SS: Yours Lovingly (Complete)

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Hey guys,

I was watching a movie in my mother tongue and an idea clicked. This following story has been shamelessly 'inspired' from it which might have been 'inspired' by another movie (I don't know). I have made many, many changes according to convenience.

Hope you will enjoy it!!!

Please leave your comments (good or bad)!!!

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Yours

Lovingly…

(A)

Jai Walia sat with a poker look watching his ex-girlfriend sob away to glory, he extracted his hand out of her strong grip with much difficulty…after a long day's work he had come to have some fun with his friends in the pub when he spotted his over-sensitive ex-flame and before he could run away she had came hoping to him almost throwing herself on him… …

Meera sneezed into the 100th tissue paper, while jai gave her a disgusted look…jai handed her another tissue with the most sedated expression… …

"I talked about you to many people…you know…" meera said trying to stop the fountain of tears which was going to burst out again for the 100th time…

"I don't…" jai said as aloofly as possible…

"My uncle who is a physiologist said that you would turn into a serial misogynist if you continue like this…" jai gave her the most icy cold look, he somehow managed to keep his hands in control who were itching to throttle her narrow tube like neck…

"If you enter a relationship thinking that you don't want to marry then you will eventually not marry, you should at least give people a chance…" meera said looking at him…

"Whatever meera…" he said in the most irritated voice…

"You don't care do you? Oh!!! You never loved me…never…" meera got up brushing her tears which were flowing in continuum…

"Meera, I think you should see your uncle again…" jai said with a plastic smile…meera gave him a blank look not quite understanding the sarcasm or the intended pun in his words… she left howling… …jai let out an exasperated sigh…he really couldn't believe that he actually dated that psychopath, he now understood why their first date was the last one… …he turned around to go inside and get himself a drink when he saw his another ex-flame Roshni clinging on to somebody wearing the most flimsiest clothes on Mother earth, before he could register anything he leapt and ran out as if practicing for the coming Olympics…
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Jai Walia, the owner of the Empire, Walia Group of Hotels, was a chauvinistic alpha-male, handsome and a Casanova…he indulged in some 'harmless lechery' according to him but had very grave effects on all the beta-women in his life…for him it was as necessary and important as drinking water for survival…he was not ungentlemanly, but was a sophist when it came to the opposite gender, he certainly stated his intentions before entering into any relationship and clearly abided by those terms, but the string of women which was endless perceived themselves to be too sensuous, beautiful, wonderful et al and thought that they would chain him down and he would get molded into the husband material just like any other virile male…but they forgot that it was Jai Walia and not just any other virile male…anybody cannot change him, if at all change was required he would do it himself but not under the compulsion of any other species…


His casual flings were the talk of the town and his brutal heartbreaks too formed a major part of the grapevine… but he was least bothered of what people thought of his image…his 'I give a damn' attitude was mostly mistaken for high-handedness and arrogance, on the contrary he was a very easy-going, cool guy and certainly had a genteel side to him which the outside people were unaware of…


He only believed in one mantra…"Work hard and enjoy Life…"

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Jai entered the Walia Mansion, it was eerily quite, of course it was 2 in the morning, everybody must be in their respective dream worlds… he silently climbed the stairs which lead to his huge room…throwing the coat away he plopped his hefty but perfectly toned body on the soft four-poster bed…his eyes suddenly fell on the calendar kept on the bed side table…it was the 29th of the month…he got up at once…How could he have forgotten???

Searching for his notepad, he took out his expensive black-ink pen and started writing something… …
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Bani hurriedly got hold of her hand bag, collecting a few files, she left her cabin, the office was almost deserted, it was nearing 8'o clock, she took out the keys of her scooty from the bag, pushing them inside the slit she turned it…she sat on the seat, put on the helmet and started the scooty and rode away towards her house in a modest speed…

