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Posted: 19 years ago
#41
Part-23.....Tho Angad was fully drunk,he was conscious.
A:I & kripa got separated.kripa became another man's
wife.that does'nt mean thT kripa cheated me.
Misti:then how did kumud become another man's
wife?angad,u r too nice. A:the fault is mine.only
mine.that's a TRAGIC STORY.u DON'T KNOW THAT. M
kept silent.She goes out.A-K look at each other.
Song:hum dil de chuke sanam….k cries.she holds his
hands:is it bcoz of me u r drinking ?why r u like
this?plz don't drink anymore.won't u obey me? A:I
can't kripa.no rescue from this.that's my fate.its not
bcoz of u.u shud'nt worry thinking about me. K:plz don't
drink A.i can't see u getting destroyed due 2
overdrinking. A:I no that u & others r worried about
me.even M whom I scold everyday gets worried.but
I'm helpless. K:plz cum with me angag./I'l giv u gud
treatment. A: then what about ur husband?how wil he
react? K:I'm not thinking about it.now in my mind only
this thot is there. A:I'l cum kripa.but not now.but I'l
cum b4 my death. K:angad! A:now u go kripa.i told u
noi'l cum 2 u. K:but angad…A:don't tell anything.i can't
cum now. K removes her bead necklace & puts it around
A's neck:this is 2 remind u 2 cum 2 me. K cries a lot
holding his hands.then she goes out.M was standing
there. K:plz look after A well.its my request.
M:yes.i respect him a lot.do u no why?bcoz eventho I
luv him a lot,kripa is his breath.that strong his luv
is.he is even sacrificing his life 4 luv.i don't hav the
rite 2 hinder it.eventho I'm near him,he is seeing &
knowing only u.who can't luv such a nice luver?if I was
in k's place I wud've thrown everything 2 reach
A.i'm jealous of u kripa. K controls her tears .
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#42
Part-24.....misti,angad,josh
dance:chalak{Devdas}.A faints vomiting blood. M
brings a Dr. Dr:I'm sorry,angad's condition is serious. M
was upset.she looks after him well. A:misti,why r u
doing this? M:why,u can't tolerate my presense? A:ur
effort will b waste.that's why I'm upset.i no that I
won't liv long. A:misti!I no that u r talking like this
due 2 ur hatred 4 me.i'm bad no. A:I don't think u r
bad. M was surprised:then? A:I feel that u r nice.
M:ur hatred 4 me has gone? A smiles:yes. M:now what's
ur feelings 2wards me? A:I feel a liking 2wards u. M
was very happy. A:if I did'nt no kripa,I wud've luved
only u.but kripa is my everything.so plz don't expect
anything from me misti. M cries. A thinks:the hearts
of both kripa & misti r paining due 2 me. A
dreams both K & M dancing 2 the song Dolare….
A:misti,I want 2 go 2 kripa. M::no
angad.now it's the time 2 rest. A:why shud I
rest?whats the use?bcoz my death is near. M:plz don't
tell like that. A:but that's the truth.let me go.i
promised her.if I don't keep my word,again I'l b a
cheater 4 her. M weeps. A gives a letter 2 her:giv
this 2 josh. A goes. Josh cumes 2 M's
house. J:call angad.i've brought licker 4 him. M:angad
is too weak 2 hav even a drop.if he drink again,he'l
die.do u want 2 see his horrible death? J was
speechless. M:angad went away. She gives that letter.J
reads it. M:whats written? J:that he's going 2 see
kripa.he has written that its kripa's bead necklace
that's giving him the strength 2 liv.i'm getting tensed
thinking about him.i only destroyed angad by giving
poison. He breaks the glass bottle of licker & wounds
his hand. M:r u mad?angad wil become sad if he cumes 2 no
that u did this. M puts medicine on his wound. A
looks at the bead necklace given by kripa.the beads fall
down.G takes all the beads 2gether & puts it in the
pocket.   ;
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
ive just gotta say ur fan fiction is sosososo coooooooooool 😉😃
Edited by xxsherbyxx - 19 years ago
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#44
Part-25....A was really tired.he gets tensed:oh
god,wil I b able 2 reach kripa? He reached near
k's house .he faints. prithvi;s mom Damini cums 2
K &P:1 guy has fallen b4 our house.he's almost
dead I feel.he was drunk. K was shocked.she thinks:wil
he b A? K:who is he?whats his name? D:no idea.
K:had he worn a bead necklace? D:no.had worn a small
gold chain & a ring.i think he's rich. K thinks:if he
has'nt worn the bead necklace,then he won't b A. She
was relieved. S:but ppl found sum beads from his
pocket. K was shattered.tears cum from her eyes:that's
given by me.he's Angad. P was shocked. 1 servant
cums:that person is not dead.we made sure.he is
breathing. K was relieved:let me go & see him. D:why
?no need. K:prithvi,plz let me go.A is my life.
D was shocked. D becomes angry:no u can't go 2 see
ur lover. K:plz mummiji..D:u r married.but still u want
2 b with ur lover? K:plz…its 4 me A traveled such a
long distance eventho he's sick. D:no u can't go. K
was determined:no,I've 2 go. K runs. D:prithvi,catch
ur wife.she is mad. P did'nt move. D:what kind of
husband u r? D tells the servant:catch
K.don't allow her 2 go. P:no,don't b an
obstacle.let k go.otherwise she'l die. D was
stunned. A moves his lips:kripa…K reaches near
A.she weeps:angad! K keeps his head on her
lap:angad...A:kripa,I came 4 u.i've 2go soon. K
cries:don't go angad. Song:kabhi alvida na kehna……. K's
tears fall on his face. P cumes & snatches k's
mangalsuthra.K was shocked. P wipes her sindoor.K was
stunned. P:these were the obstackles of ur luv.that r
detached from u.u r needed most 4 A.not 4 my
son.K,A is like this bcoz of me.bcoz of my
relationship with u.now that's over.go with A. K
was surprised:P! P:yes.i'll help u 2 giv him
the best treatment.i'm sure that A wil cum back 2
life.bcoz u both r made 4 each other. K:thanks a lot
P.i'vent seen such a gr8 person in my life.u used
2 call me Parvathi Devi.but the real God is urself. P
smiles:funny. K:I promise that tho our relationship is
over,I'l b ur subham's mom's 4ver. P smiles:thanku
K.but our relationship is not over.i'l remain as ur
best friend. K smiles. After sum months:K in the
pooja room is praying:kabhi khushi kabhi gham…..Sindoor
is seen on her 4head.A comes near her with a smiling
face & prays.K puts the prasad into his mouth. The bell
rang.K goes & opens the door.they were surprised 2 see
misti there. K:M! A:what a gr8 surprise!
M smiles:I came 2 see u both.u both rock 2gether.
A-K smile. M:it's a gr8 pleasure that God made u
both 1. K:cum,hav prasad. They giv M a gud
treat. B4 going M:Best wishes 4 ur happy married
life. A:thanks a lot M. K:u've 2 cum again. M
smiles & goes. A-K look at each other & smile.
A:I want 2 liv seeing u always. K smiles:finally god
heard our prayers. A smiles & hugs K. THE END


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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
yeah Angad did not die. pheeew 😃

Loved the ending
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
👏 fantastic....
sorry 4 late reply..I was busy coz of examz

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