A Neesha Story- Zindagi Ho Tum

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Hey guys this is just a short story i came up for Neev and Ayesha and decided to post it. I hope you like it (Warning: Its very long! 😆)

A Neesha story- Zindagi ho tum

'Hey' Neev said turning her around. It had been 2 years since Neev and Ayesha had been dating and they were meeting after two days. 'Mein ka se intezaar kar rahi thi tera..lagta hai mere naseeb mein hai tera intezaar karna' 'Ab mein kya karoon, tumhe toh pata Ayesha office ka kaam' 'Haan haan pata hai pata hai, lekin tere intezaar mein mujhse koi aur shaadi kar ke le gaya toh?' 'Toh mein tumhe bhaga ke le jaoonga'
'Neev mazak chhor, tu mera haath kab maangne aa raha hai?' She replied looking into his eyes. She wanted the answer today; did he want to marry her or not?
He pulled her closer then, staring right back into her emerald eyes. 'Tumhare gaal' He whispered kissing her cheeks slowly then moved to her ears 'Tumhare kaan' her forehead 'Tumhara maatha' her nose 'Tumhari naak' He was about to kiss her; their lips nearly brushed but she came out of the magic he was weaving on her and turned around blushing so he would not see her 'Mujhe purri ki purri Ayesha chahiye' 'Neev mera matlab woh nahi tha' He held her arms again and turned her around 'toh phir kiya matlab tha?' He walked towards her and she walked backwards 'mera matlab tha..' Soon he backed her against the wall, putting his arms on either side of her 'hmm bolo' He buried his face in her soft hair breathing in the fragrance; she was beautiful, he thought. 'Bas, Neev' She pushed him away and started crying 'Tu bhi doosron ki tarha hai, shaadi ki baat ki toh bahaney ban ana shuru ho gaya'
She did not stop there any longer; he would make another excuse. He was like other men too; he did not care about spending the rest of his life with her. He just did not take her seriously, did he? He always joked around with her and she always made the effort to meet him and now it was his turn. If he did not put any effort in for them, she would just end it as much as she hated to. She had thought he loved her like he hadn't loved anyone else, the time they spent together, the dreams they dreamt together didn't they mean anything to him? She laid down on her bed; tears running down her face. If he did not text or ring back, then she would consider it final.
It had been three days since they had met and everyday when she woke up and before going to went to bed, she looked at her phone to see if there were any missed calls or messages from him but there were none.
The next night, she was tired as anything from doing all the work. They had guests over so she had helped out her mom and made the dinner and washed up. When she had gone back to her room, she saw there was a message on her phone. Picking her mobile up, she looked at it, it was from Neev 'Mein tumse milna chahta hoon kal' Ayesha was excited, he had not forgotten her then, but what did he want to talk about? He better had something good to say if she did meet him, she texted back saying 'Mein nahi mil sakti' she smiled at that, he used to do that to her and now she would do that to him, see how it feels. Soon she got a message saying 'Kal sham chhey baaje ko beach par, tum aayogi'. So he was that sure was he? It's not that she would not go but she made sure that she was going to be late.
He had waited for over 10 minutes now and she still had not come. The sun was setting now and the beach looked beautiful. It was a bit breezy but nevertheless the evening was perfect for what he was going to do tonight. He was dressed casually but looked ravishing in black shirt and jeans. A moment late he saw Ayesha coming towards him and was mesmerized by her simplicity and beauty. She was wearing a pale blue salwar kameez and had left her hair down, which waved around in the breeze.
'Toh tum akhir aa hi gayi' 'Haan' She said looking away trying to distract herself from his presence; he looked so handsome tonight and she did not want him to notice it. Neev knew her too well and said 'Ayesha idhar udhar kya dekh rahi ho' 'Bas aisi hi abh jaldi keh tujhe kya kehna tha' He held her shoulders and turned her to him;lifting her chin he told her 'Mein jaanta hoon ke kuch mahinon se mein tumhe ignore kar raha hoon, aur har waqt late aata hoon lekin isliye kyun ke mein chahta tha humari shaadi se pehle meri promotoion hojaye aur kal hi company walon ne mujhe financial advisor ki naukri dedi hai' 'Neev..' She hugged him tightly and sobbed; she had misunderstood his intentions, how could she even think he did not lover her? 'Ayesha inn aasoon ke liye mein ne toh nahin yeh sab kiya, jo tumne socha woh sahi socha kyun ke mein tumhe surprise dena chahta tha' She still did not stop but when he joked 'Oh god Ayesha, yeh shirt new hai, aur tumhe roh kar isko gilla kar diya' 'Neev..' She pulled away and punched him on his chest. 'uff shaadi se pehle meri itni pittayi kar rahi ho toh shaadi ke baad kya hoga lekin agar tum pittayi kar rahi ho toh mujhe koi shiqwa nahi' He winked at her, which made her blush.
