new FF *friendship&love* part4 on pg9 16/3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Guys if you will like this scene I will start ff on it .it depend on your response. here is a small scene . name will be decide soon

Mayank and nupur

Where yesterday eposide end

Mayank woke up early as he does not want to miss his bus

Shouted: " Nupur get up we will be late"

No response

He shouted again : Nupur

And then walk to the door to knock he push it was open nupur was fast a sleep

He clear his throat but she did not get up

Walk near to her

Mayank: murmuring how to wake up this sleeping beauty. Pull the blanket

But nupur did not move

Mayank worried kneel down near bed touch Nupur hand frighten

Mayank Nupur shake her

Nupur is having high fever as she was playing in rain

Mayank : worried what to do now ?

To be cont if you guys like

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Posted: 16 years ago
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seriously the scene was quiet good do start ur ff

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi sweetie....
Totally luved it....
Forget the competition...change the date n add sum romance...
Continue soon...
Luv Ayesha...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Do continue.. wud love to read more. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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this really sounds gud..do comtinue.wud luv to read it..😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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AAAAWWWW!!!!!
KEEP WORKING YAAR!!!
ITS VERY NICE!!!
EXITED TO READ MORE!!!!
CONT SOON....
WHEN U HAVE TIME!!!
SEE U SOON!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i love it plzzzzzzzz contuied soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh gosh this soooooooooooo cool, i have butterflies in my tummy after reading it, ofcourse do continue and always continue writing. i love reading all mayur ffs.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Looks like a interesting plot! Would love to read more...😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey, this sounds really interesting....i foresee some romance blooming! 😉 Do continue soon.
Love,
Pallavi

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