Hum dil de chuke sanam-fanfic 4 A-K

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Posted: 19 years ago
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This fanfic
is my version of DEvdaS. PART-1.....AAngad is
returning 2 his native place after 14yrs.after getting
used 2 the lifestyle in USA,he did'nt feel like going
back but its bcoz of his parents' force,he's going
back .since a few months Angad is in bombay.he was packing
everything 2 return.his only friend josh cumes:why r u
in hurry 2 go back? Angad does'nt say anything. he helps
him 2 pack.josh gets a letter from a book. J:whose
letter is this? Angad takes it & looks:this is kripa's
letter . J:who is kripa?ur kitten? A gets irritated:its
a girl. J:o i see.u did'nt tell that u've a gf in ur
place.so this is the reason behind ur sudden return 2 ur
land. A:what rubbish!how many glamorous girls r here
near me.i did'nt feel anykind of attraction 2wards
them.then how can i feel that 2 this simple village
girl?i'vent seen kripa since a long period.shewas my
childhood friend.1st & all we used 2 send letters.later
it was stopped. J:but i realy feel that ur
relationship with kripa is not sumthing that shud be
broken.i think the destiny is 2 bring u both
2gether.that may be the reason u r 2 b back. A:u r
mad.by the way a bad smell is coming from u.u've drunk?
J:ya. A:don't u feel shame 2 tell it openly? A:i don't
feel shame 2 tell the truth like u.u feel shame 2 admit
that u liv kripa. A:u r talking rubbish after
drinking. josh smiles. angad cud'nt sleep thinking
a bout josh's words. he takes & reads the old letter
sent by kripa:angad,did'nt u tease me when i said that a
flower is cuming the the plant?tho its late,a yellow
flower has cum.when u cum here,i'll giv 2 u. A
thinks:yellow...luv's color. Angad was carried away by
nostalgia...the days spent with kripa.



