Adhuri Kahani- (AR) Note - pg 3

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Hey guys, As Rab is continuing, I promised my readers a new tale when You're still the one ended so I am back with a new tale.😳

I am completly insipired by ths VM - so do watch it - Made by Liza who inspired me to write this story.. and Kanak's vm - Maybe Baby I can't let you go
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LNnFeGXnbT8&feature=channel_page
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G8YKATq4hC4&feature=channel_page

" I want to set you free but something always brings me back to you"
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Armaan and Riddhima were forever meant to be with one another. Though they were complete opposites, the path of love could not be hidden from them. They were married and lived happily but certan circumstances made them deter away from those paths. Now Armaan and Riddhima live in opposites world and walk on different paths, but it's true, setting some one free maybe easy to say but hard to do. No matter how many times they set each other free from their love, something always brought them back. So will Armaan and Riddhima Kahani be Adhuri or Puri?

Find out.. - Part 1 will be posted below.


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Part 1

If I had one single wish
I'd go back to
The moment
I kissed you goodbye
No mater how hard I try
I can't live
Without you in my life

Maybe you'll say
You still want me
Maybe you'll say
That you don't
Maybe we said
It was over
But baby
I can't let you go

I walk around
Trying to understand
Where we went wrong
And I can't pretend
It wasn't me
And it wasn't you
But I'm convinced
We gave up too soon

Maybe you'll say
You still want me
Maybe you'll say
That you don't
Maybe we said
It was over
But baby
I can't let you go

Nothing left to lose
After losing you
There's nothing
I can't take
When I run to you
When I come for you
Don't tell me
I'm too late

Maybe you'll say
You still want me
Maybe you'll say
That you don't
Maybe we said
It was over
But baby
I can't let you go

Can't let you go
Can't let you go


" Tring" rang the alarm. Shutting off the alarm, he made his way out of his bed and walked towards the bathroom. He turned on the shower and took a bath. As he took a shower, flashback turned him on, meeting her for the first time, their marriage and their bitter seperation. He didn't know where she was anymore. She left, but why and where??


He walked out of the bathroom and put on his suit and tie. Today was a big presentation with a newbie but renowned company. He was looking forward to this, he always believed in promoting new talent and new companies to work with him.

He walked downstairs to be greeted by his staff. He sat himself on the large table filled with delicious goodies but something lacked. He liked the food and complimented his chef. He grabbed his lunch and walked out to the car.

The driver greeted him and then they went towards the company.

While sitting in the car, he penned down his thoughts on his blackberry. His thoughts wandered over to the girl in the street. Dancing in the rain, he smiled at this and thought about the first time he saw her.

5 years ago..

"Armaan, you are late, come let's get going"

" Okay dad, let me just swallow this breakfast piece down, I'll meet you there Dad, I promise"

" Okay, don't be late"

" I won't"

Armaan quickly finished his breakfast and give a kiss to his mom and handed down towards the company that he was going to learn the ropes of, how to take over companies etc. Business was part of his blood.. As he made his way into the car, the car suddenly stopped at a signal light. He stared outside the window, people were talking, police men controlling the traffic, the usual but something catched his eye.

It was a girl, same age as him, dressed in a red t-shirt with a white short top on it and blue jeans and was dancing in the rain. He found it amusing that she was dancing in the rain while other kids danced around. He found it cute and innocent. He stared at her for a while. Finally, she turned around. She was beautiful he thought to himself. He had seen pretter girls at parties but she was something else. She left him breathless. She kissed the kids and left.

Armaan was surprised to see her gone so quickly but by that time the cars had moved so Armaan was snapped out of his thoughts.

He was greeted at work by his staff and he learned the ropes of the job very quickly but he couldn't get her out of his mind. Her smile, her innoncence, her enjoying rain was framed in hs mind.

" Sir"

Snapped out of the previous thoughts, he stared at his driver who pointed to the beggers on the street. He felt bad for them and openeed his pocket to take out some change and give it to them. They blessed him and walked away.

He entered his office and was greeted b y his staff. He entered his office and looked at the files. His secretary greeted him.
"Sir, the meeting is fixed for 11: 30 today"

" Alright, but make sure they are informed that and come on time, I don't like late comers"

" Yes sir. Anything else"

" No, it's fine"

As his secretary walked away, he stared his laptop looking at future sales when his eyes fell on a letter. He opened it. It was invitation card. " Not again, too many invitation cards". He threw the inviation card on the side and stared at the time.

" 9 am. 2 hours and this meeting will be underway. He wondered who would be representing this company. Mr. Malhotra said it was a female who was hard working and worked her way up. He was looking forward to meeting her.." But he was also wondering where she was.. Where are you Riddhima?

" Riddhima " screamed a person from other side of the town.

" Mom, what is it?"

