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Posted: 16 years ago
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Just wrote a small poem to God to give both India and Pakistan strength in this difficult times. (Translation on page 2)
Jis mulk se tuje bepanaah ibaadat mile
Uske shehri ko kyu yeh begani adavat mile
kafiroki jashn-e-tabahi to roj dekne mile
mazhabi ko ek roj tere jalvo ki inaayat mile
Ummeed na chhah hai ke shaan-o-soukat mile
rahem ki ek nazar mile, teri mohabat mile
bikre lahu jaha bhi bas tere bande ke bikre
Ram-Rahim kyo inko bewaqt yeh zilaat mile
Na sukun de sake to bas humhe taqat de
risto ko hum jod sake, aatank ko rukhsat mile
-Surabhi
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Why a sudden change in policy? Moving towards peace now? I believe you were the one that started some of the original hate-spreading topics. Anyways, I won't change your call for peace to a fight.

Nice poem. Did you write it?

May God give all humans strength in tough times, the strength to bear, the strength to care, the power to believe, the power to relieve, the wisdom to know, the wisdom to grow, the serenity to pray, the serenity to bear the dismay.

God Bless.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice Poem! Thanks for sharing!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice one and thanks for sharing....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Woh Ajnabee*

Why a sudden change in policy? Moving towards peace now? I believe you were the one that started some of the original hate-spreading topics. Anyways, I won't change your call for peace to a fight.

Nice poem. Did you write it?

May God give all humans strength in tough times, the strength to bear, the strength to care, the power to believe, the power to relieve, the wisdom to know, the wisdom to grow, the serenity to pray, the serenity to bear the dismay.

God Bless.

Yes I wrote the poem. I do write often. There is no change in policy. I am basically a peace loving person. That does not mean that I can't express that my sentiments are hurt. Instead of understanding my viewpoint, I was called various names assinating my character. Pls. don't get me started on this one.
-Surabhi
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Saukin

Just wrote a small poem to God to give both India and Pakistan strength in this difficult times.

Jis mulk se tuje bepanaah ibaadat mile
Uske shehri ko kyu yeh begani adavat mile
kafiroki jashn-e-tabahi to roj dekne mile
mazhabi ko ek roj tere jalvo ki inaayat mile
Ummeed na chhah hai ke shaan-o-soukat mile
rahem ki ek nazar mile, teri mohabat mile
bikre lahu jaha bhi bas tere bande ke bikre
Ram-Rahim kyo inko bewaqt yeh zilaat mile
Na sukun de sake to bas humhe taqat de
risto ko hum jod sake, aatank ko rukhsat mile
-Surabhi



although the king din understand a word of wht u have written it seems 2 b sumthing gud. the king's urdu is too bad.

the bottomline the chosen draws is tht surabhi is talented.

*king*
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I did not understand but the poem is good. 👏

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: *king*



although the king din understand a word of wht u have written it seems 2 b sumthing gud. the king's urdu is too bad.

the bottomline the chosen draws is tht surabhi is talented.

*king*

Edited by Saukin - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hmmmm very well thought n written. a splendid job. u r indeed talented.

*king*
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Saukin

Just wrote a small poem to God to give both India and Pakistan strength in this difficult times. (Translation on page 2)

Jis mulk se tuje bepanaah ibaadat mile
Uske shehri ko kyu yeh begani adavat mile
kafiroki jashn-e-tabahi to roj dekne mile
mazhabi ko ek roj tere jalvo ki inaayat mile
Ummeed na chhah hai ke shaan-o-soukat mile
rahem ki ek nazar mile, teri mohabat mile
bikre lahu jaha bhi bas tere bande ke bikre
Ram-Rahim kyo inko bewaqt yeh zilaat mile
Na sukun de sake to bas humhe taqat de
risto ko hum jod sake, aatank ko rukhsat mile
-Surabhi

royal appreciates your effort and respects your message. good try

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