Kitni Mohabbat hai-p-11/pg42/3/4

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi to all my name in Tanie..........I m been a silent viewer of this forum and honestly really love the ff written in the forum........So I was inspired to write one Michi ff i m doin it for the first time and i hope u all will forgive my mistakes.
The house look entirely Messy.God this guy will drives me crazy.She started lookin around and their was his dirty shoes in one corner,the bed complete mess,dishes not done.She gave one sign and started her work as an expert starting from cleaning the entire room,then the bed then cleaning his dishes,cooking for him,keeping water for his shower.After all was done she slowly moved out making sure noone sees her.
Booo.......shouted someone from back.She suddenly lost her balance and trip down seeing her in such a state the other person couldnt help but laugh out loud.
Ayesha ki bachi.........Ruk abhi tujhe bata ti hu(Ayesha wait now i will show you)
Commom Prachi Shah.........Main bhi dekhu tuj main kitni takat hai.......saying so she ran all the way down laughing her heart out.
Common Prachi saying she teased her down she hurriedly went down the stairs.Prachi quickly followed her.She was running out to catch Ayesha when she bumped into someone.She looked upto see the person in front of her.He was looking at her with complete rage.
Dekh nahi sakti kya..........(Cant you see),retored Milind.
Woh.........Wohhh........she completely lost her words.
Abb chodegi mera rastha......(Leave my way),saying give her an angry look.
Ji........Wohh........saying so she slowly move sideways.
Milind slowly went upstairs.He went straight to his room.And what he saw inside didnt give him any suprise the only suspence for him was till date he didnt know the person behind it,but then he wasnt complaining.He daily leaves his room at 6 for gym,till then he remembers his room to be a mess but then by the time he returns his room is spotless neat.And it wasnt in the morning even in evening the story was repeated.He tried his best to know who was helping him out so much but then he failed.After alot of struggle to find his helping angel he gave up.So as a token of thanks he always left a Red Rose for his helping angel.
Satisfied........Why dont you just tell him about it..........You have been crazily in love with him since you remember mocked out Ayesha angrily.
You know i cant Ayesha.........You know how he hates rich people and unluckily i fall in one........he looks at me like all the other rich people.No matter how hard i try he will not accept my love so i have no other option i rather have him looking at me with anger in his eyes then hatred.You know that dont you said Prachi sadly.
I just dont get you Prachi,you love him so much but how will he ever know if you never tell him that replied Ayesha fully irritated now.
I m happy with that now common,'Lets go,i m sure you dont want to reach out late'.Saying so Prachi dragged Ayesha.
Ok guys this is my first try hope you all will like it.I will try my best to update regularly.😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I absolutely love the concept Milind angry and all don't I love him that way. Good start I hope it progresses well.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: blind horizon

I absolutely love the concept Milind angry and all don't I love him that way. Good start I hope it progresses well.

Thank u so much.......Mune right i hab read all ur ff and i m ur ff biggest fan Kuch Is tara is definately my fav...........I m so glad u liked it.😊.........I also hope i can progress it well enough........thanks for the comment😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Taniee

Thank u so much.......Mune right i hab read all ur ff and i m ur ff biggest fan Kuch Is tara is definately my fav...........I m so glad u liked it.😊.........I also hope i can progress it well enough........thanks for the comment😊



Are you one of the silent readers too I seem to have a lot of them nonetheless I'm glad you opted to write. It'll help as you practice on it. 😊 Oh by the way thx for liking KIT.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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That was a good start hope you can improve on it as you told us but that was a wonderful starting hope to read more
and I am proud of you coz you atleast tried to write an FF and started it wonderfuly unlike people like me,I haven't even tried..lol
I couldn't even write one part for a group FF..I suck at writing and my grades for writing are not very good either.🤢
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Posted: 16 years ago
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lol..seen the title of ur FF I thought that u have posted it in the wrong forum by mistakes but no u haven't...it's another ff for Michi...
good start dear...
thank u😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: blind horizon



Are you one of the silent readers too I seem to have a lot of them nonetheless I'm glad you opted to write. It'll help as you practice on it. 😊 Oh by the way thx for liking KIT.

😊Yes i was one of them.............so m i...........i m sure it will.............Oh!it was lovely ff 😃😃i should thank u for writin it😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: may268

That was a good start hope you can improve on it as you told us but that was a wonderful starting hope to read more

and I am proud of you coz you atleast tried to write an FF and started it wonderfuly unlike people like me,I haven't even tried..lol
I couldn't even write one part for a group FF..I suck at writing and my grades for writing are not very good either.🤢

😊😊Thank u so much..........😳😳That was really sweet of u................I m sure u will do good at it once u start it😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel's life

lol..seen the title of ur FF I thought that u have posted it in the wrong forum by mistakes but no u haven't...it's another ff for Michi...

good start dear...
thank u😃

😆😆😆I can understand..............Yup...........Thank u so much............😃😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice start Taniee :) Hope Milind finds out about the angel's identity soon and like this gusse wala Milind a lot and welcome to the forum.
Yas

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