" Come, have you breakfast, you don't want to be late for this project do you"

" No mom" smiled Riddhima at her mom.

Her family was her and her mom. Her dad was there, but being daughter of Dr. Shashank Gupta was not an easy cake walk. He was the dean of the school and as well as such as big doctor prompted him to be away. She grew up seeing him off to confrences and even now, he was at confrence when she was re-stepping her life again and then there was a medical geek , her sister Anjali Gupta, another doctor who is out to do research. So it's her, her mom, the servants and of course Dodo - her adorable parrot to is getitng annoying nowadays..

" Mom, is Dad and Di coming?"

" Why beta?'"

" You guys's anniversary is coming up , Please tell me Dad will be here"

" I don't expect anything out of him beta, we can discuss this later"

Dad was dad, but sometimes Riddhima felt he was a jerk. Past 3 anniversaries, Riddhima has made it special for her mom but throwing a big party is not important, having Dad by her side is more important.

Riddhima saw her mom wipe off her tears. She felt bad. She was gonna say when she was interrputed by the annoying Parrot. " Good job, you made her cry. You stupid"

Riddhima stared at the parrot" Dodo" . She got up and give her mom a sorry hug. Her mom hugged her back and finally all the melodrama was done and Riddhima grabbed her files and left before giving kiss to her mom and Dodo of course.

She made her way into the car and drove to the company. Excel Enterprises, Her boss Mr. Malhotra' recommeded this. Yes, she was working under someone which bothered the entire family but she wanted to make some decisions herself and be independent on her own.

She stepped out of the car and stared at excel enterprises. She stared at the clock. 11: 20. She was on time.

She made her way and displayed her name card. She was pointed to the place she was going.

She stepped out of the 11th floor to the lavish board room. The entire board was waiting for her, but as usual, the boss was not here. " Great, I hate latecomers"

She grabbed her seat, right next to the chairmen as that was the only seat avialable. She stared at the big seat, that was surrounded by two bodyguards. " Jeez, this guy is well protected. She stared at her clock, 11: 29. Wow, the boss is late."

The doors opened and everyone stood up. She stood up to see a man dressed in a black formal suit , looking dashing and greeted everyone warmly. As she turned to take a closer look, her heart skipped a beat, her body felt tinging, numb as she thought about those past moments, those bitter pills. She froze as time has frozen everything from this moment..




Edited by jenny1000 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I'm loving the preview Jens!

Awesome VM's!

Continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG u started this??? Wowwww reserved!!! Will get back in a bit :) Love u Jens!!
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Jiu, but you have to write it on Liza's vm. I am only using that one line. I am basically putting my thoughts on the Maybe VM and this song will be used a lot..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X86S5oZzzh4


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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg very nice FF jenny di.......
loved it...........
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Ahhhh um back!!!!! Gosh wat was that????

Jens tell me one thing how do u just keep getting better and better and better at such a fast pace??? Wat i mean is that wen u penned lifeless without i had said u had just so very vastly improved!! Not that u werent awesome already.....but u were just sharpening ur talent into something outstanding from superb!!!

But this??? Oh Gosh u took a giant leap yet again to prove that u were just an outstanding bunch of talent!! The preview was excellently penned!!

Part 1....ahhh that was phenomenal!!! The way u portrayed Armaan, absolutely brilliant Jens, his life filled with everything and yet the void, empty feeling. Just terrific!! The soft, gentle guy underneath searching for her!! It was just outstanding!!


Next Ridz, her family Background, again superb justicedone to it!! The way u laid her background was fantastic, gearing up for a plunge into her character in the coming parts!!


The flashback, aww wen he first saw her!!! Magical, pure magical........i cud so see KASH in there....so i gather she left him, married though. No need to mention how very eagerly um looking forward to this!!


Love u Jens, the song again used beautifully!! Kudos!!But i insist u to give this happy end, u better!!😆 *Kidding* but still.....anyways i better stop, before u yawn, which i gather u wud be considering how late it wud be there!!


Love u Jens for this. Looking forward to more!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Great first part...You penned everything down fabulously!!!

I'm hooked..Continue soon!
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OMG Jenny!!! I didn't know you liked my VM so much!!!!! Aww.....Thanks Hun!! I'm really really honoured....I really don't know what to say! Thanks Hun!!! 🤗
I'll comment on your FF after reading!!
Love
Liz :)
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Part 2

Her heart stopped beating for a while as she saw him walking and greeting everyone around him. She tried to hide from him as she knew it would be the best deal but then she thought about herself and her future to re-start over. She stopped moving for a while and picked up the file in front of her and placed it over her face so that he wouldn't see her. He stared right at everyone and finally at her, with her face covered. He could exactly guess who it was. He was torn back into when they first had met and that had been at a similar office.

