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Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

High School Days

There are 6 main characters:

Jasmine Jonnas:

She comes from a family of happily married parents, Joseph & Janine Jonnas. She is a single child and a really bubbly person. She has light brown eyes and a million dollar smile. She is an straight A+ student. She is very good friends with Tianna and Stella.

Jasmine is 16 years old, her nickname is Mini.

Tianna Brookes:

Tianna has been throught a death of her mother, Tamara Brookes.

Tianna now lives with her younger brother Jake, her father Charles and step mother Emily, and Emily's son Zacharias Cotton. Tianna's friends call her Tia, for short. Tia is a above average student at high school. She's quite bad at biology, other then that shes absolutely fine.

She has bubbly cheeks, dark brown eyes, with straight glossy brown hair. Tia is 16 years old.

Zacharias Cotton:

Zacharias is from a loving family. After his father left his mother Emily raising the children on her own, Emily met Charles Brookes and remarried. Charles has a daughter Tianna (who is the same age as Zacharias) and a younger son Jake. Zacharias's nickname is Zac.

Zac lives with his step-father and his children, and his mother and younger sister Alexis. Zac is extremley popular at school other then soccer and baseball he loves playing tennis. His grades are really high which makes Zac proud of himself. Zac is 16 years old.

Stella Bennet:

Stella is a single child of Michael & Miranda Bennet.

She's really close to Tia and Mini. Stella's nickname is Ella and she is 16 years old. Stella is really into fashion, she always has the latest trends no matter what. Stella is a straight B- student (LOL).

She loves playing netball and hockey, in her spare time she hangs out at the spa and ice-skating rink.

James Mathews:

His mother died when he was only 8 years old. His father could not remarry since he was so caught up in work. James nickname is Jay.

Jay lives with his younger sister Amy and his father Max.

Jay is the schools popular, hunky heart throb. He's also a straight A+ student which makes himself proud. He loves baseball, hockey, football, basket ball. He is the school JOCK! Jay is 16 years old.

Christopher Johns:

Christopher was from a blessed family until he turned 10, his father Brian had an affair and divorced his mother Vanessa Johns.

He is now 16 years old, Christopher's nickname is Chris.

He has crystal blue eyes, a bubbly smile, and strawberry blonde hair.

He is a straight A+ student in school, he's really good at water sports.

Chris lives with his younger sister Danielle (who is in l.a in a boarding school) and his mother Vanessa.

Love always,

Selina x

P.S: this is my first time posting a story on WRITERS CORNER! part one coming soon. 😳

Edited by BabyLove96 - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

wow...thatz for characterization...now i m reallie eager to read the story......You haf all my support,dearie!!!

Waiting for ur story!!!

Cheers,

Jassie

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What's In A Name?...x

@Robsessed.

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

Part 1:

"Tia!" screamed Jasmine from the bottom of her stairs.

"Wait I'm coming, I need to finish curling my hair" Tia yelled back.

Tia comes running down the stairs and hugs Jasmine.

"Bye Dad," she said kissing her father on the cheek, who was too busy reading the newspaper.

Tia and Jasmine start walking up to the pavements where Zac's car was parked.

"Aren't you going to call Zac? He's going to be late you know!" Jasmine said to Tia.

"Yeah I know he should be here any ... minute ... now!" she replies, looking at her watch.

All of a sudden Zac comes running out of the house and flings his back pack on his shoulder, he winks at Jasmine who just simply ignores him.

They all sit in the car and Zac starts to drive to school.

"Hey Chris, all the best for your first day hun. The cars just parked on the other side of the road ok?" said his mum Vanessa as she walked into the room.

"Okay mum I'm off, oh yeah whens Daniella coming back from her school trip?"

he said finishing up his cornflakes.

"Today at 8:00 pm, don't be late." said Vanessa

"Chill I won't," Chris said walking out of the house and sitting in his black merc waiting for Jay to come out of his house.

"Hey Chris, sorry I'm late." Jay says putting on his seat belt.

"It's alright, come on. Lets drive to school then," he replies laughing.

A pink cadillac drives into the school parking lot.

A girl steps out wearing a black mini skirt with a black and pink top, with hot black sunglasses, It's Stella. She walks into the front fields with her head held high. She walks into a bunch of 5, who is : Jasmine,Tia,Zac,Chris and jay.

"Hey guys and gals. What you upto then?" She says raising her tone.

"Uhm we were just waiting for you to arrive, your highness," Jay says pretending to bow down.

They all turn to head to their form classes.

"Okay students, I have all your schedules for this year," Mr Johnson reports.

Everyone gets their schedules and Jasmine groans.

"Aw man I'm stuck with Zac for the WHOLE year," she mumbles to her friends.

"C'mon I'm not that bad, maybe we'll have other students who we know who aren't as weird as you,!" he says taking of his sun glasses and putting them on his head.

Zac, Jasmine, Chris walk of together to class.

"Oi Jay and Tia stop joking around we are going to be late for our first lesson!" she whispers.