It had been nearly a year and a half that she was working in the Lake View Hotel as the manager, and she was enjoying it thoroughly, she had worked as an assistant in another small hotel during her internship days and had the experience to take up the responsibility despite being young, just about 24, she had achieved quite a lot and was secretly proud of herself which she always was embarrassed to accept in front of any body else…she worked hard and harder…she reached to the office the earliest and left at the last…her colleagues nicknamed her as "Busy B" because she worked all the time, but she was not a workaholic as most of them thought she was, it was just her extreme love for her work and that she hated to sit ideal and thus kept doing something or the other…

But she was a wonderful human being and people admired her men and women equally, she was kind and helpful but she had one major problem, not serious though but if once you mess with her she would never again even look at that person, if anybody's name was registered in her bad books she would forgive that person but would never forget it…

She adhered to her principles that much…never crossing the line…

Bani parked her scooty in front of her house…picking up the files she went inside…to be welcomed by her father busy reading the newspaper, her mother trying out a new dish and her sister studying…
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Bani was reading a file, her legs spread out straight, her back resting on the wall…

"Di…" rano called out…

"Hmm…the letter has come…" rano said handing her a white envelope…bani took it…

She opened it…

Dear,

How are you? I hope you doing fine? I am fine here. I wanted to meet you; I am planning to come to Mt. Abu, please tell me the date, time and place according to your convenience. I would make arrangements accordingly. I will be waiting for your letter.

Take care.

Yours lovingly

Ranveer…

Bani folded the letter and kept it back inside the envelope, every month it was ritual to get one and reply to it, probably it was time to face the truth…till how long will she play this cat and mouse game…she sighed…keeping the envelope in the drawer she asked rano for a pen and paper, she started writing…
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Bani was extremely busy for the past two days…since it was the 1st of the next month they had to clear the accounts and make balance sheets…she was extensively sorting out the hotel's returns for the past month…she was busy typing when she heard a faint knock on her cabin door…

"Hey B…busy…" a chirpy female voice called out, it was pia her colleague cum friend cum assistant

"Hmm…" bani asked still looking at the computer screen…

"Got a fax from head office Mumbai…" pia informed…bani stopped what she was doing…she looked surprised…they had already send the annual report of the hotel's impeccable performance a week ago, then suddenly a fax…she wondered what was it about…

"Fax…kyun…" bani asked…

"Guess what…" pia said excitedly…if bani's eyes weren't wrong pia was actually blushing…

"What???" bani asked rather flatly…

"Jai Walia is coming to Mt.Abu…Can you believe that?" pia jumped in sheer glee…

"I thought he would be coming here in his next birth only, glad he changed his mind…" bani said coolly and returned to what she was doing earlier…

"I can't believe you B…THE HOT and HANDSOME JAI WALIA, our boss is coming and you are so cold…"

"Over-stressing the words will not make any difference pia…"

"Whatever B…"

"Well, make arrangements for his stay according to his schedule, the best suite we have, allot it and ask the workers to be on their toes, I know they do a good job but just send everybody a circular regarding his arrival, I don't want any mishaps and we should put in our best foot forward since he is visiting us for the first time…"

"Hold on dear…I will do that…Bye …"
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"Yeh achanak se Mt.Abu ka plan kaise…" jigyasa, his sister asked rather curiously…

"Honeymoon pe jaa raha hoon…" jai said drinking his juice…

"Kiske saath maamu, that Ms. Crybaby Meera or that Ms. Vampire Roshni…" sahil, his teenaged nephew said earning himself a smack for his father aditya…

"Sahil, bohot batameez hogaye ho aaj kal…" aditya reprimanded…

"Oh!! Common aditya, I only told him about them and he even helped me to christen them with such fancy nicknames, cool na…" jai said smilingly…while sahil gave a thumbs up…

"Yehi sikhao bachon ko…jigyasa your brother is ruining my children, tum kum thi kya…" aditya said taking another paratha…

"Tony, take away those aloo parathas, aditya you are not getting any of those…" jigaysa ordered…aditya sulked while jai and sahil had a good laugh…

"Kuch nahin di, I have never seen our Mt. Abu branch, I was reading the report and was quite impressed, socha ek baar dhekloon, and congratulate the staff as well…" jai said casually…

"Oh!!! Actually jai my friend Seema, you know…"

"Who seema…"

