~Dil Dosti Etc..AR...UPD! Part 32 and 33 Pg70 5/4

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Sai Prasanthi

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Hey!!!

I liked the 2 parts.. it seems to be very interesting...AR had a tiff... hmm... lots more to know... add me to ur PM list... would love to read more...

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

hey hun, that sounds like a good start...will wait for u to unrll the track!

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Krani

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: santhideepu
Hey!!!

I liked the 2 parts.. it seems to be very interesting...AR had a tiff... hmm... lots more to know... add me to ur PM list... would love to read more...

awww thank you soo much!

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Krani

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: spln
hey hun, that sounds like a good start...will wait for u to unrll the track!

Hey!!...thanks so much for commenting...I will be updating tomorrow! 😃

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Hina

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

hey
just read both the parts
the emotions quite intense
do update soon
wanna read more

love
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Krani

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: hinanaziri
hey
just read both the parts
the emotions quite intense
do update soon
wanna read more

love
Hina

Hey thank you soo much!!....I will be updating tomorrow!!😃

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Krani

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

So here is the part as promised....I am colour-coding the Armaan and Ridhima's POV (point of view) as it makes it easier to read the fanfic.....hope you like it and please do comment! 😃

Ridhima Armaan

Part 3

Armaan was purposely walking behind Ridhima, giving her all the space she needed.

The last thing he need was another fight, right in the middle of the hall of the hospital…very near to Dr. Shashank's office.

Ridhima walked into the room, ignoring Armaan who was behind her.

She smiled at Rajeev and proceeded towards his bed.

She took the file beside Rajeev's bed and went through it. Taking her stethoscope, she turned to say something to Armaan, but before she could, Armaan snatched the report from her hand and started going through it himself.

Glaring at him, Ridhima turned towards Rajeev only to find him staring at her.

Frowning she took the stethoscope and noted his breathing.

"you are breathing alright...there doesn't seem to be a problem and you just have a fracture on your leg, but we will still do some tests just to make sure everything else is alright." Ridhima said, putting the stethoscope around her neck.

"Whatever you say doc!" Rajeev said, giving her a wink.

Ridhima immediately froze at the mention of 'doc'. Vivek used to call her that. All those memories came flooding back to her.

She was running, as fast as she could in those heels when suddenly she tripped and grabbed onto the tree in front of her for support.

She turned around to see how far he was from her and whether she had a chance to run away.

But he was right behind her.

She put her hands together to plead to him to stop, but he kept coming towards her

"Please mujhe chor do! Please!"

Vivek just smirked and kept coming towards her. He got hold of hr dupatta, and help it up high, mocking her.

The tears were flowing freely now, her whole body was shaking and it was a wonder that she could still stand on her two feet.

She closed her eyes, wishing it will all disappear, and go away....hoping that it was a bad dream, but when she opened her eyes, he was still there, and a lot more closer than he was before.

She whimpered and pleaded to him again. He just smirked and started leaning his head towards her.

She closed her eyes expecting the worst, but it never came.

Then she heard a cold voice, "chod usse"

She opened her eyes to find Armaan standing behind Vivek, with a hand on his shoulder, stopping him from coming closer to Ridhima.

He looked at her for a brief second before he turned back to Vivek.

She felt a shiver go down her spine.

His eyes, they had turned completely dark. From green, to a very dark brown.

They had turned cold, and full of anger, but they still provided her with a sense of comfort.

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Armaan quickly looked up when he heard "doc".

He immediately looked at Ridhima who had gone into a daze…no doubt thinking about that night.

Rolling his eyes for caring, he cleared his throat, half because he wanted Ridhima to snap out of her daze and half because he wanted Rajeev to turn his attention towards him…away from Ridhima.

"I think you should go to sleep now, because the more rest you get, the better." Armaan said, putting the file back in its place.

Rajeev nodded, and gave another glance at Ridhima, who avoided both their eyes.

Here is the part....don't forget to comment!😃

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Krani

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Edited by sweetdamage - 16 years ago

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Sai Prasanthi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

hey dear.. that was nice little part.... so Armaan has feelings for her at the corner of his heart lets see... interesting.. keep going... thanks for the PM and contnue soon.

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Krani

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Posted: 16 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: santhideepu
hey dear.. that was nice little part.... so Armaan has feelings for her at the corner of his heart lets see... interesting.. keep going... thanks for the PM and contnue soon.

Thanks for your comment!...and yes he does have tiny bit of feelings for her...though he is trying to supress them as much as possible 😊...thanks again for commenting! 😃

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