She was sitting around in the office when he had walked in with his best friend Rahul Grewal and Atul Joshi. He was def a top business tycoon's son but his dad wanted him to learn the basic of ropes and as well as stand on his feet on his own. Struggling with his tie , he looked around the people. Mostly all the people around him were either talking on the phone or looking into their files but one person catched his eyes. She was wearing a red shirt with a white top and black pants and had her file on her face. As she lifted the file off her face, he saw her gaze up at him, he realized that she had been the one he saw at the traffic signal dancing along wth the kids. He smiled at her and she returned his smile back.

They were called for their interviews and both had gotten jobs there...


Armaan torn out of his thoughts stared back at her. Slowly she let go off the file off her face. She was still the same yet she was not the same. Pain and anger agunished her as she remembered past moments. He was frozen still until his manager tapped him.

He walked towards his board chair and stared at her stting next to him. Nervous as she was, he saw her fiddling with her hair. He knew this was also a old habit she could never forget..

This had been their first ever presentation and they were assigned the same presentation. Armaan and Riddhima both had worked really hard on it.. Armaan was memorizing all his notes while he saw Riddhima playing with her hair. He was confused at this. But then again he wasn't , because he always knew that Riddhima's nervous resulted in these actions. He smiled at this and sat next to her and held her hand. " Don't be nervous, it will all be alright". She smiled at this. The presenation was a super duper hit. and Armaan and Riddhima had become closer friends.

Armaan began the board meeting by adressing few issues here and there and then talking about the new thing he was launching - Dot.com and he listened as he got his views on it. He told them the basic formats and insited that they get to work right away. He assigned few people here and there and Riddhima was assigned to work with Armaan and few others.

Nervously clutching herslef out of the board room, she stared at Armaan and his group of staffers. She was given instructions on what to do. She stared at him walking away back into his office.

She did the work she was told and did her work. She just wanted to go home. She had never thought life would have been like this. Meeting him again and working alongside him was never her dream. It was her worst nightmare as she knew feelings about him would have never disapeared..

It was rainng by the time she managed to set her outside the office but to her surprise, he was standing there trwirling his keys around in the air. As she walked towards him. There was silence all around. He gently opened the door for her and her without saying anything sat in the car and they drove off.

The entire car ride was a silence. Unable to take this silence, Armaan turned on the music..

The song chummed " Tum Se Hi" Armaan stared at Riddhima who had tears down her eyes.

The song reminded me of their times.. Their beautiful memories....

Armaan and Riddhima had become best of friends and were always assigned the same presentations. and both were feeling something different towards each other.. Being away from each other was causing them more and more pain with each minute. Armaan and Riddhima had become inseperable..

Armaan continued to stare at Riddhima and remember their moments, the first time they met, their ice-cream moments, their friendship moments, everything.. while Riddhima stared outside with tears down her eyes remembering those bitter moments of their love story, their marriage and their bitter divorce.

Armaan wheeled slowly into Riddhima's house. She was numb for a minute until she was jolted back into reality. He grabbed an umberrla and gave it to her while their hands touched. A spark flew down their spines. Riddhima grabbed it quickly and went off into her house while Armaan stared at her from the car.

Armaan then drove away.

Riddhima entered her house with tears down her eys. Padma got up and made her coffee. Riddhima's tears were unstoppable as she hugged Padma with tears in her eyes.. " I still love him, why do I still love him Mom" " Beta, What happened?"

" Mom, Armaan ... is the owner of Excel Companies.."

" What?"

" Yeah, I don't think I can do this mom. I can't work in the sam eplace as Armaan"

" Why not Beta. Beta, stop running away from the truth. You love him and will always love him but he cannot stop you from the future of Riddhima. Riddhima beta... "

" Mom, It's gonna be so difficullt"

" So. what Riddhima? Maybe you and Armaan need this moment to recify your mistakes. "

" Hmm" said Riddhima as she hugged her mom tightly..

" I have some news"

" Yeah" smiled Riddhima.

" Kaya Bua is coming tommrrow with Miniee"

" What? Bua here?? Oh no...."

" I know, but.."

" How long is she staying.."

" About 2 weeks.."

" Oh great mom. Armaan + Kaya Bua. This is horrible. I am totally gonna die this week. Armaan will ruin me professional and Kaya Bua will bring those new guys. Why does she understand that I don't want to get married???"

" Because she does not know the truth like I do.."

" Truth?"

" That you still love Armaan..."

Riddhima was silent for a while.. " Mom, Miniee is coming too right?"

" Yes Beta."

" Good. Miniee is coming.. That's fine. I can handle Kaya Bua but Armaan?"

Padma smiled at this. She knew Riddhima loved Armaan and vice versa still but she never understoof why they couldn't just tell each other this..

The night was dead as Riddhima switched off the lights and thought about next day.. as to what awaited her..

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