a call from principal is never a call for anything good. She remembered that it would obviously be because she bumped on the new bio sir which principal obviously did not like it.😕😲



She went to the principal office.

May I come in sir? 😕😲

Yes come in, principal replied in deep angry voice

Geet is shivering🤢

Principal shouted; 😡do you know what you have done today??

Geet stand still there

You silly girl, do you know what that gentleman must have thought about our school? Principal screamed.😡😡

Geet's eyes filled up with tears then in a shaky voice she replied;

I am sorry sir but my shoes

SHUT UP; principal shouted by interrupting her, I don't like excuses and you'll have to bear punishment for it.😡

Sir but..😕

Shut up; don't talk when I am talking. You will stay after school today and will write "I am sorry sir" for 1000 times😡

Sir please sir I am sorry


You shameless girl, how dare you talk after me, you will write it for 4000 times and you will not leave without finishing it if you do you will be suspended from this school, YOU GOT ME??? Get out from here..😡

Sir please I am sorry😕

GET OUT😡



Geet left the room as her whole face is filled with tears; she broke into tears crying silently.😭

TO BE CONTINUED

Please feel free to post your feedbacks, concerns, suggestions as it will obviously help me to continue with this story. Please criticism is always appreciated and you can even press the thank you button. I will try to post the next chapter soon.

(c) 2009- This fan-fiction is written by Sara and it belongs to her only. Please do not try to copy, redistribute this elsewhere or do not claim this as yours. All rights reserved.


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Posted: 16 years ago
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aaaaawwwwww what a rude principal i hope kul sir, does somethin on geet's behalf (like beatz him up) and wow stephhh, u did another amazingly,awesome job today and keep up the good work... I can't wait 4 the next part, and the way geet reacted 2 kulwant sirz handsomeness, i Would have done the same thing.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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AFTER WATCHING MMDR I HAVE TURNED INTO A GR8T KULWANT FAN😊...........SO I COULDN'T STOP MYSELF FROM JOINING THIS COMMUNITY( FORUM ) 😛

WELL I AM LIKING YOUR STORY VERY MUCH ..........PLZZ CONTINUE
ITZZ GOING GR8T............ 😃👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: geetaurkulwant

aaaaawwwwww what a rude principal i hope kul sir, does somethin on geet's behalf (like beatz him up) and wow stephhh, u did another amazingly,awesome job today and keep up the good work... I can't wait 4 the next part, and the way geet reacted 2 kulwant sirz handsomeness, i Would have done the same thing.



yup that was natural for any girls to react that way when a man like Kul appears infront of them
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: kulgeet

AFTER WATCHING MMDR I HAVE TURNED INTO A GR8T KULWANT FAN😊...........SO I COULDN'T STOP MYSELF FROM JOINING THIS COMMUNITY( FORUM ) 😛

WELL I AM LIKING YOUR STORY VERY MUCH ..........PLZZ CONTINUE
ITZZ GOING GR8T............ 😃👏



welcome to the forum and thanks for liking and reading my story. I am Sara and nice to meet you
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey luv

this is so great...i hv run out of words 2 describe u r story...lol
its just fab..bt i hate tht principal..poor geet
Angel
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: xXx angel xXx

hey luv

this is so great...i hv run out of words 2 describe u r story...lol
its just fab..bt i hate tht principal..poor geet
Angel



thanks for reading it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Aww...it was fabulous !!! I really loved it.
I feel so sad for Geet..but the storyline is amazing...The way you describe everything is simply outstanding.
you are doing a wonderful job !!! Can't wait fot the next part...so continue soon when you have some time.
( Sorry for my late comments..)
With love Reena
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaanlover

Aww...it was fabulous !!! I really loved it.

I feel so sad for Geet..but the storyline is amazing...The way you describe everything is simply outstanding.
you are doing a wonderful job !!! Can't wait fot the next part...so continue soon when you have some time.
( Sorry for my late comments..)
With love Reena



thanks hun and I was wondering why you aren't posting any reply, I thought u lost the interest...LOL
Glad that you liked it and yes I will post the next chapter asap, thanks Reena
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: stephhh



thanks hun and I was wondering why you aren't posting any reply, I thought u lost the interest...LOL
Glad that you liked it and yes I will post the next chapter asap, thanks Reena

I will never lost the interest of your beautiful Fanfic...actually after reading each new part I'm falling more in love with it...😳 😳
My laptop has been crashed that's why I couldn't write my comment...I have to use the computer of my di now when I get the chance...but you are doing a wonderful job !!! Keep it up dear 😃
And yes...no thanks 😉 😃
with love
Aapki dost Reena

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