Originally posted by: smritisashi
Oh yaar anuuuuuuu do't thank me man i shouldb be the one thanking youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu for such a blissful treaaaaaaaaaat i swear had i not managed to read this kal i wld be surelymissing somethingggggggggg helllllllllllll specialllllllllllll
where should i start frommmmmmmmmmmmm i loved everything in totoooooooo the way u potrayed that feeling of lonelyness which was engulfing herrrrrrr which was singalling her out even amidst such a huge crowd it was beautyfullllllllll coz u know its not easy for a person like Ashi to feel secluded from happynesss usually she is of the sort from whom happyness emanicipates like a magnetic forceeeeeeeeeeeee she actually emits happyness and happyess touches her and the go on spreading to every person in her radiant haloooooo so yeah it definitly wasn't easy for her to feel so vaccant so empty so lifelesssssss and u described it sooooooooooooo beautyfulllllllllly i mea i felt like shimmers in my eyes coz the reason of her lonelyness was the absence of one faceeeeeeeeeee in whome rested her entire happynesssssssss
and that wholepang of jealousyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy woooooooooooooooow brilliant just absolutely just ashi's perfect way to vent out her jealousy she wld never let it shown on her face but her behaviour wld tell volumes about her inner turmoilllllllllll but but the soulllllllllll of the firist part of the fic was that breif ay moment in the canteeeeeeeeeeeeen oh my gooooooooooooooooood it was so killingggggggggggggggggggg i was so dammed chooooooooooooooooked reading that bit jab their eyes met for a second and he said i will if i had a reason......oh my gooooooooooooood....ad ahsi understood his hint but pride stopped her from confessing it then and there....the conflict u showed between both their prides and their real feelings it was so dammmmmmmmmmmmed real sooooooooooo relateable soo soo ayishhhhhhhhhh and the fact that both wanted to start a fresh at the strike of the first second of new year was just so hopiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiish becoz both knew in each other lied their hopes their dreams their everythingggggggggggggg
and the the whole regret which she felt her self anger of not listeing to the screams of her heart her heart was litrally screaminggggggggggggggggggg its love for yuvi but she was agai and again ignoring it for fear that resurrected from her past....and the part when he whispers her name like the soft breeze oh my gooooooooooooooooooood those were my favoritest favoritest linesssssssssssssssss from the entire fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiic oh my gooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Her name reached her on the breeze, spoken so softly that at first she thought she had just imagined it. There was something about that voice, however, so low and deep, and the way her spine tingled with a shiver, told her it was real. Very slowly she lifted her head and looked over her shoulder. The next minute her heart slammed in her chest and her breath caught tightly in her lungs. There, standing a few metres away was the one she had been craving to see all night, the one who had filled her thoughts all night, her Yuvi. With the distant glow of the party lights at his back he looked as if he were surrounded by an orange halo and it made his eyes glow, melting her heart. He gazed back at her silently, equally enchanted by the ethereal vision she made standing alone in white against the deep purple backdrop of the night. Gazing into one another's eyes the world momentarily faded away and in those precious seconds they both felt as if they had been touched by magic. Suddenly Ashi felt everything was possible, she could even feel a smile twitching at the corners of her mouth and that gnawing loneliness inside her had vanished. She felt filled with a warm glow of hope and her dreams once again seemed tangible.
such beautyfullllllllllllllllllll beautyfulllllllllllll beautyfulllllllllllllllllllines such magical flow of word shit i have read these lines like so many times but still everytime i read them again i feel them much more impactfulllllllllll i wish i cld engrave these lines somewhereeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee they r so dammed pure in one para few lines u captured the whole essance of lovingggggggggggggggggg the hwole purity what way to express as if they were touched by magiccccccccccccccccccc wooooooooooooow and in that very istant she realized the power of love that love doesn't makes u weak or dependent it gives u the hope the courage the strength and the pasison to believe that anythinggggggggggggggg and everythinggggggggggggg is possibleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...goshhhhh...i dunno am just so touched by these linessssss....this is my way of expressing loveeee this is what love means ot me and to read it written in someone else's pen has made me reinforce my beliefffffffffffffffff its just so beautyullllllll that is whay one shld never fear loving anyoneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee coz love can never neverrrrrrrrrrrrrrr be wrong ya the perosn u ended uploving might turn out to be unworthy of u but love as a feeling can never be wronggggggggggggggggg its the purest most powerfulllllllllll form of energy that is the basis of this whole dammed universe and in this split second both of them felt that energy reverberatingggggggggggggggg through themmmmmmmm
and then the whole chaos confusion frustrationnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn u showed between them the hwole hurt and pain of expecting the unexpecteeeeeeeed from each other and then the bit where she was storming off but he reacted instantly coz he heard her voice askig him to followwwwwwwwwwww his heart to fight it out for the sake of winning his only hopeeeeeeeeeee for today tommorrow eveyr second of lifeeeeeeee ad then the whole picnic settinggggggggggggggggg the purity of the surroudning wid nothig materialistic wid no pomp and show so pure so natural so unhyped so out of theusuallllllllllll it all just added the beautyyyyyy and the last bit was just so etherealllllllllllllllllllllllllllll oh my god their forheads otuching and both of them grinning into each others arms remindeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed me of that famous ay piccccccc which we all love so dearlyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy rememberrrrr?? yuvi in red ashi in greeeeeeeen oh my god i cld actually see that pic written on those wrodssssssssssssssss
brilliant brilliant brillianttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt i totally loooooooooooooved it and nejoyed reading please write moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee meri fairy please trust me i adore ficsssssssssssssssss and shots...{specially wne i dont have to write them haha}........i think i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeee dem eve more than a vidmixxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx coz if its welll expressed if the words r written form the soul as if u mean the words really the they can actuallyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy make u see whatever is writtne words r the most powerful thingggggggggggggggggggggg on this earth they can give u any vission any shape any feeling u want them to shape into....i was like in such a dreamy ayish land yesterday after reading it after so so long felt that wayssssssssssssssssss...thankooooooooooooooooo...thankoooooooooooooooooo tons and tons and tons and tonssssssssssssssssssssss...totally hats offffffffffffffffffff....and do write moreeeeeeeeeeee wld be waiting EAGERLYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY DESPERATELYYYYYYYYYYY LOONYLYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
LOVEE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU FOR THIS U ROCKKKKKKKKKK UR POWER OF EXPRESSION IS MAGNIFISCETTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT HATS OFF TO UUUUUUUUU
"tw"😉
ps..........i tried to write whatever i felt while reading it in as short a time as possible isliye there r no emotycons in the post but me giving u hundred blushingggggggggg emotys hudred htousand dreamy emotys and thousand and thousnadsssssssssss of thnak you huggysssssssssssssss
Ishaani
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