ss: do bichde hue dil......(for swati di)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi gals!! Swati dii had told me to write a story wid ..well im not tellinh u the plot..lol…let dat be a secret …must say im lucky dat I dint hav to make JW a bhoot n all..hehe…but hav to make him something else…
Chalo now gonna give a brief character sketch of my ss/ff…..

Jai walia: as usual the handsome young man…all girls are fida over him ..but he doesn't care abt them. He did a very big mistake in his life…so hes literally living nursing a fractured heart …..well for details u'l hav to wait…has a big empire of hotel business…walia group …now he is totally dedicated towards his job…filthy rich…only misses someone' company…someone whom he lost because of his one big mistake..

Bani dixit: the sweet innocent charming girl who's every man's dream now…but she was at a point of time very poor…n dat lead to a very big tragedy in her life….it changed her life…made her shrewd n finally she made it big…now very rich and a very influential name in hotel business…her only motto is destruction….destruction of the person who changed her life….changed her..

Pia: ex-mrs walia..well not exactly married to JW…as wen he lifted her veil he fainted n couldn't go through the complete the marriage ceremony…sftr the incident she lost her mental balance…now thinks herself as a yestr years actress …n always says comments by saying some stupid dialogues/songs…more details as story proceeds

Daksh: JW's personal butler…not exactly his butler more like a person who cleans his shoes, irons his clothes, etc etc….got job out of sympathy…now JW regrets his decision but he cant suspend him as he is the son of his old trustworthy employee…calls him dumb dhaba daksh..

Meera bai: bani's personal maid..more sort of her slapping bag-cum-maid….wenever bani has to vent out her anger she goes n slaps meera….since meera is illiterate n has to look aftr her pagal husband mr ad-bhoot deb she wrks for bani…her secret mission is to get bani married to some one…..
Rest of the characters are like in KS itself..bani has one elder sis rano….pis is her far off cousin…

So dats it …do read n tell me if I shud continue…not very sure abt dat…..

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.noone. thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Chalo teen part1 phataphat send karoo

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: YOOUSHA

Chalo teen part1 phataphat send karoo

lol..hani u commented😲😲
im gonna be behoosh 😆😆😆
i'l try to do it asap 😳😳
thanxs for reading 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
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haha I am not doing my assignment but I am reading ffs
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Posted: 17 years ago
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dats like a gandi bachi😛
waise im also doing something similar instead of studying..hehe
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Teenu you're at it again do please continue I want to read more. I love how you made Meera Bani's personal maid it's about time that she-devil gets a dose of her medicine and Pia that witch let her stay in that fantasy that way she'll keep her grubby hands off our Mr Walia.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey teenu gpood goin
aga ka update jaldi karo chalo
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ginger spice

Hey Teenu you're at it again do please continue I want to read more. I love how you made Meera Bani's personal maid it's about time that she-devil gets a dose of her medicine and Pia that witch let her stay in that fantasy that way she'll keep her grubby hands off our Mr Walia.

thanxs gingy for reading n commenting 😳
i'l defo keep sick pia ek kilometer away frm our hero😉😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: jeenal20

hey teenu gpood goin

aga ka update jaldi karo chalo

thanxs dii....will defo continue asap 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I liked Daksh in KS .......so not very happy the way u wrote about him.

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