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hey guys
like it says in the title im going to attempt to write an ff, i know what was i thinking rite? im not a talented writer but i thought since kdmh has been on a strike and then crazy 9x channel not showing new episodes till mid jan this forums been kinda quiet, so i thought i should try to write a ff atleast to give u guys a chuckle at my attempt if its not good enough
also just want to say mabel, shahsha74,elysia, shubh-astha and premipre your ff are mind- blowing honestly look forward to it each time u guys write/ hopefully ill try to entertain you guys and the rest
any way enough chit chatting ill start it soon, ill start of with a small chapter and if i get 5 comments or more ill continue to write more,
thanks
nikk786
part 1-9 on page 1
part 10 on page 13
note- on page 14
part 11 on page 15
part 12 on page 17
part 13 on page 19
FF-Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi
Naina ka qatil hai........AMAN!!!Everyone was shocked out of their core, as it sank in for everyone of what Rahul just told them, they started crying,Aman was trying to convince everyone that this is not true and Rahul is lying, he goes upto Rahul and ask for evidence that proves this, Rahul looks at Kakoon and tells her to bring Naina's phone that is in Aman's room which he took when he killed Naina, Kakoon goes to the room and comes back with a phone in her hand and gives it to Rahul,he shows the phone to Aman,Aman's confused and reapeatingly keeps on saying that this is not Naina's phone,Rahul shouts back saying that this is Naina's phone's and aks him that why this cant be naina's phone?Aman under pressure screams "kyunki Naina ka phone maine hi thora tha"!!!.Everyone just froze, taking in Aman words and realising that Rahul may be right- Aman the eldest son of the punj family was a killer, Kakoon was crying alot that finally this will be over soon Aman will get punished for his sins and she will be able to get justice for her sister,Naina,Aman was shocked at what he had revealed, but he thought he will reveal everything to them. Aman had totally lost it and will make sure everyone knows this. "Haan MAINE Naina ko maara hai mein uska qartil hoon lekin uski wajah thi .........Naina"....
ok guys this was my first bit ,i said id do a short chapter but its a bit long isnt it sorry hope you like it and if a get 5 comments or more then ill carry on
thanks
hey guys here part two thank for the comments
"Haan MAINE Naina ko maara hai mein uska qartil hoon lekin uski wajah thi .........Naina".... Everyone was looking at Aman, Kakoon couldnt believe he was blaming Naina, "haan Naina, ab aap sab ko pata hai mein Kakoon se deewano jaisa pyaar karta hoon,uske kehne pe maine shaadi ke liya haan kardi, phir achnak Naina ko Rahul say shadi nahin karni thi,shaadi nahin karni thi uska dimag phir gaya tha,i mean how can she do that, she did everything in her power to keep Kakoon away from Rahul, did everything to marry Rahul, and then on MY wedding day, she wanted to reunite My wife to be with MY brother,and she wanted MY help to do this, if she had just gotten married to Rahul and not have had this crazy stupid idea then she would have been happily married and more importantly - alive!so you see it's really her fault!haha hahaha haahaaa!!!"Aman felt happy and relief letting it all out, but didnt really understand why they were all so upset, i mean come on Naina was annoying at times so i did them a favour haha."Aman, you disgust me u commited such a big crime and your blaming it on bechari Naina" Gayu cried,"You killed my daughter and behaved as you were the nicest guy in the world what kind of a person are you? you let Rahul your bhai to take the blame, no your not a person your a monster and you should be locked up, mansha call the police" devi told her daughter "yes mom" Mansha went from there.Aman wasnt worried, he's the best lawyer, he will deal with the police later, no, its Rahul and Kakoon who needed to be tortured, well he has tortured Kakoon enough for her to remember for a lifetime, maybe he should let Rahul know what happened on his wedding day as a gift after all what are big borther for?" Aman thought.
Rahul was looking at Kakoon with love and shame in his eyes he cant belive what Aman had become and he was so ashamed that he didnt notice what pain Kakoon was in, he was ashamed about the fact that he kept pushing Kakoon to accept Aman "i was the one always saying i know Kakoon, she cant hurt anyone or see anyone in pain, so why didnt i try to find out why she was distancing herself from Aman its my fault, ive let Kakoon down and i let Naina B down as well"Rahul brought his eyes down in shame breaking the eye contact with Kakoon. Kakoon was looking at Rahul with tears in her eyes and thought "Rahul i know what your thinking but please dont blame yourself, you werent to know that Aman was sick, but now everything is out in the open Aman will get punished and then you and this family can move on, yes Rahul you have to move forward with Naina O, i have to leave Rahul but ill still love you forever and this love will give me strength to walk away from you.