"Seema Aggarwal, Mr. Ramesh Aggarwal's wife…"

"Haan toh"

"Her sister is coming down form America finishing her studies, Sonali; she wanted you to meet her…"

"Please di, I am not marrying any foreign returned Somali or whatever…Tony pack my stuff and send it to the office, I will directly leave…"

"Yes, Sir" Tony said

Jigyasa looked at her brother's retreating back, hoping that probably he would get somebody whom he would want to spend his life with, till how long he will roam as singleton, after a period you do need someone to return to, to love and cherish…she shook her head…
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Bani saw her colleagues running from here and there overlooking the arrangements, she refused to call them staff as she believed they all worked together and not under her, The Jai Walia was set to arrive tomorrow. It was not like she hated Jai Walia but she surely disliked him and that was a constant, his personal life was an open book, his pictures splashed over every other magazine and page3 newspaper, he was quite a photogenic and could be easily attested as the perfect model, but she disliked his frivolous attitude specially with women, as her special views about the 'elite class' were not at all friendly…more than his personality, she hated the fact that in the past year and a half he had not even enquired what was going on in this hotel, she had worked so hard for all the profits which was only raising, and not even once did she receive an appreciation letter form him, somewhere she felt let down as if her work was so unrecognized… …she surely wasn't looking forward to meet the man himself in flesh and blood…

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(B)

Bani parked her beloved scooty in the premises of the Hotel, it was a gift form her father on her 21st birthday which she cherished a lot, her usual place where she parked it every day, she was about to turn and go inside when she heard screeching tyers of the car and a loud bang…that was it, her beloved scooty was lying on the floor…bani's anger shot up…parking the scooty properly and examining it, she walked towards the car, a man came out least bothered or guilty for the small little insignificant accident…

"EXCUSE ME!!!!" bani almost screamed on his back…jai shut his ear…

"You scared me lady…" jai said as he turned around, bani did recognize him but she was seething with anger and an opportunity to pin Jai Walia down, how she could miss that…

"What the hell do you think of yourself mister, are you blind or what how dare you hit my scooty…" bani said as if she was ready to jump into a battlefield…

"Oh!!! Well, I didn't see it…" jai said glancing over her vehicle…

"Then better see an eye-specialist…and I will send you the bill for the tail lights Mr. Blind…" saying she left in a huff…jai looked at her, thinking what was she, she was certainly a pretty woman…he went inside…
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Jai Walia stood in shock, the angry woman was his manager, and she must have known him but still she shouted at him…the nerve of this chit of a girl…

"Welcome, Mr.Walia, I on behalf of all my colleagues welcome you to Mt. Abu…" bani said with perpetual fake smile… handing him a bouquet of colorful flowers…jai reluctantly took it…

"Thank you so much…" jai said grumpily…pia who was dreamily looking at him, appareled in a nay blue suit with a blue satin tie over a light pink shirt, he personified the modern metro-sexual male… she almost got a heart-attack when he smiled at her…

"Pushkar will show you your room sir…this way…" bani said with a sugary smile…

Pushkar lead him to his special suite… …

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Jai couldn't help but be impressed by the order and discipline of the staff, especially bani Dixit, the hotel was doing exceeding well since the day she joined, it seemed her hard-work had rubbed on to everybody…

Suddenly he heard a knock on his door…to see bani standing in her usual confident way…

"Please come in Miss. Dixit" jai said rather authoritatively…bani hated to admit that he really had a magnetic aura surrounding him which did not fail to influence her either…

"This is the latest report sir…" bani said handing him a file…she also kept a paper-chit besides it…

"What is this…" jai asked a bit irritated, he still couldn't digest the fact that a mere manager had shouted on top of her voice before him…

"Bill sir, of my damaged tail lights…" bani said coolly…jai gritted his teeth…

"Very well knowing that it was me, Jai Walia, you shouted over me, and called be blind, what do you think of yourself Miss. Dixit…?"