They then sat on the beach, Neev rested his head on her lap. Neev told her he has told his parents abput her and they would be coming for her soon. Ayesha was really happy tonight, she had got so much from Neev, things she had not even dreamt. The little things he did for her and things he said to her just made her smile. Only he knew what was in her heart without her even saying it. 'Neev tu mujhse kitna pyar karta hai?' 'kya matlab kitna? Shayad mein bhi nahi jaanta kitna Ayesha, lekin yeh jaanta hoon ke tumhari baghair mein nahi jee sakta' He pulled her closer to him and kissed her lightly on the lips.
'Abh mujhe jaan chahiya neev buhut late ho gaya hai' She got up quickly. She did not want to leave but it was getting late nad her parents would worry. 'Ruku' He held her wrist and asked her to close her eyes. He then placed a couple of long, blue earrings on her palm. He knew she liked the simplest of things; earrings been her favourite jewellery. 'Kitne pyaarre hain na…tu pana de na' Ayesha said. He made her wear the earrings whispering in her ear 'Tumse pyaare nahi' He had dropped her at her house and Ayesha had slowly waited for the next day to arrive with much excitement.
The next day Neev and his parents had arrived at Ayesha's house. Mr. and Mrs. Khanna, Ayesha's parents had only been too delighted; Neev was responsible man and their family was only too nice. Mr. and Mrs. Shergill were too happy with Ayesha; she was intelligent, beautiful and it was obvious she loved Neev a lot and would keep him happy.
'Toh phir ek mahiney ke baad shaadi?' 'Ji hum toh raazi hain itna waqt hai shaadi ki tayari karne mein, abh toh mujhse intezaar nahi hota Ayesha ko apni bahu bana ne mein' Mrs. Shergill said.
Neev looked disappointed at this date. He did not want to wait for a month; he had already waited two years for her. Ayesha noticing this started smiling widely at Neev's state; she knew what was going on in his mind. He stared back at her though with utmost passion, which stopped her smiling and instead she was blushing and just went away from there before her parents noticed this.
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Both Neev and Ayesha waited for the day impatiently. Althoguht both had been busy in their work as well they could not help thinking about each other and their life together. Finally, their dreams were coming true. They had never thought this would happen so fast but they had become one another's life.
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It was Ayesha's sangeet and the women were crowded downstairs. Ayesha was still getting dressed; she had worn a pink lehnga today Mrs. Shergill had gifted it to her. Hearing all the celebration and noise echoing from downstairs she smiled to herself as she startd wearing her jewellery. She had not seen Neev for nearly a month; their wedding was in two days now. Taking out his photo from her drawer, she said 'Neev kahan ho tum? Mere barrey mein soch rahe hona?' She felt like a child but she was so eager to see him but as per traditions they could not meet before the wedding day itself. She closed her eyes and saw his smiling face and then smiled to herself. When she opened her eyes, she was shocked to see him in front of her. She thought she was dreaming so she hugged him 'Dekh abh tu mere khayalon se nikal kar mere samne bhi aa gaya hai' she looked up to him and he looked back at her with love in his eyes. Putting her arms around his neck, she kissed him passionately; though Neev was highly surprised at her actions, he could not control himself as well and kissed her back with equal passion. At his reaction, Ayesha pulled apart from the kiss breathless realizing that it was actually Neev who was right here in her room and not her illusion.
