updated PG3 poem dedicated to DV, VIKRANT, RAJAT

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Suno purane zamane ke ek kahaani

Humare purkho ki zubaani

Nahi yeh arbo ka khazana

Hai yeh DHARAM VEER KA DOSTANA

Ek chale sirf aapne karam

Yeh hai Rajkumar Dharam

Nazre aisi ke mare teer

Hai yeh Rajkumar Veer

Do tan hai par ek hi jaan hai

Chand aur kaynat sab in par qurban hai

Aayi saamne inki mushkile haazaar

Par diya ek dusre ka saath bar bar

Dushman ne bichaya khatron ke jaal

Par DHARAM VEER ke kiya sab ko behaal

Rahe humesha ek hi sang

Ek dusre ke bina nahi inki zindagi mein koi rang

Nahi kisi ko inse koi shikayat

Sab ki hai in par khas inayat

Jab yeh dono saath toh, hoti hai inki jeet

Barso tak bhi dundlo nahi milega insa meet

Saath rahe hamesha

Nahi yeh arbo ka khazana

Hai yeh DHARAM VEER KA DOSTANA

PEOM FOR VIKRANT


Aisa hai, ha aisa hi hai

Jaise

Behti hai thandi hawa,

Hai yeh pyara sa ek naw-jawa.

Chehra uska kardeta hai sabko roshan,

Jahaan jaye waha manade jashan.

Samundar ki lehro jaisa shaant,

Hai yeh cutiepie Vikrant.

Karte hai log uske liye mannat

Ke mile use har kadm par jannat

Wish hai, hogi har step par uski jeet

One day sky will be along his feet.

Yes, very true, he went through many hardships

But he never allowed to drown his ship

Life went up and down

But he never had on his face a frown

He has the world's ruling crown

Whether its Gaurav, Aamir or Dharam

He has done his role by his karam

His eyes has some jaadu

Khoobsurat muskhurahat karti hai sab pe kaabu

Uski har style aur ad ape hai log fida

Because he is dosro se judaa

As all,

It's exclusive his identity

He is the only one amongst of all in the count of Infinity




AND THIS IS FOR RAJAT



Here comes a cool dude in his cool car

His style is of excellence par

Yeh hai woh jiski aasman hai manzilat

Hogi jeet uski milqiyat

Karte hai is cool guy se sab pyaar

Yeh hai hamara handsome cool Rajat yaar

He is fierce as fire

Everyone really does admire

He is cute like on icing is cherry

No wonder girls run behind him like tom chases jerry

May he gets world's best blessing shower

He's got that mesmerizing power

He shows no attitude

As he is full of gratitude

He's got the world's dare

Still has the special care

,

When look in his eyes, you go still

Be careful, His look will kill

Out of everyone he is the most daring

Count of infinity, he is the darling

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do comment😉


PLEASE ALSO READ AND COMMENT THE PEOM WRITTEN BY ASHU(FRNDZ4LIFE) ON PAGE 3😛


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Posted: 16 years ago
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👏 Mindblowing..!!! Excellent..!! ⭐️
Wow yudi...its fab...did u write it??? 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Yudi.. 😊 very nice poem dear.. 👏👏

keep doing more.. I loved the way you have described DV's relationship.. kaash.. DV ka title song aisa hota..
I specially liked this line "Nahi yeh arbo ka khazana, Hai yeh DHARAM VEER KA DOSTANA"
as you described DV ka dostana is precious than any khazana...😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Lovely and a very sweet poem.
U described DV's relationship very well in ur poem. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wooooooowwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Gazab yaar..
its wonderfull..
u see I love poems n Love writin too..buh then tis poem..it was fantastic..amzin..awesum..
Loved it to bits..
i loved these lines the best.....

"Do tan hai par ek hi jaan hai

Chand aur kaynat sab in par qurban hai.."

awesum..
Love it..
Do keep writin..I wud love to read em........
Love ya loads.......t.ccccccc
-Ur's Ever Madhu😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wah Wah ! 👏

Great Poem Huh....Btw Wotz Ur Name? 😛

Seriously Itz Relli Gud...Truly Complementing dV...😳


RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever😍😍😍

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Silver_Lining

Yudi.. 😊 very nice poem dear.. 👏👏

keep doing more.. I loved the way you have described DV's relationship.. kaash.. DV ka title song aisa hota..
I specially liked this line "Nahi yeh arbo ka khazana, Hai yeh DHARAM VEER KA DOSTANA"
as you described DV ka dostana is precious than any khazana...😃



THANK YOU SOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!
FOR THE COMPIMENT
i will surely write more if possible
and i hope EVEN U WRITE ONE POEM😉😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute_madhu

wooooooowwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Gazab yaar..
its wonderfull..
u see I love poems n Love writin too..buh then tis poem..it was fantastic..amzin..awesum..
Loved it to bits..
i loved these lines the best.....

"Do tan hai par ek hi jaan hai

Chand aur kaynat sab in par qurban hai.."

awesum..
Love it..
Do keep writin..I wud love to read em........
Love ya loads.......t.ccccccc
-Ur's Ever Madhu😳



THANK YOU
AND I guess u shud also write one

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: subha2601

Lovely and a very sweet poem.
U described DV's relationship very well in ur poem. 👏 👏 👏

maine toh sab yuhi likh diya never u would enjoy sooooooooooooo much!!!!1
THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!⭐️❤️
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its superb yudi.......... loved the poem........

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