Naina was looking at both Rahul and Kakoon and was thinking "i can see that they still love each other so much i feel ashamed that ive come in between them and i feel angry that i didnt know about Aman true colours, but now im going to make sure he suffers for Rahul for Kakoon For Naina B and this family but what should i do about mine and Rahul relationship, shall i let go or........not?"
ok guys this was part two its a bit boring sorry about that but hope you enjoy it
thanks guys for all your comments it reali helps here is part 3
Rahul wanted to speak to Kakoon, he wanted to hold her, he moved towards her when Aman with a very evil smile said "Rahul, i wouldn't go near Kakoon if i was you,you know she is my wife and only i have the right to touch her,Kakoon went pale, he couldn't he wouldn't tell would he, he has lost it completly.Rahul got angry at this "you have no right Aman none at all and dont worry once your in jail ill make sure Kakoon is divorced just wait and watch "Aman started to laugh, Rahul,Naina,Dp,Dinesh, Gayu,Devi,Sid and Preeti were shocked and confused, Kakoon was looking at Aman in disgust.Aman started talking "well Rahul if all my truths are coming out, then i might as well let you in on another secret, that just me and MY wife know about isnt that right jaan!"Kakoon wasnt understanding what Aman would gain by telling Rahul if Rahul found out Rahul will kill him and she doesnt want Rahul to stoop to Aman's level she had to stop him she cant lose Rahul, "AMAN, she is not your wife"Rahul shouted, knowing he wont be able to control his anger for much longer and cant bear to hear Aman say anything about HIS Kakoon, Aman was just smiling thinking this will be the last day of RAHUL PUNJ!!!
ok guys hope u liked it now i know kakoon is aman wife but he is a pyschopath so with that in mind rahul is saying she isnt his wife and i agree, id agree with anything Rahul says but that is another subject lol
Aman was just smiling thinking this will be the last day of RAHUL PUNJ!!!"kya yaar Rahul, tumare bara bhai hoon, aur tumari shaadi ko kitne HAFTE ho gaye aur maine tume koi gift nahin di"Rahul was thinking Aman puri thara se pagal hogaya hai,"Aman kya bakwas kar rahe ho" "yeh small brother you were so excited to get married to Naina number 2,looks and Naina and smiles,Naina just gives him a dirty look, he finds that amusing "anyway like i was saying when you were getting married didnt you notice that the founder of your relationship Kakoon wasnt present at the time, Aman stopped for reactions,Rahul remember seeing Kakoon in his bedroom after that he didn't see her till after the wedding and feels guilty not asking about her, everyone else remembered Naina and Rahul wedding, Kakoon was looking at Aman who was smiling away he continued "Right even i wasn't present around the time you were getting married not fair Rahul im your big bro and you didnt wait for me, were you in such a hurry to get married to atleast one Naina haha anyway il carry on".Rahul anger was reaching breaking point with Aman, what was Aman getting at, him and Kakoon werent there at the time of the wedding what happened? he needed to know because for some reason he was feeling very scared he looked at Kakoon who was pale and crying and then he got really worried "so Aman you werent there where were you then?" Rahul asked"Ah glad you asked Rahul you see at the wedding i was waiting for Kakoon and she wasnt here yet so i went home to get her because how can she miss your wedding! when i got home i saw her ltr saying she will kill herself and he wont be able to do anything after that but before she takes that step she get rid of the tape" "tape?" d.p interrupted "yes dad tape the one where Rahul was threatening to kill Naina B on my wedding day keep up dad, so where was i yeah (flashback of him at Rahul wedding then coming home reading ltr and rushing upstairs to his bedroom)Aman while telling this was angry and said "what did Kakoon think that after everything i did to get her im going to let her ruin everything, did she really think she would be free from me, shell be able to go away from my life no i told Kakoon (smiles now) that i had more tapes and if she even tries to plan anything then i will show them to court and Rahul will be in jail " "Aman for god's sake stop this" Kakoon cried out Rahul was so upset that for him Kakoon had suffered so much."Aman stop this now we dont want to hear any more form you disgusting mouth" Sid spoke disgusted that Aman was his brother "yes Aman you have fallen from our eyes its best if you just stop talking" preeti added who couldn't believe Aman had so much hatred inside of him fo Rahul "aw come on now bhabi dont spoil the fun Kakoon wants me to tell what happened dont you dear? Aman tauted "Aman stop this" Kakoon said tearfully,Rahul was getting confused and said "then what happened Aman, that is really important for you to say go on spit it out" "there you go Kakoon Rahul has sweetly requested for me to tell i have to say it now because its his wedding gift and he was the reason it happened" "he was the reason?, the reason for what? what is Aman trying to get at and why is Kakoon so frightened" Rahul thought before he could shout at Aman again Aman said " yeah so where was i? hmmm oh yes like i said if she wants Rahul safe and sounds she cant leave because then ill show the tape (guys i couldn't get myself to watch nov 7 episode & so im making it up)now because she even tried