aao sunau ek kahani(AR)

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Hi all,
I know that majoty of you may not know me, due to the reason that i hardly post anything, sorry for that but i had an idea of a ff which was going on in my mind for about 6-7 months now.. n now finally after consulting my guruji of ff (Hina ji) I have gathered courage to post the intro .... please comment and let me know if u would like me to continue the story...
i m not posting any character sketch but u will know about them as the story progresses...

Intro

"Salam Namaste Satsriyakal. Main hu…... khair jane dijeye mein kaun hu yeh mein apko bad me batatungi… aur waise socha jaye to mein kaun hu yeh baat bahut important bhi nahi hai… important yeh hai ki mein kya kehne wali hu……..jeeeee haan mein ayi hu yahan ap sab ko ek kahani sunane, yeh ek bohot hi pyaari is sweet seee love story hai, jis me as usual ek handsome and dashing hero hai aur ek bahut hi pyaari, aur khubsurat heroine hai… aur kuch villains bhi hai …. Toh aiye bina koi der kiye chalet hai aur milte hai humari story ki heroine se… jinka naam hai Dr. Riddhima "Shashank" Gupta. Aab app soch rahe hongge ki mein Ridhima Gupta bhi keh sakti thi, par meine Shashank naam par itna stress kyun diya?

Well yehi to thi humari pyari is heroine ki problem ki sab log unse Ridhima ke naam se nahi balki ridhima Shashank gupta ya phir Dr. Shashank ki beti ke naam se jante the aur wooh kitni bhi koshish kare sab use shashank gupta ki beti ya ridhima shashank gupta keh kar hi bulate the…. Becharii… aiye toh pehle Dr. Shashank se hi milte hai…."

8.00am

A man in suit comes to the dinning area of his big mansion and checks the watch… "phir se late….

Just then a girl comes running to the dinning table…

"Sorry papa" he frowns at her and nods stiffly

"ek aur minute late hoti toh nashta nahi milta… now breakfast ke baad jaldi tayaar ho jana, chuti hai iska matlab yeh nahi ki tum tayar nahi hogi".

"Jee"

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Uff kitna strict!!! Yeh the dr. shashank gupta, the head surgeon of sanjeevani, the dean and main trustee of sanjeevani, who is a famous doctor but more people know him as the most successful businessman and he has won the best businessman of the year award for 3 years. However the people who work under him has known him and is very popular but for some other reasons….he is known to his employees as the most ruthless, and arrogant person. Someone whom you don't want to mess with. Some people who know him for long says he wasn't this ruthless before but always had a little attitude problem and after his wife's death he became this ruthless; he wasn't at all ruthless or even arrogant before his marriage but wanted to be a doctor and ended up being a business person after Smriti came in his life…but he became tuffer after her death……. No one knows what happened. His only daughter ridhima too fears him.. he hardly talks to her but when he does, it is usually very formal or authoritative as if you are sitting in an office and hearing two managers discussing on a project…issi liye ridhima fears her dad poor girl…Khair.. now lets see what our heroine is upto…..

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey

me had to be the first one here
yayyyy!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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~edited~
awesome intro
plz continue soon
Edited by KaSh_4_eva - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey sounds interesting with a nice concept
please update soon and of you can please PM me thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: hinanaziri

hey

me had to be the first one here
yayyyy!

yes guruji u had to be the first one here😆

Originally posted by: KaSh_4_eva

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awesome intro
plz continue soon

thank you dear, i will continue soon

Originally posted by: nyla_193

hey sounds interesting with a nice concept
please update soon and of you can please PM me thanks

thanks dear, i m glad u liked it.. i will pm u when i update pakka
Edited by pari0706 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nobody liked it 😭 ok i won't continue then

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Heyy.. wow itz really gud.. you should cont... nd plzz pm me if u can...😃😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow nice intro do continue soon
n plz pm me whenever u update
n dont be sad slowly slowly comments aaenge ff start to karo

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