Written Update- February 18th (Third Episode)

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Hi Hi!! Here is the next episode's written update!! Sorry for the delay. The fourth one should be up soon. Plz ignore any typos!

Jyoti scolds Deepu for talking in such a way to Sudha and when he tries to reply she tells him to keep quiet. Sudha runs away and Jyoti tells Deepu not to make excuses since Sudha is always scared and timid as it is and on top of that he makes her life miserable. Padma tries to stop Jyoti but she just says that they all know that ever since that incident that happened to Sudha when she was young, fear hasn't left Sudha's heart. She says that even though it will make them fell bad to hear it but they are more responsible than the incident for the way Sudha behaves. Deepu looks up at her shock while the rest of the family bows their heads. Jyoti reminds them that Sudha isn't some outside and that she is part of their family. She says that ever since going to Dadi's house Sudha is afraid to go to college and she braves going to the library and asks Deepu if wants her to stop that as well. She tells him to learn to respect his sister and to never try to act that way towards Sudha again. She leaves and Sushma follows her while Deepu leaves angrily. Padma gives the father a look and leaves as well.

Sudha is crying and tries to get her to stop as Sushma looks on. She tells Sudha that she told Deepu never to talk to Sudha like that again Sudha keeps crying and says she feels bad about the medicine. Jyoti says she'll get another but Sudha keeps saying it's her fault and that she always messes up. Jyoti consoles her and then says that arguments happen and if Sudha keeps being so straight and innocent people outside will walk all over her. She also tells her that if anyone talks to her like that again that she shouldn't just stand there and take it. Sushma and Jyoti take her inside.

Deepu is sitting with his mother and says that it isn't his fault and that it was Sudha's so why did Jyoti slap him. His mother tells him let it go but he says no. He says that Jyoti always takes Sudha's side because she has no confidence and what can they do about it. He says she is Dheeli and will always be Dheeli. His mother then says that what Jyoti did was wrong but not what she said and that Sudha is older than Deepu and that he cant act that way with her. She says that he needs to control his anger and leaves telling him to go to bed. Jyoti comes in as she leaves. She apologizes to Deepu and reminds him that he is their only brother and knows how much they love him. She says all their hopes lie with him and that he knows everything that happened with Sudha and asks why he behaves that way with her. She says they have to take care of her like they would a little kid and that she cant do what he can for her because he is her brother. She says she know the bottle was expensive but he could have talked to Sudha nicely. She gives him money to buy the medicine but he doesn't take it so she says she'll go on her own in the dark night. She is about to leave and he stops her and goes instead. Jyoti messes up his hair and smiles as he leaves.

In the morning Jyoti's scooter is broken and the mechanic says that he needs to buy parts. He tells her that it will cost 300-400 rupees. Sushma tells her that their mother is calling her. Jyoti tells Sushama to go stand by the scooter.

Their mother tells Jyoti she needs to talk to her and Jyoti asks if it's about the night before. Her mother says it's not right to slap her young brother and Jyoti says she cant take any risks with Sudha. She tells her not to worry and her mother is about to say something but she sees Sudha behind Jyoti and stops. Jyoti turns and calls her forward asking her to smile. Their mother then asks Jyoti for money for the house. Jyoti looks in her wallet but there isn't anything while Sudha looks on so Jyoti and her go to get money which is the money that Sudha had kept for Jyoti's new dress. She gives it to Sudha to give their mother and reminds her to smile before leaving. Sudhi smiles but becomes depressed as soon as Jyoti leaves. She remembers asking Jyoti for money for her new dress and just stares at the money.

Sushma is telling the mechanic to fix the scooter properly because Jyoti is not on vacation and that she has to go to dance then work and then the bazaar. Jyoti comes out and the mechanic says to fix the scooter he will need parts for sure. She looks in her wallet but there is nothing there and just then Deepu comes out reminding her about his shirt and leaves. Jyoti tells the mechanic to leave it and that she'll get the scooter fixed later. She apologizes to the mechanic and gives him some money for travelling. He leaves and Sushma asks her how she will get around without the scooter. Jyoti says it's okay and that she will walk for the next few days until she gets money from dance class. Sudha sees this and runs to give Jyoti her tiffin. Just then their mother shouts out telling Jyoti to bring 2kgs of potatoes on her way back as well as onions. Sudha gets sad hearing this. Jyoti and Sushma leave with Sudha watching.

Jyoti's parent argue about Deepu and Padma tells the father than Deepu is the one who keeps their house standing. She says their daughters will leave after they get married and he responds by saying on when she will let them. She says it's easy to talk and that after his illness only she knows how she kept the house standing. She says is Jyoti leaves then she'll be the one who has to go house to house cleaning pots at her age while he hides behind his newspaper reading as if his missing a single word will cause problems and he responds saying that if his living or dying makes no difference in his home then how will his leaving affect the world. Padma leaves sadly but turns and says that it may or not make a difference in the world but it makes a difference to some people. She leaves and he just watches.

Jyoti is walks to dance rehearsals and sits next to Brij who notices her sweating. Upon finding out that her scooter is broken asks when she'll get it back from the mechanic. She tells him she didn't give it for repair yet and says she'll get it fixed later. He takes out some money and asks if it is enough or if she needs more. She says she cant take the money and that she will get it fixed in a few days. He says and that she can return in later. She tries to refuse but he says that she has so much work to do and gets her to take the money telling her to pretend that he is being selfish and doing it for himself. Jyoti smiles and he tells her to put on her ghungroo and to get to rehearsal and leaves. As she puts them on her cell phone rings and it's Sushma saying she needs 500 rupees today for a school trip. Jyoti asks her why she didn't ask before and Sushma says it's because she wasn't planning on going but just found out that the marks on the trip will count in her final grade. Jyoti looks at the money Brij gave her and as Sushma apologizes. Jyoti says that she will give her the money in the evening. Jyoti looks sad and starts dancing as she does she remembers everything that has happed with Sudha crying, Deepu asking for a shirt, her mother asking for money and spins while holding her head. She is about to fall and Brij holds on to her as she does asking what happened. Everyone runs to them but Brij tells them to leave. Jyoti seems to have fainted and Brij tells her to talk to him. She wakes up and seeing him starts crying. She says she is very tired and wants to run away where no one will ask her for money. She says her salary is finished but they need money. She needs to pay tuition but has no money and that she has to buy medicine but has no money. Brij hugs her as she continues saying she is scared and that she wont be able to keep up and that she is very tired.

Preview: Brij tells her to run away with him but she says that they are her own and that if she was an elder son she run away then.

Plz let me know if I got something wrong or missed something. Use the Thank You button and dont copy this update onto other sites as it is only for IF members. 😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanxz but wat happened to sudha when she was little?

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