to do something that stupid i had to show her that im her husband and can do anything and anything means anything, i threatened her with love that she cant scream or shout but she'll have to accept what is going to happen, and you know what Rahul she obeyed she was crying she didnt want me to do it but she didnt scream what im trying to say Rahul is that YOU GOT MARRIED BUT I HAD MY SUHAAG RAAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it seems like everything froze, nobody moved, that line YOU GOT MARRIED BUT I HAD MY SUHAAG RAAT echoed on everyones face, Rahul felt like his heart had broken into two, how Aman can do something so bad to an angel like Kakoon, Devi was broken, Aman had hurt both her daughter one daughter he killed brutlly and her other precious daughter he killed her from inside and she couln't save any of her daughter im sorry Naina im so sorry Kakoon and started crying,the rest were shocked and felt sorry for Kakoon,Kakoon was so fragile that she fell to the ground!,Rahul looked at Kakoon crying, trying to come to terms with this and it was like something snapped inside of him he wasnt going to leave Aman he was going to kill him no matter what and he would make sure that it will really hurt Aman to the core,no-one could stop him now and went towards Aman in grave anger,Aman smiled knew that after his revelation Rahul would be dying to come after him but Aman was not stupid , no obviously he didnt tell this so that he could get beaten up by Rahul he did this so he could break Rahul before actually killing him and for that he was ready that's why when he was talking he was moving around and finally stopped at the dining table before finishing and when no one was looking put a large knife behind his back, "what a nice way to kill Rahul just like i killed Naina what i good brother im being with this he will feel closer to Naina, dead one not his wife"haha" Everyone was too shocked to stop Rahul and Rahul went storming in anger towards the monster and when he was inches away from Aman,Aman took the knife from behind his back and got ready to stab Rahul and when he did blood was pouring a lot and the blood was splattered on Rahul and on Aman but it wasnt Rahul blood it was...........................................................KAKOON'S
hey guys hope you like it and it is longer this time enjoy
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Rahul went storming in anger towards the monster and when he was inches away from Aman,Aman took the knifr from behind his back and got ready to stab Rahul and when he did blood was pouring a lot and the blood was splattered on Rahul and on Aman but it wasnt Rahul blood it was...........................................................KAKOON'S.
Flashback_Kakoon fell to the ground after hearing Aman words,she was crying a lot,she couldnt believe Aman said it with such happiness, glad at his sins, she looked up and saw something shiny in his hand and when he moved a bit she saw it was a big knife and then she saw Rahul, who was fuming and storming towards Aman, and she realised what Aman was about to do, why he told Rahul and the rest about his disgusting deed he was going to kill Rahul, NO i wont let him kill for the second he would not hurt her loved ones ever again, she got up and ran towards Rahul and when Aman was about to stab Rahul she came in between Rahul and Aman and was injured she screamed "RAHUL"Flashback ended. Rahul screamed "KAKOON" Aman also screamd her name and was shocked, Rahul grabbed bleeding Kakoon and went down on the floor with her Aman moved a few steps back in shock, everyone rushed towards her screaming her name "KAKOON" "KAKOON",Rahul was crying so much that it was hurting his inside but he didnt care all her could think about was his injured Kakoon. Aman was so upset that he stabbed Kakoon and not Rahul and as he has a twisted mind believed it was Rahul fault Kakoon was hurt and deserved to die and went towards him in order to finish him off (with the knife still in his hands which has Kakoon blood on it)when he was shot twice, the knife fell from his hand, tears coming out of his eyes blood pouring out of his body, he was in so much pain (serves him right) that he fell over, all the family members looked at Aman shocked and confused about the gun shots and saw the police with Mansha, who had seen Aman coming towards the family with a knife and had acted quickly,Rahul didnt care about Aman all he wanted was for Kakoon to be ok,Kakoon was losing a lot of blood and was becoming unconcious,Rahul kept talking to her to keep her awake, Aman was badly wounded, he breathed his last "Kakoon i love youuuuu".Gayu was crying so hard even thought he was sick Aman was still her son and was torn whether or not to go to him but then she remembered NainaB death, Kakoon rape,Aman sick smile and decided that Kakoon who was like an angel needed her more than the sick monster,D.p, Sid and Dinesh went to speak to the police, Preeti was crying and pleading to Kakoon to stay awake and fight this, she couldnt believe what Kakoon had been thru and she had suffered it silently, she felt guilty of all the bad things she said and did to Kakoon,Naina was also crying ,praying that nothing happened to Kakoon,Devi was hysterical that her daughter was in this state and that too becasuse of Aman she had flashbacks of seeing Naina dead, she was screaming at Kakoon"wake up beta dont leave me i cant lose you too please stay strong