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Posted: 17 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: phool527

kya mikckey.. u alwayz sign off at the wrogn time dear.. just wen i ge into it.. lol.. anywayz great part..c ontinue sooon.. wait so inur story sahil and raashi died right.. lol. sorry.. anywayz continue sooon...



Thanks

Yep! in my story Sahil and Raashi are dead because I like Ranveer and Rano's jodi not the other way around. Anyways I hope you will like this part.

Mickey
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: kajal_arjun

Another great fan-fic Mickey.

Kaajal



Thanks Kaajal

Mickey
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53

Sorry Guys.... I'm still not feeling good, but anyways here is the next part.

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I thought Ekta Ma'am would use a better person to introduce Veer, but anyways I like my Veer and also the Veer she introduce.

Here is the part.... you guys have been waiting for!

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Part Eight... Pia's surprise gift

Tony checks the light and finds the switch off

He turns them back on... everyone at the party have a weird looks on their face when they see one strange face.

Pia had a smile on her face and says "I thought you were coming tomorrow, Veer"

Veer hugs his mother and says "If I told you guys that I was coming here than I wouldn't see your shocked expression on your guys wedding anniversary"

Veer touches his mother's feet than his father's feet

Pushkar hugged him and says "where's Radhika?"

"I'm right here, Uncle" Radhika said from behind Veer

Radhika holds onto Veer's risk... because he isn't talking to her after the fight they had at the airport before coming here.

He sightly pushes her away and Radhika spots a diya

Places her hand on top of it...

Veer notice it and runs towards her because he can not see her in pain even though they aren't talking... to one another, but they can not stay ten second away from each other.

Pushes her hand away and burns out the diya by putting his hand on top of it.

Radhika kisses his hand with tears

Veer wipes her tears and changes the mood by singing... Chudi Re Chudi Re
Pehno Piya Ki Chudi Re
Dil Se Dil Jo Mille Dil Ki Baat Ho Gayi
Dil Se Dil Jo Mille Dil Ki Baat Ho Gayi
Bekaraari Badi Mulaakaat Ho Gayi
Kahin Paayal Baji Khanki Chudiyaan
Kahin Paayal Baji Khanki Chudiyaan


Radhika: Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi
Pehno Gi Piya Ki Chudi Chudi
Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi
Pehno Gi Piya Ki Chudi Chudi
Sehra Sajaake Mehndi Racha Ke
Le Jaayega Mujhe Apna Bana Ke
Aage Ka Kabhi Na Kabhi Mera Piya
Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi
Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi
Pehno Gi Piya Ki Chudi Chudi
Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi
Pehno Gi Piya Ki Chudi Chudi


Radhika brings Pushkar Uncle and Pia Auntie to the dance floor and the cut the cake.

Veer: Jode Se Nahin Joda Jaaye Dil Se Dil Naata
Tode Se Nahin Toda Jaaye Dil Se Dil Naata
Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi
Jode Se Nahin Joda Jaaye Dil Se Dil Naata
Tode Se Nahin Toda Jaaye Dil Se Dil Naata


Pia feeds the first bite to Pushkar than her son Veer, next Radhika than reminding family members...

Radhika: Saiyaan Ho Saiyaan Thaam Le Meri Baiyaan
Thaam Le Meri Baiyaan Haan Padun Main Tere Paiyaan
Saari Umra Saath Rahoongi Ban Ke Teri Chaiyaan
Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi
Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi
Pehno Gi Piya Ki Chudi Chudi
Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi
Pehno Gi Piya Ki Chudi Chudi


Veer and Radhika get lost in their own world...

Veer: Milke Kabhi Na Bichde Dharti Ambar Chaand Chakori
Bin Baandhe Hi Bandh Jaati Hai Do Saason Ki Doori
Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi
Milke Kabhi Na Bichde Dharti Ambar Chaand Chakori
Bin Baandhe Hi Bandh Jaati Hai Do Saason Ki Doori

Radhika: Nayna Yeh Nayna Tere Mere Nayna
Soye Na Jaaye Sari Sari Raina
Jab Jab Dekho Tujhko Aaye Jiya Ko Chaina
Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi
Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi
Pehno Gi Piya Ki Chudi Chudi
Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi
Pehno Gi Piya Ki Chudi Chudi


Veer: Chudi Re Chudi Re
Pehno Piya Ki Chudi Re

Radhika: Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi
Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi Chudi

***

Signing Off

Mickey

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Edited by Patel...Rocks - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54

wow mickey so they finally arrive in indiia..

wonder what will happen next..
continue soon pls..
cn u try and make ur parts longer pls~~
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
Keep up the good work

Tia

PS: Please make your next part much longer when you feel good
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
omg...i loved ur last 2 updates...so they are in india finally...continue soon!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
awwwnnnn.. mickey great part.. and feel better hun.. i wont complain of the short part bcuz u r sick.. fell beter soon.. and continue sooon..

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