"Even if it was Vijay Mallya in your place I would have done the same thing Mr. Walia, being Jai Walia doesn't give you any authority that you would hit my scooty and run away clean…"

"God, my scooty, scooty, a piece of damn metal…here take it…" jai hurriedly signed over a cheque and held out…

"Thank you so much for your chivalry, I thought I would have to go to court to get my compensation…"

"Get lost Miss. Dixit…" he roared in utter disgust…

"Have a nice day sir…"

Bani left the office…

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"I must say, you people are extremely efficient and competent team and I have decided to revise all your pay cheques…" jai announced… everybody broke into a thunderous applause…

"And please enjoy the lunch…everybody…" jai said…

Bani nibbled her food with least interest, she watched jai openly flirting with the female workers, she shook her head as she noted pia hovering around him like a bumblebee…

She turned the other way and walked to a far away corner…she looked at the view outside, it was the famous Nakki Lake, the beautiful scenery of the lake was visible form every room of the hotel, that was why it was called The Lake View Hotel…everytime she saw it she found it even more beautiful and serene, but today she somehow found herself in a dismal mood to enjoy anything, even a pay-rise…

"You are angry again or is it a manufacturing defect Miss. Dixit…" jai said flashing his brilliant smile…bani who was momentarily startled gave him a cold stare…

"Do you hate me so much Ms. Dixit…" jai said…bani looked out feeling a bit guilt-stricken; she had been unnecessarily rude to him which was uncalled for…

"I…I am sorry Mr. Walia, I was rude…it's just that…" bani trailed off not knowing how to justify herself…

"You hate me…" jai said amusingly…

"No…"

"That's news, whenever I see you; you are seething with fire like a dragon…"

"It's just that I don't appreciate you…" bani said honestly…

"What do you mean…" jai asked a bit confused…

"I have been slogging day and night in the office, and never once got any feedback came from you or your office, you could have just send an appreciation letter or an acknowledgment letter , I love my work and I feel hurt when my team is not given much due, okay you are giving us a pay-rise but even if you had said that you appreciate our work that would have been fine…you may find it silly but I am attached to my work, I do it because I love it and not just for money…" bani said and left looking at him once…

Jai kept staring at her retreating back…he never thought like that, he worked, worked hard, but it was just a mundane passion, earning money, splurging it, it didn't quite matter to him, it was just habitual for him, but he never thought it in a different perspective as he saw bani saying it, it was much more than just work
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Bani stood a the sunset point, wearing a light blue color salwar kameez, her long hair which was held by a clip was dancing in the wuthering evening wind, she had asked him to come to this place…she looked at the gift she had bought, she gazed the sky, there was still time for the sun to set…

Jai climbed his way up to the sunset point; carrying a gift, she had asked him to come here… he once again read the letter…

Dear Veer,

I hope you are fine? I am fine also. I want to meet you too…please come to the sunset point on the 6th of this month, evening 5'o clock. I will be waiting for you.



Take care.

Yours lovingly

Shirley …

He stood, looking around; he couldn't find any young girl standing alone…he deiced to wait…he stood apart…when his eyes met with bani's, she was standing at a distance…

Bani frowned seeing jai, she decide to ignore, she was here for something else…

The endless blue sky was filled with a myriad of colors, the sun was slowing setting down…everybody was leaving…

Jai and bani looked around searching; jai ran his fingers through his hair, not knowing what to do, he suddenly spotted a cardboard strewn about, he rushed to it so did bani…keeping their gifts aside they held on to the cardboard…

"I need it bani…" jai requested…

"I need it too…" bani sounding soft…

"Okay, I don't want to get into an argument…I will make it into half…"

"Okay…"

Jai ruthlessly tore the cardboard into two, giving one to bani, he picked up his gift, bani picked up her gift and stood away…they wrote something on the cardboard and turned to face each other…

Jai was shocked to read Ranveer written on bani's cardboard, while bani was astonished to see Shirley written on Jai's cardboard. Bani went towards jai in hurried steps…

"How do you know Shirley…?" bani asked

"How do you know Ranveer?" jai questioned…

"Where is ranveer? I have to meet him…"

"First tell me where is Shirley…"

"Mr. Walia please, I have to meet ranveer…"

"Bani, please, Shirley kahan hain…"

"Pehle aap ranveer se milayi mujhe…"

"Bani, Ranveer…ranveer is dead…" jai said sadly…

Bani stared at him shell-shocked…

"Aap… …" words failed dot come out of her mouth…

"Where is Shirley…?"