your my daughter you have to stay strong".everyone except Rahul and Naina were shocked Dinesh walked over to Devi "Kakoon is your daughter? what? how?" he asked "yes dinesh she is my eldest daughter before marriage who i thought had died at birth, but i cant lose her again i cant dinesh i cant"devi cried , Dinesh held and consoled Devi.the police took Aman body and informed the Punj and Bhasin's that an ambulance is on its way.Rahul still holding Kakoon and crying pleading to her "please Kakoon dont leave me, please don't give me this big punishment, im sorry so sorry for everything dont go"Kakoon with tears in her eyes"no Rahul dont cry, dont say sorry i am not angry with you, for you i can do anything and im happy that......."she pauses in pain Rahul prompts her to go on Kakoon smiles "nothing has happened to you" Kakoon was in soo much pain it was showing on her face,everyone was crying.Kakoon couln't keep her eyes open for long and Rahul sensed that and said "please Kakoon fight, fight for me for us, our love, I LOVE YOU KAKOON"Naina was shocked,crying but still praying that this gives Kakoon the strenght to fight,to survive, Kakoon looks at Rahul and says "i love you too Rahul and closes her eyes (i love you too Rahul, i love you too Rahul, repeated several times song in background itne hum door kaise hogaye dil ko kuch bata hi na chalaaa)
i like the songs that played in woh rehne wali mehlon ki with pari and saumya and i couldnt think of a nyc sad song so i put this one at the end hope you like this part
hiya im back with next part (prem is back for ppl who watch kis desh mein hai mera dil i cant tell ya how happy i am, ive been screaming everytym his scene cums my mum thinks im a nutta i say to her that is your son inlaw and she gives me that look)just thort ill share since im bubbling with xcitment cos of his rtn
"i love you too Rahul and closes her eyes.everything stood still, as if life had stopped like his heart had stopped beating and just kept staring at Kakoon who looked like she was sleeping,everyone was shocked, Rahul shouted so loud that his lungs might tear "KAKOON, NAHIN TUM MERE SAATH AISA NAHIN KAR SAKTI TUM MUJHE CHOR KE NAHI JA SAKTI, JAB TAK MEIN ZINDA HOON TUMHE BEEN ZINDA REHNA HOGA SAMJHI?"Rahul broke down crying.ambulance people come (finally how long does it take lol)and took her into the ambulance and tried to revive her but unable to do so as Kakoon had lost a lot of blood,Rahul and Devi went in with Kakoon and the rest followed in their cars Rahul looks at Kakoon and says "agar tum mar gayi toh mein bhi znda nahin rahunga aur YEH VAADA RAHA"
few minutes later they reached the hospital, still not being able to revive Kakoon,the staff of the hospital took Kakoon into the I.C.U Devi was crying and said to Rahul "Rahul, i cant lose her again, please do something, anything and save her please Rahul" Rahul makes Devi sit down and with a determined face he says "Devi aunty please stop crying, Kakoon loves me very much she knows i live for her she knows that if we die, we will die together if she leaves me ill be broken and she wont let that happen to me just wait and watch Kakoon will be fine and recover, she will come back to me she has to for our love"in the I.C.U they getting ready to operate on her stomach where the injury was and are shocked.
Dinesh,Gayu,Preeti and Mansha have came to the hospital they advised Rahul and Devi that Sid,D.P and Naina have gone to the police station to explain everything,Gayu goes to Devi with tears of shame and fall on Devi knees "please forgive me Devi you said my son was Naina killer but it took something this horrible for me to accept the truth please forgive me" Devi picks her friend and makes her sit next to her "no Gayu its not your fault, im not mad at you just... pray for my daughter for my Kakoon that nothing happens to her"Gayu and Devi cry together.Dinesh remembers Naina, then remember scenes of Devi and Kakoon and says in his mind "Devis daughter is my daughter,please god dont take away my 2nd daughter too please dont snatch a daughter from her monther we will all break.Rahul is pacing furiously up and down Kakoon has been in there for hours and no-one is telling him anything Rahul closes his eyes and remmember all the moments between Rahul and Kakoon,lots of flashbacks , tears are running down his face, when he opens his eyes he see's his dad,bro and Naina.Naina went towards Rahul"any news Rahul?"no Naina why arent they telling me anything she has been in there for hours, i cant live without her Naina,"hearing this Naina gets tears in her eyes but gently says "dont worry Rahul, your love is so strong she cant leave you, you will be with her forever, nothing will happen to her" saying this she hugs Rahul.Doctor comes out Rahul leaves Naina and goes to doctor "how is she doctor? is everything alright?"Doctor Prem Juneja looked at a concerned and scared Rahul
(little bit about Dr Prem*(played by obviously harshad chopra, is 25 years old, drop dead gorges, any girl would die to speak to him, he was sweet,single, great personality,funny,charming.brillant doctor.. you know what i better stop now otherwise you all will probly kill me its about Rakun not prem anyway wow im blushing back to the story)
Gorges Dr Prem (sorry couldnt resist)looks at Rahul and in a very serious tone says "im sorry Mr Punj but we could not save....Rahul was totally shocked and took a step back,everyone went towards Rahul and started crying/.....