She turned around, her cheeks crimson red now and her eyes were looking down. Neev walked up to her and hugged her from behind and she instantly melted in his arms and hid her face in his chest. 'Hey, matlab agar mein asli mein yahan hota toh woh kiss nahi milti' 'Nahi' Neev pretended to be angry and leaving her turned around saying 'Mein jar aha hoon waise bhi yahan aane ka kya faida' He was about to leave when Ayehsa held his arm and said 'Dekh Neev mein samjhi ke tu nahi tha iss ka yeh matlab toh nahi ke mein tujhe kiss nahi karti' 'Toh phir karo na' He pulled her into a loving embrace. 'Neev, mujhe sharam aati hai' 'Pata hai lekin agar tum nahi kar sakti toh mein karoon?' 'Neev…tu yahan kiss karne aaya hai kya?' She looked up. 'Nahi lekin abh tumne mujhe di hai toh mera toh haq banta hai na tumhe wapis kiss dene ka' 'Yeh haq tu humari shaadi ke baad jatana achha' She tilted her head to one side. 'Aur Neev abh tu ja yahan se, agar koi andar aa gaya toh?' She pushed him near to the window the way he had come in. 'Jaa raha hoon, lekin thankyou uss kiss ke liye'. She blushed again and waved a good bye as he gave her a flying kiss.
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It was their wedding day today and Neev and Ayesha were both excited and nervous. The pandit read out the mantras as they carried out the seven pheres. They got their blessings from their elders and soon it was their big night.
As Ayesha sat on the bed dressed in her wedding attire looking stunning in her maroon lehnga, she was getting nervous as time passed. Neev had still not arrived. Getting quite frustrated she got up; she was tired from the wedding and the heavy dress was making her feel weak. She sat at her dressing table taking off her jewellery. 'Hey!' Neev walked in to see her bride taking her jewellery and Ayesha carried on taking it off when Neev came beside her and stopped her taking it off 'yeh toh mera kaam tha Ayesha!' 'Neev darling tu itni der baad aaya hai aur waise bhi mujhe buhut thakawat ho rahi hai' Ayesha said sarcastically. 'Toh aisi baat hai huh, buhut jaldi hai sab kuch utarne ki?' looking up, she blushed and tried to walk past him but before she could he hugged her to him and said 'Kaho toh mein madad karoon?' She just blushed and and smiled againt his chest and he could feel it. Before wasting any time, he picked her up in his arms and carried her to the bed.
Making her sit, he lifted her chin and kissed her cheeks, forehead, and soon reached her back and unbuttoned her blouse. He kissed her lips hard with possessiveness and she kissed back giving into the desire within her. As the night passed, their clothes disappeared as they made love; their souls and bodies becoming one that night.
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'Itna pyar kiya tumne humse,
Jaise sadiyon se koi rishta ho tumhara humse,
Iss pyar ko kam kabhi mat hone dena,
Warna ho jayegi jaise zindagi alag humse'
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soul76 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Fima that was beautiful, lovely even no tamasha just shaadi really sweet.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow tht was sooo good... nice fanfic hun...loved their relation and how they were with each other... 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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fima🤗 that was really superb...a very simple and cute luv love story😃...i luvd the way ayesha called him as neev darling...*sigh* i am missing them soo much now😒

thanks for the one shot fic🤗🤗...that was simply awsome
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks guys for reading and commenting. Im really glad you liked it. I was only writing this one and last part so shaadi had to be quick so it was more of a sweet love story. Thanks again 🤗
@sia: i used to love the way ayesha used to call him neev darling so thats why included that. Thanks for liking it. 😃
Edited by fahimataq - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Fima that was mindblowing...its gr8 to see a FF with neesha so loved up...thank u fima🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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🤗Oh my darling...Thank you. Finally my persistence has payed off eh? Wonderful, wonderrrrrrrrrrrful! You know how I feel about it and my suggestions/criticisms too but for a one shot piece, it holds it's own!

Do write more often, I can see you growing better day by day!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks shabz! And rima im literally blushing at your comments seriously your suggestions and criticism help a lot!! Thanks so much hun 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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really loved your story dear!!!!!!
keep it up!!!!
love
nihita

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