They all get to class on time.

Love always

selina x

P.S: please tell me how to improve on it😳

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Jaslin

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Posted: 16 years ago

i think itz prety good...it has a smooth flow and that's the most impt part!!!!

as u go along, i can tell u how to improve from my point of view....but i liked it for i finished reading ur part in a minute....so continue babe!!👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

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What's In A Name?...x

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Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jassie_17
i think itz prety good...it has a smooth flow and that's the most impt part!!!!

as u go along, i can tell u how to improve from my point of view....but i liked it for i finished reading ur part in a minute....so continue babe!!👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

thnx actually i tld ma sis bout it an she sed da she can help me improve on it

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Posted: 16 years ago

It seems to be off to a good start :) I noticed a few grammatical errors here and there but it's nothing you can't fix... nice job!

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What's In A Name?...x

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Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: chhilt
It seems to be off to a good start :) I noticed a few grammatical errors here and there but it's nothing you can't fix... nice job!

ok i'll wurk on ma gramma errors den

thnx eniwaiiz

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What's In A Name?...x

@Robsessed.

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

Part 2 cumin soon guyz 😛

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What's In A Name?...x

@Robsessed.

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

Part 2:

"Oi Jay and Tia stop joking around we are going to be late for our first lesson!" she whispers.

They all get to class on time.

Tia and Stella sit together, while Jay and some of his other mates sat behind them roaring with laughter.

"Hey Tia." Shouted Jay

"Yeah?" Replied Tia

Jay wants to ask her out for a movie later in the evening but he just doesn't know how to say it.

Jay Thinking: Erm... hey Tia wanna catch a movie later together, just you and me? nahh !!!! ooooo Tia what a lovely name. ugh what am i thinking?????😕

"Jay, you were saying something?"

"OH YEAH! Do you want to watch a movie together tonight?

"Sure, what time?"

"Ermm... I was thinking about eightish? I'll come down to collect you, if thats okay?"

"Yeah cool, I'll be ready by then."

Tia smiles at Jay and then turns around to talk to Claire and Stella.

"Yo Chris quit poking me!" Shrieked Jasmine

"I'm not doing anything." Chris and Zac Whistle

Mr Williams the history teacher walks in with big piles of folders,excercise books and slams them on his desk, waiting to catch his breath.

"Okay students this year we will all be doing projects in groups of two,"

Mr Williams Reports, "I'm going to read out the partners names you will be doing the project with: Zacharias Cotton and Jasmine Jonnas, Christopher Johns and Marissa Hughes." he carried on reading out the names of the partners who were going to be doing the project.

Jasmine Thinking: Oh its soooo unfair i have to be with zac the doofus 24/7.😡

"Mini! Hello welcome back to Earth Jasmine!!!" Zac shouts in her ear.

"Eeewww you filled my ear with your SPIT!" she spits back in his ear.

They both start fighting and shouting at each other, the teacher looks down at them and says,

"You two if you keep this up your going to turn our lesson in to a wrestling match. WATCH IT I HAVE GOT MY EYES ON YOU TOO!"

Zac & Jasmine look at each other and start laughing on their stupidity.

The bell goes it's time for lunch.

Tia,Jay,Stella,Chris and Jasmine are sitting on the school picnic bench in the back fields. Chris and Stella are talking about the richest man on Earth.😕😆

"Sooo.... ermm Tia you still up for the movie together?" Jay asks

"Of course, which one are we going to watch?"

"Any which one do you want to watch?"

"hmmm... Twilight or High School Musical 3."

"Okay HSM3 it is then,"

"Zac you may go and have lunch now but don't ever try to put a stink bomb under my chair ever again, this is only a warning!" Shouts Mrs Thomas.

"i'm extremely sorry miss it won't happen ever again!" Zac replies heading for the door with a evil grin on his face.

"Hey guys." Zac says running to the bench

"Don't Hey me you're late again MR" Stella says copying Mrs Thomas's expression.

"Ugh not again i hate her boring lectures"

"Soo what did you get in trouble this time?" Chris asks

"I hid a stink bomb on her chair, when she sat on it it smelt of cheesy farts everywhere"😆 Zac replies laughing really loud that everyone could hear him.

"Ooooo now thats cold! Oh no come on Tia and Stella were going to be late for cheerleading!" Jasmine Shrieks

Jasmine,Stella and Tia leave for cheerleading practise while the boys still hang round the bech for a while.

"Seriously DUDE, when are you going to tell Tia how you feel about her?" Chris asks Jay.

"Well I did ask if we could watch a movie tonight at 8:00pm"

"And.......... what did she say?" Zac asks looking interested.

"Nothing she just said yeah and I'm going to collect her!"

"Dude you better hurry because she's one FINE looking girl!" Chris says nodding his head like a chicken.

"Hey don't EVER go near her!" Jay shouts and he throwed a peanut butter sandwich at Chris.

Love Always,

Selina

Edited by BabyLove96 - 16 years ago