ok guys that was next part its a a short chapter sorry im a bit tired think im over excited i added some of my comments sorry but im a bit giddy today dnt know why probly to with the fact that ive been watching harshad chopra/prem all day
by the ways guys the FF for premeer are fantastic seriously ull enjoy reading it have a check if you can
but i love KDMH as well so dont worry im not forgetting RAKUN. anyway enough of my bakwas p.s im going manchester tomorrow to trafford centre for shopping im going 8am in morning but dunno what tym im cuming back if i can ill def update fri if not then it wll be sat for def
thanks guys
thanks guys
hiya im back and ill try to dial down on the crazy enjoy
"im sorry Mr Punj but we could not save the baby". "what?" Rahul thought he had misheard did he say baby?, here he is asking about Kakoon and Dr prem is telling me baby is no longer alive, what baby?, whose baby? what is going on?everyone was confused, Devi felt scared "Dr Prem i think i misheard you did you say baby? "yes Mr Punj, the baby was too weak to survive after the incident we tried out best but were not able to save the baby"Prem(gorges)Juneja was confused they are all acting like the didnt know Kakoon was 5 weeks pregnant,why wouldnt she have told them?Prem was thinking and Rahul snapped him out of it "hold on"Rahul was trying to get his head around this,what is the Dr going on about?Prem thought he better take control and try to find out later what was going on?"ok first of all is the patient Mrs Kakoon Punj?" "yes" Devi and Gayu replied, "and was she stabbed in the stomach?" "yes" Naina and Preeti answered this time,"and she was brought to this I.C.U?"YES"Rahul was getting furious with Dr Prem and felt like punching him,"well Mr Punj, if all that is correct,then this is also correct that Mrs Punj was pregnant?stunned silence "how many weeks was she pregnant Dr Juneja?"Devi asked remembering Aman words "5 weeks"echoed in Rahul ears "5 weeks ago i married Naina" he thought back to Aman words "you got married Rahul but i got my suhaag raat"Rahul felt like he was going to choke inside "Rahul,its been 5 weeks since we got married"Naina realised.Dr Prem was confused but thought he better not ask he was pretty sure Mr Rahul Punj wanted to hit someone and if he interfers it will probly be him who gets it but still thought that why are they so shocked that the patient was pregnant!" Rahul was getting this into his head "the baby died? "yes" atleast she wont suffer with the fact that Aman nishani is living within her "Kakoon?, how is Kakoon Dr?Prem was startled for a moment whose Kakoon? oh right the patient oops, "erm yes Mrs Punj is now out of danger", Rahul was so happy he could have started dancing, Devi was so relieved she just started crying everyone was so happy Dr Prem continued " she is still weak but she will recover soon but we need to keep her in for observation for a few days because it was a 50-50 situation but she pulled through,it looks like she didnt want to leave her loved ones behind"Rahul was estatic "i knew Kakoon wouldnt leave she loves me too much"Naina was also happy that Kakoon is safe but also felt sad a little that she wont have Rahul in her life anymore,Flashback- Naina went with D.p and Sid to the police station to explain everything about Aman after everything was sorted Naina had rang her office asking for her and Rahul divorce papers to be written she didnt want to be the person responsible for coming in between Rahul and Kakoon, once she read the papers she signed it and gave it to Sid so that when he gets a chance, he can give it to Rahul to sign and he would be free from her and their relationship and go to Kakoo, she made dua that they never separated again, Flashback ended,Naina rang Fatima bi to bring her stuff to the airport, she will meet her there,Kakoon is safe now so she will leave amritsar and go to america forever.she looks at Rahul with love in her eyes and goes towards him and hugs him and whispers "im reali happy that Kakoon is fine , ive gotta go Rahul ive got something important to do you stay close to Kakoon"she leaves him and sees Sid and nods him farewell, Sid is sad for Naina but knows what she is doing is for the best for Rahul and Kakoon he doesnt want his little brother suffering anymore and that will only stop if he is reunited with Kakoon.At the airport she meets Fatima bi and hugs her and says lets go before bording on the plane she looks back and says I LOVE YOU RAHUL!!!, smiles and goes inside!!!!!!
its my star sign thort ill try it out
hey im back with next part i dnt wanna go wrk on monday but its only for 3 hrs dunno how im gonna survive lol its my star sign thort ill try it out
BACK AT THE HOSPITAL
"Dr Prem, does Kakoon know about her losing the baby?"Devi asked fearing how she would react "no Mrs Bhasin,as she was very weak i didnt think it was best to notify her of this but once she is awake i will break the news to her as she will ask about her baby so its better to let her know sooner rather than later"Prem replied "Dr i have a request is it ok if i be the one to tell her afterall i am her mother its best that it comes from me"Dr Prem looked at Devi and thought to himself "there is so much dard in her eyes but why do i get the feeling she is more scared about the reaction of telling Kakoon that she was pregnant and not that she has lost the baby?""uh yes you can go in but plz one at a time she is still weak" and saying that he left.Rahul was dying to go and see Kakoon, he wanted to see that she was safe with his own eyes he moved towards her room when he felt a hand touch his shoulder "Rahul beta mein janti hoon tum Kakoon ko dekna chahte ho, lekin accha yehi hoga agar pehle mein milu aur sab samjha do please beta?"Devi said softly.Rahul agreed by just nodding is head "Devi aunty is right for Kakoon to move forward she needs to deal wih this now and its best if Devi aunty helps her through this"he thought.