"Shirley… Shirley is dead…" bani said tear forming in her eyes…jai's face lost color…

"All those letters …" jai asked dumbfounded…

"I had written thinking that ranveer will be broken…and all those letters which I got…"

"I had written them, thinking that Shirley will die as she was very sensitive…"
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"Ranveer was my best friend, he always used to talk about Shirley and how much he loved her, she being a Christian ranveer's family didn't approve of their relationship, but ranveer had somehow convinced them, he was going to talk to Shirley's parents, that day we were celebrating his happiness, he was going to the railway station when he met with fatal accident…and the very next day Shirley's, letter came, I had replied to it in ranveer's name…" jai finished…silence filled the air, the evening had become dark, the winds had become violent…

"Shirley was my best friend too, we studied in the same class since childhood, Shirley was really happy when ranveer's letter came that he was coming to talk to her parents, she waited form him everyday at the station, but ranveer didn't come though his letters did come, she was going into depression day by day, I tried to make her understand but she didn't listen, one day her parents decide to get her married in their community, her step-mother had even threatened her, a night before her wedding, Shirley committed suicide…" bani broke down crying…

A few moments later, jai and bani walked away in different directions…enveloped in silence and sadness… …

Tears are the medium that help pain to ease… Floods of tears are not always enough. When the pain is as huge as the mountains and the tears are as strong as glaciers miracles of healing can happen but just like the great gorges the resulting smoothness and beauty takes time. A whole lot of time… …
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Jai numbly sat in his room…finding himself at loss of words for the firs time probably…his eyes fell on the gift…To Ranveer, the label read, it seemed they had picked up the wrong gifts, he opened it to find a beautiful structure of Taj Mahal enclosed in a glass square, a note was stuck to it…

Every meeting paves way for a separation. In our life's journey we meet many people, we like some, we hate some, we love some, we leave behind some…but our Life goes on…with their beautiful memories still intact… …

With best wishes


Bani…

Jai read and re-read it again…Bani he echoed, for the first time he had seen the real person behind that professional business suite…

Bani sat lost in her own realm of thoughts hardly paying any attention to Rano's blabbering…her eyes fell on the gift, it was not hers…she had accidentally picked up jai's gift…she opened it…a beautiful glass globe enclosing a bride and a bridegroom was there along with a note…

Someone had said…If you find your love then think that God was kind enough, if you didn't then think that you became one with God himself…

May God bless you.

Jai Walia
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Jai was briskly walking, reading a message on his mobile when he collided with someone…it was bani, who had bent down to pick up the papers of the file…he bent down to help her, he waited for her to speak, to shout at him, to call him Mr. Blind…but she didn't speak…

"I am sorry bani, I didn't see…" jai said…as they got up…

"It's okay Mr. Walia…" saying bani left, her eyes were vacant…jai suddenly felt a dull ache in his heart, somehow bani's sad face disturbed him as well…surprisingly for the first time…
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Bani sat in her chair staring into oblivion; it was difficult for her to cope with this new revelation, Shirley's death had come as a shocking cruel truth, the morning when people were bringing down her dead body, it pierced her heart to see her lively best friend dead all of a sudden…she composed herself… people were leaving the office, the waiters were going home, the workers of the next shift were arriving…

"Hi bani…" a male voice called out for her…she looked up to see Jai Walia standing at the entrance, with a small smile…his eyes were lost…

"Hello, Mr. Walia…" she said as she got up from her seat…

"Bani, I know we haven't been on good terms, but at least we can be mature and resolve our petty issues…" jai spoke up…

"I think you are right…" bani said trying to bring a smile…

"Friends…" jai said extending his hand…

"Hmm…" bani nodded her head…clasping his hand…

"Can I have dinner with you before leaving…" jai asked politely…

"You are leaving…" bani asked a bit surprised…

"Hmm…I have to catch the early morning flight…can we have dinner together…"jai asked expectantly…

