FF: Kaise Mujhe Tum Mil Gayi ..Updt pg 2

Hello Shree'ians!!!!

Well I had nothing to do this weekend so i thought why not write a fanfic (m not a very good writer,,but will give it a try)..Do post comments..and let me know what you think abt it...so here it is..

Introduction:

Shree is a 21 yr old girl who recently completed college, she is not very satisfied with her life, though she has everything and belongs to a well to do family. She has only one best friend Gina who has been with her since school days... On the other hand Hari is a village boy..literate but arrogant...doesnt talk much...and is often rude...he too has only one close friend Dev whom he trusts very much..and shares all the secrets with him..

Character Pics:
Hari & Shree



Gina and Dev


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Part 0ne

Mom: Wake up Shree!...get up its 9:00am and u r still sleeping.
Shree: Yessss m getting up..Oh god..i had call gina she must be waiting for me...why didnt you wake me up earlier..I had to be there on time ..Hope I dont be late or else...
Mom: What am i doing then....now get ready fast or else you will really b late and dont forget to have ur breakfast...
Shree: Mom I dont have time for breakfast...m leaving..see you in a few days...byeeee
Mom: Uff! this girl will surely drive me crazy one day!...always gets up late and has to rush doesnt even eat properly...
Gina(Shree's best friend): Hellooooo..U R LATE!!!!!!!!...
Shree: m sorrrrrrryyyyyy!!...now lets go so that everything goes as planned!...
Gina's Mom: Hello Shree beta!!...how are you?
Shree: Sorry aunty. for being late... m fine
Gina's Dad: We would have left if you were five minutes late..haha..now get into the car we musnt delay nemore...
Shree is going with Gina's family...they are going to a boy for gina and if everything goes well...they will get Gina married...On the other hand Gina doesnt wanna get married the boy is Gina's dad's friend and he wants that Gina get married to him.....but Gina has other things in mind she doesnt wanna get married....

They went by road and reached the place in 4 hrs..

Mr Patel & Mrs Patel ( the boy's parents) were standing to welcome them....
Mr.Patel: Welcome.welcome Shah(Mr. Shah-Gina's dad)..how are you , its been long time..come lets go inside..
Mr.Shah: Yes Patel it indeed has been has a long time..
Mrs.Shah: Its so lovely to have you..ah and this must be Gina...and she is
Gina: Hello aunty she is shree my best friend!..we have known each other since highschool,
They enter the house...Shree whispers into Gina's ears that the bunglow is really nice...have you changed or mind already..
Gina(with a stern smile)...You wish!
Mrs.Shah: You girls why dont you go and freshen up...your room is upstairs on left..
Gina: Come on lets go before Mrs. Shah starts bragging about their son and makes us feel that he is the only male on this planet!
Shree: smirks..
Gina..shh...lets go..aunty we will be back in a bit...
In the room
Shree: m waiting to see your would be husband..hehehe
Gina: Oh I am also dying to see him..u know why
Shree: Why?
Gina: So that I could kill him!....actually i want to get rid of him asap...so the sooner we meet the sooner i am free of this marriage burden...but only thing that bothers me is dad..hope he is not upset or else it might affect his health too...
Shree: Dont worry girl...everything is gonna be fine...well we have to talk to ur i mean the boy..God! whats his name?
Gina: Dev...
Shree: Oh yes Dev...we no wait i will talk to him...you better not talk to him or else you will spoil everything as you dont know how to talk to people...
Gina: Whatever yaar...just get me out of this mess...

A Word of Gratitude

Thankyou all for reading my ff and liking it..it really means a lot and encourages me to write more...will definetely update soon!!!!! Thankyou once again!!!!!!

Originally posted by: ibrahim94

Wow the Very First FF here, Congratulation
Thank you so Much for starting one here, Means a lot to us
It will help us keeping this forum Active, thank you first of all u
Back to FF
It's Superb
I Myself writing an FF, But i must say, Well Done
It's a Lot better than mine ..
Please Continue Soon

Thankyou😳
it really means a lot to me that you like and appreciate my work....i bet urs is good as well...when are you posting it here????..looking forward to it!...but thanx a ton😊

[quote=act12]very nice FF.........i think ur the 1st one who wrote an FF, m not sure, anyways ur FF will really help this forum 2 grow.....anyways, i might do a oneshot but u neva know, anyways, i luv da show and m pleased that otha luv it too, wow thats a lot of anyways😆.......plzz cont. soon 😊 [/quote]

Thanx hun...😳

[quote=prome]hey emerald_jule
1st thanks for starting the very 1st FF of shree forum
i just love the title...and i made my 1st vm on shree which title is also kaise mujhe
https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1111461....so i guess its a gift 4 ur wonderful FF
really i love it
thanks alot again for sharing


Luv
Sanjida[/quote]

Thanx hun...the vm is really good...keep up the good work!😊

Originally posted by: devashree_h

Wow....i loved the what i read. Really well written.I love the contrast that you have...Hari is a village boy and Shree is a college going girl. So different from the show.