inside Kakoon was reliving the nightmare once more- where Aman was going to stab Rahul, she opened her eyes, terrified that Aman might harm Rahul again. she saw Devi come towards her, relief and love showing clearly on her face also she looked scared aswell "what was the problem ,had Aman got to Rahul?" "Ma Rahul,were is Rahul, is he ok? Ma answer me please"Kakoon says with fear in her eyes, Devi rushed to Kakoon and held her "shush Kakoon Rahul is fine he is outside dont worry"she told her daughter, Kaoon sighed in relief "ma then why are you looking so scared what's wrong Aman hasnt done anything else has he, have the police taken Aman?"Devi looked up at Kakoon "Aman is dead Kakoon" "dead?" Kakoon was shocked "how?" Devi narrated what happened after Kakoon was stabbed "no beta he didnt reach Rahul" knowing what Kakoon was going to ask"he is dead" Kakoon thought back to when she met Aman, how he helped her, agreed to marry her admitting killing Naina, hurting her, when he raped her.and thought Aman has ben punished from god now Naina will be at peace and so will i knowing justice for Naina has been served but then why was ma still scared"ma if he is dead then why are you still scared?"Devi looked at Kakoon dreading what she would be saying next."beta, when they took you in the I.C.U they found out that....""found out what ma?" Kakoon was confused she felt fine, free for some reason "found that you were pregnant beta""what pregnant how could i have been............."Kakoon thought back to her rape "NO MA NO THIS CANT BE TRUE I CANT HAVE AMAN'S PAAP LIVING INSIDE ME I WILL NEVER BE FREE FROM HIM, I DONT WANT TO LIVE MA I WANT TO DIE I WANT TO DIE"Kakoon screamed in agony after all this still she will never be free from Aman she sobbed Devi hugged her "Kakoon no beta dont say that please, how would i live without you?, beta because of the injury they couldnt save the baby, you are free Aman will never haunt you again beta please calm down"Devi said crying Kakoon was absorbing what her mother was saying, im not pregnant, anymore that is why i felt free, Kakoon thoguht she felt disgusted that she had been carrying that monster baby. she hugged Devi hard and both mother - daughter just cried to release their sadness.Devi looked at Kakoon, wiped her tears and said "no Kakoon you have cried enough you will not cry anymore you will only have happiness in your life and i will make sure of that and the first thing is that when you are released from the hospital you are moving back in with me" "but ma dinesh uncle" Kakoon started afraid of what he might say Devi smiled "no beta dinesh knows that you are my daughter he has accepted you and would be very happy to have you stay with us""accha ill leave and call Rahul in" with that she left,Kakoon closed her eyes. outside Devi went to Rahul and told him to go inside she has told Kakoon everything Rahul went in and saw Kakoon laying down eyes closed,tears welled up inside Kakoon she looked so fragile, he went towards Kakoon, she didnt open her eyes she felt his presence,Rahul kissed her forehead, Kakoon opened her eyes looking at Rahul with tears in her eyes "Kakoon yeh kya pagalpaan tha, tum beech mein kyu aayi tumhe kuch ho jata to mera kya hota?" "im sorry Rahul for making you so worried lekin meri zindigi se barkar tum ho, tho kaise kuch nahin karti"Rahul was touched that Kakoon thought that now he would never leave her ever. Kakoon and Rahul gazed into each other eyes remembering their moments together with the song in the background Ishq bina kya marna yaara
Ishq bina kya jeena
Ishq bina kya marna yaara
Ishq bina kya jeena
Gud se meetha ishq ishq
Imli se khatta ishq ishq
Vaada ya pakka ishq ishq
Dhaaga ye kachcha ishq ishq
O...
Ishq bina kya marna yaara
Ishq bina kya jeena
Ishq bina kya jeena
Ishq bina kya marna yaara
Ishq bina kya jeena
Gud se meetha ishq ishq
Imli se khatta ishq ishq
Vaada ya pakka ishq ishq
Dhaaga ye kachcha ishq ishq
O...
Ishq bina kya marna yaara
Ishq bina kya jeena
Neeche ishq hai oopar rab hai
In donon ke beech mein ke sab hai
Neeche ishq hai oopar rab hai
In donon ke beech mein ke sab hai
Ek nahin sau baatein karlo
Sau baaton ka ek matlab hai
Rab sab se sona ishq ishq
Rabse bhi sona ishq ishq
Rab sab se sona ishq ishq
Rabse bhi sona ishq ishq
O...
