~Prem and Heer Fanfic~**** pt.1 on pg 1

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Amerra

@esquire1

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi Guys I haven't on this forum and I jsut and read the fanfics.They were just too good.I thought of writing my own about Prem and Heer for KDMHMD.I just love thier jodis and I already wrote two fanfics already. Well Here I go & I hope you guys will like it.Plz don't forget to comment cause I need to know your opinion.I'm making a character sketch and will update asap. Charater Sketch:

Juneja Family:

Lalit/Gayatri Juneja-parents of prem,preet,harman and veera

Prem-eldest son, loving caring

Harman-married with Vishaka and on their honeymoon(not mentioned that much)

Preet-youngest son, very funny and loves his Prem bahiya

Veera-in Us for college

Mann Family:

Teji/Balraj-parents of Heer, Meher and Nihal

Nihal-youngest of all, in US

Heer-eldest daughter, responsible and caring

Meher-2nd daughter fun & loving

Daljeet's Family(nice in this Fanfic)

Balwant-DJ's husband

Vishaka and Manmeet-kids of DJ and Balwant

Kuljeet's Family-

Karan-Kuljeet's husband

Amar and Divya-kids of Kuljeet and Karan

Dadi and Dadu-parents of Teji and Balraj and loves everyone equally

Friends:they all stay with Heer and the family

Robbie

Kasturi

Rahul

Viranda

Edited by Penzee2007 - 16 years ago

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KAT

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Posted: 16 years ago

BRING it on babe.... dieing to read a prem and heer ff

Love Kat

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b.sandhu

@b.sandhu

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Posted: 16 years ago

oh plz write this fanfic the more prem-heer fanfics the better

cheers

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Amerra

@esquire1

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

Part1

It was a beautiful morning in Ambala, the Mann and Juneja family lived together.They started their morning with yelling and commotions, the kids were moaning and the elders were yelling at them for not coming to breakfast on time.Heer was the only child who woke up early and helped make breakfast.Heer went to everyone's room to wake them up.The kids shared rooms and the rooms were actually big.The house was like a palace.First Heer went to Kasturi and Meher's room, next was Divya and Ash's room,last she woke up Viranda who shared with Heer.Heer always woke her up last.The girls were done and now the boys turn.First she woke up Preet and Neel, then Robbie and Amar ,last was Rahul and Prem.Well this morning Rahul was awake except Prem.Rahul got ready and went downstairs, she went upto to Prem.She shook him but he wouldn't wake up.When ever she touched ,she felt something but she didn't know what.SAhe tried waking him up but he wouldn't.When she was about to leave, Prem grabbed her hand and pulled her back on top of him.He was half asleep and he began saying"don't go I can't live withiut you.your the only person I think of; I love you very much.When I close my eyes I see you and when I open my eyes you pop in front of me.I LOVE YOU VERY MUCH HEER!!!!" The last word she heard just shook her.She looked at him in a shocking way and only considered him as friend.Prem opened his eyes and saw Heer on top of him and looking at him shocked.He didn't know eh was talking in his dreams and din't know he pulled her back on top of him.Prem asked her"whatare you doing on top of me?" Heer sanpped back at him" what? you're the one who pulled me back on top of you and talking in your dreams."

He asked her"so you heard everything." Heer looked away and muttered"yeah" Prem let go of Heer and Heer ran downstairs; prem couldn't believe that Heer actually heard everything.Now she knew hoe he felt about her and he also knew that she only considered him as a good friend.Now he had to make her fall for him, that was his mission.He loved her very much and Heer was his and would remain his.He got up and got ready and headed downstairs.

Well here is Part 1 and plz comment on it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hope you liked it!!!!!

Edited by Penzee2007 - 16 years ago