SS: Selfish Love (completed)

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Sheena

@Sheena_Row

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Posted: 17 years ago

#11

Tropa,

You gave them a union after their death...at least this way they are together...I am so sad yet happy for the duffers... 😭 😭

Great job! 👏 👏

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kun2004mun

@kun2004mun

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

awesum...i wish this happens in KS!!! really heartwarming...i actually had tears in my eyes!!!at last JW cud understand Bani!!!!At least the lovers united in death!!!!sigh 😭

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Harpreet

@hipreet

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Posted: 17 years ago

#13

that was amazing n sad 😭 😭
well done

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k12345

@k12345

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Posted: 17 years ago

#14

Nice story. Atleast Jai and Bani are united.

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divan

@divan

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Posted: 17 years ago

#15

tropa, great short story...love the twist of how Bani switched the medical report... and you know her selfishness for that one night doesn't feel gross the way KS was. The creatives can definitely learn a thing or two just from your short story. Well done. 👏

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kooliio

@kooliio

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+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#16

😭they died........so sad😭 😭
great ss 👏

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Bristy

@the_rain

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+ 7

Posted: 17 years ago

#17

Haila Jaani, when did you write this? And you never told me..chalo main tumse baat nahin karti 😭😭

Anyway, fantastic SS..off course it made sense....that was lovely...👏

Write more like this 😃