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👏 continue karnaaaaaaa plzzzzzzzzzz
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Part-2....Angad remembers how naughty he was & how sweet kripa was.Kripa was brilliant in maths,but angad was just the opposite.he remembers their painful departure when he went away from their place.kripa stood near him when was going.they both cried a lot.due 2 laziness angad stopped writing letters,but kripa continued. angad thinks that mayb bcoz he was not replying later she also stopped sending letters. A thinks:why am i thinking this much about kripa?she was only a friend.i remember the little kripa clearly.how does she look like now? he becomes restles.Immediatly he goes,paints kripa with a guess. A:wil kripa look like the same? angad feels like seeing kripa like anything.josh's words r still in his mind. Kripa was very much trilled 2 no that angad is cuming back. she goes 2 the temple:God,angad is cuming back after many yrs.thanku so much god 4 bringing him back. she takes vrith 4 angad.then dances with lamps:silsila....angad comes back,gets grand welcome. angad goes 2 kripa's house.kripa's parents did'nt recognise him. A:don't u recognise me?i'm angad. they were surprised. mom:angad!!wow! dad:i can't believe ur change. they chat. M:angad,don't u want 2 see kripa? angad wants 2 see her very badly.but he does'nt say that. M:she was always enquiring whether u r back. angad becomes happy 2 hear it. M:kripa...cum here.see who has cum. kripa cumes.she was really happy 2 see angad.angad cud'nt believe his eyes.bcoz kripa was exactly the same person in his painting. Angad thinks:without seeing kripa's present look,i painted.it was right.its a gud omen.but kripa looks more beautiful than in my painting. M:kripa,did u recognise him? K:yes,angad. Angad-kripa look at each other. he cud'nt sleep thinking about kripa.he was impressed by her beauty.he sings dreaming about her:woh chand jaisi ladki {Devdas}.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part-3....Angad-kripa meet in the temple.they walk 2gether silently.losing patience Gangad decides 2 talk 1st:how did u recognise me? kripa smiles:why did'nt u cum here all these yrs? A:i did'nt feel like cuming here.did'nt want 2 see any1. kripa wants 2 ask like this:u did'nt want 2 see me? K:now also u r not interested in this place? A:slightly interest started cuming. kripa smiles. K:why did;nt u send letters? A:i did'nt feel like sending. kripa becomes sad.she thinks:how cool angad is.not at all bothered about anything. A:why did'nt u stop sending letters? K:i thot u 4got me.so i did'nt want 2 desturb u. angad cud'nt speak. K:u 4got me? A was speechless. K:u did'nt think about me even 4 once? A:where is time 4 that? kripa becomes sad,bcoz she expected a positive answer from him. K:but i can't count how many times i used 2 think about u each day. it touched angad's heart. A:ok,how is ur studies? K:what studies?it got stopped early. A was shocked,bcoz K was the brightest student in the school who was the pet of the teachers. A:why?u lost interest in ur studies?shocking.. K:no,i was 1st.but its really expensive 2 continue studies.we r not so rich like u no. kripa's eyes filled up with tears. angad smokes. K:u r smoking b4 god?its a poison. angad throws away the cigerrette. kripa smiles.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part-4...Angad:kripa,we'll play cards like we used 2
when we were kids. Angad laughs:ok. they play.
song:Bairi piya...Angad-Kripa play .kripa runs 2 her
friend harshini. K:there is a happy news. H:what? K:angad
came 2 my house 2 see me.i can't still believe this.
H:angad might've cum 2 ur house.but its only a dream
that its 2 see u. k's face becomes dull. H:whats in
ur mind?u r shy 2 say? K:no,i'm prowd 2 say that i luv
angad.ppl maynot swallow it.but i'll tell this truth.
harshini was shocked 2 see her frankness. H:u've the guts
2 tell that u luv angad? K:when we r in luv we'll hav
the courage 2 say that.if u'd guts u will not hav agreed
2 marry a man whom u r not in luv. harshini was
speechless. K:i'll soon tell angad that i luv him.why
shud i hide my luv 2wards the person whom i'm in luv
with? H:what if angad does'nt accept u? K:i'm sure that
he'll ccept me. H:how can u b sure about it? he
might've seen mANY BEAUTIES BETTER than u IN
aMERICA,BOMBAY...K:maybe .but he cannot see any charm in
the m.only i'm beautiful in his eyes.thats the magic of
luv. kripa imagins romamce with angad.Song:morey
piya.... kripa's Gayathri cumes 2 see angad's mom naina. Gayathri
:shud we delay it? Naina :what r u talking about?
G:about conducting the wedding of angad-kripa.
naina stares at her.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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it is very very good please cont. 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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HMMMMM......LOVLY DEAR..... 👏 SEEM DEVDAS WID A-K......HMMMM.....R U GOIN 2 SEPARATE THEM LIKE ASH-SRK IN DEVDAS... 😭 TUM BHI EKTA BAN JAOGI... 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part-5....Naina:r u mad?i can't see kripa as my bahu. Gayathri was shocked:but then u were pampering her..naina :yes.but its too bad 2 see another meaning in that. G:that was also ur acting. N:ok.if angad's dad Dileep hears it...G:i'm not scared. N:tht much prowd u r?4 that what do u hav?do u hav money? G:we'll hav money soon.A rich man will marry kripa.she'll liv in all kinds of facilities.that time this family wud've got destroyed.its my challenege. Sunset..Angad under the mango tree. kripa cumes there:Angad! A:kripa..u..here..u r not scared 2 cum ?its going 2 be really dark. K:i wanted 2 see u.so i came here.i don't hav anything 2 get scared. A:i really admire ur courage.in abroad i've seen many girls who r not scared of anything.but i never expected a simple girl like u 2 hav courage. K:why r u here under the mango tree during sunset? A:i luv the beauty of sunset.i admire beauty.this tree brings me old memories. kripa smiles. Arngad thinks about his childhood.when he was not talking 2 kripa,due 2 sympathy,kripa cumes & givs him a mango.Angad shares it with kripa. K:mango tree is the tree of luv. A:is it? J thinks:let the mago tree of luv b the witness of our luv. K:angad,i adore u.u no that? A:i no that.thats why in school tho i did'nt do home work,u used 2 accept the punishments that i'm supposed 2 get from the teacher.u gave me sweet mango.i was too late 2 understand that u r my best friend. K:angad,u did'nt understand whati said?angad,i luv u.4 me u r my luver as well as my hisband. Angad was shocked. K:angad,u don't feel anything? A:what 2 feel? K:u don't feel anything about my confession of luv? A:no. kripa was shocked.she felt that she's going 2 faint.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hye i like reading ur story bt dont make this like devdas coz i dont like that movie plz change the story line

(hey sorry if u feel bad)

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