"Of course…but I will choose the place…" bani said sounding a bit stubborn…

"As you wish mademoiselle…" jai said bowing a bit…bani chuckled…
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"Bani are you sure…" jai said feeling a bit uncomfortable sitting behind bani on the small seat of her scooty…

"Mr. Walia, chill, you will be fine…" bani said putting on her helmet… and the scooty took off with a zoom…she increased the speed…after a while jai was enjoying his ride, the cool air hitting his face…he never rode scooters or anything on those lines, he enjoyed the feel of her smooth hair caressing his face, the smell of the shampoo was intoxicating to his nostrils, it was a liberating experience form him, something he never experienced before…his face became pale as soon as he saw a bumper on the road…he was damn sure that he would fall off…

"Bani…bani bumper is coming, I will fall bani…" jai said fear gripping him…

"Mr. Walia…its okay, stay calm…" bani said decreasing the speed…

"I don't want to die so early bani…AAHHHH" he let out a scream and held her waist tightly, bani stopped breathing…she unknowingly increased the speed.... the scooty flew over the bumper resting on the road again with a loud thud…jai removed his hands…bani's shoulders slumped…

"God bani, you almost killed me…" jai said breathing a sigh of relief…bani's throat parched due to what happed a minute ago…she didn't reply…

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"I am not going in…" jai said looking disapprovingly at the small dhaba kind of restaurant…

"Mr. Walia come, the food here is awesome…" bani said dragging him inside…

It was small yet elegant place, decorated in a typical Rajasthani way, there were only low wooden boards and they were required to sit on the comfy cushions on the mud ground…jai felt awkward to sit but the atmosphere was warm and of course he enjoyed bani's company, soon their food arrived, it comprised of all authentic Rajasthani delicacies… and jai did enjoy the taste which was so earthy and Indian…they spent their dinner chatting and laughing… surprisingly…
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Two months later…

Everything as back to normal, bani was busy in her small, simple life and jai was busy in his big, complicated life…

But something which they both looked forward too was their occasional phone calls…they did talk at times of random things but were enfant about what they felt for each other…as if slowly they viewed each other in a different light…

Bani's disliking towards him had suddenly evaporated; she found a totally different and sportive side to him, she had started respecting him for the person he was and not just the name, the fact that he wanted to save an innocent life for the sake of his best friend really touched her, she at times found herself smiling remembering their stupid bickering…

On the other hand, Jai Walia was not seen around with any new women off late, and also not the party circuits, people were surprised so was he, he often stood in his sea-facing balcony immersed in deep thoughts…mostly comprising of Bani Angry Dixit, he felt as if he had discovered a totally new person inside him after he met her, the silly anecdotes of their baseless squabbles lit his face with a lingering smile…whatever he was feeling was strange to his senses but was certainly nice…

"Pia, common, cheer up…" bani heard sania consoling pia who was looking very upset…

"Kya hua…" bani asked

"Kuch nahin B, Jai Walia was seen with yet another woman and pia is upset, common B, he is a millionaire, how do you expect he would be interested in girls like us…they belong to a different class…" sania stated truly…and something hit bani, yes, sania was true, how can anybody expect Jai Walia to be interested in someone so plain like her…how could she had become so unreasonable… the interval between a cold expectation and a warm desire was filled by expectations of varying degrees of warmth or by desires of varying degrees of coldness…she cursed herself for being so vulnerable, so what he is nice, he might just be pretending, a person can't change overnight…

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Jai felt irked, for the past few days Bani was avoiding his calls, what had happened all of a sudden he wondered, she was back to Bani Angry Dixit mode…out of frustration he didn't call her for the next few days but a constant nagging feeling ate him from inside, he remembered their last conversation, she sounded upset rather than rude…

"Mr. Walia…please, don't bother yourself over a plain girl like me who can't match up to your standards, moreover I have better things to do…" saying she had ended the call abruptly…

Suddenly it clicked him, did she think he was just playing around… God!!! Picking up his coat he almost ran…