Ishq bina kya marna yaaron
Ishq bina kya jeena
Rahul wiped away his and Kakoon tears and said "we wont cry anymore Kakoon,Aman is gone now we have to move forward in life, he wont hurt you again i promise" "i know Rahul but im still scared" "hey dont be im here with you always i will never leave you"he held Kakoon hand,Kakoon suddenly has flashes remembering Rahul and Naina marriage and let go of Rahul hand, Rahul looked at her confused "Kakoon" Rahul started "no Rahul you cant be with me forever, we can never be together, you forgot and so did i for just a moment that you are married to Naina and you have to fufil this relationship Rahul you cant back out its not fair on Naina, you are her husband only she has full rights on you, she is a very nice girl Rahul and i cant destroy her happiness to get mine that is paap and i cant do that,Rahul plz accept Naina and move forward with her as for me i cant stay in that house anymore Ma has said to move in with her and dinesh uncle and that is what im going to do, we will always be friends Rahul but never more than that not anymore im sorry!"Kakoon explained .Rahul was shocked and hurt, also he was feeling guilty about not thinking about Naina but his soulmate was Kakoon and he couldnt let her go not after all this he would need to speak to Naina and end this relationship, he was going to say something to Kakoon but realised she was looking tired "Kakoon, you get some sleep, ill come by later.... I LOVE YOU"Rahul stated while walking away with this song Pyaar Hum Ko Bhi Hai
Pyaar Tum Ko Bhi Hai
To Yeh Kya Silsile Ho Gaye
Bewafa Hum Nahin
Bewafa Tum Nahin
To Kyon Itne Gile Ho Gaye
Chalte Chalte Kaise Yeh Faasle Ho Gaye
Kya Pata Kahan Hum Chale
Doob Gaya Hai Kaise Dard Mein Dil
Aansoon Bhari Hai Ab Aankhen
Tanhaiyon Ki Jo Ruth Aa Gayi
Ujdi Hui Hai Sab Raahein
Socha Tha Paayenge Dono Ek Manzil Ko
Raahein Jo Badli To Tumhi Batado
Chalte Chalte Gum Kahan Kaple Ho Gaye
Kho Gaye Kahan Raste
In donon ke beech mein ke sab hai
Neeche ishq hai oopar rab hai
In donon ke beech mein ke sab hai
Ek nahin sau baatein karlo
Sau baaton ka ek matlab hai
Rab sab se sona ishq ishq
Rabse bhi sona ishq ishq
Rab sab se sona ishq ishq
Rabse bhi sona ishq ishq
O...
Ishq bina kya marna yaaron
Ishq bina kya jeena
Rahul wiped away his and Kakoon tears and said "we wont cry anymore Kakoon,Aman is gone now we have to move forward in life, he wont hurt you again i promise" "i know Rahul but im still scared" "hey dont be im here with you always i will never leave you"he held Kakoon hand,Kakoon suddenly has flashes remembering Rahul and Naina marriage and let go of Rahul hand, Rahul looked at her confused "Kakoon" Rahul started "no Rahul you cant be with me forever, we can never be together, you forgot and so did i for just a moment that you are married to Naina and you have to fufil this relationship Rahul you cant back out its not fair on Naina, you are her husband only she has full rights on you, she is a very nice girl Rahul and i cant destroy her happiness to get mine that is paap and i cant do that,Rahul plz accept Naina and move forward with her as for me i cant stay in that house anymore Ma has said to move in with her and dinesh uncle and that is what im going to do, we will always be friends Rahul but never more than that not anymore im sorry!"Kakoon explained .Rahul was shocked and hurt, also he was feeling guilty about not thinking about Naina but his soulmate was Kakoon and he couldnt let her go not after all this he would need to speak to Naina and end this relationship, he was going to say something to Kakoon but realised she was looking tired "Kakoon, you get some sleep, ill come by later.... I LOVE YOU"Rahul stated while walking away with this song Pyaar Hum Ko Bhi Hai
Pyaar Tum Ko Bhi Hai
To Yeh Kya Silsile Ho Gaye
Bewafa Hum Nahin
Bewafa Tum Nahin
To Kyon Itne Gile Ho Gaye
Chalte Chalte Kaise Yeh Faasle Ho Gaye
Kya Pata Kahan Hum Chale
Doob Gaya Hai Kaise Dard Mein Dil
Aansoon Bhari Hai Ab Aankhen
Tanhaiyon Ki Jo Ruth Aa Gayi
Ujdi Hui Hai Sab Raahein
Socha Tha Paayenge Dono Ek Manzil Ko
Raahein Jo Badli To Tumhi Batado
Chalte Chalte Gum Kahan Kaple Ho Gaye
Kho Gaye Kahan Raste
and that was the next part hope you enjoy reading it
hiya guys im back sory for the delay i had to remind myself of the story lol here goes
few days later Kakoon was discharged and she shifted to the basins house,where she laughed and enjoyed her family's company and was loved so much by Devi,Dinesh,Mansha and even Nani who had accepted her Kakoon was so happy she was with her family but she also missed her one true love.
