FF:Pyaar ka ek un dekha ehsaas(prt-7,updt on pg14) - Page 7

superb👏
this was the perfect perfect romantic scene described so far. i was really wondering that Raj doing all this 2 kranti .....ahemm..ahem.....still thers no hope that stupid creatives would show RK romance in this pace.😡
😡 I extremely enjoiyed the hindi version of ur story especially where raj touches K chin..............trys to kiss her lips
😳 WoW


once more from my side this is for u pari👍🏼MINDBLOWING👍🏼

Originally posted by: archika

superb👏

👏
this was the perfect perfect romantic scene described so far. i was really wondering that Raj doing all this 2 kranti .....ahemm..ahem.....still thers no hope that stupid creatives would show RK romance in this pace.😡
😡 I extremely enjoiyed the hindi version of ur story especially where raj touches K chin..............trys to kiss her lips
😳 WoW


once more from my side this is for u pari👏

👍🏼MINDBLOWING

👍🏼

dearest pari
sorry i'm such a late lateef in commenting but what beautiful RK
scenes👏
K's declaration of love was too good, hope the morons are taking
pointers.
i was thinking all the people writing the MRD FF's here are doing a much much better job then those idiots whose sloppy work we are forced to
watch every week😡😡, just coz we fell in love with the characters and the concept of the show which BTW no longer makes any sense.
anyways u guys are doing a great job keeping the original MRD alive in our hearts.

Originally posted by: dnh100

dearest pari
sorry i'm such a late lateef in commenting but what beautiful RK
scenes👏
K's declaration of love was too good, hope the morons are taking
pointers.
i was thinking all the people writing the MRD FF's here are doing a much much better job then those idiots whose sloppy work we are forced to
watch every week😡😡, just coz we fell in love with the characters and the concept of the show which BTW no longer makes any sense.
anyways u guys are doing a great job keeping the original MRD alive in our hearts.

hey pari so sorry yaar. main itne din se comment karne ki koshish kar rahi thi but nahi kar paayi kabhi kuch ho jaat ahai kabhi kuvh.

Originally posted by: bhawna_dhunna

hey pari so sorry yaar. main itne din se comment karne ki koshish kar rahi thi but nahi kar paayi kabhi kuch ho jaat ahai kabhi kuvh.

but i simply loved it.

thank god hamare sabhi FF writers sensibility ke sath sochte hain.

mujhe bahut aacha lage sare parts especially the 4 th one.

and especially the last scene .

haiiiiiiiiiii mai marjawaan.

keep writing dear and listen agar (bhagwaan na kare ) MRd end bhi ho jaata hai tab bhi keep writing dear.

we all are loyal readers.

once again great job dear.

Tabhi baahar se aawaaz aayi KRANTI PUTAAR!!!!!!!!!KRANTI!!!!!

Kranti aur raj ne darwaze ki tarf dekha aur phir ek dosare ki taraf.thora sa muskuraye, phir karnti boli

K: chahayi ji bularahi hain!

Kranti darwaze ki taraf Jane lagi to raj ne kranti ka haath pakar liya.

K: rajveer haath choro chahiji bula rahi hain.

Rajveer ne Na karte uhye sir liya. (Bahar se fir awaz ahi KRANTi!!!! KRANTI PUTAR!!! Kaha hain tu)

K: raj plz darwaza kholne do chahiji bula rahi hain.

R: eahaaaa!!! (Rajveer ne fir sir hilaya aur ek tikhi se smile di.)

K: kyun pareshaan kar rahe ho Jane do na chahiji aaja jaye gi.

R: To mian darrta hu kaya chahi ji se are bhai apne biwi se romance kar raha hu.

Tabhi Chahiji ne darwaza kat kataya kranti!!! Kranti!! Tak tak tak Kranti putar darwaza kholo!!!!!! Dono chonk gaye aur unhone darwaze ki taaf ek saath dekha, kabhi raj kranti ko dekhta to kabhi kranti raj ko dekhti to kabhi dono darwaze ko dekhte aur fir ek dosare ki aur dekha ?..aur ek saath bole

K&R: CHAHIJI!!!!!! MAR GAYE!!!

K: darwaze ke bhahar kari hain! Ab kya kare!!

R: tum na!!!! darti bauth ho!

K: acha jase tum nahi darr the! (Kranti ne apne aankhe bhari ki aur gussa hone ka natak karne lagi aur muh banaya (puppy face))

R: bil kul nahi!!! Main nahi kabhi kisi se nahi darrta. Who kahte hain na "jab pyaar kiya to darrna kya"

K: oh ho!!! Bare bahadur ban rahe ho Na .To jayo kholo darwaza!!!!(Puppy faces banate huye kranti ne kaha).