And you have included my other favourite jodi Shahi in it. Will be eagerly waiting the next part.

The Title is superb !! My current favourite song.😃

ThankkYou😳..yup i thght to try smething different from the show and i love shahi too!...

Originally posted by: Candylover

great FF...can't wait to read more 👏
Also don't forget to PM Pari the link of your FF so that she can put it in the media corner 😊

Sharona...glad you liked it..thank u much!..😳😊


~Erum

Part Two

Gina and Shree go downstairs to see that the elders are in talk of gina's wedding. Gina is somewhat annoid , Shree warns her not to make faces, Mrs Patel tells Gina to sit with her. After they are seated, Mrs Patel starts her usual talk'

Mrs.Patel: did you know my Dev has completed his bachelors in engineering and has got a new job too. Well he just needs an appointment letter, he has already given the interview. But you Dev is so talented I told him not to worry, think that he got he job already..

Gina(thinks to herself) Ya Right.!..I don't understand this lady doesn't get over her son ever!...She smiled..Mrs. Patel then starts explaining to Gina about their family business and how dev wants to be independent and start something different. Gina pretending to listen..looked at Shree who was looking somewhere else..looked like she was lost in thoughts.

Mr. Patel: Mother of Dev now will you stop talking about Dev and feed us something.

Mrs.Patel: Oh Ofcourse..m also so forgetful'seriously when I talk about Dev I forget everything.

Gina (to herself): Glad she knows atleast that much!...

Mrs.Patel goes to the kitchen to get the food ready. Gina then asks Shree if she is alright'Shree assures her that she is fine..

Food is served, its delicious..everyone enjoys it..even Gina liked it!..Shree was back to normal as well. Everyone went to their rooms 'Gina and Shree unpacked'changed into their night dress and laid on the bed'they both couldn't sleep so they decided to take a stroll in the garden

.Gina : Shree what will happen, Shree: Don't worry yaar..m sure we will'

Bang!!!!...there was loud thud'they went to see what was going on near the main gate'they saw that a car had bumped into the gate! A man in shirt..got out of the car and stamped his fist at the car...he saw the watchman was asleep..he went by the watchman and gave a light slap enough to wake him up..

The watchman woke up and looked at the man..he stammered DDDeevvvvSir!...m sorry Sir didn't how I went to sleep'

Dev (anger in his eyes) was about to say something when he first time saw Shree..who looked scared he didn't get a clear look as the only light that was there was the car's headlights'.he couldn't see Gina was standing behing Shree.

The watchman opened the gate and Dev parked his car and went upstairs without saying nething. Shree and Gina exchanged looks and went to their room neither of them spoke..they laid on the bed and then

Gina spoke :Shree what if I really get married to this guy..he has quite temper'

Shree: Yup, the way he was staring at the watchman I thought today was the watchman's last day on earth!..

Gina: Omg!...Shree how in the world am I going to tell him that I don't want to get married to him!...Hey Bhaguuuuuu why me!!!!!

Shree: Don't worry we'll figure something out, I will try

Gina : NO!..Shree he is dangerous what If he slaps you..Omg no, no!..she put the blanket on her face..

Shree looked at her smiled and she too went to sleep.

In the morning,

Gina, Shree, the elders were having breakfast when Dev came downstairs all dressed up'Mrs. Patel smiled'Dev gave her a nod,

Mrs.Patel: Aree Dev come here beta meet your uncle and aunty..u know the one I talked to you about!..Dev hesitated then went to the dinning table, he greeted Mr. & Mrs. Shah..when she was about to introduce Gina and Shree'he got a phone call..

Dev: Mom..I gotto go its really important

Gina gave a sigh of relief'it was the first time that Dev looked her and stared at her for few seconds..

Mrs.Patel: but beta let me..

Dev: Mom later plzzzz'bye (he kissed her on the cheek)..and left

Mrs.Patel: No problem the kids will meet each other in tonight's function.

It is an inauguration of one of the new products launched by Mr.Patel's company desingned by Dev!...

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