Jigyasa who was coming in almost toppled down thanks to jai…who ran outside…

"Isse kya hua…" jigyasa asked sahil who was busy playing a game on his mobile…

"Loveria…" sahil said grinning at his mother…jigyasa looked amused…

"Before you ask, her name is Miss. Bani Angry Dixit…and this time it is very serious, mammu is gone…clean bowled…" sahil said…jigyasa looked confused as well as happy…sahil started narrating the brief he got from his mammu dearest…

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Jai barged into bani's cabin but she was not there…he was going out but pia spotted him…

"Mr. Walia…" she almost shrieked, assuming he had come to see her…jai cursed himself…

"Mr. Walia, how are you…??? You came to see me…Oh!!!" pia was going gaga over him…jai got frustrated…

"Pia…look there…" jai pointed behind her…pia turned around…to see nothing…meanwhile jai had slipped away…pia returned to her work huffing and puffing…

Jai got inside the car, it had started raining…

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As Bani walked she felt cathartic drowning in remorse and self-pity, all the pent up emotions inside her released in the personified form of the salty tears… Her eyes blurred with tears and two big blobs slid from her cheek…The rain drummed its beat on the ground and so did her chest…It beat so loudly that she thought she could hear it over and above the whoosh of the raindrops…her whole body wracked with sobs and she cried copious tears over her lost love…her sacrilegious tears mingled with the fresh raindrops…The rain continued to pour, there was no respite, the grey and dark clouds seemed ominous… It looked like even the rain God took pity on her... …
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Bani was arranging the fresh flowers over Shirley's cemented tomb…she smiled, life couldn't make Shirley and Ranveer one but death did surely made them one for eternity… she sat there gazing at the epitaph…when suddenly she didn't feel the wetness of the rain over her skin…she looked above to see a black hood of umbrella covering her…and Jai standing holding it… bani got up to face him…he gave her small smile…bani broke down into a set of fresh tears and slumped onto him…he hugged her...placing a kiss on her head…they both walked out of the cemetery…hand in hand…
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Yours lovingly

Dhani

(God bless)

P.S.: That was utterly @#$ %^&*()! @#$%^&*, don't ask me what that means because even I don't know. I seriously should keep away from anything mush. The film was also utterly @#$ %^&*()! @#$%^&* but was sweet in a way.

Hey, what's happening on Kasamh se, I caught its repeat telecast today after nearly a month, I had not even read the updates, but it seems everything is goody-goody, and even after barbarically killing Pushkar, Veer is still roaming around and now he misses his father that was sheer CRAP!!!! I don't know if something positive happens, like Atharva coming back, I must just watch a glimpse. But I could never have imagined that I could ever get de-addicted to KS, but I managed it, I am really proud of myself for that stupendous achievement. Anyways, thoda zyaada hogaya.

Bye!!!Bye!!!! Sayonara!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey Dhani......wonderful story ...........liked it so much ........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice work dhani
in the film actually the two main leads actually fight like cat and dog firts i thought it was anand movie but then its another one i rememer the film but not the name

i liked the last scene of the umbrella
bye
rose
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Posted: 16 years ago
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which movie is that? i dont remember any telugu movie in that storyline... not that i know all the movies in telugu... 😃

simple and elegant... thats the story...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovelyreddyrose

nice work dhani
in the film actually the two main leads actually fight like cat and dog firts i thought it was anand movie but then its another one i rememer the film but not the name

i liked the last scene of the umbrella
bye
rose


ditto.... i too thot it was anand... but its not.... the scooty scene reminded of anand... 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi dhani,
another beautiful story
very sweet n simple ..
i loved it..
n i think u write mushy substances pretty well
do write more..
teenu
PS: i also got de-addicted from KS recently!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice story, the ending was little sudden well it was sweet story!!!
Happy New Year!!!
Take care
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Posted: 16 years ago
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v cute story- luv after many sights!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi dhani
that was a beautiful story. written well. take care
love kamy
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dhani
that was a gr88 ss
loved it
no dear u are good at mushy stories
it was a very sweet and cute story
very well written
thanx dear
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