R: HA HA!! Abhi khol ta hu! Insaan ko kabhi bhi kisis se nahi darna chaye. Jase main nahi darta Kisi se bhi nahi. Sivaye apni biwi ke!!!(ina very low tone) (Raj kudh se baat kare laga phir who darwaze ki taraf Bahra aur fir wapis agaya) tum kholo!!!

K: kay huya Mr. Bahadur sari bahaduri nikal gayi (kranti ne apni eyebrows tedhi ki aur ek smile raj ko dete huye kaha)

R: wase darrta nahi hu main kisi se, aur tumhe sharam nahi ati ek bimaar, choot kahye insaan ko darwaza khole ko bol rahi ho, bhahar chahiji hain!! Chahiji mujhe is halat main dekhegi to 10 sawal puchegi, isleyi tum kholo.

Aur bhahar se chahiji thi ki darwaza katkataye jarahi thi

K: who to wase bhi kare gi.

Kranti ne raj ko thora sa dakha diya jisse who bed pat girgaya aur bed ka ek kona raj ke kandhe par lag gaya wahi jaha use goli lagi thi aur dosri tarf karnti jaldi se darwaza kholne ke liye dorhi. Jatke ki waja se raj ke zakam se khoon nikalne laga. Raj ne jaldi se apne kandhe par haath rakh diya taki kranti aur cahhiji ko kuch pat na chal paye aur bed par se uth kar karha ho gaya.Chahiji andar aay aur kranti se sawaal karne lagi

C: kab se aawaaz laga rahi ho, darwaza katkata rahi hu, kaha thi kay kar rahi thi putar?

Karanti ke paas kuch kahne ko nahi tha usne raj ki taf dekha, jo us sutition main pasi karnti ko dekha kar apna sara dard bhul kar maza le raha tha, ar chahiji ke piche kahr ho kar ajeeb ajeeb se chahre bana rah tha jise dekh kar karnti ko gusaa arah tha ki raj uski madaa karne ki bazaye, ulte sedhe chahare banarha hain. Pfir who harbarahat main chahiji se boli.

K: who!!! Woh!! Main! Main! Chahiji, woh main BATHROOM main thi.(kabhi apne baal ko haath lagati , to kabhi gale par haath lagati , to kabhi muth par)

Yeh sun tye hi raj jo chahiji ke piche kahra tha hoth daba kar Hus ne laga. Aur kranti ne raj ko thedhi nazro se dekha aur muh bane lagi fir chahiji ki tarf dekh kar ek Bari si smile di aur fir thori se nervous hogayi. Chahiji ne fir raj ki taraf dekha aur kaha

C: aur raaj putar tu tune bhi nahi kola?

Ab kranti ki Bari thi muh bane ki use raaj ko ungali dekhayi mano jese ab who maza lerahi ho raj ke fasne se.fir Raj ne sar kujate huye kaha(mano jese kuch soch raha ho).

R: who main!!!,,, main HA main so raha tha, so raha tha main, tabhi awaz sunayi nahi di.

To tabhi chahiji ki nazar raj ke mathe par Lagi chot ki taraf gayi.

C: aur putaar yeh choot kese lagi tujhe, aur to aya kab, kah tha ab tak? (chahiji ne raj ke mathe par haath gumaya)

Raj ne chahiji ko bistar par bithaya aur khud un ke paer paas niche beth gaya aur?.

R: are chahiji aap bethye haan. Aur aap chinta mat kijeye yeh to mamuli c choot hain. Ab apne watne pe mar mitne ki kasam khayi hain to choti mothi karoche to lage hi na, aur jab tak choot na lage tab tak jaang larne ka maza hi nahi ataa.

Kranti jo raj ke paas khari thi who yeh sab sun kar man hi man kush ho rahi thi. Aur soch ne lagi ki kaya yeh wohi raj hain jo kabhi sirf apne siwa aur kise ke bare main nahi sochta tha, aur aaj apne mulak par mar mitne ki baat karrah hain.Chahiji ne raaj ka matha chuma, aur kaha

C: who maye bathut Kush naseeb hati hain, putaar, jinke bache apne watne pe mar mitne ko tayiyaar hati hain. Aur aaj tumne muje bhi unhi main se ek banadiya,mera aashiwad hamesha tere saath hain, rab tuje tere har kaam main safal kare.

R: bas chahiji ab aap dekheyi ki kese hum sab mil ke in goro ko apne mulak se baar nilkate hain.

Tabhi kranti ki nazar raj ke kande par pahi aur us ne dekha ki uske kurte par se khoon laga hain.

Good one Pari Keep updating and dont lose heart atleast we can enjoy the posts and FFs of each other.

yaar pari this is what we always wanted to watch .

Originally posted by: ranjnanarang

Good one Pari Keep updating and dont lose heart atleast we can enjoy the posts and FFs of each other.