FF: A Losing Proposition,LAST PART+ TYN, pg 24

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Zaara91

@Zaara91

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Posted: 16 years ago

#201

Hey Dhani....sorry was busy..missed 3 parts...

Great part...lovely ending...finally jb meet at the end...loved what bani did...i'm much happy with that....thats what i would call a strong love...will you left the end incomplete...but i was very eagar to find out what happens to the Raizada business and what reaction would the Raizada's get once they find out about Kiran's hiden truth....

Meena

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Abhilasha Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#202

THere is no need for epilogue... raizadas kurinji entha thakkuva thilisindho, antha bago... they were not the best of creatures... but, because of them, jai and bani met again...

i dont feel, the end is incomplete... it has a sense of happiness without actually putting in words...

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suwas

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Posted: 16 years ago

#203

Very nice ending. It is open ended but to me Jai doesn't have any reason not to accept Bani. HE was staying out of the way from the issue as per his promise. But then now its Bani who broke up her engagement & Jai is not coming between her & Arjun.

This doesn't need epilogue. Yes there are lot of questions about what happens to Bani's dad's business, acceptance of JB, Jai's career. But then its upto imdividual to think .

As abhilasha said there is sense of happiness even without actual words.

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Indian_Goddess

@Indian_Goddess

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Posted: 16 years ago

#204

I am so sad that this FF is already over. I am going to miss it terribly. It was one of my favorites. 😳😃 I enjoyed the whole story throughout and loved even the minor characters. The ending was perfect-- mainly because in my interpretation, Jai goes running into Bani's arms. 😳 I am just a sucker for happy endings. But i agree with you, incomplete endings strangely have a completeness to it and it is at times appropriate. You felt that it was for this story, and I back you up with this a hundred percent. It really was a great ending to a great story. I hope to read more stories of yours, if you do decide to stick around despite KS ending. You are a wonderful writer with a talent with words. Really, your descriptive writing is worth for an applause. 👏 I would never be able to learn to be so creative with words like how you are. Hope you stick around and continue to treat everyone with your writing.

Love,
Dil

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Binish

@mayurmaaneet

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Posted: 16 years ago

#205

u know dhani u alwayz have unique endings.. lol.. but good nonetheless dear.. im glad atleas bani had the guts to stand up for herself. but u know wat i have alwayz seen the girl take the intiaive in fighting for her love but men dont. sriously.. besides this one unique case.. i was seriously stumped.. lol.. hope u have another SS for us..

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