Rahul was in his room, thinking of Kakoon, how he visited her and bought her fav flowers pink orchid every day when she was in hospital, he was still thinking of her when Sid walked in, rahul turned "bhaiya aap?" "haan Rahul mujhe tumse zaroori baat karni hai"ji boliye" "Rahul yeh papers lo aur sign kardo" "kaun se papers bhaiya?" "tumare divorce papers" "Kya??" Rahul looked at the papers and was shocked to see that they were indeed divorce papers and was even shocked when he saw Naina's sign on them he looked at Sid for answers Sid saw questions in Rahul eyes "Rahul,Naina gave me these papers when we came out of the police station, she realised that you still love Kakoon and felt guilty for coming in between and knew Kakoon wouldnt let you leave her so she decided to do everything quietly and told me to give these papers once the time is right and she left with Fatima Bi, sign the papers Rahul so that you can move forward in life with Kakoon Naina would be really happy for it to happen" Rahul remembered that when he came home from the hospital the first night Kakoon was admitted he tried to get in contact with Naina but she wasnt responding to his calls and no-one knew where she was, he thought of all the moments with Naina and signed the papers and handed them back to Sid, he took them patted Rahul on his back and left. Rahul thought to himself "im sorry Naina please forgive me i married you but was not able to keep you happy or give you any love i hope that where ever you remain happy
Dr prem Juneja was looking at Kakoon reports "mr basin, everyrthing is now alright the tests we took show that Kakoon is perfectly fine, she has progressed well just keep giving her medicine for about another week" "thank you Dr Juneja" Mr Basin said gratefully "your welcum Mr basin but i shouldnt get all the credit its becasue of you and your family Kakoon has recovered very quickly"Prem smiled.Mansha was just staring at Prem and it was making Prem a bit uncomfortable Mrs Bhasin saw that and nudged Mansha and tried to hide her smile.Mansha thought its not my fault he is just jummy ,is he married? ill die if he is, ill ask him, go Mansha" "er Dr Juneja?" "yes" Prem was feeling a little bit scared ,Devi and Dinesh just looked at Mansha "are you married?" Dinesh laughed, Devi hit her and said "Mansha what are you doing?""what im just curious" Prem didnt know whether to laugh or look relieved "erm no Miss Bhasin, im not married but i am in love with someone, and i cant live without her, we are not married but engaged " Mansha thought "kill me, kill me now" "aw i mean wow thats... good i mean " Devi felt she better take over "what Mansha is trying to say congratulations can i ask what her name is?" she smiled, Prem flashed his killer smile and said "her name is Heer Mann, and i would love it if you and your family came to the wedding i dont know why but i feel like ive got a rishta with all of you now" "ofcourse beta we will surly come Devi we better go now thank you Prem for Kakoon's report"Dinesh stood up and shook Prem's hand Devi and Mansha got up Mansha was feeling sad she waved and left with her parents.Prem laughed at this and called up Heer to tell her what had just happened.
at the punj house
at the punj house
Dp,Gayu,Bebe,Preeti,Sid,Tanu and sid were sitting in the living room, Sid had told them about the divorce, they were shocked and sad for Naina.Rahul came and said "i have something important to tell you all and i know that i should have told this when Kakoon first came in this house then we would never had to go through all this pain and we would never have lost Naina B and i feel deeply ashamed but to move forward i have to let all of you know my past and tell you Kakoon was right from the begining she was always right and Naina and I were always wrong" family was confused "Rahul puttar what was Kakoon right about?"bebe asked Rahul told them eveything right from when he went to kolkatta as Anurag met Kakoon pretended to be in love with her married her because Naina wanted the land that was in Kakoon name eveything how Kakoon suffered because of him and then when she found out Naina was her sister she did everything she could to get him and Naina married and for that she agreed to marry Aman, everyone was stunned, they remembered when the first met Kakoon and how the spoke to her when thinking she was wrong all the women were crying Dp was angry at Rahul.Gayu got up and slapped Rahul 3 times "how could you have done this to a girl Rahul, how can you have played with someone feelings, is this what we brought you up for to destroy that poor girls life she suffered so much because of you, Aman this whole family because of your ruse" "i know mama and i have hated myself for evey pain i caused her but i really love her mama and cant live without her i want to make all those pains and memorys go away and make new ones with her i want to give her the worlds happiness" Rahul fell down on his knees crying Gayu looked at Rahul and felt that he truly meant what he was saying and understood his love for Kakoon, she also wanted to make up for the way she behaved with Kakoon and she knows that this time when Kakoon comes into their life she will make it heaven for them and vice verse she bent down towards Rahul and said "i know that you are feeling guilty and have accepted your mistake but dont do another mistake now Rahul go, yes Rahul go and bring Kakoon back and this time we will never let tears fall from her eyes," Rahul looked at the rest and they nodded in agreement he got up and hugged his mom and set off to declare his love!!
Gayu rang Devi and told her everything, Devi was happy that finally her daughter will get her happiness back that only with Rahul presence in her life she can feel.Rahul came inside and saw Devi she signalled him Kakoon's room and gave hima thumbs up
Rahul smiled knowing Devi was with him and this time he wont let Kakoon go away from him ever again.
thats next part hope you lyk it i knwo only Kakoon at the begining sorry hopefully she will have more parts in next part
i got a small question
my pic wont show under my name ive tried eveything on my profile and its shows there but not in my post can any1 help me there please?
thanks a bunch mwah
